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[align=center][size=6][b][i][font=georgia]Goodbye[/font][/i][/b][/size] By Donna Louise A. Chavez XD BTW, it's a pretty long poem. So be sure your eyes are prepared for the pain [b]:P[/b] Please comm

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[align=center][size=6][b][i][font=georgia]Goodbye[/font][/i][/b][/size] By Donna Louise A. Chavez XD BTW, it's a pretty long poem. So be sure your eyes are prepared for the pain [b]:P[/b] Please comm

[align=center][size=6][b][i][font=georgia]Goodbye[/font][/i][/b][/size] By Donna Louise A. Chavez XD BTW, it's a pretty long poem. So be sure your eyes are prepared for the pain [b]:P[/b] Please comment & tell me what you think. [quote][i][size=2][color=#222222][font=georgia]I thought I'd never let go I even wished we'd last forever Things started to change And now we're not together I promised I won't ever cry I wanna change how I acted When your eyes met mine I knew you were all I wanted We had fun sharing laughter And visited each others houses We were foolish back then We had so many crazes Those days were gone When you suddenly went away I prayed to God and wished You'd come back to stay Then we lost our connection I started to cry I wanted to hold you tight I even thought I'd die Then came the day When I have decided I don't wanna hurt anymore The memories have haunted [b]"It's all gonna be okay"[/b] Something whispered into my ear My tears rapidly fell like a waterfall But I know the pain will disappear It was hard to let you go I didn't even know how to But I knew it was for the best Still, I didn't want to let go of you Well, it was too late already I gave up and my eyes swelled But I wished for time to rewind Back to the days when we fell I'll just be thanking God For giving me this opportunity To realize that what I thought Wasn't really meant to be But I won't ever regret Falling in love with you Even if you don't think the same way I swear it's all true Thank you for everything You've given and done I swear I'll treasure them forever Though our love is gone I may claim I don't love you anymore But that's all just a lie I just wanted to forget All the pain I felt inside Yeah, inside of me, there is this heart That beats for you endlessly Although it's not like how it was before Still, you are a part of me Remember, I still love you This love will never fade away Even if you don't talk to me Well, yeah, it's okay I really don't know how to end this One poem isn't enough for me to express Everything I feel deep within It's all just a mess But I guess I have to end it I read the whole poem with a sigh Please keep in mind; I love you Well, that's all; [b]Goodbye[/b][/color][/size][/font][/i][/quote] Haha. I was bored so I made this long poem yesterday ; April 29 2010. It sucks right? Nyaknyaknyak. Surry if there are some mistakes & all. I'm not good wif poetry & I'm not a poet so.. [b]FORGIVE ME[/b] ;_; Haha. That's all for now. DRAMA! :)) [b]WARNING:[/b] Do not steal my lines! I eat humans. >:B Just ask for permission if you want to borrow some lines. Wait for my answer first! : If it's a [u]yes[/u], then you're lucky. If it's a [u]no[/u], sorry nolong. haha. [b]xbb[/b][/align]

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Re: [align=center][size=6][b][i][font=georgia]Goodbye[/font][/i][/b][/size] By Donna Louise A. Chavez XD BTW, it's a pretty long poem. So be sure your eyes are prepared for the pain [b]:P[/b] Please comm

[b]^[/b] Glad you like it XDD Okidoki. [b]:-bd[/b]
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Re: [align=center][size=6][b][i][font=georgia]Goodbye[/font][/i][/b][/size] By Donna Louise A. Chavez XD BTW, it's a pretty long poem. So be sure your eyes are prepared for the pain [b]:P[/b] Please comm

Waahh Tomo-chan, you're soo good with [b]Editing, Photography, Drawings[/b] and then now [b]Poetry[/b] ?! Wao, you're [i]sugoi[/i] LOLS. Hihi. Nice, I love how you rhymed the words, and the message is perfectly delivered clearly and well, overall, you are soo excellent. Wao. Make more~
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Re: [align=center][size=6][b][i][font=georgia]Goodbye[/font][/i][/b][/size] By Donna Louise A. Chavez XD BTW, it's a pretty long poem. So be sure your eyes are prepared for the pain [b]:P[/b] Please comm

[b]^ [/b]Tomo-chaaaaaaan. Ahahaha, [b]arigatou. :D[/b] But I'm not [i]that[/i] good. XDDD Yayy. Thank youu tomo-chan! I'ma try to make more soon. Heehee.
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