im proud of u lil sis
mwaaa!
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Yey! You made an account!
Thanks ate...
Oh, and of course, read the rules, ayt?
laablotz!!
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Thanks for supporting! Here's the next chapter.
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CHAPTER 13:[/b]
"hey anna! what r u waiting for?? let's go!"
"yeah.. i'm coming.."
ano ba yan!! [b]tpos na ung problem #1, may dumating pang isa[/b]!! bad3p!!
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anna.... u [b]will regret[/b] this...
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[after school d other day]
"so, you hungry, hun?"
"eerm... let's go get ice cream...
"
"sure...
"
haaiizz anna...
don't worry...
everything will be just fine...
"wat flavor...?"
"strawberry for me!!!
"
"ok... [to saleslady] 2 please..."
atleast d icecream's good.... haha...
am so addicted to ice cream.. weee...
"aahmm, anna... can you wait 4 a while?? i'm juz gonna walk around...
"
"well... ok... be careful..."
"i'm always careful...
"
"haha... whatever... love u...
"
"love u 2..."
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wow... mag-dadalawang oras nah wla prin c raf ahh...
i wonder where he is now??
"umm... excuse me ms."
"yes?"
"girlfriend po ba kau ni raf?"
"yup... cno ka?"
"ako si michael... kaibigan ni raf...."
"anong kailangan mo?"
"c raf... nasa hospital.... nabangga ng kotse..."
"[b]ANO???!!![/b]
"
c raf?? nasa ospital??
"ako na po magdala sa inyo dun..."
"ok, thanks michael..."
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[in the hospital, in raf's room]
"raf!! what happened??!!"
"anna... i'm glad you came...."
"of course i would... thanks to michael..."
"who's [b]michael[/b] ?"
"don't play games with me... your friend??? he told me you were here... he even gave me a ride so i could come here..."
"i don't know any 'michael'..."
"u do? then, who's michael?..."
"i am..."
ano?? umeeksena nanaman tong guy n 2??
"do u mind if you tell me who u really are??"
"I'm michael........... [b]KEN SENT ME[/b]."
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You're very supportive! +repu for you sis!
[b]
[i]Note: UPDATE is next week.
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late na naman akuh
tsktsk ..wew, gravbeh huh
i'll wait fur the next update sistah
late na naman akuh
tsktsk ..wew, gravbeh huh
i'll wait fur the next update sistah
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It's OK sizzy...
Thanks for the +repu!
Since I'm so effin' bored, I decided to make the update... [b]TODAY![/b] Wee...
Get ready! This is the most intense Chapter that I've made so far...
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CHAPTER 14:[/b]
i knew d p tpos ang lhat... i knew ken would eventually pop up again...
I just didn't think it was today...
"do you have something to do with this michael?"
"sorry but i'm not allowed to talk..."
"ok then.. "
"but i am allowed to give you this.. ken asked me too"
wow... may pa-note effect pa 2ng c ken hah... sosyal.. hekhek... wait... iba n ung iniicp ku eh.. ok, let's see wat dis note has 2 say...
[quote]"[b]Dear Anna,[/b]
I told you someday you'd regret this. But it's never too late to make changes, if you know what I mean.
But since we're friends, I'm gonna let you off with a little secret. I was the one responsible for what happened to Raf. Nothing personal. Just wanna see how long your "love" can go.
Remember...
[b]You'll be mine, whether you like it or not.[/b]"[/quote]
whoa..
dis guy's gone nuts!! i mean... if he really loved me, he'd let go.. but what does he do? attempt to kill my boyfriend and then tell me his plan?? apparently this guy doesn't have xperience when it comes to blackmailing...
oops... slipped...
"c'mon anna, i'm sure ken wouldn't do something like that to us.. especially you..."
"i know, i'm just.... [b]WORRIED[/b]."
"just take your mind off of it.."
"but what about you?"
"i'll be alright...
"
"you sure?"
"yeah...
"
i know he'll be ok... his smile says it all...
but knowing ken, he will do anything to get me...
"ok.... but again, please be [b]CAREFUL[/b]..."
"i will...
"
"michael, you can go now..."
"ok..."
"i should be leaving too... bye raf.. i love you..."
"love you too...
"
i hope he will be alright...
you should be on d look-out too anna...
you'll never know when that geeky ken will pop out again...
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[the next day, saturday, no school]
"how r yah sis?? u don't look so happy 2day..."
"nothing sis... personal stuff.. it's not that easy 2 explain..."
"well, i won't force you.. but when you need someone to talk to, i'm here...
"
"thanks sis..."
[phone ringing]
[quote]Anna: "Hello?"
Rhea: "Anna! I heard the news. You OK?"
Anna: "Yeah, I'm fine.
"
Rhea: "Are you sure?"
Anna: "Yeah...
"
Rhea: "But I'm still coming over... And while you're waiting, gawa ka na din ng popcorn. Gutom na ako eh!"
Anna: "Haha, OK.
Bye. "
Rhea: "Bye."[/quote]
Haha... That Rhea... always hungry... well, better make that popcorn of hers...
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[9:30 pm, Anna's house]
[doorbell rings]
"anna! i'm here! where's d popcorn?"
"haha...
it's here.."
"good...
"
"so.. wanna watch a movie??"
"yeah, what movie?"
"My Big Love...
"
"My fave movie! thanks best friend...
"
watch a movie.. eat popcorn.. normal girl stuff.. we actually didn't talk about raf nor ken...
[doorbell rings]
"I'm coming!"
grabe naman.. kung magdoorbell akala mo wala nang bukas...
"Hello?"
hmm.. wala nmang tao...
but wait...
there's a...
[b]note...[/b]
again??
You're so creative sis! nice story....
You're so creative sis! nice story....
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Really? Sorry!
Maybe next time I'd make it all english...
Thanks for the kind words...
Thanks sis.
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Haha.. You're right...
I'm sorry kung bitin siya masyado...
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You should proceed to the [b][u]help section[/u][/b] if you want to ask a question but I'll answer yours anyway.
Those are called bullets. You can find them anywhere. Just google them.
Love yah Good Job:eh:
Love yah Good Job:eh:[/quote]
Thanks Bestie.
[quote=sk8er_ghurl16]wow!. nice story!.. i gonna tuned in this story.. the plot is also good.
*anu kaya ang laman ng note na yun?*..hmm[/quote]
Aaw, thanks sis.