hmm. they're not really poems but they're some of the lyrics i composed so.. yeah comments please

[spoiler]prechorus:
everything is nothing when you are not here
my happiness will fade but i'll still be sincere
and in the times of trouble when your eyes gush out a tear
you know i will protect you from the lies you came to fear
chorus:
but i'll be, right here til the end
even though you see me only as a friend
and i don't.. i don't know what to do
cause all i want to see is me and you.. together
Verse 1:
i look at you and i see all
the things that i could do just to get you
you glance at me but you can't see
the man that i could be
(tapos prechorus then chorus)
Verse 2:
every chance i get to be with you
i can't speak but i wanna be true to you
and every moment left unspoken
does it really matter?
(prechorus ulit tas chorus)
bridge:(same chords sa prechorus)
and i know.. you won't see, you won't ever tell me
still i go holding on to silly things that i know i don't have a chance[/spoiler]
[spoiler]verse 1:
it seemed like yesterday
when you always put your troubles away
but now you're always crying
i never see you trying
and you make me wonder if i tried
if we were together will i make you cry
or would you be happy if you're by my side
id give everything just to see you smile
chorus:
and time goes by so fast
i never saw it coming i thought we'd last
and when the moment passed me by
i never even thought you'd wonder why
verse 2:
even though you're a thousand miles away
i'd come to see you even if i don't see the light of day
Bridge:(ok so this wasn't made by me, but i let my classmate do it so she'd have a part in the song

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i wonder if you never knew..how much i really like you..
that i dont want to see any teardrops from you..'coz it makes me feel so blue[/spoiler]
ok so this one ain't my composition. but i helped make the rhythm of the song so cheers to aljon puno(name of my classmate)
[spoiler]Of all the things I’ve ever done,
Finding her will prove to be the most important one.
I would never trade the tears,
The conversations no one hears,
The learning how to walk before we run.
Of all the kites I ever flew,
Most came tumbling down except the one I sent up with you.
I don’t want to change a thing,
Break the spell or cut the string.
When every wish I make is coming true with you.
So in this world of odds and ends,
I’d rather have a part of you than all of my so-called friends.
You have taught me how to feel what is false and what is real.
Of all the things I ever want to do,
I think I’ll start and end with loving you.[/spoiler]
the next one is also made by my classmate but i made the rhythm so yeah

[spoiler]first kiss
songs playing
while i'm sitting next to you
trying hard to speak
now i think we're getting closer to nowhere
and i'm not making sense at all
time is stopping
while i move closer to you
with my hand on your cheek
and thing turned so much clearer
now i won't let you say a word
[eto ung parang pre-chorus]
the thrilling taste of your lips
made me wonder
are we good together?
can this last forever?
[tpos parang eto ung chorus]
i'm having the best time of what this world has to offer
a kiss for a second can last forever
its a bliss having you here tonight
and i'll miss this very moment u held me tight
[tpos ng mejo mahabang interlude]
[and then chorus ule pero *one note higher]gets?
[then fade][/spoiler]
[spoiler]verse1:
i never believed that this could happen
i never believed that we could be
i just thought that you were playin
i never thought that you could see
verse2:
all i know's that this is love
and that we are meant to be
and that we are happy now
so we should let the whole world see
prechorus:
no matter what we go through i'm sure we'll make it through
and i'll never change i'll stay in love with you
chorus:
all the times i spent waiting for forever
i thought this love was so one sided i never knew that you decided
to spend eternity with me, we'll live forever happily
cross my heart and hope to die i will never leave your side
verse3:
and now that my world revolves around you
and all my dreams seems to come true
i think it's time for me to show
how much i really love you
with this song i sing with all my heart and all my passion
forgive me love if i've misled you thinkin you could be my ration
tas prechorus then chorus
Bridge:
and i know you won't ever leave my side
and i know you won't leave me behind[/spoiler]
umm i'll post my other works once i find it >.<
Last edited by pLurK (2009-01-18 06:24:31)