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[align=center][size=7]Buried by the sounding sea.[/size] this story is based on the poem Annabel Lee by Edgar Allan Poe[/align] [b]Chapter 1 The Maiden [/b] [quote]Shaun was a little boy back then.

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[align=center][size=7]Buried by the sounding sea.[/size] this story is based on the poem Annabel Lee by Edgar Allan Poe[/align] [b]Chapter 1 The Maiden [/b] [quote]Shaun was a little boy back then.

[align=center][size=7]Buried by the sounding sea.[/size] this story is based on the poem Annabel Lee by Edgar Allan Poe[/align] [b]Chapter 1 The Maiden [/b] [quote]Shaun was a little boy back then. He met Annabel who became his best friend. Each day they would meet in the playground where they would play together. Denny, Shaun’s close friend hangs out with them too. “Do you want ice cream?” Shaun asked both. They replied yes with a big smile. The three were very close friends. Annabel is really pretty,[i] I wonder why I feel strange when I see her[/i]. Both Denny and Shaun said to their self. As they grew up, their love for Annabel grew as they spend time with each other. Annabel was often hurt by the jealous girls. She was teased by the girls because they envy her beauty. Annabel doesn’t only have a beautiful face, she has a beautiful heart which made Shaun and Denny love her. She loves Denny as a friend but how does she feel about Shaun? She always feel different when she’s around him. How can she handle her situation right now?[/quote]

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Re: [align=center][size=7]Buried by the sounding sea.[/size] this story is based on the poem Annabel Lee by Edgar Allan Poe[/align] [b]Chapter 1 The Maiden [/b] [quote]Shaun was a little boy back then.

Hmm... looks interesting. Though this line needs some fixing. [quote=Daniera_cHan122;#3601449;1274803127]Both Denny and Shaun said to their self. As they grew up, their love for Annabel grew as they spend time with each other.[/quote] Because they're referring to their selves, so the sentences must imply to them. ;) Just use double quotes for monologues or contextual dialect. ;) Hope to see more. :thumbsup:

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Re: [align=center][size=7]Buried by the sounding sea.[/size] this story is based on the poem Annabel Lee by Edgar Allan Poe[/align] [b]Chapter 1 The Maiden [/b] [quote]Shaun was a little boy back then.

[quote=Ephemeral;#3601480;1274804311]Just use double quotes for monologues or contextual dialect.[/quote] okay...haha..i was feeling stupid when i wrote that part.:lol3::lol3:
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