You are viewing a post by jieduck. View all 60 posts in [quote]My classmate made this for our presentation. It's about how relationships and stuff.[/quote] [spoiler]Eto ang scene: Nahulog ang books ni Jeanne. Tinulungan ni Nimiel, ang dahilan kung bakit na.

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[spoiler]over-all, maganda yung pagkakalahad ng kwento, hindi siya nakaka-inip, yung tipong hindi masyadong maligoy, at kuhang-kuha ang atensyon ng mambabasa. Last edited by jieduck (2008-11-22 04:49:48)