Not bad, bro. Actually that was pretty damn good. Very meaningful lyrics. Keep it up, bro. The acoustics were not great, but that's not your fault because you were just there in front of your PC and webcam. Would sound really great in a studio, for sure. I'll give ya 8/10. Bro, it's obvious that you're a true music fan, music lover....I recommend joining the Rockstars eGroup. Not all of us are musicians there, but a lot of the members are. You'd fit right in, bro.