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Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

KCheese
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Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one of a kind Breathing slowly I remembered Love and care you shared to me Bit by bit the blade cut through my skin My vision blurred and air becoming thin At my last breath I saw a girl in front of me Tears form in her eyes as she fell on her knees The girl held my hand and said �I wish our love won�t end� And then I realized it was too late It was unchangeable, It was my fate -Crimson Tear(my pen name :D) I thought I'd give it a go. :)
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

nice poem!!.. love it... xD
yunish
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

that was soooo nice, i love the poem .:)
Bubbly44
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

:lol::lol: it was so nice.... wat happened to their relationship?
kikay-in-pink
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

i like it! nice poem... thanks for sharing! =)
kathleen24
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

wow...... nice....... i like it.......
velerry4
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

make me remember about the last sentence in jason mraz song 'this is our [b]fate[/b] i'm yours nice writing dude..keep on sharing ur latest poem :thumbsup:
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