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  2010-05-31 04:12:28

oniongurl
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Nice~ Haha, I didn't know also you are a poet :lol3: Anyways, I love both of the two poems, as for the first one, I love it how you made it "story-like" poem, which tells a story in your poem. For th

Nice~ Haha, I didn't know also you are a poet :lol3: Anyways, I love both of the two poems, as for the first one, I love it how you made it "story-like" poem, which tells a story in your poem. For the second one, I love how your rhymed the words, you also used the word "thy" which is good. Keep it up!

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