Ikuta Toma fan ka din? Nice. Haha.

Dear Readers, im very sorry for the late post...a very very late post...medyo talagang tinamad po ako...opo yun po ay pawang katotohanan...IM GUILTY...kasi ang dami kong nasimulang story na hindi ko pa natatapos...sorry talaga...sana suportahan niyo pa rin ako... salamat po dun sa mga faithful readers...at active sa pagcomment...ill do my best para matapos ko ang kwentong ito... [b]あなたのサポートをありがとう!!![/b] [b]Chapter 23- GIRLFRIEND?[/b] "uhmm...s-san tayo pupunta?" *Doki* *Doki*... Ren looked at me...then we stopped...he looked at me very intently [i]Ei?kakaloko tong tumingin...ano ba may kulangot ba ako?o kaya may morningstar?...[/i] "hmm?" kumunot yung noo ni Ren...tapos he bend towards me... [i]Aba kakaloko talaga tong lalaking to...minamaliit ako ah...well talaga namang matangkad sya...hehehe...ang Cute nga eh...hehehe...AY ANO BA YAN...!!!NAKAKAHIYA SA MGA READERS[/i] "b-bakit?" i asked...i know im blushing already...kasi hindi lng siya yung nagoobserba sa mukha ko...ako din inoobserbahan ko yung perfect niyang mukha...his eyes hindi naman masyadong singkit...his pinkish lips...tapos his cute nose...WHAT!!!ANO BA TONG SINASABI KO?SNAP OUT OF IT RIKA! suddenly he smiled... MAY DIMPLES!!! "pwede na rin..." he said... "a-anong pwede?" *DOKI* *DOKI*....asus!!!hindi na tumatahimik yung puso ko!!! "pwede ka na maging GIRLFRIEND KO..." he replied... [b][i]PWEDE KA NA MAGING GIRLFRIEND KO... GIRLFRIEND... KO?....[/i][/b] [b]Toma's POV[/b] [b]"HAY!!!" [/b]sigaw ko...I cant believe her!!! "bakit papa?" tanong ni Nobu na may hawak na lollipop pft! nagpapacute nanaman to... "alam mo ba kung saan pwede magpunta si Hye-sun?" gabi na hindi pa rin umuuwi!!! "Ei?" "at anong ibig sabihin niyan Toma?..you care?" hehehe*evil laugh* <- (facial expression ni Toma) "ANONG SABI MO!!!!" "wala naman ako sinasabing masama!!!bat kasumisigaw!!wah!!!" "ano kka ba naman Nobu...para ka talagang bata!tumigil ka nga!" grabe...puro konsumisyon ang mga tao sa bahay na to... i looked outside the window...[i]bat ba ganito?...hindi ko makalimutan yung itsura ni Hye-sun kaninang nandito si Miyu...did she cried when she left?why do i care so much?and...WHAT THE HECK AM I THINKING!!!BUONG ARAW NA YUNG BABAENG YUN ANG INIISIP KO!!![/i] "Toma...hindi bato si Rika..." bigla na lang may nagsalita... pagtingin ko... "HUH?ANONG GINAGAWA NIYO DITO?" bigla na lang nandyan si Jiro at si Toshiya... "tumawag kasi si Nobu sa amin...sabi niya minamaltrato mo dw siya kaya to the rescue ang mga ninong niya...WAHAHAHAHA!!! " sabi ni Jiro habang hinahaplos si Nobu sa ulo na parang tuta...(hehehe) "ano sa tingin mo ang naramdaman ni Rika kanina?" tanong ni Toshiya... [i]hmp!!!nagpapakabayani nanaman tong mokong na to...[/i] "anong sinasabi mo?" "wag ka na magpakainosente dyan...imposibleng hindi mo nararamdaman..." "ang ano?" ano ang sinasabi nitong lokong to?...di nga... "bobo ka talaga...nonsense kang kausap..." "SINONG SINASABIHAN MONG BOBO!!!" "hindi siya bobo Toshi...insensitive at tanga lang..." sabi naman ni Jiro "ANO JIRO!!!ULITIN MO NGA YANG SINABI MO!!!" [i]ang sama ng mga taong to ah!!![/i] "grabe naman kayo mga ninong...hindi naman ganun si Papa...kulang lang siya sa turnilyo..." "TUMIGIL NGA KAYO!!!!HINDI NIYO ALAM ANG SITWASYON!!!" kinuha ko yung jacket ko...tapos pumunta ako sa may pintuan... "san ka pupunta..." Toshi asked.... "hindi ko alam..." then i shut the door... [b]............................END OF CHAPTER 23[/b] 4 days po ako sa manila kaya malate nanaman ng update...but ill update soon...promise... your comments will be highly appreciated...^_^

whew .. update n poh hehe ..

[quote][b]AUTHOR'S NOTE:[/b] again...humihingi po ako ng paumanhin dahil hindi ko nanaman natupad ang ipinangako ko...i just came today...i extended my vacation kasi sa manila...it was fun to be with my cousins since we've never seen each other for such a long time...mga 4 years siguro...hindi kasi sila dito nakakabisista sa daet...dahil sa schedule ng mga tito ko...it was a reunion...close pa naman kaming magpipinsan...oh well...im back...so sa mga naghihintay ng update..here it is...sana po wag kayong magalit at wag magsawa sa pagsuporta...malapit na rin pong matapos ang i love toma...so sooner or later...im going to ask your suggestions kung paano ko ito tatapusin...i have an idea but..its sad...and im sacred that you guys wont like it...if you have any suggestions...just paste it here or PM me...ill really appriciate it...oh before anything else...i just want to put REN'S picture(yungkalove triangle ni toma...so that hindi kayo mahihirapan mag imagine kung ano itsura niya... ... hehehe...ang haba na ng sinabi ko...well here it is... [/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled1-1.jpg[/img] he's sort of like Toma...that's all...this character...is also a mysterious one...who knows?[/quote] [b]Chapter 24- I LOVE TOMA[/b] tsk.tsk. [i]i can see the full moon...grabe..napakaliwanag naman...ang gandang pagmasdan...sana...sana...kasing ganda rin niya ako...[/i] [i]hmm?bukas pa rin ang mga ilaw?[/i] tumingin ako sa relo ko..its almost midnight?ang alam ko may rehearsal pasila Toma bukas... [b][i]Flash back Miyu looked at me...and then looked at Toma...i clench my fist when she cling in Toma's arm...they look like a lovely couple...God made them perfectly...Toma who looked like a badboy...and Miyu who is so sophisticated...they were like a puzzle who matched perfectly...[/i][/b] [i]yeah..i remember...i wonder if my heart can take it? lumakad ako papunta sa front door...i took my time...i wasnt in a hurry...or the truth is...im not ready to see them together...if that would happen...maybe i wont take it anymore...i might burst out crying out loud...i dont want that to happen...ayaw kong makita sila...HINDI KO KAYA...nang makatungtong ako sa front door..i stopped...i felt a warm liquid flowing in my eyes...i have to pretend...i have to stop...i have to wipe my tears...i have to...i have to...forget...just for toninght...so that i could face him...and live for tommorrow...i took a deep breath... [/i] *CREAK*(door opens) "HuH?"...i was puzzled..."Toma?" i whispered Toma is lying in the couch...he is curled up while his head is resting on his other arm*DOKI**DOKI*...i cant stop my heart...neither my feet...i slowly walked across the room...*DOKI**DOKI*...i want to touch his face...i want to touch his soft hair...i want to feel his warm body again... I...I....I LOVE TOMA... i kneel down...to take a good look on his face...he looks so peaceful...[i]"i wonder...i wonder what is he dreaming about..."[/i] i was a fool to think Ren is gorgeous...Toma is much much more good looking than he is...i dont want to stop this feeling anymore...i put my hand in his face...SUDDENLY... *DOKI* Toma opened his eyes... "bakit ngayon ka lang?" he asked "ah...ano kasi...uhmm...nagkasiyahan kasi kami sa karaoke..." i lied...i know he wont buy it...im a very bad liar... "12:00 am? karaoke?saang lupalop ka makakakita ng karaoke house na ganun?" he said...his face was very serious... "ano kasi...pagkatapos magkaraoke...pumunta ako sa bahay nila Mutsume...tapos nagkwentuhan kami..." i lied again...pero siguro naman this time maniniwala na siya... "SINUNGALING... tumawag ako kanina sa bahay nila Mutsume...kanina pa sya nandoon...at wala ka..." he answered me again in a poker face... "huh?...ano?...si-sinabi ko bang Mutsume...ano...uhmm...si Suke pala..." heh ang galing ko naman..bat ba ang galing kong magpalusot ngayon? "wala ka bang maisip na ibang kasinungalingan na kapanipaniwala?...Tumawag na rin ako sa kanila...at..." he stopped...he moved his face...and saw my hand... i blushed....WAH!!!!EMBARRASING!!! "AH...EH...KASI..MAY...MAY LAMOK KA KANINA..KAYA PINATAY KO..." ERR!!!bat ba parang namighty bond tong kamay ko...HINDI KO MATANGGAL!!! "LIAR..." *DOKI* i suddenly had the strength to pull my hand out of his face... NANG... BIGLANG.... *DOKI* "To-toma?" i asked...my heart started to race 5 times as usual... Toma...looked right straight into my eyes...and sat straight...his hand holding mine... He opened his mouth "Rika..." *DOKI**DOKI* "Ba-bakit?" i..i cant breath... [i]HUH!!![/i] *PULLS* "ang tanga mo talaga...isa kang malaking engot..." he said "To-toma?" hindi ko to...kaya...his body feels so warm... "wag mo na ulit itong gagawin..." he hugged me tighter "SORRY..." [i]Toma?[/i] "sa oras na gawin mo to...hindi ka na sisikatan ng araw..." he whispered...his arms around me tightens as he said every single word...it made it harder to breath...but...but...somehow...I WANT THIS TO LAST FOREVER... "sorry..." i didnt had the strength to stop it...my tears came flowing down from my cheeks..."sorry...Toma..."i put my arms around him...i hid my face in his chest....i dont want him to see me like this... "ANG DRAMA MO..." i looked up...my eyes widened...TOMA'S SMILING... "anong *sniff* anong tinatawatawa mo dyan?" i asked... "cute ka palakapag umiiyak..." he said teasingly... "pano ba naman kasi...*sniff*" i wiped my tears with my right hand... "shh..." inilagay ni toma yung daliri niya sa tapat ng labi ko..."YOU TALK SO MUCH".... > >> >>> >>>> >>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> >>>> >>> >> > [i]Toma?[/i] ..............................END OF CHAPTER 24

waaaaaaaaaaaaa.. answeet ni Toma ! i labyoo naa ! hahaha update na po !

[quote]cutthie_ira ..i like it!! ..jaycelyn:)[/quote] uy kaw pala yan...HELLO!!! [quote]ghetto_quiin24@yahoo.com waaaaaaaaaaaaa.. answeet ni Toma ! i labyoo naa ! hahaha update na po ![/quote] hehehehe...tnx...^_^ [quote]cutest08 OFMG. New reader here. I will be started at latest chapter. Kakilig. Please update^[/quote] Welcome!!! sana po magustuhan niyo ang I LOVE TOMA at sana po suportahan niyo ito hanggang sa huli salamat sa lahat ng readers ko...at lalong lalo na sa mga walang sawang nagcocomment...I cant thank you enough [b]Chapter 25- First KISS[/b] [i]Toma?[/i] i was shocked when i realized that he caught my face...his lips found mine with an eagerness He's hand was holding the nape of my neck while the other was pulling my waist...my head disconnected from my body and i was kissing him back...i closed my eyes and put my arms around his neck...my fingers tightened in his hair and i was pulling him closer now...my heart stopped...[i]THIS IS NOT A DREAM....[/i] There was this kind of electricity flowing into my veins...There was a snap on my head that hit me... [i]"this has to stop..."[/i] i exerted every strength that i have to pull my face away from his...it was not easy...his arms were locked into my waist he was stronger than me...i was about to give up but my mind keeps telling me to pull away...It was a miracle when i finally pushed him... we were both catching our breath...when i ended our kiss... ...After we took a hold on ourselves...We stared at each other... I feel so numb...what just happened? i was so surprised... [i]Should i slap him?...what should i do?...but...Im not angry...it made it hard to breath...but IM NOT ANGRY...THATS FOR SURE[/i] Toma's eyes were locked on me...there was confusion...was he sad...or more like puzzled..but why? i just realized my hand was on my lips...its like i was about to say something wrong and i put my hand on it to stop...is this why Toma is puzzled? [i]Does he think im mad at him? What was in my face to make him sad?[/i] i figured it out when i felt a hot liquid rolled....in my cheek...[b][i]A TEAR?[/i][/b]i wiped it up... The room was filled with silence...both of us didnt move...all i can hear was my beating heart... [b][i]"I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMORE!!!"[/i][/b] "To-toma..." i started... i look at him...he was so still... "Okay...lang naman..." i tried to make my voice even he didnt move a bit... "Toma?" i called him again..this time my voice was back to normal... "Sorry..." he whispered Sorry?...bakit?...wala ka namang ginawang masama... "hindi ko sinasadyang gawin to...it was a reflex action..." he said... i bowed my head...and i clenched my fist... "just forget everything..." he added... again my heart stopped... "hindi naman talaga to dapat-" hindi ko nasya pinatapos...I stood up... "HOY TOMA IKAW NA ULUPONG KA!MATAPOS MONG KUNIN ANG FIRST KISS KO SASABIHIN MO REFLEX ACTION LANG!!!!" i shouted at him "LOKO KANG LALAKI KA!!!KUNG GANYaN KA NG GANYaN!!MAKIPAGHALIKAN KA SA PADER!!!" naramdaman ko na namamasa na yung mga mata...pero...pinigil ko... < Facial expression ni Toma huminga ako ng malalim at hintay ko syang matauhan... he shook his head as if to erase a bad thought... "Hindi ka galit?" he asked... "Sino bang hindi magagalit?" "Hindi yun...hindi ka galit dahil..." [i]Hala ka dyan Rika...pano ka ngayon!!![/i] hindi ako sumagot...tumingin lang ako sa bintana... *DOKI* nagsisismula nanaman yung puso kong tumibok... *DOKI* natahimik nanaman si Toma kaya naman tumingin ako...nabigla na lang ako nang makitang... "bat...bat nakangiti ka dyan?" i asked... mas lumawak pa yung pilyo niyang ngit...uh-oh...hindi maganda itong nararamdaman ko...siguradong....may mangyayari nanamang kababalaghan... "you're blushing..." sabi niya habang tinuturo yung mukha ko... "pa-pano ba naman..." ano bang sasabihin ko? AWKWARD!!! mayamaya...bigla na lang... "UY!...ano ba Toma?" lumapit si Toma tapos niyakap ako... "Shh...quite ka lang..." he whispered... "ba-bakit?...a-anong gagawin mo?" *DOKI* *DOKI* "baka magising si Nobu..." he teasingly said "Toma..." i murmured "First Kiss ei?" he whispered I heard him giggled...and i knew i cannot escaped from this arms...because... [b]I WANT TO STAY HERE FOREVER....[/b] there's nothing i could do but to put my arms around him....and we spend the night in each others arms...AS I ALWAYS WANTED....AS I ALWAYS DREAMED ABOUT... [b]..............................END OF CHAPTER 25 [/b]

Last edited by pauline416 (2010-05-12 07:16:59)

whew ,, update na po ! hahah .. nice . first kiss pa ..

super cute neto.... hihihi.... update

Last edited by cutiecates143 (2010-05-12 23:38:57)

Woah!!! i never had this much feedback for such a long time....thank you guys really for your over whelming support... [quote]sam_glor@yahoo.com wew...nice.....[/quote] Thanks ^_^ [quote]ghetto_quiin24@yahoo.com whew ,, update na po ! hahah .. nice . first kiss pa ..[/quote] Hahahaha...oo nga...before i posted the update i was thinking of making it more daring...kaso..hehe...next time naman.... [quote]trisha_trisha Ang cute! New reader here Tagal ko na nakikita to pero ngayon ko lang nabasa, kala ko kasi ibang language. Hahaha. Chappy21 palang ako, mamaya ko na itutuloy, may lakad pa kasi eh. ~CHOWXD[/quote] Welcome ^_^ good luck sa pagbabasa at sana magustuhan mo [quote]cutiecates143 super cute neto.... hihihi.... update[/quote] hehehe...ako man fav. ko so far itong chapter na to...hehehehe [quote]cutthie_ira auz...!! kakilig!! 1st kiss!!! haha!! inlab cla sa isa't isa..... update na p0h....[/quote] tell me about it...super kinilig din ako dito habang sinusulat ko...i mean itinatype pala...hehehehe.... [b]Chapter 25[/b] [i]Hay simula kaninang umaga paggising ko...para na akong nasa cloud nine ...hindi ako makapaniwalang...natulog kami ni Toma na magkasama...PRANG...ISANG PANAGINIP LANG ANG LAHAT... [/i] mula sa malayo...nakatingin si Mutsume at Suke kay Rika... "Suke...sa tingin mo...may nangyari na kayla Toma at Rika?" [i]hanggang ngayon...di pa tumatawag si Jiro...[/i] "SUKE!!!" biglang sumigaw si Mutsume... "Huh?...ah...ano yun Mutsume...anong sabi mo?" "sabi ko tingnan mo si Rika...parang may kakaibang nangyayari..." paliwanang niya... [i]Huh?[/i] tumingin ako kay Rika...oo nga noh...(nakatingin si Rika sa malayo..na tulo laway...) "aba...oo nga...tingnan mo...ano kayang problema...?" "Lika...puntahan natin..." sabay hila sa braso ko ni Mutsume papunta kay Hye-sun... < facial expression ni Rika... "woi..." tawag ni Mutsume kay Rika... parang walalng narinig si Rika at patuloy lang sa pagtunganga... "Rika?okay ka lng?" tanong ko "Rika?..." tawag ko uli... < si Rika pa din... "HYE-SUN!!!!!" sigaw ni Mutsume... parang natauhan naman si Rika... "Ah...ano?...anong sabi mo?" tanong niya... "ano bang nangyayari sayo...kanina ka pa diyan nakatunganga..." "uhmm... uhmmm...ano kasi eh...uhmm...'' "wag mong sabihing...." hindi ni Mutsume tinapos yung sasabihin niya...she step back...tapos tumingin siya kay Rika with a horrifying look... "UY ANO KA BA NAMAN MUTSUME!!!" biglang nagblush si Rika..."HINDI YUN KATULAD NG NASA ISIP MO!!!" "HOY...WAG KA NANG MAGMAANGMAANGAN PA!!!" "ano bang sinasabi mo...wala naman akong itinatago...o pinagtatakpan..." "AMININ MO!!!DALI NA!!!" "MUTSUME WAG KA NGANG SUMIGAW!!!" "PINAGTITINGINAN NA TAYO DITO!!" [i]kung ganun...ibig sabihin...maayos na sila Toma at Rika...[/i] tumingin ako kay Rika habang nag-aaway sila ni Mutsume...halatang-halata na masaya na siya... "O sige...aamin na..." pagsuko niya..."Hindi ko alam kung saan pupunta itong relasyon namin ni Toma...hindi ko rin alam kung ano ba talagang relasyon namin...pero...kahit ganun...masaya ako dahil...MAGKASAMA KAMI..." then she smiled... ''wah!!!bat di mo agad sinabi!!!" pagtatampo ni Mutsume... Rika giggled [i]"huh?bat...bat ganito ang nararamdaman ko..."[/i] yumuko ako at itiniklop ko yung kamay ko... [i][b]"naiinggit ako kay Rika..."[/b][/i] ................................................................ [i]hay salamat...tapos na rin... [/i] huminga ako ng malalim...katatapos lang ng Volleyball practice namin...at sabay kami ni Karin na naglalakad palabas ng school... "Oh...pano...bukas ulit ha...malapit na ang intramurals kaya dapat...galingan pa natin..." sabi ni Karin "Oo nga..." i agreed "O sige na..bye bye ^_^" bati niya... "okay..bukas ulit" paalam ko habang kumakaway... *Beep...* *Beep...* (cellphone) [i]huh?sino kaya to?[/i] kinuha ko yung cellphone ko... 1 message received >Open...< [quote]Magkita tayo mamaya... Dating lugar... Hihintayin kita...[/quote] biglang tumigil ang pagtibok ng puso ko nang makita ko kung sino... [i]Toshiya?[/i] ................................... [i]Katulad ng dati...nandito nanaman kami...dito kami laging nagkikita...ewan ko ba...[/i] bumangon si Toshi...at nagsuot ng pantalon... "may problema ka ba?" tanong ko...hindi ko pa kayang magsalita ng maayos.... "hindi naman ako nawawalan ng problema..." he coldly replied... [i]ano ba ako talaga sayo Toshi?lagi na lang tayong ganito kung magkita...lagi na lang...lagi na lang dito...[/i] hindi ko pa kayang bumangon kaya naman...umupo muna ako... "Toshi...bakit ganito?" nagbabadyang lumabas ang isang butil ng luha mula sa mata ko... "anong sinasabi mo?" tanong niya habang nagbibihis... "bakit lagi na lang...tayong...ganito?" dahan-dahan ko sabi... "may masama ba?...di ba....ikaw naman ang nagsabi na ayos lang sayo..." [i]oo nga...pero...pero hindi ko naman alam na ganito pala kasakit....[/i] "ayaw mo na ba?" tumingin siya sa akin... [i]biglang tumigil ang mundo ko...gusto kong sumigaw at magwala...pero... AYAW KO MAWALA SI TOSHIYA...[/i] "hindi...ayos lang sa akin..." i lied... isnuot na ni Toshi yung jacket niya... "ano...ihahatid na ba kita...?" "hi-hindi...inaantok pa ako eh..." pinilit kong lumabas ang isang ngiti... "sige...aalis na ako..." tumalikod si Toshiya at lumabas... nang marinig ko na ang paglapat ng pinto...hindi ko na napigilang umiyak... [i]bakit...bakit hindi mo ako kayang mahalin at pahalagahan Toshi? bakit...bakit tayo ganito? [/i] [i]wala na akong pakialam sa nangyayari sa paligid ko...ang alam ko lang...gusto kong umiyak nang umiyak...hanggang sa wala nang luha panglalabas sa mata ko...PARA SA GANUN...HINDI NA ULIT AKO MASASAKTAN SA BAWAL NA PAGKIKITA NAMIN NI TOSHI... ANG... LALAKING... HINDI KO...KAYANG... KALIMUTAN.....[/i] .............................[b]End of Chapter 25[/b]

Last edited by pauline416 (2010-05-13 07:47:51)

OFMG. May nangyari kila Rika? LOL At yung kay Suke. Kawawa naman sya ;[ UPDATE!