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[img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

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[img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

[img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko, Mama. Huwag mo na tanungin kung bakit ayoko. She didn�t ask me a question. But alam ko na taking-taka siya. But she said to me �Kaibigan natin sila. Pumayag ka na magpunta tayo. I k0ow I will see his girlfriend but for my mother I will go to the party� So my mother and I, go to the party� sinalubong agad kami niya kasama yung girlfriend niya� he smile at me w/ that killer smile. So� pinakilala niya sa amin yung girlfriend niya� I just smile at her but I am not happy. Mean while, during the party goes on. I am looking at him and his girlfriend. They are so sweet and I think he is happy w/ that girl. I feel so jealous about the girl. After the party, I go to my room and I to my mother that I wanna sleep, pero buong magdamag ay umiiyak lang ako. Iniisip ko siya buong magdamag. I am thinking kung bakit bumalik uli itong feelings ko sa kanya. But after that day, I just realize na hindi lang dapat siya ang isipin ko lagi� magpapapunta na lang ako kay Mama sa mga pinsan ko at sa ibang friends ko� dapat maging happy naman ako� and I just decided na maging masaya ako para sa kanya. chapter 1: http://theftalk.com/t38149-%22killer-smile%22-%5Bchapter-1%5D.html

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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

Hey the story seems cool. Just a suggestion, add a bit of conversations on the next chapters okay? ^_^ and btw, please just create one topic for your story. making one thread for each chapter adds lag to this section..okay? thanks.
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

ok. i will do that.. hehehe. i will try to compose din ng true story ko.
kathleen24
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

sa Aug. may next chapter itong "Killer Smile" teecee.. God bless..
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

heyah,double posting and don't speak tagalog coz we're not in the regional section. =) ur story? nahh.,don't like it. :P only two conversations.,add more.,
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

[quote=As cicatrizes]heyah,double posting and don't speak tagalog coz we're not in the regional section. =) ur story? nahh.,don't like it. :P only two conversations.,add more.,[/quote] ok.. i will post a new chapter by Aug. i will add more two conversations.. thank you.
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

weeeh!., hehe. nyc story!., kip it up sis! heheh. hmm.. w8ing 4 da nxt chappie! = D ~juliene~
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

its ok.. :D kip it up.. :D
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

thank you. right now i am composing a new chapter. hope you will like. i have many conversation. :)
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

Please update it asap ^_^ thank you..
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

where's chap 1? plz pm me. and plz giv the link <3 =3
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

oops sori. sori f0r 2 posting. i olredi found chap 1
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Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, �Ayoko,

Hi! My name is Rachel M. Chak I'd like to be your friend! Anyways Good job! I love your story you have a great story anyways pls check mine: http://theftalk.com/t38614-%26%239829%3BTogether-Forever%21%21%21%26%239829%3B-%5BCurrently-Chapter-17%5D-Super-exciting%21%21%21%21.html Well good luck! :)
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