Nice poem but may I correct some corrections? [b]Yours:[/b] [quote]My Feelings.. I feel so nice if i'm in the light of heaven I feel so ugly if i'm in the dark or hell So better i'm in light.. So light me the way you can.. I feel your loving me the way you smile.. I make my feelings feels confident I feels aloof if your mad at me So be don't mad at me.. i feel sad if you mad me.. Saying Inlove?I'm Inlight..[/quote] [b]Corrected:[/b] [quote]My Feelings.. It feels so nice if i'm in the light of heaven It feels so ugly if i'm in the dark or hell So it's better in light than in dark.. So light me the way you can.. It feels like you love me when you just smile at me.. It feels like i'm confident I feel aloof if you're mad at me So don't get mad at me.. I feel sad if you're mad at me.. Saying Inlove? I'm Inlighted..[/quote] Hope I'm right. If not, it's okay. BTW, thanks fer sharing. :3

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