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[align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b] Always looking you from a far, Always looking you from a distance, A distance that seperates us, A place where you can never see me. I alway
- anne.24
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[align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b] Always looking you from a far, Always looking you from a distance, A distance that seperates us, A place where you can never see me. I alway
[align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b]
Always looking you from a far,
Always looking you from a distance,
A distance that seperates us,
A place where you can never see me.
I always smiled when you smiled,
Even though i know those smiles aren't for me.
I always cried when you were sad,
Even though I know those tears aren't from me.
But like the way it should be,
Everything has changed,
Everything has turned into a better life,
A love life for me to live in.
And Now I believe,
Today is the end of my past,
and it is the beginning of [i]my love life[/i].[/quote]
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haha, no comment 
Last edited by anne.24 (2008-12-30 12:14:24)
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- mG
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b] Always looking you from a far, Always looking you from a distance, A distance that seperates us, A place where you can never see me. I alway
WaAaAaWw..
First to comment..
Nice nice..
Sweet..
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- Nahz.Is.Fab
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Re: [align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b] Always looking you from a far, Always looking you from a distance, A distance that seperates us, A place where you can never see me. I alway
Gaaasshh. I love it. huhu. Good Job Dondon. hihi.
BTW, corrections.
[quote]Im always looking for you from a far,
Im always looking for you from a distance,
A distance that separates us,
A place where you can never see me.
I always smiled when you smiled,
Even though i know those smiles aren't for me.
I always cried when you were sad,
Even though I know those tears aren't from me.
But like the way it should be,
Everything has changed,
Everything has turned into a better life,
A love life for me to live in.
And Now I believe,
Today is the end of my past,
and it is the beginning of my love life.[/quote]
hihi. 
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- Rei Ryuzaki
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b] Always looking you from a far, Always looking you from a distance, A distance that seperates us, A place where you can never see me. I alway
Sweet & nice poem bff. You really good in making it uh.
GJ> i'm really sure dondon will like this. 
You really good in making it uh.
GJ> i'm really sure dondon will like this.
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- anne.24
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b] Always looking you from a far, Always looking you from a distance, A distance that seperates us, A place where you can never see me. I alway
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he hasn't seen it, haha
you sure? >:3
[b]nahz[/b]
o yeah i forgot,
crap, i forgot to erase the 'I' (s)
those I(s) aren't supposed to be there :-j
gawd, it was 1 am when I made this
thanks for the positive comments guyz 
and btw it isn't a poem actually,
it's a lyric , i just sing the lyric with randum tones, lol
and btw it isn't a poem actually,
it's a lyric , i just sing the lyric with randum tones, lol
Last edited by anne.24 (2008-12-30 12:15:29)
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- Nahz.Is.Fab
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b] Always looking you from a far, Always looking you from a distance, A distance that seperates us, A place where you can never see me. I alway
[quote=anne.24]nahz
o yeah i forgot,
crap, i forgot to erase the 'I' (s)
those I(s) aren't supposed to be there :-j
gawd, it was 1 am when I made this
thanks for the positive comments guyz
and btw it isn't a poem actually,
it's a lyric , i just sing the lyric with randum tones, lol[/quote]
Ooohh.. You better sing it to us when we'll have TS confe.
- Off Topic? Ohhh.. Better run. 
and btw it isn't a poem actually,
it's a lyric , i just sing the lyric with randum tones, lol[/quote]
Ooohh.. You better sing it to us when we'll have TS confe.
- Off Topic? Ohhh.. Better run.
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- xxNICOLExx
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [align=center][quote][b]The Beginning of My Love Life[/b] Always looking you from a far, Always looking you from a distance, A distance that seperates us, A place where you can never see me. I alway
awww..
sooo sweett...
make more poems.
make poems about christmas!
Last edited by xxNICOLExx (2008-12-30 21:51:44)
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