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  2008-06-18 07:52:31

mystic rain
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[quote]hi everyone i just like to share wat i've written for the past years this is my first story dat i wrote hope u will give a comment... :)[/quote] [img]http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk185/pr

[quote]woot! :O ahihi well thanks for the comments i really appreciate that you have time to read it![/quote] after three days... Abegail and Chelsea go together to the school. Chelsea is ready to her answer to Brandon. While on there way... Abegail,"Oh there he is!!! Hi Brandon and Torin!!!" and Torin laughed and remembering the promise of Chelsea to Brandon... Chelsea and Brandon go to the Canteen to talk.. in the canteen.. Brandon,"Do you know already you answer?" and Chelsea answered... "ahmmm... yes..." Brandon jumped for joy and said "wohoooo!!!!" While Abegail and Torin are alone in hallway... Abegail asked for a treat to Torin to go to the mall and Torin accept the request... they went to the mall and spent their time... with laughetrs... while they are in the mall... Torin,"Do you have your ideal guy?" Abegail smiled and asnwered "I have of course. Every girl in this world has an ideal guy to be with them forever." Abegail told Torin about it... While they are talking Abegail stepped on a scattered toys in the childrens center of the mall.. Abegail fell.. but Torin saved her... They go home by riding a taxi while they are already in the house... Abegail,"I hope next time we could do the same thing" Torin smiled to Abegail and said "Yes,I enjoyed to be with you..."

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