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out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
- maree12
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1969-12-31
out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
out of the blue, i made this poem,
without an inspiration in front of me.
really.
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[b]PALPITATIONS[/b]
[i]Thei[/i]
[sup][i]september 15, 2008[/i][/sup]
Throb my heart,
Beat faster.
Every time you see him,
Theres like no tomorrow.
But how, why, when?
Instead of them,
It is you in my mind.
Is it you really?
Or just plain obsession,
That makes my mind crazy?
Tell me, my heart,
If its time to love.
Cause i think its hard,
To give yourself up.
My heart suffers palpitations,
I didn't even took notice of the caution.
I can't even find the cure,
Oh no, it's you.
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my first poem i ever made.
while, day dreaming. haha.
violent reactions are accepted.
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[b]PALPITATIONS[/b]
[i]Thei[/i]
[sup][i]september 15, 2008[/i][/sup]
Throb my heart,
Beat faster.
Every time you see him,
Theres like no tomorrow.
But how, why, when?
Instead of them,
It is you in my mind.
Is it you really?
Or just plain obsession,
That makes my mind crazy?
Tell me, my heart,
If its time to love.
Cause i think its hard,
To give yourself up.
My heart suffers palpitations,
I didn't even took notice of the caution.
I can't even find the cure,
Oh no, it's you.
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my first poem i ever made.
while, day dreaming. haha.
violent reactions are accepted.
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- oOpunkrockeranimeOo
- » FTalkElite
- 4141
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
wow....I think it's beautiful! This really brings back memories..yeah, I think it's lovely.
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- akuzet16
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
toinkzs!,
wow sis.
yah really made this poem w/o an inspiration?!
HEHE.
how nyc!.
i lyk ur poemm! 
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- maree12
- » FTalkManiac
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
^ yes, w/o an inspiration. haha.
thanks for reading. .
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- bles_212000
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
but you really seems in love! wakek! it's nice...
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- kathleen24
- » FTalkAgent
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
wow i like it.
keep it up..
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- maree12
- » FTalkManiac
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
^ thanks for your comments guys.
i'm glad you like it.
if i had the time, i'll make again another poem.
@bles_212000
thanks for the repu!
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- kikay-in-pink
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
really nice poem... i think if you had an inspiration it would be the best poem!!
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- gemandi
- » FTalkFreak
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
Jamuuuunds, Ohh wow. 
The title is a neck turner. Haha and the poem itself is impressive. 
Imma search the lucky guy. 
I loooooove reading poems. So, I'll wishhh for more.
C'mon. C'mon! 
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[quote]My heart suffers palpitations,
I didn't even took notice of the caution.
I can't even find the cure,
Oh no, it's you.[/quote]
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, Labyee for this, thei. 
The title is a neck turner. Haha and the poem itself is impressive.
Imma search the lucky guy.
I loooooove reading poems. So, I'll wishhh for more.
C'mon. C'mon!
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[quote]My heart suffers palpitations,
I didn't even took notice of the caution.
I can't even find the cure,
Oh no, it's you.[/quote]
- , Labyee for this, thei.
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- maree12
- » FTalkManiac
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- 1969-12-31
Re: out of the blue, i made this poem, without an inspiration in front of me. really.:D --------------------------------------------------------- [b]PALPITATIONS[/b] [i]Thei[/i] [sup][i]september 15, 20
^ c'mon, search the lucky guy. haha.
thanks for reading hanseeel . .
i'll try to make more poems, as you wish..
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