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[img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#1 2008-07-17 05:20:23

kathleen24: » FTalkAgent; 2439; 0; 1969-12-31

[img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

[img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko, Mama. Huwag mo na tanungin kung bakit ayoko. She didn’t ask me a question. But alam ko na taking-taka siya. But she said to me “Kaibigan natin sila. Pumayag ka na magpunta tayo. I k0ow I will see his girlfriend but for my mother I will go to the party… So my mother and I, go to the party… sinalubong agad kami niya kasama yung girlfriend niya… he smile at me w/ that killer smile. So… pinakilala niya sa amin yung girlfriend niya… I just smile at her but I am not happy. Mean while, during the party goes on. I am looking at him and his girlfriend. They are so sweet and I think he is happy w/ that girl. I feel so jealous about the girl. After the party, I go to my room and I to my mother that I wanna sleep, pero buong magdamag ay umiiyak lang ako. Iniisip ko siya buong magdamag. I am thinking kung bakit bumalik uli itong feelings ko sa kanya. But after that day, I just realize na hindi lang dapat siya ang isipin ko lagi… magpapapunta na lang ako kay Mama sa mga pinsan ko at sa ibang friends ko… dapat maging happy naman ako… and I just decided na maging masaya ako para sa kanya. chapter 1: http://theftalk.com/t38149-%22killer-smile%22-%5Bchapter-1%5D.html

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#2 2008-07-17 09:09:17

lucknskill: » FTalkAgent; 2123; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

Hey the story seems cool. Just a suggestion, add a bit of conversations on the next chapters okay? ^_^ and btw, please just create one topic for your story. making one thread for each chapter adds lag to this section..okay? thanks.

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#3 2008-07-18 05:43:04

kathleen24: » FTalkAgent; 2439; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

ok. i will do that.. hehehe. i will try to compose din ng true story ko.

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#4 2008-07-29 00:10:41

kathleen24: » FTalkAgent; 2439; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

sa Aug. may next chapter itong "Killer Smile" teecee.. God bless..

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#5 2008-07-29 01:46:50

As cicatrizes: » SuperFTalker; 14217; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

heyah,double posting and don't speak tagalog coz we're not in the regional section.

ur story? nahh.,don't like it.

only two conversations.,add more.,

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#6 2008-07-31 08:12:53

kathleen24: » FTalkAgent; 2439; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

[quote=As cicatrizes]heyah,double posting and don't speak tagalog coz we're not in the regional section.

ur story? nahh.,don't like it.

only two conversations.,add more.,[/quote] ok.. i will post a new chapter by Aug. i will add more two conversations.. thank you.

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#7 2008-08-02 03:11:15

akuzet16: » FTalkWhiz; 2880; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

weeeh!., hehe. nyc story!., kip it up sis! heheh. hmm.. w8ing 4 da nxt chappie! = D ~juliene~

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#8 2008-08-02 03:30:24

bhea_jean: » FTalkManiac; 725; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

its ok..

kip it up..

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#9 2008-08-04 03:03:26

kathleen24: » FTalkAgent; 2439; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

thank you. right now i am composing a new chapter. hope you will like. i have many conversation.

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#10 2008-08-18 23:37:49

lucknskill: » FTalkAgent; 2123; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

Please update it asap ^_^ thank you..

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#11 2008-08-19 04:09:43

gaara_gfzz: » FTalkFreak; 1799; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

where's chap 1? plz pm me. and plz giv the link <3

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#12 2008-08-19 04:11:51

gaara_gfzz: » FTalkFreak; 1799; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

oops sori. sori f0r 2 posting. i olredi found chap 1

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#13 2008-08-19 08:05:29

Sunshine0918: » FTalkAddict; 444; 0; 1969-12-31

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

Hi! My name is Rachel M. Chak I'd like to be your friend! Anyways Good job! I love your story you have a great story anyways pls check mine: http://theftalk.com/t38614-%26%239829%3BTogether-Forever%21%21%21%26%239829%3B-%5BCurrently-Chapter-17%5D-Super-exciting%21%21%21%21.html Well good luck!

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[img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#1 2008-07-17 05:20:23

[img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#2 2008-07-17 09:09:17

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#3 2008-07-18 05:43:04

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#4 2008-07-29 00:10:41

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#5 2008-07-29 01:46:50

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#6 2008-07-31 08:12:53

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#7 2008-08-02 03:11:15

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#8 2008-08-02 03:30:24

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#9 2008-08-04 03:03:26

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#10 2008-08-18 23:37:49

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#11 2008-08-19 04:09:43

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#12 2008-08-19 04:11:51

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

#13 2008-08-19 08:05:29

Re: [img]http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg204/dreamsfrozen/sadness-1.png[/img] One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of his mother. I said to my mother, “Ayoko,

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