@ anna: yeah. :] nkbwi c jerry, pti na rin c maui. @ emo princess: thank you. Gb. @ cutie phunk: oh tlga? hehe. thank you na rin. matslabb. @ gerlyn: thanksssss. :] na-aappreciate nio ung gngwa ko. hehe. xD I'll update my story as soon as possible.

Last edited by EMae (2008-07-06 00:48:57)

Magkatabi agad sila? nice. hihi. ingat babe. [i]Parental Guidance.[/i]

@gemandi:haha.loka ka bride. @t:still waiting fer the next chapter.

Last edited by jhayyuliajay (2008-07-06 06:03:22)

^ukie pouh!. klah cuh nah update nah! wala fah d.i,! ,. cge sis,! try cuh mag opn tomorrow!,. skul mn gud bukas buh! ...

[color=red][b]w0w.. ganda.. update niu na po.. kabitin eh..[/b][/color]

[b]Chapter 3[/b] Dahil magkabarkada c Maui at Jerry dati, alam na ni Maui ang iba niyang ugali. Mabait c Jerry. Alam niyang wala siyang gagawing kabalastugan. At dahil sa kanyang magandang ugali, sobra ang pagtitiwala sa kanya ni Maui. Late na. Hindi sila makatulog. Wala silang magawa kundi tumingin sa itaas at tignan ang mga bituin. Hanggang sa…. Jerry: Mau, tulog ka na ba? Maui: Hindi pa. Bakit? Jerry: Pwede magtanong? Maui: Oo naman. Kahit ano. Jerry: Masaya ka ba? Maui: Oo naman. Ikaw? Jerry: Siyempre. Maui: Bakit ka masaya? Jerry: Kasi ikaw ang nagturo sa akin kung pano magmahal ulit. Maui: Ai ganon? Jerry: Oo. Ganon nga. Isipin mo na lang, kung hindi kita nakilala, malamang nakakulong pa rin ang puso ko. Hindi ko na masusubukan pang magmahal ng iba. Baka habang buhay na lang akong nangungulila at naghihintay sa wala. ………. Natahimik na lang si Maui. Unti-unting pumatak ang kanyang mga luha. Jerry: Babe? Maui: Y-yes? Jerry: E ikaw? Maui: Anong ako? Jerry: Bakit ka masaya? Maui: D-dahil nakilala ko ang tulad mo. Jerry: Tulad ko? Maui: Oo. Isang taong tapat. Handang ibigay ang buong puso niya para sa taong pinakamamahal niya. Jerry: (natahimik na lang) Muling niyakap ni Maui c Jerry. Yun bang ayaw na niyang pakawalan. Umiiyak pa rin siya, dahil sa sobrang kasiyahan na sa kanya napunta ang taong mahal niya. Hanggang sa nakatulog na si Maui na yakap-yakap parin c Jerry…. Jerry: Babe? Are you still awake? ….... Jerry: Goodnight. I love you. (He then kissed Maui on the forehead). [b]The next day (their first day as couple)[/b] Maui: Good- Maui: Whoa. Asan na siya? Agad bumaba si Maui para tignan c Jerry. Pagkababa niya…. Jerry: Good morning babe. <3 Maui: What are you doing? Jerry: Oh, nothing. I’m just cooking your breakfast. Maui: Really? I thought you don’t know how to cook. Jerry: Well. As you can see, I’m cooking right now. Maui: Fine. But be sure that it tastes good, huh? Jerry: Oh yeah. Not only good, but also delicious. Maui: Weh. Mayabang ka babe! Jerry: Haay nako. Go na. Mamaya mo na lang ako kulitin. Maui: Ok. Love you. Jerry: No comment. Hahaha. Maui: Whatever! After a few minutes…. Jerry: Babeeee! Maui: What? Jerry: C’mon. Let’s eat. Maui: Good. I’m starving na e. Jerry: Ok. Go down na. Maui: Opo sir. Naka-set na ung table. Ung foods, drinks, and even the dessert na ginawa ni Jerry. Speechless si Maui nung nakita nia ung table. Bonggang bongga ang arrangement. As in bongga talaga. May flowers pa sa gitna. Maui: Wow. Jerry: Yeah, wow. Yan pa lang wow na, ung foods pa kaya no? Maui: Haay. Mahangin dito no? D mo ba napansin? Jerry: Hindi e. Maui: Arggh. Jerry: Joke lang babe. C’mon, upo ka na. Maui: Oo na. Jerry: Don’t move. Maui: Why? Jerry: I’ll serve you. Maui: Oh no. Don’t treat me like a child, babe. Jerry: No. I insist. I’ll just watch you eat your breakfast. Maui: No way. You should eat, too. Jerry: Well? Maui: Sit there! Jerry: Ok. Ok. Maui: Alright. You are neither my maid nor my personal assistant. You should feel at home. Ok? Jerry: Yes, boss. Maui tasted the food Jerry has cooked. What she can only say is….. [b][i]Wow.[/i][/b]

Last edited by EMae (2008-07-06 08:48:10)

wow gutom na din akuh.. bigyan nio naman akuh... joke katatapus kuh nga rin kumain weh.. babe babe, babe, hai nakuh... i'll wait fur the next chapiie

[i]ansarap nman ata tlga aa? haha. lolengs bitin ako XDD[/i]

nakzs naman!., haha.. ang galing ng story!., sobrang kilig qouh dun sa chapter one!., haha... panu ba kasi!., unbelievable story talaga!. haha.. lol... i like ur story sis!., it's so nakakakilig!., haha.... i'll support u with this one sis!., haha... i like it so much!., hehe... still w8ing for the next chappie!.. hehe

[quote]@ anna: haha. tgnan nten kng ano ung niluto nia. xD @ gemandi: ai? kala ko po Kapampangan ka. hehe. nyay! bka sbhn pa ng iba wla aqng respeto pag d kta tnwag na ate. xD @ akuzet: thanksssss. lablab. @ jhay: haha. HOUSE-band na xa. lol. [/quote] [b]CHAPTER 4[/b] "Wow. Ano yan?" Jerry: Haay. Beef steak po. Maui: Oh talaga? Jerry: Oo nga e! Mukhang hindi nga lang. Maui: Kaya nga e. Ang sungit! Hahaha. Jerry: Kumain ka na lang nga! May dessert pa yan. Maui: Ano naman? Jerry: Mm.... Maui: Ano????? Jerry: Mamaya na yun! Maui: Tinikman ni Maui ung BEEF STEAK kuno ni Jerry. haha. Halatang ninenerbiyos si Jerry sa magiging reaction ni Babe. Jerry: So? Maui: What so? Jerry: How does it taste? Maui: Hmmm. Jerry: What? Maui: Give me the dessert first. I'll rate you afterwards. Jerry: Ok. Fine. Maui: ...... Maui: (nabilaukan. hahaha) Jerry: What the - ?!!! Maui: I suddenly swallowed the whole strawberry. Jerry: Haven't you seen it? Maui: Mm, nope. Can't you see your dessert? It is full of whip cream! Jerry: Uh-oh Sorry. Maui: It's alright. Jerry: Then what's my grade, ma'am? Maui: 80. Jerry: Why 80? Maui: -20 for the strawberry. Jerry: Only because of the strawberry? Maui: Yes! Jerry: You're so mean. Maui: Ai? Mareklamo. Jerry walked out. After a few minutes.... Maui: Joke lang kasi yun no! Jerry: Joke daw?! Maui: Oo. Jerry: E anu talaga ung rating ko? Maui: 101. Jerry: Weh. Bola! Maui: Ai? (kissed Jerry on the cheeks) Jerry: Maui: Ok na? Jerry: D pa e. Maui: Ai ganyan ka no! Ok. Jerry: Joke lang. Maui: Hindi. Walang joke sa akin. Jerry: Pikon. Maui: Mas pikon ka! Jerry: Fine. Hindi na lang umimik si Maui. Napikon e. Hahaha. Jerry: (he kissed Maui, too, on her cheeks) Maui: What did you - ? Jerry: I kissed you. Gumanti lang ako. Maui: Jerry: Sorry. Maui: Hahaha. Jerry: Sorry. Maui: Wala yun. JOKE lang db? Jerry: Oo nga e. Hehe. I Love You. Maui: Hmmm? Jerry: O? [b][i] "I love you, too."[/i][/b] Jerry: I think I'd better go na, babe. Maui: Ok. You take care, huh? Jerry: Of course. You too. Maui: No problem, boss. Jerry: I'll see you tomorrow. Maui: Ok. Jerry: Maui: Bye. [b]The next day... (2nd day)[/b] Texting... Jerry: Good morning babe. Maui: Good am too. Jerry: How was you sleep? Blablabla............. Jerry: So, do you want to go out tonight? Maui: Ok. I'm not busy naman e. Jerry: Good. Let's meet at blablabla at 7:00 pm. Maui: Ok. See you later. ILY. Jerry: Alright. ILYT. [b]At the meeting place - 7:00 pm[/b] Maui came early because this is her first date with him. She's really dressed up. She was wearing a red dress. She really looked beautiful that night. Maybe not only beautiful, much better if I say [b]gorgeous[/b]. Maui: Where is he? He texted Jerry... Maui: Babe, where are you na? ...... Her fone rang. Jerry: Wait babe. I'm on my way. (7:10 pm) ...... *Jerry's place. Jerry had decided to buy flowers for Maui. But when he's about to buy, about to ask the vendor, he saw his ex. (7:17 pm) As usual, they greeted each other. Girl: Hey, hi! Jerry: Whoa. Look who's here. Girl: Hahaha. How are you? Long time no see, huh? Jerry: Yeah, right. Well, I'm taken again. Girl: Really? Good. Jerry: So, how's your bf na pala? Girl: Mm. Jerry: Why? Girl: We broke up. Jerry: When? Girl: Last month. Jerry: But why? Girl: He's too busy with his work. He doesn't have time for me anymore. So I've decided to stop our relationship now and then. Jerry: Oh. I'm sorry for that. Girl: That's nothing. Jerry: Have you moved on na ba? Girl: Honestly, hindi pa. Jerry: Girl: Jerry? Jerry: Oh? Girl: Mm, hmm, nothing. Jerry: Hehehe. They talked for almost 50 minutes. Jerry didn't notice the time. It's already 8:00 pm. *Maui's place. Maui: Oh. Was that "I'm on my way" message true? I've been waiting for almost 45 mins. here. Maybe for 1 hour already. I think I'd better go. Maui left the place. She doesn't want to wait for Jerry anymore. She rode a taxi and went home. She was really disappointed. She suddenly noticed that tears were falling from her eyes. Maui: Wth is that guy? Ang tagal kong naghintay pero d siya dumating. Kasumpa-sumpa siya. Letche siya.

Last edited by EMae (2008-07-07 10:05:42)