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[b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

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[b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

[b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was so lame that he can't tell All the love he'd kept so well But after many years of knowing each other He know he had to keep it never He told her he loved her with all his honesty He told her that meeting her was destiny But she looked at him and tears fell down She left him baffled, cried throughout He was not himself anymore after that day A year and a half had passed away He thought there was another guy He kept on asking how and why He returned to the place where they first met Remembered the face he'll never forget He never saw his love after his confession He thought if it was a wrong decision He got a news he never expected A revelation that made him disappointed After receiving it, he ran to the place and hurried He stood before the grave where she was buried She was suffering from a disease so deadly She waited for his confession so badly When he fell in love, she was too They loved each other and never knew There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy had happened that brought despair.. [i]I'm not good, I admit that. But still I need some comments about my works. I plan to be a writer after I graduate and I want to rate myself early if I'm a No.No. or a Good Writer.[/i]
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

hmm.. its actually nice.. =)
bLeSSeDxcHiLd
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

Thanks.! :D I'll do my best for the next poem!
pinkprincess18
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

thatěs so nice.... ^^and so sad..^^. i like it..:):thumbsup:
nikz11
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

it's sad..=| and pretty... =)
chezyka02
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

nice... nice... luvveetttt.... +repu for u...
edriann007
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

Keep it up! Nice one!
JaRo_serA0325
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

Hey! Nice One! I Love It.. It So Sad,and Touching.. But It's Great! :):):):):):):):):):)
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

[b]hi blessed..know what?!? you have the same ambition as mine... i want to be a writer too and actually i have done writing 3 stories... i loved people who have the same dreamed as mine....jejeje... my sister used to write poems too...your poem is great.... i'm sure you can be a good writer...i really loved it... "someday i will meet you,and the both of us will be a great writer as we wished and wanted..." reach your goal and i will reach mine....who knowS?!? love your ability....take care..[/b] =)
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

Hey, I liked it. I super duper like it!
kathleen24
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

sis, i love it....... :thumbsup:
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

wow nice poem!!!!! :thumbsup:
pinkblack08
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

It's nice. :thumbsup: I'm liking your works :D
lyssa_o14
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

:arrow: lob it! :wow:
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

nice, nice, nice may I borrow some and turn it experiment to my lyrics. . . please and thank you. . .
gossipgirl03
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Re: [b]There Was A Boy Who Loved A Girl...[/b] There was a boy who loved a girl He liked her much; She was his world But we all know that life's not fair A tragedy would happen they're not aware He was

I felt sad. I love stories like this. Tragic. :cry:
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