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i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
- huggable_kc
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i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment
well, this is a story of my own.. some are true.. some are not.. pero yung mga pangalan ay totoo except for the boy's name! all my friends' name are here.. pero and isa lang ang hindi totoo talaga! ang pangalan niya!
[align=center][b]Ang Dakilang Tanga![/b]
by: [b] kryzza marie esguerra calo[/b][/align]
introduction:
characters: [i]kryzza, sweet, darling, aneth, jessa, jean, jesrel, ram, marsha, josh, paolo, ryan, bryan, clied, kirven, harrold, nikko, archie, mark at loyd[/i]
name: [i]kryzza marie esguerra calo[/i]
date of birth:[i] August 23, 1997[/i]
year && sec:[i] I-Sampaguita[/i]
circle of friends: [i] sweet, darling, jean, aneth, jessa, ram, jesrel, eric, nikko && paolo[/i]
about me:[i] "what i do": i read good books. i goto malls, i buy cools shirt, i swim very well && play badminton often much as i listen to good music, i rwally love watching anime' && i ilove photography!
" what im not in favor of": me being unexpressive, eating vegiies, fake friends, and nackstabbers too, strict teachers, feelers and not to mention o.a people make me angry, pero higit sa lahat ng mga ayaw ko.. ay yung mga taong magaling manloko![/i]
name: [i] josh nicholas montilla[/i]
date of birth:[i] january 16, 1994[/i]
circle of friends: mark, loyd, archie, paolo, nikko, harrold, kirven, clied, bryan, ryan.
about me: [i]"what i do:" i play dota. do facebook. make girls cry, cut classes, skip school. rap and beat box
"what im not in favor of:" ang mga naninira sa kanyang mga kaibigan at pinipilit ang ayaw niya sa kanya![/i]
*mahal kita,mahal mo siya, okay lang yun. pero pano' kapag napagod na ako sa kakahintay?*
i hope marami ang mag support nito! ipost ko po yung next chappie mamaya.. pag may magcomment poh 
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- secrec
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
interesting. . .
Subscribed. . .
keep it up. . .
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- huggable_kc
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
[align=center][b]view from the past[/b][/align]
boys & girls shouting: woooo! talo na kayo! wooo! wla kayong ma-say sa amin!
ako: uuy ndi kaya! feeler nio! tingnan natin!
sweet: echuus nio nmn! wait and see !
loyd: ang ingay nio! wla nmn kayong magagawa! hahahhahaha
all boys: hahahhahahaha! hahahahah!
after 15 mins
josh: na uuhaw na ako..
sweet: ako rin.. kryzz pa inum nmn ng tubig ooh?
ako: naah ayoko.. baka ndi na ako palabasin.. useless narin.. kc pag ndi ako mka labas.. ndi rin kya mkakainum ng water 
*childish tone-- bata pa po kc ako nun ee! *
sweet: okay2x: bili nlng kaya tayo??
josh: heleeer! alas dose na kaya ng gabi! meron pa kayang store na bukas ngayun??
ako: meron kaya! sa convenience store kaya! meron!
sweet: anu kaba! ee ang layu kya nun!
ako: gusto nio bang imunom ng water oh ano?? eeh di tiisin nio!
narrator: na wasak ang kwentohan kase may dumating na sasakyan...
ako: oh my!naaa andito na cla mama atsaka ci papa.. huhuhu gusto ko pa mag laro *crying
the day after that...
ako: hmmmn?? crush ko na ata cia ...
sweet: anuh?? ha??
ako: ha ..?? wla yun... * shocks, i said it out loud* blushh
darling: uuy! narinig ko yun! kay ha!! cino kaya..
sweet: naaah ateh anu yun bah.. andaya daya nio!
days later....
months later...
years later...
sa mall...
ako: ateh.. anu gusto bilhin mu?
sweet: uhhm kahit anu na mganda okay na yunn..
ako: so anu nga yun ateh?? ..
suddenly **tuuugshh**
[quote][b]Abangan:
[/b]
*aray! anu kba??! tumingin ka nga sa dinadaanan muh!
*sorry miss aah[/quote]
uhhm sasusunod npo update ko ahh?? ini-edit ko pa kasi yung story ko ee.. baka tumorrow na.. or tuesday... hope may mag comment..
*childish tone-- bata pa po kc ako nun ee! *
sweet: okay2x: bili nlng kaya tayo??
josh: heleeer! alas dose na kaya ng gabi! meron pa kayang store na bukas ngayun??
ako: meron kaya! sa convenience store kaya! meron!
sweet: anu kaba! ee ang layu kya nun!
ako: gusto nio bang imunom ng water oh ano?? eeh di tiisin nio!
narrator: na wasak ang kwentohan kase may dumating na sasakyan...
ako: oh my!naaa andito na cla mama atsaka ci papa.. huhuhu gusto ko pa mag laro *crying
the day after that...
ako: hmmmn?? crush ko na ata cia ...
sweet: anuh?? ha??
ako: ha ..?? wla yun... * shocks, i said it out loud* blushh
darling: uuy! narinig ko yun! kay ha!! cino kaya..
sweet: naaah ateh anu yun bah.. andaya daya nio!
days later....
months later...
years later...
sa mall...
ako: ateh.. anu gusto bilhin mu?
sweet: uhhm kahit anu na mganda okay na yunn..
ako: so anu nga yun ateh?? ..
suddenly **tuuugshh**
[quote][b]Abangan:
[/b]
*aray! anu kba??! tumingin ka nga sa dinadaanan muh!
*sorry miss aah[/quote]
uhhm sasusunod npo update ko ahh?? ini-edit ko pa kasi yung story ko ee.. baka tumorrow na.. or tuesday... hope may mag comment..
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- rmarquez15
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- 1969-12-31
Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
oww.. ung crush nia cguro yun.
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- huggable_kc
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
[quote=rmarquez15;#3645638;1278207557]oww.. ung crush nia cguro yun. ...
hmmmmn? crush kaya yun? whahahah 
P lets see[/quote]
[b]Part 1[/b]
[i]GRADE SIX SEC. ARCHIMEDES S.Y. 2009-2010[/i]
ako: may!! imiss you! super!
may: imisshu tuu! hoy! pasalubong ko asan na?!
ako: SHORE OY! eeh ang pasalubong ko kaya?? asan na rin?!
may: eee.. ako muna! ako na una eeh!
ako: eeh antagal kuh kaya nag wait para dun!
may: oh okay 
lavya beshie
ako: lavyah too beshie kow!
....
*[i]*riiiiing[/i]
ako: oops! RECESS na pala! yuuuum my FAV. subject! luuuv!
may: aa oo nga pla beshie, nkinig kba sa snabi ni maam kanina??
ako: uhhm? NORMAL beshiie HINDI :'> whahahah yah know me D
may: ay uu nga pla.. nkalimutan ko.. ndi ka pla interesado sa mga sinasabi ng mga guro dito nuuh? anyweis--> after snack daw. uhm wulah tayong class pati rin sa afternoon.. D
ako: *eyes wide open* are --- you ---- sure ????.! ) yeyp! mall tayuh..
may: ahh ayuko! papagalitan ako nina mommy eeh
ako: oh okay! cgeh! si ateh sweet nlng isasama ko!
may: fine by me besh!
....
sa mall:
ako: ateh?! punta tayu sa arcade sec..
sweet: oh okay.! anu gagawin natin dun?
ako: what do you expect? eh di mag lalaro ng games dun! NORMAAAL!
sweet: okaaay!
ako:ay mamaya nlng.. punta muna tayo sa department store.. may titignan lang ako..
sweet: .... okay
ako: ateh .... ?? anuh guxtoh mung bilhin??
sweet:kahit nu na maganda.. okay na yun
suddenly*tuuuugshhh*
ako: aray! nu kba??! tumingin ka nga sa dinadaanan muh!
unknown guy: sorry miss aah ... uuhm??
ako: *staring at him* 'you look familiar??? i wonder... ateh?? do you know him from somewhere..
sweet: i think so.. ithink his name is JOSH?
unknown guy: ikaw rin.. parang kilala kitah ... ikaw ba c ... c..... c.... kryzza? at ikaw si sweet?
ako: is that you josh?!!! where did the lord placed you in all those years??!hahah joke.. di nga.. asan ka ba tlga nanggaling aah?? asan ka nag aaral..!??
josh: pumunta ako sa lugar ng nanay ko nun... kamusta na kayo duun sa lugar natin?
sweet: same as always josh! YUCKY parin!
ako: uu nga! hate ku tlga lugar na yun! cgeh ah?? bili muna kami...
sweet: bye josh!
josh: bye rin ,kryz, sweet, byee aah teka muna phingi ng digits nio!
ako: oh 09213236831
sweet: ah 09097942851
ako: loadan muh ako ah?! heheh joke!! P
sweet: ako rin!
.....
Arcade sec.
ako: uy! nandito kannmn?!
josh:dito fav. past time ko!
ako: okaaaaay! uuy! libre mu nmn kami...
josh: MA-SA-YA --- KA! hahah
ako: hmmmn! wait ka lang! pg ikaw mgpapalibre sa amin... tlgang ndi ka nmin lilibrehin!
josh: okay lng!
mamaya na ang next update ko ahh?! eat muna ako ng dinner!
P lets see[/quote]
[b]Part 1[/b]
[i]GRADE SIX SEC. ARCHIMEDES S.Y. 2009-2010[/i]
ako: may!! imiss you! super!
may: imisshu tuu! hoy! pasalubong ko asan na?!
ako: SHORE OY! eeh ang pasalubong ko kaya?? asan na rin?!
may: eee.. ako muna! ako na una eeh!
ako: eeh antagal kuh kaya nag wait para dun!
may: oh okay lavya beshie
ako: lavyah too beshie kow!
....
*[i]*riiiiing[/i]
ako: oops! RECESS na pala! yuuuum my FAV. subject! luuuv!
may: aa oo nga pla beshie, nkinig kba sa snabi ni maam kanina??
ako: uhhm? NORMAL beshiie HINDI :'> whahahah yah know me D
may: ay uu nga pla.. nkalimutan ko.. ndi ka pla interesado sa mga sinasabi ng mga guro dito nuuh? anyweis--> after snack daw. uhm wulah tayong class pati rin sa afternoon.. D
ako: *eyes wide open* are --- you ---- sure ????.! ) yeyp! mall tayuh..
may: ahh ayuko! papagalitan ako nina mommy eeh
ako: oh okay! cgeh! si ateh sweet nlng isasama ko!
may: fine by me besh!
....
sa mall:
ako: ateh?! punta tayu sa arcade sec..
sweet: oh okay.! anu gagawin natin dun?
ako: what do you expect? eh di mag lalaro ng games dun! NORMAAAL!
sweet: okaaay!
ako:ay mamaya nlng.. punta muna tayo sa department store.. may titignan lang ako..
sweet: .... okay
ako: ateh .... ?? anuh guxtoh mung bilhin??
sweet:kahit nu na maganda.. okay na yun
suddenly*tuuuugshhh*
ako: aray! nu kba??! tumingin ka nga sa dinadaanan muh!
unknown guy: sorry miss aah ... uuhm??
ako: *staring at him* 'you look familiar??? i wonder... ateh?? do you know him from somewhere..
sweet: i think so.. ithink his name is JOSH?
unknown guy: ikaw rin.. parang kilala kitah ... ikaw ba c ... c..... c.... kryzza? at ikaw si sweet?
ako: is that you josh?!!! where did the lord placed you in all those years??!hahah joke.. di nga.. asan ka ba tlga nanggaling aah?? asan ka nag aaral..!??
josh: pumunta ako sa lugar ng nanay ko nun... kamusta na kayo duun sa lugar natin?
sweet: same as always josh! YUCKY parin!
ako: uu nga! hate ku tlga lugar na yun! cgeh ah?? bili muna kami...
sweet: bye josh!
josh: bye rin ,kryz, sweet, byee aah teka muna phingi ng digits nio!
ako: oh 09213236831
sweet: ah 09097942851
ako: loadan muh ako ah?! heheh joke!! P
sweet: ako rin!
.....
Arcade sec.
ako: uy! nandito kannmn?!
josh:dito fav. past time ko!
ako: okaaaaay! uuy! libre mu nmn kami...
josh: MA-SA-YA --- KA! hahah
ako: hmmmn! wait ka lang! pg ikaw mgpapalibre sa amin... tlgang ndi ka nmin lilibrehin!
josh: okay lng!
mamaya na ang next update ko ahh?! eat muna ako ng dinner!
Last edited by huggable_kc (2010-07-04 06:32:24)
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- rmarquez15
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- 1969-12-31
Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
har har.
cute.
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- huggable_kc
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- 1969-12-31
Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
[b]Part2[/b]
[i]weeks later ...[/i]
[quote][i]*riiing!!!!......riing!......riiing!!
ako: as en?? may ganun tlga? cnu kaya tuh?? sosyal ko ah.. may unknown caller na pla akoh! hahhha
ako: hello???
unknown but familiar voice: hi! asan ka ngayun?
ako: huh?? hus dis??
unknown: josh uy!
ako: aaah! NORMAAL! nasa bahay! asan pa!
josh: nu gawa mu jan?
ako: wlaa! bored nga ako eeh!
josh: simple lng ang sagut jan!
ako: what?
josh: lakwartsa tayuh?
ako: heleer! wlang ibang mgandang puntahan dito nuuh! !
josh: mall nlng tayuh! libre ko nmn ee!
ako: ooows?? sureness?! hahahaha cge2x! libre muh aah?
josh: cine kaya tayu?
ako: ay ayuko.. ndi ko guxto ang mga palabas ngayun!
josh: aa ok.. gala nalang tayu dun!
ako: okay! kain rin tayu huh? ndi ko guxto pagkain dito sa bahay nmin
josh: okay... 1pm k??
ako: naah 1:30.. ok lng?
josh: ikaw bhala.. oo cge 1:30 na
ako: byeeee !
--tooot-
ako:* anu kaya nkain nun??[/i][/quote]
later na po ang continuation ng short update ko po ahh?! after ng class ko mamaya aah.. promise!
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- imyours_24
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
AYEEEE. First to comment!
UPDATE na po. :"">
I love it. Josh, my bestfriend's name.
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- huggable_kc
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
[b]Part2 2.2[/b]
* so the hour came na.. kami lng dalawa.. sa mall, kain sa mcdo ..-- so is it like a date?
*blushes* waaaah? what am i thinking? bakit naman "date" ang tawag dito? its just a simple outing with old friends. thats it.! stop it kryzza! its not what you think it is.. your over doing it!
[i]naputul ang pag sasalita ko sa sarili ng may mag doorbell..[/i]
*dingdong*......
ako: who is it?
no answer...
> binuksan ko na ang door..*maaan! whos this guy? he looks cute from here..
josh: uy.. nandyan kana pala.. tara, punta na tayu
ako: o-o-k .. *guush! akala ko pa nmn gwapooo.. hmmmf! KJ!
josh: uuy? anu na?
ako: tara!
...
mall:
guard: goodmorning, welcome to gaisano.
ako: josh.. asan tayu pupunta???
josh: anu? kain muna or gala2x?
ako: kain muna...!
josh: asan tayu kkain?
ako: McDo!!
josh: ok.. tara
[i]while walking... may tatlong guyz na papunta sa amin...[/i]
guy1: hi tol. ipakilala mu nmn ako sa kaibagan muh...
si guy2&3 tahimik lng...
josh: ayuko nga
su ayun.. umalis na silang tatlo..
ako: friends mu cla?
josh: ndi ah! ndi ko nga cla kilala.!
ako: bakit tol tawag sayuh? dba yun yung tawagan nio nung una? sa barkada imean..
josh: ndi nga!
ako: okay! sorry na nga!
josh: punta na nga tayu ng mcdo
ako: fine by me... sorry aah..
*tahimik ka nga kryzza.. tingnan muh.. sa kadaldalan muh.. tingnan mu! galit na cia sayu!
sa mcdo:
josh: nu guxto mu kainin? *sabay smile
ako: chicken nlng.. ikaw na bhala sa iba..
josh: okay..
ako: asan tayu uupo?
josh: sa itaas nlng tayu uupo.. cge. mauna kana dun.. susunod nlng ako..
ako: okay.. atsaka coke float aah?
josh: okay..
[i]ako at the table:[/i]
* dude? tama ba yung nkita kuh? was he really smiling at me?shocks and yucks..! what am i thinking ? for shure meron na ciang girlfriend nuh! sa cuteness niang yun!
[i]while i was talking to my self... i heard voices of a girl and a boy near the stairs..[/i]
girl: hey babe... bat ka nandito?
boy: kumakain normal.. anu ba dapat gawis sa isang fastfood.. and dont you babe2x me! alam nmn ng lahat na wla na tayu!
girl: ok-ok.. wag mxado mainit ang ulo... so kasama mu pla yung babaeng yun!
boy: wag na wag mu syang pag tripan! ako tlaga ang susugod sa bahay nio!
girl: at anu?! anu? aber?! at anu nmn ang gagawin mu sa bahay namin?
si boy natahimik...
girl: oh see.! wla ka magagawa.. at wla kang pakealam kc wla kng karapatan sa akin.. ndi kita ka ano2x. at anu nmn kung pagtripan ku yun? anung karapatan mu sakanya? bakit girlfriend mu ba cya?!
boy: umalis kna!
girl: fine... bye babe
boy: stop it
[i]after a few seconds...[/i]
ako: uy.. ikaw na pla yun..
josh: oo.. cge kain na tayo *smiles
ako: will you quit that? ..
josh: what?
ako: stop smiling okay?
josh: okay... *sabay pout ng lips.. at puppy dog eyes
ako: and stop doing that also...
josh: kain ka na nga..
ako: haiii*
.. kain na nga kami....
[i]time passed by.. tapos na kami... then pag tingin ko sa watch kuh, whoa????! its 3 oclock already?? [/i]
ako: oh my! late na pala... may tatapusin pa ako ee..
josh: cgeh.. uwi narin ako..
ako: okay.. mauna na ako...
josh: hatid na kita...
ako: sure kah?
josh: magkalapit lng nmn tayu ng tinitirahan ee..
ako: okay bahala ka..
josh: okay lang ba kung....
[quote]abangan:
josh: okay lng ba kung...kung....
ako: nu yun?
josh kung......
ako: anu nga?[/quote]
try ko lng mag update mamaya gabi....
school muna...
.. kain na nga kami....
[i]time passed by.. tapos na kami... then pag tingin ko sa watch kuh, whoa????! its 3 oclock already?? [/i]
ako: oh my! late na pala... may tatapusin pa ako ee..
josh: cgeh.. uwi narin ako..
ako: okay.. mauna na ako...
josh: hatid na kita...
ako: sure kah?
josh: magkalapit lng nmn tayu ng tinitirahan ee..
ako: okay bahala ka..
josh: okay lang ba kung....
[quote]abangan:
josh: okay lng ba kung...kung....
ako: nu yun?
josh kung......
ako: anu nga?[/quote]
try ko lng mag update mamaya gabi....
school muna...
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- secrec
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
sure. . .
update soon.
amf. bitin, cute ng smile tapos pout then at puppy eyes,
got to try it. . .
hahaha. :3
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- huggable_kc
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
[quote=secrec;#3647982;1278471273]cute ng smile tapos pout then at puppy eyes,
got to try it. . .[/quote]
hahahah.. tlgang ginawa nia yun... pero ndi as cute as fu dog in american dragon! hahhaha
cgeh.. try kuh update later.. kain muna ako ng dinner ) godbless you all
cgeh.. try kuh update later.. kain muna ako ng dinner ) godbless you all
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- huggable_kc
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- 1969-12-31
Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
[b]Part 3[/b]
[i]alarm ringing ....
"goodmorning...goodmorning... wake up..wake up... goodmorning.... goodmorning...wake up...wake up[/i]
in my mind* uuuh! ang ingay nito! iwant to sleep more!
mom: hooy! wla kabang balak gumising dyan?! its 6:30 in the morning na! late kana! bangon ka na nga! buhusan kita ng malamig na tubig ngayun!
ako: *grumbling.... 5 more mins ma!
mom: 5 mins?! hoy! maligu kana... anu kba? may.ari ng eskwelahan?!
ako: oo
mom: aba!! maligu kna!
ako: oo na sabi
in school:
may: bash! ya know what? late ka palagi!
ako: ya i know!
may: what happened to your eyes
ako: wla.. i was thinking of sumthing the whole night...
may: okay... uh-oh! maam is here...
ako: yah better shush up besh
uh-oh.. edit ko to later... promise tlaga! il find a way to update later... gagamitin kc ni mader pc eeh... hmmmfk!
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- imyours_24
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
Yesh, I love it.
Update!
Update!
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- huggable_kc
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- 1969-12-31
Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
[quote=huggable_kc;#3649493;1278679560]in school:
may: bash! ya know what? late ka palagi!
ako: ya i know!
may: what happened to your eyes
ako: wla.. i was thinking of sumthing the whole night...
may: okay... uh-oh! maam is here...
ako: yah better shush up besh[/quote]
okay ...
[b]Part 3 1.2[/b]
ako: yah. shush up besh!
may:besh....
teacher: quiet !
all: yes maam
ako: (whispering) itold you to shush up.. look, pinagalitan tuloy tayu hmmmffffffffffk
may: sorry na... so who's bothering you kagabi?
ako: ah? as en? yang wlang pag dadalawang isip na pagtatanong aah! WHO diretso? owver ka besh
may: bakit? totoo nmn dba.. yu never waste yer time on thinking bout lessons... so.. it must be boys..ayyt?
ako: hmfffffffffk ewan ku.. ndi ku mgets tlga yun' kgbi.. (wondering)
[quote][b]KRYZZA'S POV[/b]
may: so whos bothering you kgabi?
ako: ah? as en? yang wlang pag dadalawang isip na pagtatanong aah! WHO diretso? owver ka besh
* actually beshie. yer right... someone's botheing me lately... problm is.. i now the boy. but.. idont understand..what im feeling..
may: bakit? totoo nmn dba.. yu never waste yer time on thinking bout lessons... so.. it must be boys..ayyt?
ako: hmfffffffffk ewan ku.. ndi ku mgets tlga yun' kgbi.. (wondering)
* hayz! kalan ba tong claas matatapos? para ma chika ko na to sa kanya??[/quote]
[i]may was holding my cellphone... when suddenly,
♫ tell me, have you ever loved and lost somebody
♫ Wished there was a chance to say I'm sorry
♫ cant you see ...[/i]
may: besh.. may ng tx.. jn montilla nkalagay ...
ako: aah okay.. akn na please..
may: oh.. i that he one er thinkn about?
ako: no uy! he's just my neighbor..
may: asuuus,,pa neighbor2x ka pa!
ako: CHILDHOOD FRIEND ko kaya yung asungut na yun.. anyweis,.. tingnan ko muna tuh..
[quote][b]message from: [i]jn montilla[/i][/b]
... >.< kryz.. free kba mamaya?...[/quote]
in my mind * tssk, anu nnmn kaya gusto nitong asungut na toh?... amfffk rereplayan ko ba toh or ndi na?
may: so anu na? anu sabi. ng "CHILDHOOD FRIEND" muh.??
ako: hes only asking if free ba ako mamaya after class..
may: anu nmn sabi muh?
ako: ayuko ko nga mag rply....
may: naah! bad ka besh... cge nah.. replyan muh na yan.. kawawa nmn..! tsssk!
teacher: KRYZZA, MAY..! xplain yourself!
ako: sorry maam.. were just planning for the project you gave us..
in my mind * haayz.. thank you lord at nakinig ako ng konte kanina..
may: yes maam.. were preparing for a very nice presenation
teacher: very well... sit down..
in my mind * sucker! were just talking with each other!
may: nice call.. its a gud thing you listened kanina. ididnt know na nkikiig ka pala sa kanya..
ako: wla.. sumthing caught my attention kanina kc eeh.. may cnabi ciang kakaiba.. not like the usual...
may: ows? anu nmn un..
ako: ewan ko.. ndi ko na rinig ng maayus ee..
may: okay....
[i]riiiing .....[/i]
ako: hayz salamat! natapus nrin!
may, bea, celine: oo nga! kakapagud ang pinapakinggan ang boses nun!
ako: uuy.. may new classmate pla tayu?
may: ha? sinu?
ako: ewan ko... narinig ku lng yung mga flirt sa rum na nag kwenuhan lang kanina.
may: huh?!
so.. yun... monday next update ko hope you liked my short update
may: sorry na... so who's bothering you kagabi?
ako: ah? as en? yang wlang pag dadalawang isip na pagtatanong aah! WHO diretso? owver ka besh
may: bakit? totoo nmn dba.. yu never waste yer time on thinking bout lessons... so.. it must be boys..ayyt?
ako: hmfffffffffk ewan ku.. ndi ku mgets tlga yun' kgbi.. (wondering)
[quote][b]KRYZZA'S POV[/b]
may: so whos bothering you kgabi?
ako: ah? as en? yang wlang pag dadalawang isip na pagtatanong aah! WHO diretso? owver ka besh
* actually beshie. yer right... someone's botheing me lately... problm is.. i now the boy. but.. idont understand..what im feeling..
may: bakit? totoo nmn dba.. yu never waste yer time on thinking bout lessons... so.. it must be boys..ayyt?
ako: hmfffffffffk ewan ku.. ndi ku mgets tlga yun' kgbi.. (wondering)
* hayz! kalan ba tong claas matatapos? para ma chika ko na to sa kanya??[/quote]
[i]may was holding my cellphone... when suddenly,
♫ tell me, have you ever loved and lost somebody
♫ Wished there was a chance to say I'm sorry
♫ cant you see ...[/i]
may: besh.. may ng tx.. jn montilla nkalagay ...
ako: aah okay.. akn na please..
may: oh.. i that he one er thinkn about?
ako: no uy! he's just my neighbor..
may: asuuus,,pa neighbor2x ka pa!
ako: CHILDHOOD FRIEND ko kaya yung asungut na yun.. anyweis,.. tingnan ko muna tuh..
[quote][b]message from: [i]jn montilla[/i][/b]
... >.< kryz.. free kba mamaya?...[/quote]
in my mind * tssk, anu nnmn kaya gusto nitong asungut na toh?... amfffk rereplayan ko ba toh or ndi na?
may: so anu na? anu sabi. ng "CHILDHOOD FRIEND" muh.??
ako: hes only asking if free ba ako mamaya after class..
may: anu nmn sabi muh?
ako: ayuko ko nga mag rply....
may: naah! bad ka besh... cge nah.. replyan muh na yan.. kawawa nmn..! tsssk!
teacher: KRYZZA, MAY..! xplain yourself!
ako: sorry maam.. were just planning for the project you gave us..
in my mind * haayz.. thank you lord at nakinig ako ng konte kanina..
may: yes maam.. were preparing for a very nice presenation
teacher: very well... sit down..
in my mind * sucker! were just talking with each other!
may: nice call.. its a gud thing you listened kanina. ididnt know na nkikiig ka pala sa kanya..
ako: wla.. sumthing caught my attention kanina kc eeh.. may cnabi ciang kakaiba.. not like the usual...
may: ows? anu nmn un..
ako: ewan ko.. ndi ko na rinig ng maayus ee..
may: okay....
[i]riiiing .....[/i]
ako: hayz salamat! natapus nrin!
may, bea, celine: oo nga! kakapagud ang pinapakinggan ang boses nun!
ako: uuy.. may new classmate pla tayu?
may: ha? sinu?
ako: ewan ko... narinig ku lng yung mga flirt sa rum na nag kwenuhan lang kanina.
may: huh?!
so.. yun... monday next update ko hope you liked my short update
Last edited by huggable_kc (2010-07-15 08:46:16)
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Re: i hope na may support ng kwento ko. its my first time to write in here and im trying to finnish this one! ijust hope na may mag comment o kaya mag compliment well, this is a story of my own.. some are
ooops.. maybe later... icame out late sa school eh.. idont have time na.. istill have to make my proj.. also my assignment and eat.. later okay?
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