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WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
- rheiya58
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WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY.
MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER.
[url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url]
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[b]you're the missing piece[/b]
well.. i will admit.. this is true to life..
[i]characters:[/i]
RHIAN
[spoiler][img]http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m88/Rose_Alchemist/Anime/950012327_l.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
makulit, smart, palatawa, kwela,
JOHN:
[spoiler][img]http://i339.photobucket.com/albums/n477/rokeu_yura/anime/untitled.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
serious, warfreak, siga, gwapo, matangkad, basketball player, crush ng campus
CARL:
[spoiler][img]http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s90/jubei123/anime.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
ideal man for all, smart, talented, funny
MYKE:
[spoiler][img]http://i424.photobucket.com/albums/pp325/JoySakura/Brown%20Boy/8031ebd9b2f440_large-1.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[i]
"IT'S FUNNY HOW THIS YOUNG GIRL STAND OUT TO EVERYBODY, ASIDE ON HER SMILE, THERE IS SOMETHING ON HER THAT REALLY MAKES MY HEAD TURN TO HER EVERYTIME. GUESS SHE IS JUST THE ONE I AM LOOKING FOR.. SHE IS THE MISSING PIECE ON MY LIFE.."[/i]
....JOHN
[i]"FUNNY HOW I FALL TO A GIRL.. THAT FAILED ON MY REQUIREMENTS FOR A PRINCESS.. AND THE WORST IS.. I'M THE BRIDGE TO HER COMPLETE HAPPY ENDING LOVESTORY.. HER SMILE MAKES ME LOVE HER SO MUCH.. THAT IT HURTS.."[/i]
....CARL
Last edited by rheiya58 (2008-12-31 22:45:25)
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- yh3t
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
^ gonna support this. 
kaso wag ka gagawa ng stories na madami, tulad ko, tatlo.
ang hirap iupdate 
keep it up sis 
kaso wag ka gagawa ng stories na madami, tulad ko, tatlo.
ang hirap iupdate
keep it up sis
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- megumi028
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
wee..
nice intro sis..
i'll wait for yer update..
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- eri.03
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
[b]wee. gnda amn. haha
next naa.
update as soon as you can.
Godbless.
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- gossipgirl03
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
Yep!
I like 'Last song ever' kaya magugutsuhan q din 2 4 sure!
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- megumi028
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
sis..
update na..
or inform mee if theres an update..
wahaha..
akoo pinaka demanding na reader ng storii muh..
wahaha..
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- xxGiRL NeXT DooRxx
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
wow .nce intro .i'll stay tuned for ths sis .
1st chap na .
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- rheiya58
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
CHAPTER 1
"ahmm.. hi po.. san po ba yung classroom ng second year rogers?"
ang sabi ng isang unfamiliar voice na galing sa likod ko. naks naman. ang gwapo nito! ang tangkad pa. second year? eh bakit parang pang college na mukha at height nito? ang tanong ko sa aking sarili.
"ay doon po sa dulong room.."
ang sagot ko ng may kaamang paggalang.. sheldon ang seksyon ko..so.. hindi kami magkaklase.. how sad naman 
wow naman! si kuya hindi man lang nag thank you! pero ok lang iyon..cute naman siya..
dahil sa marami naman akong friends sa kabilang section.. umistambay muna ako doon..
[i]"good morning everyone!"[/i]
ang sabi ko na tila nangeeskandalo.. hahaha.. sanay na naman sila sakin..
[i]"good morning miss bungisngis!"[/i]
ang sabi ng aking kababata since prep na si myke. iyon na ang tawag niya sakin dati pa.. kahit kasi umiiyak ako para daw nakatawa pa rin ako..
ng may napansin akong bagong mukha.. well hindi naman talaga bago.. yung nagtanong sakin.. katabi siya ni myke.
[i]"myke.. anu pangalan ng katabi mo?"[/i]
ang bulong ko sakanya na tila nakikiusyoso sa mga bago..
[i]"john daw.. galing manila.. 17 na siya.. dami ko na alam ano?!"[/i]
ang sabi ni myke sakin.. na tila nagmamayabang..
ang sama naman ng tingin nito sakin.. parang mnster na gusto akong kainin.. hehehe.. hindi ako masarap.. mapait ako..hanggang flag raising nahalata ko nakatitig pa ri siya sakin.. hala! monster nga ata siya! takot ako..
[b]3:30[/b]
uwian na.. ngunit pinaakyat lahat ng second year sa aming function hall.. orientation something ata..
syempre.. as usual.. yung mga lalaking loko loko.. umuwi na..
hey hey! andito pa si mr. monster! impressive.. siya na lang ang lalaki.. well.. aside sa lady in heart kong classmate.. si ren ren..
wala pa ang teacher mahigit 15 minutes na kaming naghihintay..
ng biglang may napulot akong candy.. na parang hinagis sakin.
[i]
"wow! blessing! thank you lord!"[/i]
ang sabi ko na talaga naman nakapagpatawa sa iba..
[i]"adik ka bungisngis! para iyan kay hanna! yung nasa likod mo!"[/i]
ang sigaw ni myke sakin.. eh wla na it's too late.. nakain ko na..
hala..? si mr. monster mukhang tuwang tuwa sakin! at parang pinagtsitsismisan pa nila ako ni myke.. at habang nagkukwento si myke.. ngumingiti sakin si mr. moster..
and who is that? kinda nerd looking guy na mukhang super suplado.. ang sarap niya sapakin!
pero.. usap usapan na bagong crush ng campus? anu naman kayang papel nito?
[b]to be continued[/b]
wow naman! si kuya hindi man lang nag thank you! pero ok lang iyon..cute naman siya..
dahil sa marami naman akong friends sa kabilang section.. umistambay muna ako doon..
[i]"good morning everyone!"[/i]
ang sabi ko na tila nangeeskandalo.. hahaha.. sanay na naman sila sakin..
[i]"good morning miss bungisngis!"[/i]
ang sabi ng aking kababata since prep na si myke. iyon na ang tawag niya sakin dati pa.. kahit kasi umiiyak ako para daw nakatawa pa rin ako..
ng may napansin akong bagong mukha.. well hindi naman talaga bago.. yung nagtanong sakin.. katabi siya ni myke.
[i]"myke.. anu pangalan ng katabi mo?"[/i]
ang bulong ko sakanya na tila nakikiusyoso sa mga bago..
[i]"john daw.. galing manila.. 17 na siya.. dami ko na alam ano?!"[/i]
ang sabi ni myke sakin.. na tila nagmamayabang..
ang sama naman ng tingin nito sakin.. parang mnster na gusto akong kainin.. hehehe.. hindi ako masarap.. mapait ako..hanggang flag raising nahalata ko nakatitig pa ri siya sakin.. hala! monster nga ata siya! takot ako..
[b]3:30[/b]
uwian na.. ngunit pinaakyat lahat ng second year sa aming function hall.. orientation something ata..
syempre.. as usual.. yung mga lalaking loko loko.. umuwi na..
hey hey! andito pa si mr. monster! impressive.. siya na lang ang lalaki.. well.. aside sa lady in heart kong classmate.. si ren ren..
wala pa ang teacher mahigit 15 minutes na kaming naghihintay..
ng biglang may napulot akong candy.. na parang hinagis sakin.
[i]
"wow! blessing! thank you lord!"[/i]
ang sabi ko na talaga naman nakapagpatawa sa iba..
[i]"adik ka bungisngis! para iyan kay hanna! yung nasa likod mo!"[/i]
ang sigaw ni myke sakin.. eh wla na it's too late.. nakain ko na..
hala..? si mr. monster mukhang tuwang tuwa sakin! at parang pinagtsitsismisan pa nila ako ni myke.. at habang nagkukwento si myke.. ngumingiti sakin si mr. moster..
and who is that? kinda nerd looking guy na mukhang super suplado.. ang sarap niya sapakin!
pero.. usap usapan na bagong crush ng campus? anu naman kayang papel nito?
[b]to be continued[/b]
Last edited by rheiya58 (2008-11-22 22:10:27)
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- megumi028
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
yea..
bitin sis..
hais..
nxt na sis..
haha..
wee..
hus that guy??
haha..
haha..
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- John_Qram
- » FTalkFreak
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Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
nice..
ang cool ni john..
ka name koh...
keepmaking...
p.s
pls also read my story...
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- jovie_toni
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
wow!
nice chap.............
nxt chap na!
nice chap.............
nxt chap na!
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- _jeNny_
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
ganda ng title...
parang ung kanta ni joe...
haha
xempre pati nung story..
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- soul_keeper81
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
oo nice into^^....
Hope that u will make this story nice^^..
Gonna wait for the continuation of this^^..
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Hope that u will make this story nice^^..
Gonna wait for the continuation of this^^..
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- lovegood
- » FTalkFreak
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
hehe, nice story.
light yet at the same time impressive intro.
gudluck.
-luna-
-luna-
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- xxGiRL NeXT DooRxx
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
coool .nxt chap na sis!
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- rheiya58
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- 1969-12-31
Re: WELL THIS IS MY SECOND STORY. MY FIRST ONE IS THE LAST SONG EVER. [url]http://theftalk.com/t50752-Last-song-ever..chappie-5.html[/url] ___________________________________________________________
[b]CHAPTER 2[/b]
natapos rin sa wakas ang orientation.at umuwi na kaming lahat.. inaya ako ni myke na sabay ng umuwi.. at kasabay namin si john!
wala lang sinabi ko lang..
[b]
KINABUKASAN[/b]
masaya akong pumasok sa school.. pagkalagay ng bag sa aming room diretso ako sa kabilang section..
[i]"good morning everyone!"[/i]
ang sabi ko sa isang napakalakas na boses...
6 am pa lang pala... si john pa lang ang tao.. wow early bird! since wala pa rin ding tao samin.. napagpasyahan kong dumito muna..
[i]"kuya mentos gusto mo?"[/i]
ang aking tanong na tila nagbabakasakali..
tumango lamang siya at ipinakita ang kamay na tila nanghihingi..
[i]
"ano ka ba kuya? pipi? bakit ayaw mo magsalita?"[/i]
ang sbi ko habang binibigay ang mentos.. nabadtrip na kasi ako..
[i]"kulit mo no?! ang cute pa.."[/i]
ang sabi niya habang nangingiti..at mukhang natatawa sa sarili..
sa aking gulat.. nabulunan ako.. nalunok ko ang mentos na nasa bibig ko..
[i]"ahem.. ahem... DARNA!"[/i]
ang pagpapatawa ko habang pilit kong pinapaluwag ang hininga ko.. binigyan ako ni John ng tubig.. at umokay na ang pakiramdam ko..
umalis na ako sa kanilang room at napagpasyahan na bumaba muna upang makilala ang mga bago sa school.. ang mga freshmen..
sa pagbaba ko.. may kumausap sakin mula sa malayo.. isang senior.. nangangamusta... kaya naman paatras akong lumakad...
[i]"ouch..."[/i]
ang sabi ko habang tumatalikod.. tila may nakabangga ako na sadyang tinapakan ang paa ko!
[i]"that's your fault.. hindi ka tumitingin sa dinaraanan mo.."[/i]
ang sabi ng isang nerdy looking guy.. na bago sa aking paningin. tila napahiya ako sa sinabi niya..
[i]"yes maybe it's mine.. but why do you have to act like a jerk?"[/i]
ang sabi ko na habang nagmamayabang..
[i]"jerk?"[/i]
ang sagot ng lalaki na mukhang nagulat sa aking sinabi... kala niya siya lang marunong magenglish hah! pero tila nangiti siya sa sinabi ko..
[i]"i'm carl... what's your name?"[/i]
ang tanong niya habang inabot ang kanyang kamay..
[i]"rhian.. please don't act like a jerk again.. if you do.. i shall do something that will embarrass you.."[/i]
ang sabi ko.. hindi ko tinanggap ang alok niyang makipagshake hands...ngunit mukhang napangiti ko pa siya sa mga ginawa ko..
[b]to be continued[/b]
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