Please do continue! I like it! Where's the next chapter??

Nice Story!!! http://theftalk.com/t38614-Together-Forever%21%21%21.html Pls Check that story out!!!! Its my story!!! Pls!!!! Nice Story!!!

Waa. Iloveyou bru. Buti sinuportahan mo! Hahahaha. Ge bukas iupdate ko na to.

waw.nice story.bagong aabangan nanaman. i'll w8 for ur update.

Since may magbabasa din pala, here's the update. Medyo mahaba 'to, kaya baka matagalan ang update. [spoiler][u][b]CHAPTER 2[/b][/u] [quote]Ayun nga yung araw na yun. Ugh. Anyway, marami pang nangyari.[/quote] 6 A.M - Monday Lilipad na ako.. Sabayan nyo ko.. Ang sarap dito.. (alarm) "Good morning world!" Nagpasalamat ako kay Lord dahil buhay pa ako. I checked my fone. Hala, 5 missed calls! Sino kaya 'to? Eiron? Hmm.. "Kaaaaayce!" There goes my mom. Haay. "Coming, 'My!" I went downstairs and ate breakfast. Tapos, I took a bath then prepared to go to school. I gathered my things and oh -- "Palm pilot ko?! No.." Kainis naman. Saan kaya napunta yon?! Sana na-misplace ko lang.. Then something popped into my mind. "Hala! Baka sa gym kahapon?! That guy.." Oh no, sana maisipan ng nakapulot na ibalik yun sa 'kin. Or else, lagot ako sa Mommy ko. "Clara Kayciree! Hurry up!" Ayan na. Natataranta na Mommy ko. Kaya naman nagmadali agad ako na bumaba. [i]Nasan na kaya yon?[/i] 8 A.M - Sta. Barbara University "Reeeeee!" Napakaeskandalosa talaga ni Eiah. "Naman Yah, ang ingay mo." "Hmp! Kaw naman. Tinatawag ka lang eh." "E kasi naman, nabulabog mo na ata buong SBU 'no! Ayy.. Oo nga pala, napansin mo ba yung palm pilot ko kahapon sa gym?" "Hindi eh, bakit, nawawala ba?" "Yeah.. Tara na, baka ma-late tayo sa Chem." So ayun na, pumasok na kami sa room namin. It's a good thing we're classmates. 1hr.. 2hrs.. 3hrs.. Dahil sa sobrang boredom, di namin namalayan na lunch na pala. I checked my phone. 2 missed calls. Un pa din yung tumawag kagabi. Si Eiron nga siguro. So bumili na kami ng lunch. Di ko napansin, may lumapit pala. "Hey Miss.. I forgot to ask your name. Eiron here." And he flashed a smile. Akala ko naman kung sino.. Ang future boyfriend ko pala. Hahaha! "Oh, hi! I'm Kayciree or just call me Ree." Hala, super dami ng nakatingin! [i]Mainggit kayo.[/i] Si Eiah naman, nakatulala lang sa labs ko. Nilalangaw na nga sya e. Haha. "Nice name, pwde ba makijoin?" "Sure thing." So ayun nga, naglunch kami together. "Hindi ko alam na dito ka rin pala nag-aaral." "Yeah, msyado ka kasing active and busy din kaya hindi mo ako siguro napapansin. In fact, we live in the same village. Kaya lang, dulo't dulo. Sa phase 1 kayo tapos kami sa phase 4 pa." "Talaga? I guess I'm just always preoccupied by many stuffs. It's impossible not to notice someone as beautiful as you." Ayan na naman yung smile nya.. I feel like I'm melting! [i]Ang OA mo, Ree.[/i] Ang pula-pula na siguro ng mukha ko ngayon. Still, I managed to say something. "Why, thank you." "Yeah. Hey, are you free later in the afternoon?" "I think so.. Bakit?" "Can I give you a ride home?" "Sige, ikaw bahala. Oh pano, I have to go na. May class pa ko." "Okay. See ya later gorgeous! " 3:45 pm Hay salamat. Dismissal na. Yesss.. Aba, may tumatawag pala sa phone ko. "Hello? Who's this?" "Uhm hello Miss Rivera, Lucas here, yung natapunan mo ng Coke kahapon." Napasimangot ako. Talagang binanggit pa yung kagagahan ko. Hmp. "Ah yeah, sorry about that. Uh, what do you need anyway? And pano mo nalaman number ko? By the way, just call me Ree." "Well, di ba nga nagtatatalon ka kahapon? You must have dropped your Palm Pilot, it's where I saw your number kasi may sticker dun with your info. Open yata yung body bag mo kaya nalaglag siguro. Good thing I noticed it when I was about to go home." Napaisip ako.. Sa sobrang pagkawindang ko sa kagwapuhan nya e hndi ko na napansin na I dropped something. "Oo nga pala. Thank you. When are you free? Gusto ko na sanang mabawi yun. May mga files kasi akong nakasave dyan." "I can meet you right now. Nasan ka ba ngayon?" "I'm still in school. Where can we meet?" "Where's your school? Pwedeng idaan ko na lang dyan if nasa way siya pauwi. Para hassle-free." [i]Hmm.. Mabait naman pala kahit papano.[/i] "Sta. Barbara. Madadaanan mo ba?" "Haha! Funny." "What's funny?" "Eh kasi, iisang school lang naman pala tayo. Kaya lang, college na ako, freshmen." Wow! This is [b]fate[/b]. Haha. Corny ah. "How nice. Can we meet now? Nasa cafeteria ako. Near Zagu." "Okay, wait for me. I'll be there within ten minutes." "Sige. Take care." Huh? Anong sabi ko? TAKE CARE?! [u]Lucas POV[/u] Should I call her now? A girl named Clara Kayciree Rivera dropped her palm pilot and yeah, ako ang nakapulot nito. [i]How careless..[/i] Naexcite kasi sya msyado sa game kahapon that's why she didn't notice she dropped something. When I was about to get out of the gym, napansin ko nga yung palm pilot niya. Buti na lang may sticker doon stating her personal infos. Honestly, since that incident eh nabulabog na talaga ang isip ko ng pretty face niya kahit medyo mataray sya. [i]1st conscience: Panung hindi magtataray, eh sabihan mo ba naman syang OA? 2nd conscience: Duh, OA naman talaga ah? Nanalo lang favorite team niya eh super talon-talon ginawa niya. Natapunan pa tuloy ako. Hindi pa nagsorry! Hmf. Pasalamat nga siya..[/i] Hehe. Okay lang kahit mataray sya, cute naman sya e.. Buti na lang, may contact ako sa kanya.. Crush ko na siya. Haha! Tama na nga. Ayun, tinawagan ko na. "Hello? Who's this?" "Uhm hello Miss Rivera, Lucas here, yung natapunan mo ng Coke kahapon." "Ah yeah, sorry about that. Uh, what do you need anyway? And pano mo nalaman number ko? By the way, just call me Ree." "Well, di ba nga nagtatatalon ka kahapon? You must have dropped your Palm Pilot, it's where I saw your number kasi may sticker dun with your info. Open yata yung body bag mo kaya nalaglag siguro. Good thing at napansin ko 'to when I was about to go home." Paliwanag ko naman. "Oo nga pala. Thank you. When are you free? Gusto ko na sanang mabawi yun. May mga files kasi akong nakasave dyan." "I can meet you right now. Nasan ka ba ngayon?" Waa. Naeexcite akong makita sya. "I'm still in school. Where can we meet?" "Where's your school? Pwedeng idaan ko na lang dyan if nasa way siya pauwi. Para hassle-free." [i]1st conscience: Are you real, Lucas Devon? Kelan ka pa naging gentleman? 2nd conscience: Matagal na.. Since birth. 1st conscience: Sus, pa-impress at pa-cute ka lang! 2nd conscience: Oo na. [/i] "Sta. Barbara. Madadaanan mo ba?" Natawa ako. Why, this musta be [b]fate[/b]. Akalain mo we go to the same school? Nye, corny ko na no? "Haha! Funny." "What's funny?" "Eh kasi, iisang school lang naman pala tayo. Kaya lang, college na ako, freshmen." "How nice. Can we meet now? Nasa cafeteria ako. Near Zagu." "Okay, wait for me. I'll be there within ten minutes." "Sige. Take care." Take care?? CONCERNED?! Hmm.. Nice.. So nagpunta na ko sa cafeteria. Nagpunta muna ako sa Men's CR to check how I look. [i]1st conscience: I don't believe this. Lucas Devon Elizalde, freakin' nervous just because of a girl? Darn. 2nd conscience: What's wrong with that? She's as pretty as a princess, I should be dashing para bagay kami. Haha.[/i] "Good luck, man." bulong ko sa sarili ko. Then I headed to the cafeteria and to my surprise, I saw her with some guy.. Hala, nagsusubuan pa sila. [i]May boyfriend na sya? Too bad.. [/i][/spoiler]

Last edited by jykaaa (2008-08-11 05:48:56)

naccarried away na ko sa story biglang bitin!! aw! hehehe.. gling ni bru!! nice.nice.nice love it!! BERI BERI MUCH!!

bwahaha. ngayon kulan nabasa ang story.. nice pala.^_^ ang cute naman... bwahahaha... geh geh sistahz i'll wait fur the next chappie.

Eto na update. Hehehe. Salamat sa mga nagbabasa. CHAPTER 4 [spoiler] [u]Lucas' POV[/u] [i]I shouldn't be crying, nakakahiya.[/i] Tapos may biglang nagsalita. "Excuse me, are you alright?" Paglingon ko, I was surprised.. Si Ree. :0 What is she doing here?? Tumalikod muna ako saglit to wipe my tears. Then I asked her, "Hey.. Why are you here?" She seemed surprised. "Ah, uhm.. I was just roaming around then I saw you, akala ko kung sino kaya lumapit ako. Why are you crying anyway? Are you alright?" "Yes. Okay lang ako. Hindi ako umiiyak, napuwing lang." "Are you sure?" "Yep. Sure na sure. Anyway, why are you alone? Where is-- I mean, bakit di ka pa umuuwi?" Whew.. That was close! Muntik ko ng maitanong kung nasan na ung boyfriend nya. "Ah.. May hinihintay lang ako. Ikaw? I thought you have to do something?" "Kakatapos-tapos lang nung ginawa ko. Gusto ko lang ma-refresh utak ko that's why I came here." Buti na lang mabilis akong nakapag-isip ng maidadahilan. May biglang tumawag sa kanya. "Excuse muna ha, sagutin ko lang 'to." Then she moved steps away from me. "Nakakainis naman.." Sabi nya pagbalik nya. "Why? Ano nangyari?" "Hindi na daw kasi ako maihahatid ng friend ko. Yun pa naman hinihintay ko. Haay.. I guess I have to go na." Tapos may idea na pumasok sa isip ko. I smiled. "Hey, why are you smiling? Is there something wrong with my face? Kanina ka pa nakatitig sakin eh. Hmp." "No.. It's not that. I just remembered something. Anyway, I can give you a ride home.. If you like. " Kinakabahan ako.. [i]Cmon, please say yes. Pleaaaase..[/i] [u]Eiron's POV[/u] "Okay guys, magpalit na kayo. May practice tayo." Nakakainis naman si Coach.. Hmp. [i] Gusto ko pa nga sanang makasama si Ree eh.[/i] I decided to call her. "Hello? Uh, Ree, this is Eiron. I'm afraid hindi kita maihahatid. May biglaang practice kasi e. I'm really really sorry." Totoo naman yon. Know what, guys? I like her.. Lalo na yung angelic face nya that caught my attention. "Wala yon, sige. Next time na lang. Bye." "Okay. You take care." Sana naman di sya galit. Haay. I still remember the first time I saw her. Sa village yon.. Actually, noon ko pa sya napapansin. I know na she really goes crazy over me. Ayoko lang siyang lapitan and make a move to be closer to her kasi baka pag niligawan ko, sagutin lang nya ako not because of love, but just because she's just infatuated with me. [i]1st conscience: Aba, hindi ka pa nga nanliligaw, sagot na agad nya nasa isip mo?[/i] Hehe. Oo nga no? Haay. Kaya naman nung last game namin, nilapitan ko na sya. Baka kasi maunahan pa ako ng iba di ba? Pero.. May boyfriend na nga kaya sya? Namaaan.. Wag naman po sana.. =/ [u]Ree's POV[/u] [i]Why is he crying? :0[/i] "Hey.. Why are you here?" Sino si Sapphire at bakit iniiyakan mo sya? Waa. Muntik ko ng masabi yon. "Ah, uhm.. I was just roaming around then I saw you, akala ko kung sino kaya lumapit ako. Why are you crying anyway? Are you alright?" "Yes. Okay lang ako. Hindi ako umiiyak, napuwing lang." Sus. Nagpalusot pa.. Sige na nga lang, buti na lang cute ka. "Are you sure?" Kukulitin ko pa sana sya, kaya lang baka mairita at iwan ako eh. "Yep. Sure na sure. Anyway, why are you alone? Where is-- I mean, bakit di ka pa umuuwi?" Hmm. Anu yon? Bat naputol yung question niya? "Ah.. May hinihintay lang ako. Ikaw? I thought you have to do something?" "Kakatapos-tapos lang nung ginawa ko. Gusto ko lang ma-refresh utak ko that's why I came here." Then nagring yung fone ko. "Excuse muna ha, sagutin ko lang 'to." So I moved few steps away from him to answer the call. Sino na naman kaya 'to? "Hello? Uh, Ree, this is Eiron. I'm afraid hindi kita maihahatid. May biglaang practice kasi e. I'm really really sorry." Kainis naman o. Asar na ko a. Hmp hmp! Still, I managed not to burst out. "Wala yon, sige. Next time na lang. Bye." Pandi-dismiss ko sa kanya. "Okay. You take care." Hmp. Take care mo mukha mo. Tapos, binalikan ko si Lucas. "Nakakainis naman.." Di ko na napgilang sabihin. "Why? Ano nangyari?" "Hindi na daw kasi ako maihahatid ng friend ko. Yun pa naman hinihintay ko. Haay.. I guess I have to go na." Tagal nya sumagot. Nakatitig lang sakin. Tapos biglang nagsmile. May dumi ba ko sa mukha?? "Hey, why are you smiling? Is there something wrong with my face? Kanina ka pa nakatitig sakin eh. Hmp." "No.. It's not that. I just remembered something. Anyway, I can give you a ride home.. If you like. " Whaaat?! Ano daw? Hahatid nya ko?? Di nga?! "Uhm.. Baka makaabala pa ko eh. Are you sure it's okay?" Syempre, pakipot muna ako di ba? "Of course. It'll be my pleasure. San ka ba nakatira?" Ang ek-ek nya. May pa ganun-ganun pa. Haha. "Royale Homes." "Ah okay, magkalapit lang pala tayo. Sa Landheights Ville lang ako. Besides, dadaan na lang ako sa family friend namin doon." Namaan, nagsmile pa sya.. Hay! "Ah.. Tara na. " Waah. Kinikilig ako! [/spoiler]

Last edited by jykaaa (2008-08-11 05:45:49)

nice story.I really like it