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well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
- tap13
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1969-12-31
well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 
tnx for reading in advanced 
pls play this vid when reading the poem if u want.., that's one of the tool i use to make the poem
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LT-CcHE1MNY[/youtube]
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[b]You're The One[/b]
When i first see you, i don't care who u are,
but when u make my heart beat as fast as it can,
I know that you're the one.
when u texted me, u make me glad,
when u call me you make me smile.
When u first kiss me, I smile and will treasure it until i die.
when we sing, you make my voice fly in the air
When I see ur eyes, u make me fly.
I remember the times we spent together
All those times, we had a million questions
All about our lonely lives that we fix everytime.
When it hurts so bad, sometimes
Not having you here.Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you
I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you tonight.
When I make you cry, until it all end up
then our worst day start, nd i don't wanna get up
I'm still lonely ryt now, nd i don't know why........
but when i first see u, I know that ur the one
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there, haahahah, i kinda don't know wat to say , just finish it October 19,2008 12:34 AM 
[align=center][b]Walking[/b]
When I'm walking, I see my eyes looking at you,
I keep walking until you stare at me too.
Then The clouds just cover the Sun, then It rains.
Then You hug me with your lovely hands so tight,
until the clouds get away and the sun was so bright
then we run so fast to the hill
now I'm so glad on what I feel
While watching the glowing stars
I miss you even though your so far
I hope that your alright
you will be always on my sight
Then you ask me why, why I'm staring at you
then I just start walking, walking and walking.
I thought what just happen was is true,
now I'm lonely wishing it's true.
Until you tag my back and ask " Wanna Walk?"
Now I'm glad, and we start walking, walking and walking.
Finish 10:53 PM, October 20, 2008
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tnx for reading...
tnx for reading in advanced
pls play this vid when reading the poem if u want.., that's one of the tool i use to make the poem
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LT-CcHE1MNY[/youtube]
[align=center]
[b]You're The One[/b]
When i first see you, i don't care who u are,
but when u make my heart beat as fast as it can,
I know that you're the one.
when u texted me, u make me glad,
when u call me you make me smile.
When u first kiss me, I smile and will treasure it until i die.
when we sing, you make my voice fly in the air
When I see ur eyes, u make me fly.
I remember the times we spent together
All those times, we had a million questions
All about our lonely lives that we fix everytime.
When it hurts so bad, sometimes
Not having you here.Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you
I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you tonight.
When I make you cry, until it all end up
then our worst day start, nd i don't wanna get up
I'm still lonely ryt now, nd i don't know why........
but when i first see u, I know that ur the one
[/align]
there, haahahah, i kinda don't know wat to say , just finish it October 19,2008 12:34 AM
[align=center][b]Walking[/b]
When I'm walking, I see my eyes looking at you,
I keep walking until you stare at me too.
Then The clouds just cover the Sun, then It rains.
Then You hug me with your lovely hands so tight,
until the clouds get away and the sun was so bright
then we run so fast to the hill
now I'm so glad on what I feel
While watching the glowing stars
I miss you even though your so far
I hope that your alright
you will be always on my sight
Then you ask me why, why I'm staring at you
then I just start walking, walking and walking.
I thought what just happen was is true,
now I'm lonely wishing it's true.
Until you tag my back and ask " Wanna Walk?"
Now I'm glad, and we start walking, walking and walking.
Finish 10:53 PM, October 20, 2008
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tnx for reading...
Last edited by tap13 (2008-10-24 21:33:43)
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- taSha_Lici0us
- » n00b
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
aww. thats so 
ahaha! nice poem waiting for otherz .gif)
ahaha! nice poem waiting for otherz
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- oOpunkrockeranimeOo
- » FTalkElite
- 4141
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
[b]Dude..Seriously..You made this?
If you did, then awesome! It sounds kinda like Robert Frost-ish..no..pretty much like Shakespeare.
Dude, make this into a play. seriously.[/b]
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- kathleen24
- » FTalkAgent
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
nice poem. i like it. wiw,.
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- tap13
- » FTalkElite
- 5873
- 0
- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
[quote=taSha_Lici0us]aww. thats so ahaha! nice poem waiting for otherz [/quote]
ahha tnx!!![quote=oOpunkrockeranimeOo]Dude..Seriously..You made this?
If you did, then awesome! It sounds kinda like Robert Frost-ish..no..pretty much like Shakespeare.
Dude, make this into a play. seriously.[/quote]
hahah, tnx 2, really appreciate it
[quote=kathleen24]nice poem. i like it. wiw,.[/quote]
[quote=lydia.c]Nice poem. Its awesome!
[/quote]
tnx 2 all of u!!!
ahaha! nice poem waiting for otherz [/quote]
ahha tnx!!![quote=oOpunkrockeranimeOo]Dude..Seriously..You made this?
If you did, then awesome! It sounds kinda like Robert Frost-ish..no..pretty much like Shakespeare.
Dude, make this into a play. seriously.[/quote]
hahah, tnx 2, really appreciate it
[quote=kathleen24]nice poem. i like it. wiw,.[/quote]
[quote=lydia.c]Nice poem. Its awesome![/quote]
tnx 2 all of u!!!
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- papas132
- » n00b
- 1
- 0
- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
mag bigay naman kayo ng pinaka ganda na centered layoutz plszz you black reserv lang ako plszz
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- tap13
- » FTalkElite
- 5873
- 0
- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
[quote=papas132]mag bigay naman kayo ng pinaka ganda na centered layoutz plszz you black reserv lang ako plszz[/quote]
1st of all wrong section , 2nd u can't use tagalog, only in Philippine Section , 3rd off topic 
dude, I'm not gud making layouts, ur asking the wrong person , tnx for posting btw
, 2nd u can't use tagalog, only in Philippine Section , 3rd off topic
dude, I'm not gud making layouts, ur asking the wrong person , tnx for posting btw
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- oOpunkrockeranimeOo
- » FTalkElite
- 4141
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
[quote=tap13]hahah, tnx 2, really appreciate it [/quote]
(hastily)yeah,yeah..uh huh. [quote=tap13]then our worst day start, nd i don't wanna get up[/quote]
I don't get this part..[b]Explain[/b].
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(hastily)yeah,yeah..uh huh. [quote=tap13]then our worst day start, nd i don't wanna get up[/quote]
I don't get this part..[b]Explain[/b].
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- tap13
- » FTalkElite
- 5873
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
[quote=oOpunkrockeranimeOo](hastily)yeah,yeah..uh huh.[/quote]
ahehhe
[quote=oOpunkrockeranimeOo]then our worst day start, nd i don't wanna get up[/quote]
waha, yah i mess that part up, ahha, after those nyc things that happen, everything turn up nd down. the worst day start.. means they broke up, then the guy is so lonely nd don't know what to with out her .
I think I'm gonna make another new poem.. bwaahahah
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I think I'm gonna make another new poem.. bwaahahah
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- oOpunkrockeranimeOo
- » FTalkElite
- 4141
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
[quote=tap13]waha, yah i mess that part up, ahha, after those nyc things that happen, everything turn up nd down. the worst day start.. means they broke up, then the guy is so lonely nd don't know what to with out her .[/quote]
oh....So it's more like a break-up poem rather than a love poem (what's the difference, seriously?)
Well, I still think it's awesome dude!
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oh....So it's more like a break-up poem rather than a love poem (what's the difference, seriously?)
Well, I still think it's awesome dude!
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- eLleiN
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
nice....can't believe a boy today can make a nice poem....haha..
emotions win!!!!
emotions win!!!!
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- tap13
- » FTalkElite
- 5873
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
[quote=oOpunkrockeranimeOo]oh....So it's more like a break-up poem rather than a love poem (what's the difference, seriously?)
Well, I still think it's awesome dude![/quote]
haha tnx, really appreciate it!, haha, I just wish that i can make another one, I'm really just had no time to think about that ryt now
[quote=eLleiN]nice....can't believe a boy today can make a nice poem....haha..
emotions win!!!![/quote]
aheheh, oh yeah!!, Like all people here are girls!! wth.. well yeah, even in my school, I let them reads my other poems, nd they don't even understand it . Well there still a boy here though , haah tnx for posting!! really tnx I appreciate it much.
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Well, I still think it's awesome dude![/quote]
haha tnx, really appreciate it!, haha, I just wish that i can make another one, I'm really just had no time to think about that ryt now
[quote=eLleiN]nice....can't believe a boy today can make a nice poem....haha..
emotions win!!!![/quote]
aheheh, oh yeah!!, Like all people here are girls!! wth.. well yeah, even in my school, I let them reads my other poems, nd they don't even understand it . Well there still a boy here though , haah tnx for posting!! really tnx I appreciate it much.
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- senam
- » FTalkFreak
- 1891
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
pat pat.. nice poem you got there
visual and imaginative 
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- huggable_kc
- » n00b
- 96
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- 1969-12-31
Re: well here's my 2 poems i made i'm just so lonely today, missing sum1 :crybaby: :| tnx for reading in advanced =) pls play this vid when reading the poem =) if u want.., that's one of the tool i use
nice compose more of it please
compose more of it please
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