well here's my 1st poem i made here, i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 pls play this vid when reading the poem if u want.., that's one of the tool i use to make the poem [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LT-CcHE1MNY[/youtube] [align=center] [b]You're The One[/b] When i first see you, i don't care who u are, but when u make my heart beat as fast as it can, I know that you're the one. when u texted me, u make me glad, when u call me you make me smile. When u first kiss me, I smile and will treasure it until i die. when we sing, you make my voice fly in the air When I see ur eyes, u make me fly. I remember the times we spent together All those times, we had a million questions All about our lonely lives that we fix everytime. When it hurts so bad, sometimes Not having you here.Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up I need your loving hands to come and pick me up And every night I miss you I can just look up And know the stars are Holding you, holding you tonight. When I make you cry, until it all end up then our worst day start, nd i don't wanna get up I'm still lonely ryt now, nd i don't know why........ but when i first see u, I know that ur the one [/align] there, haahahah, i kinda don't know wat to say , just finish it October 19,2008 12:34 AM tnx for reading...

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