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[quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img] Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
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[quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img] Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
[quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img]
Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote]
[quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
Yamamoto Taku[/quote]
[quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled9.jpg[/img]
Saionji Sorano[/quote]
[quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled8.jpg[/img]
Tanaka Shigekazu[/quote]
[quote]Genre: Comedy, Drama, Romance, School Life[/quote]
[align=center][b]Summary[/b][/align]
Jimyoin Maeko is the "Miss Popular" of A.U. the best school in the prefecture..The brains and beauty...that's how they describe her...what anyone doesn't know is that behind her smile and laughter is a sad past...
Maeko used to live happily in the countryside with her family and with Yamamoto Taku, her bestfriend and first love...During the Spring Saionji Sorano came...she was a shy girl,very quiet and made no friends...Maeko who was also called "Riin" decided to be with her...making them best of friends...at first Taku didnt like Sarano,but as time past a deeper attraction developed between Taku and Sarano...Riin didnt know any of this was happening...until one day Taku confessed his liking to Sarano...Because of that Maeko, decided to move out of the countryside to forget everything...
Now she is living peacefully and away from the people who broke her heart...But Summer Vacation was coming and her mother told her that she was very ill...thus making her no choice but to come back to the place where she hated the most...When she came home she discovered that Taku and Sarano broke up...Will there be any chance for Riin and Taku to reconcile...and to develop deeper feelings...that may result to...[b]LOVE[/b]?
[b][quote]Author's Note:
I hope and pray that you will support this story...your comment will be highly appreciated...sorry if there's wrong grammar or usage[/quote]
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Last edited by crybyebye (2010-06-08 07:27:06)
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- aries_veng05
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img] Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
uhm aabangan ko to^_^
sana hnd mtagal ung updates!
hehe go for it 
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- crybyebye
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img] Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
[quote][b]aries_veng05 [/b]
uhm aabangan ko to^_^
sana hnd mtagal ung updates!
hehe go for it [/quote]
hehehe...salamat sa suporta...sorry kung medyo natagalan yung update...heh...ill update now 
[quote]To the readers,
I'm using some Japanese words...hope it's okay...sa Japan naman ang setting nung story...pasensya kung medyo OA...[/quote]
[b]Chapter 1[/b]
[b]*KRIING* *KRIING*[/b]
"hello?"
"RIINN!!!"
"Aww...Ma wag ka pong sumigaw...nakaloudspeaker po ako..." i scolded her
"sorry...[b]*giggle*[/b]"
"Ma...bat tumawag ka?" i giggled too...Mama is just so energetic
"Haha...wala lang...gusto ko lang kumustahin ka..."
i smiled "okay naman po ako...ayos lang ako dito..."
"buti naman...oo nga pala...malapit na ang summer break...niyo di ba..."
[b]*THUMP* *THUMP*[/b]
[i]parang...parang...may mangyayaring...[b]HINDI KO MAGUGUSTUHAN[/b]....[/i]
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[b]*DING DONG DANG*[/b] (bell)
[b]*Sigh*[/b]
"Riin?"
"Ah...ano yun Miku?"
"sabi ko nagring na yung bell...sabay na tayong kumain?"
"Okay!!! :3 " i smiled
Kinuha ko yung baon ko...tapos sabay na kaming naglakad ni Miku papunta sa rooftop...Sa rooftop kami laging kumakain ng tanghalian ni Miku...dahil...dahil kung sa Mess Hall...
[i]"NASAN SI RIIN AT MIKU SENPAI!!!"
"i really like them...hehehe..."
"WAH!!!di sila dito kumakain ng tanghalian..bakit kaya..." 
"sayang...dinagdagan ko pa naman yung baon ko..."
"talaga...penge naman..."
[b]*SLAP*[/b]
"PARA LANG TO KAY RIIN SENPAI!!!WAG MONG GALAWIN...MAPUPUNO TO NG GERMS!!!"
"ganun!!!lumapit ka nga dito!!!"
"KYAH!!!RIIN SENPAI!!!"[/i]
"They're so annoying..." bilang sinabi ni Miku
"Heh. i think they're cute..." i smiled
"is something bothering you?" Miku suddenly asked
"Huh?" i was confused
"Kanina ka pa tahimik...hindi ka man lang gumagalaw..."
"wala...medyo...pagod lang ako...kailangan ko kasing mag-aral mabuti...malapit na kasi ang finals di ba?"
"Heh... oo nga...talaga namang mahirap maging una sa klase...grabe ang pressure" she shook her head
"Heh...oo nga..." i lied...i never knew i was a good liar...napaniwala ko si Miku...hindi naman talaga yun yung iniisip ko...it's...it's...beacause of...
"Anyways...gusto mo bang magbakasyon uli sa amin?"
"ah...hindi ako pwede ngayong summer...pinapa-uwi ako ni Mama sa amin..."
That's...my real problem...I'm...I'm going back to the...[b]COUNTRYSIDE[/b]...
[b]*Sigh*[/b]
"sayang naman" Miku sighed
[i]"Bakit po anong problema?" Mama?
"Riin...may sakit ako..."
"Po?!kumusta ka na po..."
"wag kang masyadong mag-alala...hindi naman malala..."
Mama?
"pano...hope to see you soon..."
"Opo..."
"okay...bye,bye..."
"bye"
[b]*FLAP*[/b](Cellphone closes)[/i]
[b]I'm...I'm really...really...going...BACK...[/b]
........[b]End[/b]..........
[/quote]
hehehe...salamat sa suporta...sorry kung medyo natagalan yung update...heh...ill update now
[quote]To the readers,
I'm using some Japanese words...hope it's okay...sa Japan naman ang setting nung story...pasensya kung medyo OA...[/quote]
[b]Chapter 1[/b]
[b]*KRIING* *KRIING*[/b]
"hello?"
"RIINN!!!"
"Aww...Ma wag ka pong sumigaw...nakaloudspeaker po ako..." i scolded her
"sorry...[b]*giggle*[/b]"
"Ma...bat tumawag ka?" i giggled too...Mama is just so energetic
"Haha...wala lang...gusto ko lang kumustahin ka..."
i smiled "okay naman po ako...ayos lang ako dito..."
"buti naman...oo nga pala...malapit na ang summer break...niyo di ba..."
[b]*THUMP* *THUMP*[/b]
[i]parang...parang...may mangyayaring...[b]HINDI KO MAGUGUSTUHAN[/b]....[/i]
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[b]*DING DONG DANG*[/b] (bell)
[b]*Sigh*[/b]
"Riin?"
"Ah...ano yun Miku?"
"sabi ko nagring na yung bell...sabay na tayong kumain?"
"Okay!!! :3 " i smiled
Kinuha ko yung baon ko...tapos sabay na kaming naglakad ni Miku papunta sa rooftop...Sa rooftop kami laging kumakain ng tanghalian ni Miku...dahil...dahil kung sa Mess Hall...
[i]"NASAN SI RIIN AT MIKU SENPAI!!!"
"i really like them...hehehe..."
"WAH!!!di sila dito kumakain ng tanghalian..bakit kaya..."
"sayang...dinagdagan ko pa naman yung baon ko..."
"talaga...penge naman..."
[b]*SLAP*[/b]
"PARA LANG TO KAY RIIN SENPAI!!!WAG MONG GALAWIN...MAPUPUNO TO NG GERMS!!!"
"ganun!!!lumapit ka nga dito!!!"
"KYAH!!!RIIN SENPAI!!!"[/i]
"They're so annoying..." bilang sinabi ni Miku
"Heh. i think they're cute..." i smiled
"is something bothering you?" Miku suddenly asked
"Huh?" i was confused
"Kanina ka pa tahimik...hindi ka man lang gumagalaw..."
"wala...medyo...pagod lang ako...kailangan ko kasing mag-aral mabuti...malapit na kasi ang finals di ba?"
"Heh... oo nga...talaga namang mahirap maging una sa klase...grabe ang pressure" she shook her head
"Heh...oo nga..." i lied...i never knew i was a good liar...napaniwala ko si Miku...hindi naman talaga yun yung iniisip ko...it's...it's...beacause of...
"Anyways...gusto mo bang magbakasyon uli sa amin?"
"ah...hindi ako pwede ngayong summer...pinapa-uwi ako ni Mama sa amin..."
That's...my real problem...I'm...I'm going back to the...[b]COUNTRYSIDE[/b]...
[b]*Sigh*[/b]
"sayang naman" Miku sighed
[i]"Bakit po anong problema?" Mama?
"Riin...may sakit ako..."
"Po?!kumusta ka na po..."
"wag kang masyadong mag-alala...hindi naman malala..."
Mama?
"pano...hope to see you soon..."
"Opo..."
"okay...bye,bye..."
"bye"
[b]*FLAP*[/b](Cellphone closes)[/i]
[b]I'm...I'm really...really...going...BACK...[/b]
........[b]End[/b]..........
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- LADYLIAH17
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img] Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
OMG! JUNG RYEO WON<3 MY FAVE ACTRESS. Wait ill be back. xD
Wait ill be back. xD
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- pauline416
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Re: [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img] Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
Hahaha...uhmm...wait...Super Junior?
tapos...yan yung leading man sa Kim Sam Soon?
hahaha..I love them 
Ill support this...its a cool story...hehehe
Ill support this...its a cool story...hehehe
Last edited by pauline416 (2010-06-08 07:44:54)
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- crybyebye
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img] Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
[quote]LADYLIAH17
OMG! JUNG RYEO WON<3 MY FAVE ACTRESS. Wait ill be back. xD[/quote]
Okay...ill wait..hehe 
[quote]pauline416
Hahaha...uhmm...wait...Super Junior?
tapos...yan yung leading man sa Kim Sam Soon?
hahaha..I love them
Ill support this...its a cool story...hehehe[/quote]
Hahaha...oo...sila nga...i love them too...but as of now...im really in to mangas...kaya ang mga crush ko ngayon mga drawing na blacki and white..hahaha..whatever..hehehe... 
Here's the the update guys...
[b]Chapter 1.1- New Leaf[/b]
[b]*VROOM!!* *VROOM!!* *VROOM!!*[/b]
"uhmm...dito na lang po..." I stopped the car in front of my house...
"Miss...ibababa ko pa po ba yung gamit niyo sa likod?" tanong sa akin nung driver
"Opo..salamat po..."
I opened the door and i went outside...nilagay nung driver yung maleta ko malapit sa akin...
"Salamat po..." i thanked him
I watched him as he gets into the car...and as he drive off...nung hindi ko na nakita yung taxi na sinakyan ko...I inhaled...Ngayon ko lang naramdaman...yung kakaibang aura sa labas ng bahay namin...
I'm...I'm...[b]SCARED[/b]...
[b]*CREAK*[/b] i opened the door
"RIIN!!!" dali-daling tumakbo si Mama papalapit sa akin
*HUG* *HUG* *KISS* *KISS* *KISS*
"Mama..." i giggled "andito na po ako..." Im very happy...
"Miss na miss ko na ang baby ko..." [b]*HUG TIGHTENS*[/b]
"Huh?" nagkatinginan kami ni Mama...
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[b]*SILENCE*[/b]
"Mama...may sakit...ka?" i pointed her
"Heh...about that..." kinamot niya yung ulo niya...
[i]Ibig sabihin ba nito...?[/i]
[b]"MAMA!!!"[/b] i shouted 
"HOHOHOHO" she laughed
[i][b]WHAT A WICKED WITCH...PANO KO SYA NAGING MAMA!!!IM DOOMED!!![/b][/i]
"Mama...bakit mo pa po ba ako dito pina-uwi?" i complained...[i]Nakakainis naman si Mama[/i] 
May biglang gumalaw sa likod ni Mama...i was distracted...kaya tumingin ako dun...
"Riin?"
"Papa..." i smiled...
"RIIN!!!" tumakbo si Papa papalapit sa akin...
*HUH* *HUG* *HUG* *KISS* *KISS*
"Miss na miss ko na ang baby ko..." [b]*HUG TIGHTENS*[/b]
wait a minute... 
"Papa..." nakatinginan kami ni Papa
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[b]*SILENCE*[/b]
"May alam po...ba...kayo sa mga pangyayaring...ito?" i pointed him...
"Heh." he smiled
[b]"PAPA!!!"[/b]
"alam ko...alam ko..." he scratched his head "Jeez...napak-init naman ng ulo mo" 
"Ma...Pa..." [i]hindi niyo kasi alam itong nararamdaman ko eh...i want to tell them that...but...this has nothing to do with them...[/i]
"Gusto lang naman namin ng Papa mo na makita ka..." Mama clung into Papa's arm...
[b]*SIGH*[/b]
"Okay...okay...i understand..." i said [i]Jeez...she's really a drama Queen...[/i]
"Hehe...good" Papa smiled
"Anyways...bakit nandito ka sa bahay?" Mama asked
"Bakit po?" i asked back
"Eh di ba ang alam mo...may sakit ako...bakit di ka pumunta sa ospital?" Mama looked very innocent
[i]Grabe...talaga siya...she really admits that she lied to me..tsk.tsk.tsk.[/i] 
"Unang-una sa lahat Mama...hindi ko naman po alam yung ospital kung saan ka nakaconfine kung sakasakali"
"Wah!...ang talino mo na talaga...akala ko...puro kasinungalingan lang yung mga report cards na ipinapadala ng school mo sa amin..." *HOHOHO* she laughed
[i][b]Mama is...kinda...ANNOYING!!![/b][/i]
*DING DONG*
"huh..may tao sa pinto...baka nandyan na ang ating special guest..."
"special guest?" i asked...
"I invited Taku over...i told him your coming...hehehe" *PEACE*
[i]TAKU?[/i] i froze
*THUMP* *THUMP* *THUMP*
My heart started to beat so fast...Mama went straight to the door..."
[i]hindi...hindi ako makahinga...[/i]
*THUMP*
*THUMP*
*THUMP*....
*CREAK* (opens the door)
[i]Taku?[/i]
*THUMP*
lumingon ako sa likod...[i]Im not ready to face him...what should i Do?[/i]
*THUMP*
[i]"EI?"[/i] 
"Huh?" Mama said
"Ma..manong?"<yung driver kanina
"Opo...nakalimutan niyo po kasing...magbayad..." heh. he smiled
Ngek...
i smiled... "eto po..." inabot ko yung bayad ko...
"salamat po..." tapos umalis na siya...
akala ko pa naman si Taku na...
*SIGH*
"ikaw talaga Riin..." biglang sinabi ni Papa
"Sorry man..." hehehe 
"hala...tayo na nga...akin na yang mga gamit mo..."
"Ay oo nga...eto po...Heh" tumalikod na ako kay Mama na nasa pinto...tapos inabot ko na kay Papa yung gamit ko...
"WOAH!!!TAKU!!!" biglang napasigaw si Mama
*THUMP*
"Magandang umaga po..."
Lumingon ako sa likod...
*THUMP*
I couldn't breath...
"Taku?" was all i can say.....
........................................End.............
hope everyone enjoyed it...your comments will be highly appreciated...T.C. always hehehe...* peace *
Wait ill be back. xD[/quote]
Okay...ill wait..hehe
[quote]pauline416
Hahaha...uhmm...wait...Super Junior?
tapos...yan yung leading man sa Kim Sam Soon?
hahaha..I love them
Ill support this...its a cool story...hehehe[/quote]
Hahaha...oo...sila nga...i love them too...but as of now...im really in to mangas...kaya ang mga crush ko ngayon mga drawing na blacki and white..hahaha..whatever..hehehe...
Here's the the update guys...
[b]Chapter 1.1- New Leaf[/b]
[b]*VROOM!!* *VROOM!!* *VROOM!!*[/b]
"uhmm...dito na lang po..." I stopped the car in front of my house...
"Miss...ibababa ko pa po ba yung gamit niyo sa likod?" tanong sa akin nung driver
"Opo..salamat po..."
I opened the door and i went outside...nilagay nung driver yung maleta ko malapit sa akin...
"Salamat po..." i thanked him
I watched him as he gets into the car...and as he drive off...nung hindi ko na nakita yung taxi na sinakyan ko...I inhaled...Ngayon ko lang naramdaman...yung kakaibang aura sa labas ng bahay namin...
I'm...I'm...[b]SCARED[/b]...
[b]*CREAK*[/b] i opened the door
"RIIN!!!" dali-daling tumakbo si Mama papalapit sa akin
*HUG* *HUG* *KISS* *KISS* *KISS*
"Mama..." i giggled "andito na po ako..." Im very happy...
"Miss na miss ko na ang baby ko..." [b]*HUG TIGHTENS*[/b]
"Huh?" nagkatinginan kami ni Mama...
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[b]*SILENCE*[/b]
"Mama...may sakit...ka?" i pointed her
"Heh...about that..." kinamot niya yung ulo niya...
[i]Ibig sabihin ba nito...?[/i]
[b]"MAMA!!!"[/b] i shouted
"HOHOHOHO" she laughed
[i][b]WHAT A WICKED WITCH...PANO KO SYA NAGING MAMA!!!IM DOOMED!!![/b][/i]
"Mama...bakit mo pa po ba ako dito pina-uwi?" i complained...[i]Nakakainis naman si Mama[/i]
May biglang gumalaw sa likod ni Mama...i was distracted...kaya tumingin ako dun...
"Riin?"
"Papa..." i smiled...
"RIIN!!!" tumakbo si Papa papalapit sa akin...
*HUH* *HUG* *HUG* *KISS* *KISS*
"Miss na miss ko na ang baby ko..." [b]*HUG TIGHTENS*[/b]
wait a minute...
"Papa..." nakatinginan kami ni Papa
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[b]*SILENCE*[/b]
"May alam po...ba...kayo sa mga pangyayaring...ito?" i pointed him...
"Heh." he smiled
[b]"PAPA!!!"[/b]
"alam ko...alam ko..." he scratched his head "Jeez...napak-init naman ng ulo mo"
"Ma...Pa..." [i]hindi niyo kasi alam itong nararamdaman ko eh...i want to tell them that...but...this has nothing to do with them...[/i]
"Gusto lang naman namin ng Papa mo na makita ka..." Mama clung into Papa's arm...
[b]*SIGH*[/b]
"Okay...okay...i understand..." i said [i]Jeez...she's really a drama Queen...[/i]
"Hehe...good" Papa smiled
"Anyways...bakit nandito ka sa bahay?" Mama asked
"Bakit po?" i asked back
"Eh di ba ang alam mo...may sakit ako...bakit di ka pumunta sa ospital?" Mama looked very innocent
[i]Grabe...talaga siya...she really admits that she lied to me..tsk.tsk.tsk.[/i]
"Unang-una sa lahat Mama...hindi ko naman po alam yung ospital kung saan ka nakaconfine kung sakasakali"
"Wah!...ang talino mo na talaga...akala ko...puro kasinungalingan lang yung mga report cards na ipinapadala ng school mo sa amin..." *HOHOHO* she laughed
[i][b]Mama is...kinda...ANNOYING!!![/b][/i]
*DING DONG*
"huh..may tao sa pinto...baka nandyan na ang ating special guest..."
"special guest?" i asked...
"I invited Taku over...i told him your coming...hehehe" *PEACE*
[i]TAKU?[/i] i froze
*THUMP* *THUMP* *THUMP*
My heart started to beat so fast...Mama went straight to the door..."
[i]hindi...hindi ako makahinga...[/i]
*THUMP*
*THUMP*
*THUMP*....
*CREAK* (opens the door)
[i]Taku?[/i]
*THUMP*
lumingon ako sa likod...[i]Im not ready to face him...what should i Do?[/i]
*THUMP*
[i]"EI?"[/i]
"Huh?" Mama said
"Ma..manong?"<yung driver kanina
"Opo...nakalimutan niyo po kasing...magbayad..." heh. he smiled
Ngek...
i smiled... "eto po..." inabot ko yung bayad ko...
"salamat po..." tapos umalis na siya...
akala ko pa naman si Taku na...
*SIGH*
"ikaw talaga Riin..." biglang sinabi ni Papa
"Sorry man..." hehehe
"hala...tayo na nga...akin na yang mga gamit mo..."
"Ay oo nga...eto po...Heh" tumalikod na ako kay Mama na nasa pinto...tapos inabot ko na kay Papa yung gamit ko...
"WOAH!!!TAKU!!!" biglang napasigaw si Mama
*THUMP*
"Magandang umaga po..."
Lumingon ako sa likod...
*THUMP*
I couldn't breath...
"Taku?" was all i can say.....
........................................End.............
hope everyone enjoyed it...your comments will be highly appreciated...T.C. always hehehe...* peace *
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- zheaisthria
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled6.jpg[/img] Jimyoin Maeko "Riin"[/quote] [quote][img]http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss217/pauline416/untitled3-2.jpg[/img]
new!!!
i like it i like it
and so the characters..
keep it up
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