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Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

KCheese
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Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one of a kind Breathing slowly I remembered Love and care you shared to me Bit by bit the blade cut through my skin My vision blurred and air becoming thin At my last breath I saw a girl in front of me Tears form in her eyes as she fell on her knees The girl held my hand and said “I wish our love won’t end” And then I realized it was too late It was unchangeable, It was my fate -Crimson Tear(my pen name :D) I thought I'd give it a go. :)
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

nice poem!!.. love it... xD
yunish
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

that was soooo nice, i love the poem .:)
Bubbly44
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

:lol::lol: it was so nice.... wat happened to their relationship?
kikay-in-pink
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

i like it! nice poem... thanks for sharing! =)
kathleen24
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

wow...... nice....... i like it.......
velerry4
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Re: Summer time has come and gone Still the pain in my heart grow on I have never felt this empty before The sadness seemed to linger on Thoughts of you flooded through my mind I felt rage that was one o

make me remember about the last sentence in jason mraz song 'this is our [b]fate[/b] i'm yours nice writing dude..keep on sharing ur latest poem :thumbsup:
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