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- » [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
[quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
- jovie_toni
- » FTalker
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Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
nice chap.......
buti nlang natanggap ci janeene........
hehehehe...
nxt na poh!
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- megumi028
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
weewit..
three chapters agad..
haha..
be strong janeene..
haha..
juks lan..
nx na sis..
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- xXlynethXx
- » FTalkWhiz
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Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
mgqagrup cla.
haha!! 
nxt naa po. .gif)
nxt naa po.
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- aljelyn13
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
yehey magka-group cla ni janner...
hehehe...
nice chap p0h...
nxt chap plz...
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- janeene
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
sorry guys sa late update.
busy lang.
pero before nun,
may sasabihin ako sa inyo.
[i]secret[/i] lang naten to hah. 
[i]just open the spoiler if you are curious[/i]
[spoiler]yung inspiration ko sa paggawa ng story na ito ay si [b]janner[/b]. classmate ko. and know what guys! kame na! ui, secret lang naten to hah! [/spoiler]
[i]ok bah?[/i]
here's the next chap
[b]CHAPTIE 10[/b]
"ok class, groupings para sa physcs project"
si ma'a yun sa physics.
"group 1-
janeene-
sly-
jhessa-
sherwin-
glenn-
at janner"
parang wala ng bago dun.
napapansin ko lagi kameng pinagtatago ng tadhana. 
wala naman tayong magagawa dun.
"ok, groupmates ko. Hali kayo"
tawag kame ni Glenn.
"blah! blah! blah!" 
dami niyang sinabi.
"basta gropumates, magkita tayo dun sa plaza. 5 friday afternoon. overnight to."
"janeene, hindi kasi ako sure kung papayagan ako" 
"bakit naman jHessa? eh, group project naman tong gagawin naten"
"eh kasi super strict nung papa ko"
"kahit group project di ka papayagan nun?"
"hindi eh, grabe nga"
grabe nga--------
haiz.
papano to.
wala na akong close na sasama.
kainis naman kasi.
"janeene"
duh!
si sherwin na naman!
"oh baket ba?"
"kaw talaga, taray mo!"
"oh, ayan na po nakangiti na nga"
sabay naman pacute ng lola nyu.
hehe!
"yan, yung gusto ko sayo eh"
"huh? yung ano?"
"yung kacutan mo"
"o.a mo hah. ano ba talagang kaylangan mo sherwin?"
"ikaw"
haiz.
eto na naman po tayo.
"oh, ba't di ka makapagsalita diyan janeene"
"eh, kasi ang o.a mo"
"o.a? yan yung tinatawag nilang true love"
"true love ka jan. ka o.ahan sabihin mo"
"totoo yun hah."
"yun lang?"
"meron pa janeene"
"ano?"
-----
"
busy lang.
pero before nun,
may sasabihin ako sa inyo.
[i]secret[/i] lang naten to hah.
[i]just open the spoiler if you are curious[/i]
[spoiler]yung inspiration ko sa paggawa ng story na ito ay si [b]janner[/b]. classmate ko. and know what guys! kame na! ui, secret lang naten to hah! [/spoiler]
[i]ok bah?[/i]
here's the next chap
[b]CHAPTIE 10[/b]
"ok class, groupings para sa physcs project"
si ma'a yun sa physics.
"group 1-
janeene-
sly-
jhessa-
sherwin-
glenn-
at janner"
parang wala ng bago dun.
napapansin ko lagi kameng pinagtatago ng tadhana.
wala naman tayong magagawa dun.
"ok, groupmates ko. Hali kayo"
tawag kame ni Glenn.
"blah! blah! blah!"
dami niyang sinabi.
"basta gropumates, magkita tayo dun sa plaza. 5 friday afternoon. overnight to."
"janeene, hindi kasi ako sure kung papayagan ako"
"bakit naman jHessa? eh, group project naman tong gagawin naten"
"eh kasi super strict nung papa ko"
"kahit group project di ka papayagan nun?"
"hindi eh, grabe nga"
grabe nga--------
haiz.
papano to.
wala na akong close na sasama.
kainis naman kasi.
"janeene"
duh!
si sherwin na naman!
"oh baket ba?"
"kaw talaga, taray mo!"
"oh, ayan na po nakangiti na nga"
sabay naman pacute ng lola nyu.
hehe!
"yan, yung gusto ko sayo eh"
"huh? yung ano?"
"yung kacutan mo"
"o.a mo hah. ano ba talagang kaylangan mo sherwin?"
"ikaw"
haiz.
eto na naman po tayo.
"oh, ba't di ka makapagsalita diyan janeene"
"eh, kasi ang o.a mo"
"o.a? yan yung tinatawag nilang true love"
"true love ka jan. ka o.ahan sabihin mo"
"totoo yun hah."
"yun lang?"
"meron pa janeene"
"ano?"
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"
Last edited by janeene (2008-12-03 04:38:12)
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- csummer_29
- » n00b
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
=)ukie.!bbxhin kuH!ahahah!
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- csummer_29
- » n00b
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
an ganda ah!damihan muh pah!
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- janeene
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
^ ty sa comments!
here's the next chap!
[b]CHAPTIE 11[/b]
eto na naman po tayo.
"oh, ba't di ka makapagsalita diyan janeene"
"eh, kasi ang o.a mo"
"o.a? yan yung tinatawag nilang true love"
"true love ka jan. ka o.ahan sabihin mo"
"totoo yun hah."
"yun lang?"
"meron pa janeene"
"ano?"
-----
"sabay na tayo sa friday, janeene"
"saan?" 
"kina glenn, gagawa ng group poject"
"yoko"
"bakit, husto mo si janner kasama mo?!"
"huh?" 
"totoo naman. di ba?"
"pwede ba sherwin"
"bakit, anong meron sa kanya na wala sakin?"
"magkaibigan lang kami, pwede ba"
"janeene, seryoso ako sayo"
"shewin, kung same old stuff lang tong pag-uusapan naten---"
"baket, naiinis kana ba dahil paulit-ulit ko tong sinasa--"
"oo! oo, naiinis na ako! kaa pwede ba--!"
"sige, tatantanan na kita"
*whew!*
buti naman kung gamoon.
naiinis na talaga ako kay sherwin.
pero, honestly naaawa ako sa kanya.
[i]pagdating ng friday[/i]
"janner, yung polo mo pala"
"salamat, sa wakas nabalik na"
"to naman, sori kung natagalan"
"ano pa nga ba"
"ui, sori na nga" ![;]](img/smilies/wink.gif)
"uu na nga janeene, kulit mo"
waaaah!
sabay kiliti pa saken.
waaah!
nakatingin si sherwin.
"glenn, alis na tau"
"masyado ka namang excited sherwin"
"glenn, wala pa ba si jhessa?"
"hndi darating yun shewin"
ayon, alis na kami.
ang layo pala.
doon kami sa rest haus nila.
ang ganda dun, malapit sa tabing dagat.
ang cute talaga ng lugar.
"oh, classmates hindi lang gawa ng project dito, parang nagbaksayon na rin kau"
angas nga.
natapos naman agad yung group poject namen.
"guys, inuman tayo!"
"kina glenn, gagawa ng group poject"
"yoko"
"bakit, husto mo si janner kasama mo?!"
"huh?"
"totoo naman. di ba?"
"pwede ba sherwin"
"bakit, anong meron sa kanya na wala sakin?"
"magkaibigan lang kami, pwede ba"
"janeene, seryoso ako sayo"
"shewin, kung same old stuff lang tong pag-uusapan naten---"
"baket, naiinis kana ba dahil paulit-ulit ko tong sinasa--"
"oo! oo, naiinis na ako! kaa pwede ba--!"
"sige, tatantanan na kita"
*whew!*
buti naman kung gamoon.
naiinis na talaga ako kay sherwin.
pero, honestly naaawa ako sa kanya.
[i]pagdating ng friday[/i]
"janner, yung polo mo pala"
"salamat, sa wakas nabalik na"
"to naman, sori kung natagalan"
"ano pa nga ba"
"ui, sori na nga"
"uu na nga janeene, kulit mo"
waaaah!
sabay kiliti pa saken.
waaah!
nakatingin si sherwin.
"glenn, alis na tau"
"masyado ka namang excited sherwin"
"glenn, wala pa ba si jhessa?"
"hndi darating yun shewin"
ayon, alis na kami.
ang layo pala.
doon kami sa rest haus nila.
ang ganda dun, malapit sa tabing dagat.
ang cute talaga ng lugar.
"oh, classmates hindi lang gawa ng project dito, parang nagbaksayon na rin kau"
angas nga.
natapos naman agad yung group poject namen.
"guys, inuman tayo!"
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- xXlynethXx
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
owss? kau na tlga?
haha. sweet nman.
nxt naa po.
ay nga pla.
uat scul qa pla and uat yir?
la lng. curious lng.
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- dess29
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
kelan nxt update?
ehehe.
inuman tau!
woo.
xD
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- janeene
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
[quote=xXlynethXx]owss? kau na tlga?
haha. sweet nman.
nxt naa po.
ay nga pla.
uat scul qa pla and uat yir?
la lng. curious lng. [/quote]
uu kami na. i month palang.
amf.
dito sa iloilo.
SIPC-WVCST miagao campus.
di naman sikat.
jehe.
info tech kami.
[quote=dess29]kelan nxt update?
ehehe.
inuman tau!
woo.
xD[/quote]
^update ko asap.
[/quote]
uu kami na. i month palang.
amf.
dito sa iloilo.
SIPC-WVCST miagao campus.
di naman sikat.
jehe.
info tech kami.
[quote=dess29]kelan nxt update?
ehehe.
inuman tau!
woo.
xD[/quote]
^update ko asap.
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- xXlynethXx
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
[quote][b]janeene wrote:[/b]
uu kami na. i month palang.
amf.
dito sa iloilo.
SIPC-WVCST miagao campus.
di naman sikat.
jehe.
info tech kami.[/quote]
wow.
ayiee.haha!!
hmm.
sa iloilo ka pla.
hehe.
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- janeene
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
^ uu.
maya maya post na ako ng update.
ty pala for supporting my story.
+ repu sau sis.
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- xXlynethXx
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
^
uelcum. hehe.
tnx sa repu.
w8 q update.
w8 q update.
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- janeene
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
[i] here's the latest update[/i]
[b]CHAPTIE 12[/b]
ayon, alis na kami.
ang layo pala.
doon kami sa rest haus nila.
ang ganda dun, malapit sa tabing dagat.
ang cute talaga ng lugar.
"oh, classmates hindi lang gawa ng project dito, parang nagbaksayon na rin kau"
angas nga.
natapos naman agad yung group poject namen.
"guys, inuman tayo!"
waah!
lab ko to!
nasanay na kasi ako nung highschool palang ako.
puro kasi libre ng mga barkada! 
"ui, janeene kababae mong tao umiinum ka"
"aba janner, kalalaki mong tao di ka umiiom" 
"ayaw kaya ng mama"
"JANNER, MAMA'S BOY" 
"ui, sherwin isigaw bah" 
*hahaha*
tawanan silang lahat.
"ikaw talaga sherwin, palibhasa lasenggero ka"
"sabihin mo ng gusto mo janeene, ok lang. ganun kita ka mahal eh"
"magtigil ka nga--"
"janeene, pabayaan mo na si sherwin"
"ano ka ba janner, pinapahiya ka eh"
"ssh. tama na"
"ano ba guys, we are here to enjoy. hindi para mag-away away"
"tama ka glenn, janner ok ka lang?"
"ayos lang ako ruch"
[i]tumayo si janner[/i]
"saan ka pupunta janner?"
"magpapahangin lang ako"
"samahan na kita"
"di na ruch, salamat nalang"
kahit sabihin ni janner na ayos lang siya.
feel kong hindi siya ok.
napapansin ko, lagi na siyang tahimik. 
hindi na siya mahilig mag DOTA.
hindi a rin siya masyadong nagpapatawa.
sinundan ko si janner.
bahala na kung magalit.
"janeene, hindi mo ba narinig si janner?"
"narinig. bakit ruch?"
"narinig mo na naman pala eh"
"eh bakit nga?"
"huwag mo siyang sundan!"
"bakit?"
"sabi niya eh"
"selos ka?"
"ano ba janeene"
"di ba gusto mo siya ruch?" 
waaah!
nagblush ba!
"ba't di ka makasagot?"
"pwede ba janeene"
waaah!
umalis.
grabe.
inlove nga.
di pa umamin.
ayon si janner.
nakaupo sa buhanginan.
malungkot. 
naawa ako tuloy.
"janner, ok lang ba?"
"ok lang, mabuti nga may kasama ako dito"
"woot, eh ba't kaina ayaw mong andito si ruch"
"eh, o.a lang nun. mas lalo akog nababadtrip"
"pagpasesyahan mo na si sherwin" 
"ayos lang yun janeene, totoo naman"
"siyanga pala janeene"
"ano yun?"
"kayo bah?"
"huhh? nino?" 
"ni sherwin"
"bakit?"
"sagutin mo muna yung tanong ko"
"kung hindi?"
"eh di hindi"
"panu kug oo?"
"bakit? kayo ba talaga?"
"ba't ka nagtatanong?"
"kasi--"
"kasi ano janner?"
"kasi janeene-------"
ang layo pala.
doon kami sa rest haus nila.
ang ganda dun, malapit sa tabing dagat.
ang cute talaga ng lugar.
"oh, classmates hindi lang gawa ng project dito, parang nagbaksayon na rin kau"
angas nga.
natapos naman agad yung group poject namen.
"guys, inuman tayo!"
waah!
lab ko to!
nasanay na kasi ako nung highschool palang ako.
puro kasi libre ng mga barkada!
"ui, janeene kababae mong tao umiinum ka"
"aba janner, kalalaki mong tao di ka umiiom"
"ayaw kaya ng mama"
"JANNER, MAMA'S BOY"
"ui, sherwin isigaw bah"
*hahaha*
tawanan silang lahat.
"ikaw talaga sherwin, palibhasa lasenggero ka"
"sabihin mo ng gusto mo janeene, ok lang. ganun kita ka mahal eh"
"magtigil ka nga--"
"janeene, pabayaan mo na si sherwin"
"ano ka ba janner, pinapahiya ka eh"
"ssh. tama na"
"ano ba guys, we are here to enjoy. hindi para mag-away away"
"tama ka glenn, janner ok ka lang?"
"ayos lang ako ruch"
[i]tumayo si janner[/i]
"saan ka pupunta janner?"
"magpapahangin lang ako"
"samahan na kita"
"di na ruch, salamat nalang"
kahit sabihin ni janner na ayos lang siya.
feel kong hindi siya ok.
napapansin ko, lagi na siyang tahimik.
hindi na siya mahilig mag DOTA.
hindi a rin siya masyadong nagpapatawa.
sinundan ko si janner.
bahala na kung magalit.
"janeene, hindi mo ba narinig si janner?"
"narinig. bakit ruch?"
"narinig mo na naman pala eh"
"eh bakit nga?"
"huwag mo siyang sundan!"
"bakit?"
"sabi niya eh"
"selos ka?"
"ano ba janeene"
"di ba gusto mo siya ruch?"
waaah!
nagblush ba!
"ba't di ka makasagot?"
"pwede ba janeene"
waaah!
umalis.
grabe.
inlove nga.
di pa umamin.
ayon si janner.
nakaupo sa buhanginan.
malungkot.
naawa ako tuloy.
"janner, ok lang ba?"
"ok lang, mabuti nga may kasama ako dito"
"woot, eh ba't kaina ayaw mong andito si ruch"
"eh, o.a lang nun. mas lalo akog nababadtrip"
"pagpasesyahan mo na si sherwin"
"ayos lang yun janeene, totoo naman"
"siyanga pala janeene"
"ano yun?"
"kayo bah?"
"huhh? nino?"
"ni sherwin"
"bakit?"
"sagutin mo muna yung tanong ko"
"kung hindi?"
"eh di hindi"
"panu kug oo?"
"bakit? kayo ba talaga?"
"ba't ka nagtatanong?"
"kasi--"
"kasi ano janner?"
"kasi janeene-------"
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- xXlynethXx
- » FTalkWhiz
- 2899
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
kasi janeene mahal ka dw nia.
hahah!! joke lng.
wee!! kakilig nman.
nxt naa.
atat aco.
nxt naa.
atat aco.
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- janeene
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
guys..
waite nyu update ko hah..
medyu busy po kasi..
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- Karen.Karen11
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]guys, try my story..it's just a simple story..i'm just new on writing stories..hope you like it.enjoy reading.. =) (pls. leave your comments, i want to know your reaction 'bout my work. +repu
ok po ate hehe hintay aku 
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