well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 tnx for reading in advanced pls play this vid when reading the poem if u want.., that's one of the tool i use to make the poem [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LT-CcHE1MNY[/youtube] [align=center] [b]You're The One[/b] When i first see you, i don't care who u are, but when u make my heart beat as fast as it can, I know that you're the one. when u texted me, u make me glad, when u call me you make me smile. When u first kiss me, I smile and will treasure it until i die. when we sing, you make my voice fly in the air When I see ur eyes, u make me fly. I remember the times we spent together All those times, we had a million questions All about our lonely lives that we fix everytime. When it hurts so bad, sometimes Not having you here.Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up I need your loving hands to come and pick me up And every night I miss you I can just look up And know the stars are Holding you, holding you tonight. When I make you cry, until it all end up then our worst day start, nd i don't wanna get up I'm still lonely ryt now, nd i don't know why........ but when i first see u, I know that ur the one [/align] there, haahahah, i kinda don't know wat to say , just finish it October 19,2008 12:34 AM [align=center][b]Walking[/b] When I'm walking, I see my eyes looking at you, I keep walking until you stare at me too. Then The clouds just cover the Sun, then It rains. Then You hug me with your lovely hands so tight, until the clouds get away and the sun was so bright then we run so fast to the hill now I'm so glad on what I feel While watching the glowing stars I miss you even though your so far I hope that your alright you will be always on my sight Then you ask me why, why I'm staring at you then I just start walking, walking and walking. I thought what just happen was is true, now I'm lonely wishing it's true. Until you tag my back and ask " Wanna Walk?" Now I'm glad, and we start walking, walking and walking. Finish 10:53 PM, October 20, 2008 [/align] tnx for reading...

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