1. Erap corruptions was finaly over =isn't this "was" supposed to be "are"? or let me re phrase "Estrada's corrupt years halt to an end... 2. Does the chain of corruption will never be eradicated? = "Will this chain of unending foul principles ever end?.. haha. And be careful with your punctuations Cut your sentences a bit *btw, i like your ending God Bless!