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:arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

ashely_pain15
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

woah... :o new story,..i lyk it.. i'll wait 4 ur update.. hehe..nyc tnx...

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_berii.^ü
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

it's felix right? :eh: i already read the first part of this, the part where something touched her lips. :lol: well, it's great. i really love your stories. ;) i'll wait for your next update. :D
miya_0018
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

kakaiyak :( ilove the story.. the best ang story.
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

[b]Replies. ;)[/b][spoiler]@ashley: thanks ash! ;) @sis berrii: yeah. I posted it on candymag. The part one here includes the chapter two of the story. ;) @miya: thanks for reading. ;) maski ako naiyak ee. :retard:[/spoiler] [align=center][b]Part Two 1/2[/b] *I'll just put the colors next time. XD I'm kinda tired right now. Sorry guys! :ninja:[/align] I was hearing everyone; everyone around me, and of course the one who carried me. I didn't bother to listen anymore, like my body doesn't want to. It was a painful feeling. Like my bones were about to break, and my head was about to explode. I wanted to open [i]everything[/i]. My eyes, my ears, my mouth and my mind. But it seems that I can't. The atmosphere changed. I was shivering. Then, I saw a bright light coming. It engulfed the whole surroundings and me, too. A half-second passed and I went dead. All of my nerves were all disconnected. [hr] "She looked so... pale. Did she eat her dinner?" A woman said. "I don't know." [i]Who are they?[/i] I wondered. [i]Where am I?[/i] I wanted to sit. My nerves sent an impulse to my brain and wow. It didn't work. [i]Man, I want to sit![/i] I tried to move my hands. [i]Where are my nerves?! Are they that bad?[/i] "I'm afraid I'll spend the day with her." A man said. The same pair of hands brushed my forehead. Yes, it was warm. "Dina, she's sweating." The temparature of his hand changed. And it was like, burning me. [i]I'm sweating, and it's because of your hands[/i], I said loudly but again, my brain didn't succeed on doing the right thing. The phrase was stuck inside my body. I tried to hold the hand. I tried so hard. [i]Dammit! Work with me! You're not yet useless![/i] Yes, I was commanding my own body. It was pretty crazy. The hand held my hand and with a suond of click inside my brain, I felt a short-circuit flowed through my veins. I succeeded. "Look." The man whispered. I don't want to lose my nerves anymore. I wanted to hold on so bad. I don't want to lose my life anymore now that. . . "Dina! Help me here!" The man panicked. The man held my hand back. But it was tighter than before. It felt like a bread holding the fire. "Take me home." I whispered slowly, word by word, to the guy. I thought of Granny, I knew she was worried. Poor old woman, she doesn't know what happened to me. I felt guilty about it. "You're still unconcious. I'm sorry, I can't do that." The man pulled his hand back, "No!" I immediately gasped. The man quickly turned his head around me, like the speed of an impulse passed on every nerve cell. "S-sorry." I took my hand back and opened my eyes to see where I am. "S-sorry, Felix." I frowned at him. "Sorrys are invalid." His mouth was like a–yes it was rose pink–very straight line. His eyes were on me. "Sorry again, I should've not said that. My sorry was wasted. Thank you." I smiled at him. He chuckled and smiled back. His eyes were like–I don't know, I wasn't sure–glitters; I mean, it was glittering. And his skin was was–white? "She seemed okay. I won't stay here any longer. I still have some errands to finish." He stood up and waved his hand. "Errands? It's already three o'clock in the morning, and you still have errands?" Dina looked upset. Felix gave her a serious glance, "Oh, right." Dina said and opened the door for him. "Lady, are you feeling well right now?" Dina sat beside me. "Yes. Thank you for helping me." I got my feet on the ground and faced her. "You shouldn't thank me for that. You should thank him for bringing you here." She smiled. "When he had lay you on this bed, he called me and was screaming 'Dammit Dina! Help her! She's not breathing properly!' And of course, I panicked. We were like cats and dogs here awhile ago, we were screaming at each other because of you." She chuckled. "Oh.." I felt... amazed. :o "Go home now. I know your parents are waiting for you." She smiled and I went outside. [hr] I apologized to Gary for being the cause of the discussion's delay. Good thing he didn't scold me, he even said, [i]Be careful with your life, young lady[/i]. I just rolled my eyes. :lol: After that, I walked my way to the gate. I was glad that I wasn't alone on that street. And I was glad to see Felix, too. But I didn't dare to talk to him, I was kind of, shy because of the incident awhile ago. I want to thank him, but not now. Maybe tomorrow. We were at the bus stop at that time. We were alone. The other students rode a jeep. I wouldn't want to ride a jeep, creepy. I was stomping my foot that time, I'm really impatient when it comes to–"You." I turned around, "Why?" I asked. "Stop stomping your feet." Felix warned me. And so, I did stop. :/ [hr] "Dammit I really need to go." He whispered to himself, but too bad, I heard it. Tss, I'm such a gossiper. I sighed and began to walk. "Hey, don't you want to ride the bus?" He caught me. "What would I wait? Morning?" I rolled my eyes at him and there, I continued walking. "H-hey! Can I go with you?" "Are you serious? Don't tell me you're afraid of ghosts." I laughed my ass out. "No, I'm not. I just want to be with you."
_berii.^ü
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

oh. kilig. haha. akin na lang si felix. wahahaXD next na
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

ohh!! another storii nnman toh!! gnda tlga. nikikilig aq. hahaha!! :D:lol::wow:
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

@beri: haha. lolx. split worker nman aq. :disgust: dala-dalawa story ko dito. tae tlga aq. :disgust: @lyneth: toinks. haha. :P thanks. nice avatar. :redface:
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

^sus! panget q nga dian ehh. haha. 3p q lng mglagay. --oh bqt pla npasama ata dto to?npahalo ata?
gaiL0418
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

line ni mam gallo yung MAG-EVAPORATE NA KAYO ah!! la lng! missher! :|
aprilcutie09
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Re: :arrow: [b]EDITED[/b]. Whole thread. [align=center] It's just a compilation. ;) [/align] [b]My Lucky Charm[/b]: [url=http://theftalk.com/viewtopic.php?pid=1230004#p1230004]Part One[/url], [ur

Ang Cute tlga ng mga story mo siz. Gaua ka pa marami. I love them. :wow: Uber Swit ng mga storie. :redface:
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