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[quote=oniongurl;#3611639;1275376174]Aww, Chailleen's falling for Eun~
Haha. Nice update!
Eun loves her no matter what she is or who she is, aww.
Update~[/quote]
Yeahh, She is indeed, wait for the next few chapters and im sure kikiligin kayo ng bongga. ;')
[quote=sweet11;#3611715;1275382135]OMGEE!!
ii lloovvee hhooww tthhiiss ssttoorryy ggooeess!
update![/quote]
Aww. thanks! Okay,okay. updated. ^^
[quote=cutest08;#3611912;1275393349]OFMG. He like Eun Young nah! Dba he should be your first love? HAHA. BTW, Im really love this story na! I`ll never get bored of every chapter! I want Tae Jun! anyway UPDATE~
I wish there was another couple :>[/quote]
Lool, sorry to say but he's not. T__T
yung first love ni Chailleen yung guy na nakakuha ng virginity niya. diba inexplain niya sa last chapters?
Anyway, thankss. Yeah, Im trying to make every chapter entertaining and humorous para hindi nakakabbored, thank God hindi worthless yung effort ko. haha! You want more Tae Jun? Okok, i'll put him on sa next chapter. ;')
[font="Impact"][size=6][color=#A0522D]Chapter Thirteen[/color][/size][/font]
[spoiler]"Yah...Park Eun Young...do you have a first love?" I asked as I looked over at him. We were on our way home from the mall.
"Why are you asking me this question again?" He shot me a weird look. I shrugged. "Because I'm curious...you know a lot about me but I don't know anything about you..." I mumbled as I looked down at the paved side walk.
"What idiot doesn't have a first love?" He retorted. I rolled my eyes.
"What idiot is still a virgin at 21 years old?" At my comment, I could see him blush. I laughed a little and nudged him.
"What was she like?" I continued to ask.
"She was nice..." He paused. I started to get a little nervous. What if he still has feelings for her?
"She used to...buy me milk every morning at school and place it on my desk with sticky note attatched to the milk carton. The first time I saw her...I really thought...that I couldn't breathe. When she smiled...I could feel my heart beat slowing down bit by bit...and then pumping really fast again. It was the first time I felt that way about anyone..." Biting his lip, he turned away with a bitter smile he tried to hide.
"So...where is she now?" I asked softly.
"She lives in the city." He answered. My heart dropped. Does that mean that...he's still with her?
"Are you still with her?" I asked.
"We broke up."
I had to stop myself from letting out a sigh of relief. It was starting to get a bit awkward so I said, "Eun Young-ah, lets play a game."
"No."
"Let's play the 'Would you rather' game." I smiled as I nudged him in the arm.
"No."
"Why no?" I whined.
"Because it sounds stupid already." At his comment I stopped walking and pouted. He continued to walk until he noticed I was no longer beside him. Turning his head back, "Hurry up."
"JUST PLAY THE DAMN GAME WITH ME!" I grumbled as I caught up to him. He looked a little startled but kept quiet. I took this as a 'go ahead' sign.
"Would you rather marry someone who's really stupid but she's really HOT. Or would you marry someone who was UGLY but she was smart and funny?" I looked at him waiting for his answer. He seemed to be thinking.
"I guess...the one who is smart and funny..." He answered. I could feel my heart leaping out of my chest. MY EUN YOUNG IS NOT A SHALLOW JUNK!!!! Well...he's not technically MINE yet...but he will be!
"My turn right...hmm lets see...would you rather lick peanut butter of a hobo's foot or be locked in a cage with a bear..." Eun Young asked.
.....I think that has GOT to be the worst 'Would you rather' question I've ever heard in my life.....
"Lick peanut butter off the hobo's foot." I muttered- still feeling a little dissapointed that he didn't ask anything juicier.
"I knew it." I heard him say.
"Hmm...would you rather kiss a guy or kiss your ex?"
I was secretly laughing inside, call me evil all you want but I wanted to know more about his ex-girlfriend.
"What kind of dumbass question is that? Obviously I'd kiss the guy..." He faked a gag before laughing.
O_O;
Wow...his ex-girlfriend must have really broken his heart...
...but...is she the girl that they were talking about at the park?
[i]"You don't effin' do that...you just don't mess with something that's not yours anymore..." Sang Il oppa continued to take cheap shots at Han Yoon Sung.
Park Eun Young stayed quiet during the whole thing, accepting the pain that his brother was putting on him.
"Stop seeing the girl." Sang Il oppa spat out bitterly before walking away.
Was she the one he was texting happily....?
I looked to the side to peek at what Park Eun Young was doing...
O M G ! He was texting someone on his cellphone -.-"
As he stared at the phone a really bright smile appeared on his face. I've never seen him smiling like this ever...
I wish that...I was the one who could make him smile like that...[/i]
Park Eun Young's voice snapped me out of my thoughts. I quickly looked up at him.
"Are you listening? I asked if you had a chance would you go back to your first love?" He asked with a frown on his forehead.
"Huh?....I don't know...." I mumbled. I was so lost in my own train of thoughts still that I couldn't give him a proper answer...
"Is that a yes?" At his next question I looked up at him. There was a flicker of hope in his eyes...
I frowned.
"That's not part of the game!" I pouted. He continued waiting for my answer. His large round eyes looking down at me. I opened my mouth to speak but quickly shut it again. I could hear him sigh before walking away.
I wanted to tell him 'no' but somehow I don't think he'd believe me...
"Yah. Sheep dog...are you mad?" I tugged on his arm. He ignored me. "Fine. It's my turn anyway...would you rather a girl hold your arm or hold your hand?" I asked.
"..........."
"Answer me."
"Hand." He answered as he quickened his walking pace. His answer brought a smile to my lips.
"Yah. Park Eun Young." I called out.
"What?"
"There's something that I've been thinking about on the way home..."
"....what is it?" He asked as he turned to face me. I grinned. As I walked towards him, I placed my hand in his and held on to his hand. He looked down at our hands and then back up at me.
"Let's go.."I tried to hold my happy smile in as much as I could so I wouldn't look like an idiot in front of him. He bit his lip a little before looking down at his feet. I could see him smile a little.
Just like that...
We walked home hand in hand...
Trying to hide the smile that was apparent on our faces...
- -
"Noona!" I turned to the direction where my name was called. I saw Jae Yung running towards me like a mad man. I looked at my watch.
W T F ...
It was still 2pm in the afternoon which means- Shin Jae Yung should STILL be in school and NOT at the MALL.
"Yah! Are you skipping again?!" I snapped.
"Noona....I had half day today............"Jae Yung said softly as he looked around. I saw a bunch of guys standing behind Jae Yung who were also in their school uniform.
"Shin Jae Yung, you never said anything about your noona being so hot..." One of his friends commented and the rest just laughed and stared at me. Jae Yung turned around and shot them a glare. They immediately shut up and stood beside him.
"Oh...H-Hyung?" Jae Yung's eyes shifted to the direction of someone who was behind me. I turned around and saw Eun Young standing there with two fruit smoothies...looking a bit awkward. He handed the mango one to me and greeted Jae Yung.
"Noona...are you and...........Eun Young......-" Before he could finish his sentence Eun Young cut him off.
"Aren't you supposed to be in school?" Eun Young asked Jae Yung before turning to look at his friends.
"That's not the point. Am I missing something here? Since when did the two of you start dating?" Jae Yung tried to change the subject.
"Who said we're dating?" Eun Young shot back immediately.
"You...you're not on a date?" Jae Yung stared at both Eun Young and I. I shook my head. "We're here to buy stuff for the trip next week...I needed to get a bikini..."I answered.
"Jae Yung-yah, we should go with them too..."I saw his friends nudging him.
"Noona...you're really pretty..." One of his friends said shyly. I was about to say 'Thank you' but Eun Young obviously had to ruin the good moment.
"Don't you think you guys should go and check out girls your own age?" Eun Young snapped.
"Hyung..."Jae Yung started to say but Eun Young ignored him and started to pull me away.
"SHIN JAE YUNG, YOU'RE DEAD WHEN I GET HOME!" I managed to shout before getting dragged away.
"Yah. You're hurting my arm...let me go." I tried to shake his grip off my arm but he still refused to let go.
"Park Eun Young!" I raised my voice a little. People were starting to stare and I hated it.
He released his grip on me and turned around to face me- for some reason he looked pissed.
"What's wrong with you?"I asked as I rubbed my wrist.
"Nothing. Let's just go and buy the stuff for our trip..."Muttering softly he headed towards the department store.
An hour later...
I picked up a black ruffled bikini with gold threading and showed it to him. "How about this one?" I asked. He looked at the bikini and said "No."
"What's wrong with this one?!"
"It's ugly..."
"When I try it on it'll look nice!"
"No."
Sighing, I placed it back on the rack. Out of no where, he shoved a surf suit in front of me.
"Try this one." He said before shoving me into the change room with the surf suit.
"Yah! I'm not wearing a fvcking surf suit to the Bahamas!" I snapped before throwing the surf suit out of the change room.
Who the hell wears a surf suit to LOUNGE around on the beach?!
I walked out of the change room and headed straight for the black ruffled bikini with gold threading.
"Yah. I said not that one..."Eun Young said in an annoyed tone.
"I don't give a shit." I stormed back in to the change room and changed in to the bikini.
As I looked in the mirror, I sighed.
Why do I have such a big ass?
"Let me see." I could hear him say from outside.
"No."
"Why not?" He asked.
"Because I look fat." I faked a cry.
"Do you really want to start this topic again?" I could hear him sighing. "I'm coming in."
I unlocked the door and hid behind it. I could feel Park Eun Young practically trying to squeeze himself through the door. Once he was in I quickly shut the door.
He took one look at me. He blinked for a few seconds.
"You're not buying this..."He grumbled before turning away.
"Why? I'm so tired of shopping! I want to go home!" I whined. "I'm getting this one...it looks fine...except I look a bit fa-"
"Don't even say the 'F' word right now. Take it off. We're not getting it." He opened the door and went out.
I wanted to kick the door down out of frustration.
"At least give me a reason why!" I yelled.
"Because it looks bad on you."
I opened the door and he looked up at me. "What?" He said.
"Does it really look bad on me?"
"Yes."
The sales girl shot me a pitiful look and forced a smile.
"Hurry up...I'm waiting outside." Eun Young mumbled before leaving the changing room area.
"I think that looks really nice on you...it compliments your figure nicely. I think he's just being mean because he's scared that other guys might look at you..."The sales girl giggled before she winked at me. I couldn't help but smile. I quickly changed back into my shorts and tank top before heading out to pay for the bikini.
"You bought it?!" Eun Young said with a shocked expression as he walked towards me.
"Shut it."
"Go return it." He said as he tried to pull me back into the store.
"Stop it." I said in a serious tone. He must have noticed that I was getting annoyed so he stopped but his hand was still on my wrist.
"Eun Young-ah..." A gentle voice called out. Eun Young turned to see who was calling him. I saw a really cute girl walking towards us.
Holy shit...
I can't even describe how cute this girl was...
Nice nose...round eyes...gorgeous lips...
She was beautiful...
"...Ah Ri-yah..." Eun Young said awkwardly. The girl gave him a hug and he released his grip on my hand. I watched as she embraced him with a smile while he stood there awkwardly with his arms at his sides.
I felt something pinching at my heart when he loosened his grip on my hand...
When she finally released him she smiled and turned towards me.
"Eun Young-ah...who is she?" She asked as she looked back and forth between him and I. Eun Young didn't reply. I stood there waiting for him to say something- anything.
Park Eun Young...
Am I even considered anything to you?
We are just two people living in the same house...
We can't even be considered as friends...
I could feel my chest tightening up.
"I forgot...I have to meet someone." I forced a small smile before turning around to leave.
"Who?" I could hear him asking. I stopped but didn't turn around.
"No one you know." I said before walking off.
I felt confused...
I didn't like him enough to cry for him...
But for some reason...this pull on my heart is starting to get really uncomfortable...
Right...
Good looking people like Park Eun Young and that girl belong together...
I felt my phone vibrating in my pocket...
'You have recieved a new text message'
I opened the message.
'Where are you?'- Park Eun Young
For a long time I stood outside the entrance of the mall thinking if I should reply to his text.
But I opted not to. I quickly shut my phone and placed it back into my pocket.
"Why are you ignoring my text?" Goosebumps started to form on my body. I froze up and refused to turn around to face that voice.
Why the heck do I always have such BAD luck?!
I always get caught in the act!
"Who do you have to meet?" I hear him ask as he turned me around to face him. Even though I was tall for a girl, he was still much taller.
"Someone." I mumbled.
"Don't lie." Eun Young smiled as he looked down at me.
"I'm being serious..." I turned away.
"Really? Which guy is it? Tell me who..." Eun Young asked with a worried voice. I shot him a glare.
"I'm going." I said softly before pushing him aside.
"Yah! Tell me who the fvcker is..." His voice turned angry for some stupid reason as he followed behind me.
I continued to ignore him.
"You're really not going to tell me?...." Eun Young said as he caught up to me. I still continued to ignore him. He took the shopping bag from my hand but before I could even yell, kick or scream...his hands found mine.
Slipping his fingers through mine- he squeezed my hand tightly.
"I'll hold your hand like this the whole way...till you meet the fvcker..." Eun Young grumbled. I didn't know whether I should smile or continue being mad. So I continued to walk quietly with my hand in his.
"Chaii Shin-ah..."I could hear him calling out softly.
For some reason my heart started to go crazy when he called my name...
My cheeks turned red...
I couldn't speak because...the way he called my name....was just...so...sexy
"T-that...........about before....." A frown was forming on his forehead and he paused. "Just don't worry...okay?" He mumbled the last bit.
"Park Eun Young...what am I to you?"I stopped walking and looked up at him. I could see his eye twitch a little at the question. Muttering a few swear words he ruffled his hair with his other hand.
"...I don't know..." He sighed before looking away. I tried to take my hand out of his grasp but he held on tightly. "All I know is that...you're someone who is important........to me...."
I looked up at him. I could no longer hide the smile that was forming on my face.
"What do I mean to you?" He asked me with a small smile.
I signaled him to come a bit closer. I tip-toed a little before I managed to reach somewhere close to his ear. Smiling and taking a deep breath in. I kissed him on the cheek.
He blinked a couple of times as he rubbed his cheek and looked at me. Biting my lip, I pulled him towards the bus-stop.
"Where are we going?"
"Home." I said.
"What about the fvcker?" Eun Young started to get pissed again.
It took me about an hour to convince him that I really WASN'T going to meet another guy...
and then it took me another 10 minutes to apologize before he finally decided to forgive me for trying to ditch him...
Looking back on everything that happened...
I think I can honestly say that...
Even though we fight most of the time that we're together...
I haven't been happy like this...for a long long while....
I haven't felt so happy fighting with any one before....
If I were given a chance to change things...
I wouldn't...
Because there is no one else that I'd rather fight or argue with...in this world.[/spoiler]
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