you tell us not to readt it at the end of the story?!

haii der... hehe. nyc story. but em still confused of ur characterzs. i think u should post the description of the characters at the top.. lolx. okie.okie. continue this one kk? ~juliene~

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Thanks for reading the story everyone! hope you like the next story!! A new girl is introduced here but only once.... she might be in the next Chapter.. ooki Chapter 2: The Suitor makes a move..... [[in hte cafeteria]] Justin: my hair still hurts... Sean: why?? Raymark: is it because of sam???? Justin: Yes... Sean: ok Justin: what section are you Raymark??? Raymark: 5-Righteousness Justin & Sean: Yes! youre with us! Raymark: yes! Guess who our teacher is.... Sean: i know it. its ms. Maylyn Calansingin:P Raymark: How did you know??? Sean: The paper of the section is behind you Raymark!.. Raymark: oh yah! Justin: so Raymark whos your crush??? Raymark: promise dont tell... Justin & Sean: ok! Raymark: Its Cassandra.... Im gonna court her today and she will be my future wife!! Justin: Snap out of it! How about yours Sean?? Sean: its Emerald.... Justin & Raymark: ok! Sean: whos yours Justin??? Justin: its ummmmm.... [[Bell Rings]] ms.Maylyn: line up everybody! *whistles* [[everybody lined up]] ms.Maylyn: 5-Righteousness go with me! 5-Righteousness: yes maam! *giggles* [[goes to the classroom]] ms.Maylyn: meet your co-adviser ms.Apple. Shes gonna be with you the whole hr. ok... [[ms.Maylyn leaves]] ms.Apple: were gonna play a get-to-know game... [[explains the instructions]] ms.Apple: 1st ball goes to Adrianna! [[Adrianna throws the ball at Damin]] Adrianna: what color is you panty! 5-Righteousness: *laughs* ms.Apple: Adrianna! ask another question! Adrianna: ok! [this is such a boring game:rolleyes:] ummmm.... whats your last name??? Damin: Choi [[after doing it for 3 hours:lol:]] [[Bell rings]] Sam: so Cassandra! whos your crush Cassandra: promise you wont tell! Sam: ok! Cassandra: its Raymark! Sam:ok! Cassandra: I wish he will court me today.... and he'll be my husband.... and we'll live happily ever after..... [[Justin interrupts]] Justin: wait here! [[Sean & Justin pushes Raymark to Cassandra Raymark: ummm... heres a gift:gift::rose: ummmm... can you be my girlfriend??? Cassandra: YES!!!! [hugs Raymark] Justin, Sean & Sam: uyyyyy!!!! Cassandra: stop! promise dont tell anyone about this ok!! Justin, Sean & Sam: Ok!! [[Vanessa and France comes]] Vanessa: what happened here??? Sam: you know what happened Raymark................................... Will Sam tell the secret or keep it to herself??? Will she?, will she?, will she?? Find out in the next Chapter

Hnezor very good I want more chapters

:lol:egftseyhfgrbhtrhy

huyy post ur chapter 3.

its so short!! anyways i dont like one part well gud luck!

Henzor post your part 2 im gonna post my chapter 23 kk so gud luck i love your story but i dnt like 2 characters anyways its just a story it can never happen! gud luck!

Chapter 3 part 2 and chapter 4: brokenhearted [[classroom]] sam: huy france! bakit ka tumawa??? france: because.... ms.aumentado: samantha and francheska stop talking there is a ryt time and place for dat! sam, france: yes miss!! [[bell rings]] ms aumentado: class dismissed... [[cafeteria]] justin: hey martin!! [new] martin: hey!! justin: so watcha doin??? martin: im just admiring ruby... [sighs] oh! what did i say?!?!?! justin: you like Ruby??!?!?! uyyyyy..... martin: imma court her today!!! can you help me justin: how?? *whispers* ruby: whats this!?!?! :rose::gift: <">Ruby: who could dis be?!?!?! [[she went to the outdoor playground]] ruby: there are so many boys!!! ill just w8 4 him.... [[after 1 hour and 30 mins everyone left except 4 2 of dem]] martin: hello??? anyone here???? ruby: im here??? im w8ing 4 some1.... martin:ur secret admirer? ruby: yes!! how'd u know??? martin: cause im him.... [[ruby was shocked]] martin: can i court you??? ruby: uhmmmmm..... ill have to think about it tom ill tell you ha... martin: okey.... [[lobby]] sam and justin: hey tell us why u laughed!!! france: because miguels head was in the toilet he 4got to close the door and when he came out hes head was so wwet!! sam and justin: thats it!!! anyways its funny [[in there mind its not funny at all]] sam and justin: hehehe.... [[Francheska Calara]] france: im paged... bye!! sam and justin: bye... justin: so.... hi?? sam: hello justin: ill tell you something about... [[Samantha Delica]] sam: sorri im paged tom nalang okey justin: nah! im not gonna tell u nalang... sam: okey... [[what was he gonna say??]] [[next day]] martin: so whats ur answer??? ruby: uhmmmm... martin: hey ruby?!?!!?!?! ruby: yes? martin: yes i have a gf!!! ruby: no im sorri but i have to say no.... martin: what will happen to him now?? find out in the next chapter...

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