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Hi My Name is [b]Sunshine Bello[/b] I am [b]13 years old[/b] I Have My Two Bestfriends with me [b]Anna and Tina they are the Best talaga!!! But We had a fight here you read!!! :arrow:[b]Chapter 1[/b]
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Hi My Name is [b]Sunshine Bello[/b] I am [b]13 years old[/b] I Have My Two Bestfriends with me [b]Anna and Tina they are the Best talaga!!! But We had a fight here you read!!! :arrow:[b]Chapter 1[/b]
hey miss... yes you sunshine, I kinda like the story but the thing is this.... you should gather your thoughts even more often.... meaning that your story that I just read just now..... well its easy to understand though but the idea is really scattered, maybe you construct a better one next time.... till then youll get a better feedback from me.... and but wait.... pls subscribe to my poems, just look for sherovin thanks...!
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