Hey guys this is a song by me

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[spoiler][b][i]My Confident[/i][/b]
[Intro - CHORUS]
You brought me up
When everybody else pulled me down
You looked me in the eyes and said
�You know I�ll be around.�
Everyday, it seems like hell
But since I know you�re there
It makes everything so perfect
Cause you�re My Confident�
[VERSE 1]
You�re my confidence
Seems like everything�s alright
I feel a hero, like I�ll never die
You�re the optimistic
You make everything so right
I finally found a reason
To give this life a try

[CHORUS]
Cause you brought me up
When everybody else pulled me down
You looked me in the eyes and said
�You know I�ll be around.�
Everyday, it seems like hell
But since I know you�re there
It makes everything so perfect
Cause you�re My Confident�
[VERSE 2]
I don�t know what you did
Made kryptonite disappear.
No need to search the world
Cause all I need�s right here
Now nothing can stop me
I won�t fall short in this fight
Got all my strength from you
And everything�s alright
[CHORUS]
And you brought me up
When everybody else pulled me down
You looked me in the eyes and said
�You know I�ll be around.�
Everyday, it seems like hell
But since I know you�re there
It makes everything so perfect
Cause you�re My Confident�
[BRIDGE]
I know one day you�ll have to leave
I don�t know what I�ll do
I�ll probably fall on my knees
But I won�t stop you
You brought me back to life
I�ll try to make it with out you
[CHORUS]
But you brought me up
When everybody else pulled me down
You looked me in the eyes and said
�You know I�ll be around.�
Everyday, it seems like hell
But since I know you�re there
It makes everything so perfect
Cause you�re My Confident�[/spoiler]
Last edited by merx7ii (2008-12-07 00:56:07)