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- » [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
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[align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
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[align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
[align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size]
[sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align]
[b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/b] : _______ [/align]
[quote][size=3]Introduction.[/size]
[color=blue] [align=center]Look, Harlene, you`re so childish. you`re now 14 & you like you are so, immature. you`re not a kid anymore. You make simple things go complicated. im sorry Harlene, but i want a break up.[/align][/color]
[align=right][color=blue]--[b]Nathan Perez[/b] [/color][/align]
[color=deeppink] [align=center]I'm leaving. afte a year or two, ill come back. And when I come back you`ll see... [b]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/align][/b] [/color]
[align=right][color=deeppink]--[b]Harlene Kay Jara Corpuz[/b][/color][/align][/quote]
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[align=center]hello guys. & is my newest story.
sana may mag-support ulit. .gif)
i have my on-going story [b]CAN THIS BE LOVE?[/b]
the link is on my sig,
+ repus & comments are highly appreciated.
thank you.
---ivy♥[/align]
i have my on-going story [b]CAN THIS BE LOVE?[/b]
the link is on my sig,
+ repus & comments are highly appreciated.
thank you.
---ivy♥[/align]
Last edited by rebeliouz_gurl87 (2010-05-06 21:07:34)
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- imyours_24
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
Yeeaaa. Cute!
Childish. XD
Update! Subscribe!
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- trisha_trisha
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
[quote=rebeliouz_gurl87;#3562982;1273028486]And when I come back you`ll see... AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/quote]
nice=)
iupdate nyo na po 
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- amayaeri027
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
nice!! nice!!
update na po!! 
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- _maria07_
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
Wow!!! ang ganda ng intro!!!
i'm gonna read this!!!!
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
[align=center][quote][size=3]Chapter 1[/size]
Yes. Today is the day. Ill come back to my beloved country – PHILIPPINES.
Ako nga pala si HARLENE KAY JARA CORPUZ. a 16 years old girl. Young & fresh. haha. Maganda ako, sabi ko. ahhaha..
I’m here in my room. Remembering every corner and angle of it. I’m sure I’ll miss this.
“Jara, let’s go” –my aunt. Aunt Rudy.
“Yes Tito.” I answered.
Since I came here in Canada, dito ako tumuloy sa bahay ni Tita Hellen at Tito Rudy.
Nung pagbaba namin ni Tito sa hagdanan, nakita ko sina tita hellen at ang pinsan kongsi Karla na saksakan ng kacutan na nagmana sa akin. [pero mas maganda parin ako. LOL]. Nandun na rin sa tabi nila ung mga bagahe ko.
“Hija, mamimiss kita.” –tita hellen. Almost crying,
“Mamimiss ko din po kayo Tita.” I said and hugged her,
“Ate Kayyharra, I’ll miss you.” –karla said.
“I’ll miss you too karla baby.” – I said and kissed her on her cheeks.
“Harlene, Let’s go. Baka maiwan ka sa flight mo.” Sabi ni Tito.
“Tara po. Naghihintay na rin po doon si Ivan.”
And we went off.
Ivan is my ex-boyfriend slash bestfriend. Yea. He’s my ex. He helped me para maging ganito ako.Yung new me. Ung UPDATED VERSION OF ME. Naging kami ni One year. Pero in that one year, I never loved him as my boyfriend. I just love him as my BESTFRIEND. SO ayun, I breaked up with him. Kasi alam ko na nasasaktan na siya, He knows about Nathan. My ex. I go here para magbago para kay nate. And now im going back para ipakita ang bagong AKO sa kanya.
We’re here in the airport. AI saw ivan sitting on a bench there, I hurriedly go to him and hugged him.
“Ivan..I`ll miss you bestfriend.” I said crying.
“Oww harlene, I’ll miss you too. You`ll be back here right ?”
“ofcoarse I will.”
“Bye Harls. I love you.”
“bye Vanz. Love you too Best.” The I kisses him on his cheeks.
Lumingon ako kay tito.
“bye po tito.”
“bye dear. Balik ka ha!”
“oh, sure tito.”
“o sige na punta kana dun.”
“BYE IVAN.BYE TITO….”
Then nagcheck-in na ako.[/quote]
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sana may magbasa. ; )
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- _maria07_
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
first????...hehehe!!!
ganda!!!update na po!!!!
excited na po aku!!
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- imyours_24
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
Next na!
Teka, medio naguluhan ako pero Okay na okay na!
San ba si Ivan and tito chorbaness hahaha. )
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- rebeliouz_gurl87
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
[align=center][quote][size=3]CHAPTER 2[/size]
Nandito na ako sa airplane. Hmm. Excited na talaga ako. No one knows im going back home. Not mun, dad, kuya, nor the barkada. I want to surprise ‘em all.
If you’re asking the new me, well, im matured now. No, not that matured ha. Slight lang. Im more than a girl but less than a lady. Basta tama lang sa age ko na Sweet 16. Hahaha.
Nakaramdam ako ng antok. Kinuha ko ang ipod at sunglass ko sa handcarry ko. Sinalpak ko ang earphone sa tenga ko. At nilagay ko sa mata ko[malamang] ang sunglass. At natulog ako.
[b]
Someone’s POV[/b]
Nakakaboring naman dito sa plane. Tss. Oww, well, okay lang pala. May maganda akong katabi. Haha. Kaso tulog. Nakashades eh. Magpapakilala nalang ako sa kanya paggising niya.
[b]
Back to Harlene’s POV[/b]
Fast Forward na natin mga mare`t pare.[kung mayroon man]
So ayun, nagising na si maganda ako. Tinanggal ko ang shades ko para naman makita ng madlang pipol na nandito sa eroplano ang aking byotipol eyes, char.
Naging matured ako pero hindi nawala yung pagiging loka-loka ko. Haha.
Nakita ko naman sa aking peripheral vision ko na parang nakatingin sa akin ireng aking katabi. Aba`y nagagandahan ata sa akin. Ow, well , maganda naman talaga ako.
“hi miss.” Ipis na mukang palaka na makapangasawa ng butiki. Napatingin naman ako sa katabi ko na tumawag sa akin.aba, hindi naman siya mukang ipis na mukang palaka na nakapangasawa nng butiki. May mukha siya. [malamang. Sino ba ang wala. LOL] pogi siya mga mare. So I composed myself. Masyado na akong naloloka sa kakyutan nito. Isip ka ng isasagot no jara, t@nga mo talaga.
“ahh, hello.. ” - I smiled..
“im cedric. Cedric rodriguez. You. May I know your name?”
“oh, im harlene kay jara corpuz. But you can call me, harlene, kay, or jara.” I said. O diba bongga ako. Haay nako. Ang ganda mo talaga harlene.
“oww, nice to meet you kay.” Iniabot niya sa akin ang kamay niya.
“nice to meet you too, cedric.” Nakipag shake hands naman ako. Formal mode ako ngayon mga ine at utoy. Gawd. Ang lambot ng kamay niya, ayii. Hoy chansing yan. Hahaha.
“obvious naman na Filipina ka, so san ka sa pinas??” aba, aba. Interesado sa akin itonglalaking ito. Siguro crush ako. Haha
“ahh, sa sta, rosa laguna ako. Sa bel air.” Sabi ko.haha. baka iistalk ako nito. Ai hindi . mali mali.. hinsi stalker, pogi eh. Secret admirer sigguro. Haha oi jara. Umayos ka nga.[/quote]
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sana may magabsa pa.
ini-edit ko ung chap 1. basahin nyo naalng ulti.
ini-edit ko ung chap 1. basahin nyo naalng ulti.
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- frozenharlequin11
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
nice!
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- brokenheartsrings025
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
nice update
next na...
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- trisha_trisha
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
update!
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- imyours_24
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Re: [align=center][size=4][color=deeppink]AN UPDATED VERSION OF ME.[/color][/size] [sup]by : rebeliouz_gurl87 || ivy[/sup][/align] [b]Date Started[/b] : [u]May 05, 2010[/u] [align=right][b]Date Ended[/
nice! update! 
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