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[b]Introduction[/b] ------------------------- I just want to share a simple story with you guys. I hope you like it. It's a story of love and betrayal. [align=center][b]Chapter One: Crush[/b][/al
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2009-01-24 05:51:08
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[b]Introduction[/b] ------------------------- I just want to share a simple story with you guys. I hope you like it. It's a story of love and betrayal. [align=center][b]Chapter One: Crush[/b][/al
[b]aww.[/b]
new rider hir..
cute.. [quote=ncarmz]nice story!
but i think you going too fast!
i suggest you give some thrills in your story!
well, hope you don't mind!
but, keep up the good work!
God BlesS[/quote]
but i agree wid ncarmz it's going too fast.
don't tke this as a negative comment but as a positive one to improve your storii.. 
godBless..
but im tunning in to the next chappie..
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[img]http://i499.photobucket.com/albums/rr351/assylpink/aw1453-1.jpg[/img]
.."try to listen when no one speaks"..[/align]
new rider hir..
cute.. [quote=ncarmz]nice story!
but i think you going too fast!
i suggest you give some thrills in your story!
well, hope you don't mind!
but, keep up the good work!
God BlesS[/quote]
but i agree wid ncarmz it's going too fast.
don't tke this as a negative comment but as a positive one to improve your storii..
godBless..
but im tunning in to the next chappie..
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[img]http://i499.photobucket.com/albums/rr351/assylpink/aw1453-1.jpg[/img]
.."try to listen when no one speaks"..[/align]
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