[quote=Sunshine0918]Pls Comment In My story Pls!!! I love your Story Good Job !! kEEP up the great work!!! Pls Go ONLINE IN YM!!![/quote] I can't. I told you. YM is not working properly now. I hate it so much. Anyways, dahil marami ang naghahanap, here's [b]Chapter 17[/b]. [b] CHAPTER 17:[/b] "I'm home! Where' my ever-so-cute sis, huh?" "Ate! You're here na pala. Are you busy?" "Not that much. Why?" "I need to tell you something [b]PERSONAL[/b]." "OK. Go on. " "So it goes like this..." Blablabla... Kwento ako ng Kwento... Blablabla... "No way..." "I'm so sorry I didn't tell you" "It's OK sis. I'm the one feeling sorry for you and Raf. Humanda yang Ken na yan sakin. " "Whoa, ate, easy lang..." "Haha... Cge na nga... " "Ate, I really need help. Ano na gagawin ko?" "Well, there's nothing you really [b]CAN[/b] do. Try sneaking to the hospital and see how Raf is doing." "Eh, what about Michael?" "I said "[b]sneak[/b]", meaning try to get away form Michael for a while. "OK." "Good Luck sis! Tulog na ako. 2 na eh. Haha... " "OK sis. Goodnight." "Nyt..." Ano na gagawin ko??? Ikaw din kasi Anna eh! Pumayag ka pa dun sa date niyo ni Ken. A big turn-off talaga... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [b][the next day][/b] gumising talaga ako ng maaga... 5 pa lang gising na ako... though school starts next week pa, i wanted to wake up early... i want to see the sunrise by the hill... at least it would give me inspiration to think, diba? "Bye Ate. " "San ka pupunta?" "Maglalakad lang..." "Ah OK. Mag-ingat. Tulog muna ako. Antok pa ako eh..." "OK." Ang sarap ng feeling... So cool... So relaxing... So-- "Mind if I sit here with you?" What the? Sino yu-- "Michael?" "Hi Anna. " "Hi. Bat ka nandito?" "Ken showed me this place. I wanted to go here early in the morning to see the sunrise." "Ahh... OK." "Eh, ikaw? What are you doing here?" "Same with you. To see the sunrise. " "Oh, I see. " So there we were... Sitting on top of the hill... Waiting for the sunrise... And while waiting, he actually [b]started the conversation[/b]... I though he was shy... "Anna..." "Yeap? " "Did you ever get the feeling, that you were stopped from doing what you want?" "Oh yeah. Lots of times. " "Really?" "Yup. You?" "Yeah..." "Oh... But why'd you ask?" "Nothing... " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [i][to be continued... ][/i]