baka fiance mo siya Aine update!

Nakakainis kayo ! Lgi niyo na lng ako pinapakilig ! Wahaha:D Lagi din tuloy akong biten . UPDEYTT !:]

waaaaahh.. kilig ako.. fiance mu cguro si skyler.. waaaaahh.. kakakilig.. ahahaha..

hope the secret will not split out hope he will keep it truly haha next next.. short update??

i really like the story..... at nakakakilig... a lot.. but its too boring because each chapter has only few details.. i hope you can put longer stories each chapter.... but i really like it except for its short stories.. hope u like my comment.. Good Luck and GOD bless..

[quote=oniongurl;#3522580;1271225070]Ahaha, nice Sige, tago ko rin secret mo Ahaha, update ;D[/quote] gaya gaya ka kay ms.rose.haha Peace! [quote=iljimae;#3522524;1271220217]i really like the story..... at nakakakilig... a lot.. but its too boring because each chapter has only few details.. i hope you can put longer stories each chapter.... but i really like it except for its short stories.. hope u like my comment.. Good Luck and GOD bless..[/quote] Thank you. Also thanks for that advice. I hope you support this. [quote=zheaisthria;#3521410;1271143325]hope the secret will not split out hope he will keep it truly haha next next.. short update??[/quote] Wala kasi akong masyadong maicip. kea short lang. [quote=ms.rose13;#3521416;1271143943]secret secret pah.. ahahaha cgeh na nga... d ko rin sasbhin.. tagu-tago..[/quote] haha. thank ulet sa pag basa.

[b]Chapter 12: Promise[/b] [b]SKYLER[/b] I did'nt ask her a question why she did secret it. Because I know how she feels. I also keep a secret like her. Do you know what it is? Hulaan nyo na lang.haha Cge ikwekwento ko na nga. [b]FLASHBACK[/b] "Ang panget mo kasi. Mukang monster!" Hmm. Ano yun? Puntahan ko nga. "Oy. Cloe san ka pupunta?" Si Kiano yun. yup were buddies since we were kids. "May naririnig kasi ako nang bubully yata" Sya naman di ako sinundan nung nakita ng ice cream. Hayy. "Ice Cream! Here I come!" Nako. takaw talaga,bahala na nga. ------------♣-----------♣-------------♣-----------♣--------------♣---------- May nakita akong babaeng umiiyak kaso di ko makita yung muhka pano nakabangs. "Bigay mo samin pera mo panget." Iyak pa rin siya ng iyak. "Ayaw mo aa. Sugod!" Tumakbo ako at napukpok ulo ko. Tapos nung nawalan ako ng malay. ------------♣-----------♣-------------♣-----------♣--------------♣---------- Pagkagising ko nasa ibang lugar nako. Bakit puro puti? Kinuha na ba ako ni Lord? Nako. bata pa ako Lord. "Anak!" Narinig ko boses ni mama kaya alam ko na buhay pa ako. "Anak,okay ka lang?" Umupo ako at tumango. "Ma nasan ako?" Nakita ko yung babae na natatago sa likod ng mama nya. "Nasa bahay ka nila Mrs. Calueng. Buti nga kilala ko sila kundi iisipin ko nakidnap ka." Maya maya... "CLOE!!!!" Tumakbo pa lapit sakin si Kiano sakin. "Yan napapala mong sa pagiging pa Super hero mode." Binatukan ko naman sya. "At least may silbe noh. Di katulad mo kain lang ng kain." Nilabas nya yung ice cream. "Ayy. yan tuloy natunaw." Tumawa kaming lahat. ------------♣-----------♣-------------♣-----------♣--------------♣---------- Tapos kumain nagkwentuhan si mama pati si Mrs. Calueng. Ako naman hinanap yung babae. "Nasaan na kaya yun?" May kumalabit sakin. "Uhm..an-no... Sa-lamat." Ang mahiyain nya. "Salamat din." Ngumiti ako sa kanya at nag blush sya. "Ako nga pala si Skyler Cloe Calpito. Ikaw?" "Ak-o s-si Ai-ne Fi-onna-bhair Ca-lueng." Year passed kailangan na namin umalis. Papuntang states. "Cge kailangan ko nang umalis." Umiiyak siya. "Hayaan mo babalik ako para sayo. Saka wag mong kalimutan yung promise ko aa." Ngumiti sya sakin at tumango. [i][b] A promise that i still doing and will do forever.[/b][/i]

nice nice.. kya mu yan skyler.. babalik yan si aine..

NICE ! next na x]

[quote]Sorry sa late late update. Minsan na lang kasi makagamit.[/quote] [b]Chapter 13: He was him, my angel[/b] Umiyak ako kasi aalis na sya. Pero before he leave he promise me something. You know what? That he will be there wherever I need him. That he will be the angel of mine. "Hayaan mo babalik ako para sayo. Saka wag mong kalimutan yung promise ko aa." Ngumiti ako at tumango. He leave and the wind blew. "Goodbye Skyler..." ------------♣-----------♣-------------♣-----------♣--------------♣---------- I woke up. "Nu ulit yung paniginip ko?" Ayy.. Nevermind. I took a bath and after that i eat and go to school. Lunch time na pero inaalala ko pa rin yun. Bakit ganun para bang ganun kaimportante maalala ko yung panaginip ko yung? Ayy ewan ko ba. Pero kailangan ko alalalin para sagutin ang nababagabag kong puso at isipan. ------------♣-----------♣-------------♣-----------♣--------------♣---------- Sa labas ako kumakain pag lunch time. Masyado kasing maraming tao sa canteen. Kaya dito na lang. Hmm bak tayu dun sa topi. Anu ba yun panaginip na yun? Hayy. "Fiona ilag!" Pag tingin ko may bolang papalapit sakin. Pinikit ko ang mga mata ko at naalala ko ang lahat. Si skyler! Pag dilat ko nakita ko si skyler. "Skyler bkit m-mo ginawa y-yun?" "Forget my promise?" He smiled and all my confusion is gone.. [i][b]He was him, my angel. [/b][/i]

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