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[align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
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Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b].
[spoiler][b]Characters;[/b]
Charlotte King- [i]female protagonist[/i]
James Little- [i]male protagonist; Char's admirer/bestfriend[/i]
Charles Rich- [i]Char's ultimate crush[/i]
Jane Corr- [i]Charles' girl[/i][/spoiler][/align]
[quote][align=left][i]I like him.[/i] But I don't think he does.
I'm just a mere [b]bestfriend[/b].
I have nothing to say.[/align]
[align=right][i]I love her.[/i] She likes him. Done.
I'm just her stupid [b]bestfriend[/b].
And I have nothing to say.[/align]
[align=center][b]To be continued..[/b][/align][/quote]
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
[align=center][b]Chapter 1; Charles Rich, His Name Says It All.[/b]
[quote]Okay, so it was the first day of school and Charlotte waited for James. Then there he was.
[i]"At last, dumating ka rin."[/i] sighed Charlotte.
[i]"Hey Char! Pasensya naman."[/i] James Little was Char's best friend since kindergarten. Nandyan s'ya palagi 'pag kailangan s'ya ni Charlotte. She ran through the door.
[i]"Well anyway, thanks for picking me up, James,"[/i] said Charlotte.
[i]"Anytime,"[/i] replied James.
[i]"As usual, limo's here,"[/i] said James, nabubwiset na.
[i]"Yeaaaahh,"[/i] sighed Charlotte. [i]"And gwapo n'ya no?"[/i]
[i]"Who?"[/i] Although alam naman ni James kung sino. DUH. [i]"Charles Rich?"[/i]
[i]"Uh-huh."[/i] Char's still staring. [i]"Di ba?"[/i]
[i]"Sorta? Ewan ko. Pa'no ko malalaman eh I'm a guy!"[/i] James told her, speaking matter-of-factly.
[i]"Yeah right. Selos ka lanh nyan eh. Ha-ha!"[/i] Charlotte laughed.
[i]"Shut up,"[/i] James replied, snob kunyare kay Char.
So they got out of the car and, playing around, Charlotte walked backwards. Then nabangga n'ya si Charles, and flushed.
[i]"Oh, I'm terribly sorry!"[/i] Charlotte was all red, and di nya tinitignan si Charles.
[i]"No, it's okay,"[/i] Charles explained then smiled.
[i]"Tara na nga!"[/i] James, who is red with fury, tugged Charlotte.
As they walked down the hall, [i]"Did you see him look at me? Ha?!"[/i] Ito namang si Charlotte katak ng katak tungkol kay Charles. Eh syempre, James was annoyed.
[i]"Could you please cut the hell out?!"[/i] Charlotte was shocked, na-offend. [i]"Oh, uh, Di ko naman.."[/i] explained James.
[i]"S'okay,"[/i] replied Char. [i]"Tama ka."[/i] Then she left.[/quote]
[scroll][b]To be continued..[/b][/scroll][/align]
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- beareyes
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
^ Very interesting. But please avoid double posting. 
Thanks.
Thanks.
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[quote=beareyes;#3510665;1270457822]^ Very interesting. But please avoid double posting. Thanks. [/quote]
Yeah sure, thanks for that^^,
Thanks. [/quote]
Yeah sure, thanks for that^^,
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
Yep, but if it's not that interesting, I might, as well, change it. I'm new naman eh. So I'm accepting criticisms. Ü
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- anexylem
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
new reader here
wow... ang ganda
parang related sa TORA DORA nyahaha
i'll support this story 
update
update
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
[quote=jjuL]Yep, but if it's not that interesting, I might, as well, change it. I'm new naman eh. So I'm accepting criticisms. Ü[/quote]
if im not mistaken diba kung pure english sa literature siya dapat ipost?
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
[quote=brokenheartsrings025;#3511004;1270471348]if im not mistaken diba kung pure english sa literature siya dapat ipost?[/quote]
Really sorry. Well, I guess I'll be composing the other chapters differently. Thanks for that. I'm a newbie.
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- zheaisthria
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
hi jjul welcome here
in non-english literature
i love your story above ^^
nice intro and chappy 1
i hope to read your next chapters
update
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
[quote=zheaisthria;#3511065;1270474348]hi jjul welcome here
in non-english literature
i love your story above ^^
nice intro and chappy 1
i hope to read your next chapters
update[/quote]
Thanksies to ya. 
I'll post [b]chap2[/b] tomorrow^^,
I'll post [b]chap2[/b] tomorrow^^,
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- zheaisthria
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
[quote=jjuL;#3511072;1270474611]Thanksies to ya. I'll post chap2 tomorrow^^,[/quote]
no prob sis
i'll be waiting for that
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
[align=center]Chapter 2- Charlotte; Did I Fall?
[quote][quote]How could he say that to me? I mean, anong ginawa ko para sabihin niya yon? May crush lang ako dun kay Charles nagalit na! Naku, wala naman dapat siya pake di ba?! 
The phone beeped. [i]"Hey Char. Uh, it's James. I-"[/i] Bahala ka.
[i]"Nak, bakit mo ginawa yon?"[/i] asked Mom. Napagalitan pa tuloy ako.
I never told my Mom anything about Charles. Kase naman, konting tili ko lang nagdududa na!
[i]"Nothing. Uhh, nagtatanong sa school works."[/i] I lied.
[i]"Ah, okay. So I'd better be going."[/i] replied Mom.
[i]"Yeah, sure."[/i] Too close.
[i]*Doorbell rings.[/i] Sino kaya yun? I ran downstairs to find out it was.. James.
[i]"Char, plea- "[/i] I slammed the door closed. [i]"Go away!"[/i]
[i]"I know you're mad at me pero pakinggan mo muna ako oh."[/i] begged James.
[i]"No, ayoko!"[/i] I was too mad at him that I can't even look at him.
[i]"Okay, but please listen. I got mad at you being so hysterical about Charles because, well, uh.. I, um, I care for you.. A-and may girlfriend na si Charles at ayaw kitang masaktan. Could you forgive me?"[/i] James explained.
Wow, I was.. touched. He never talked to me like that before and, wow.
I opened the door. [i]"I forgive you."[/i] I replied. Yung smile ni James abot tenga! Then he hugged me.
His hug was really.. comforting. Thanks James.[/quote]
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[scroll][b]To be continued..[/b][/scroll]
[spoiler]Sorry maiksi lang. First time eh. Pasensya~ 
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The phone beeped. [i]"Hey Char. Uh, it's James. I-"[/i] Bahala ka.
[i]"Nak, bakit mo ginawa yon?"[/i] asked Mom. Napagalitan pa tuloy ako.
I never told my Mom anything about Charles. Kase naman, konting tili ko lang nagdududa na!
[i]"Nothing. Uhh, nagtatanong sa school works."[/i] I lied.
[i]"Ah, okay. So I'd better be going."[/i] replied Mom.
[i]"Yeah, sure."[/i] Too close.
[i]*Doorbell rings.[/i] Sino kaya yun? I ran downstairs to find out it was.. James.
[i]"Char, plea- "[/i] I slammed the door closed. [i]"Go away!"[/i]
[i]"I know you're mad at me pero pakinggan mo muna ako oh."[/i] begged James.
[i]"No, ayoko!"[/i] I was too mad at him that I can't even look at him.
[i]"Okay, but please listen. I got mad at you being so hysterical about Charles because, well, uh.. I, um, I care for you.. A-and may girlfriend na si Charles at ayaw kitang masaktan. Could you forgive me?"[/i] James explained.
Wow, I was.. touched. He never talked to me like that before and, wow.
I opened the door. [i]"I forgive you."[/i] I replied. Yung smile ni James abot tenga! Then he hugged me.
His hug was really.. comforting. Thanks James.[/quote]
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[scroll][b]To be continued..[/b][/scroll]
[spoiler]Sorry maiksi lang. First time eh. Pasensya~ [/spoiler][/align]
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Re: [align=center]------------------------------------------------ [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/4i29ts.jpg[/img] Published on [b]April 05, 2010[/b]. [spoiler][b]Characters;[/b] Charlotte King- [i]female p
hay.. salamat
nagbati na yung dalawa
tama naman si james eh
ganyan ang friend excpet
??
next na
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