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[i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

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[i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

[i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day without a glance of your sweet smile that makes my day complete and every time i try to take a chance i freeze, and avoid a sudden deceit blissful times with you are red-letter days moments i always wished never to end captivated by you in many ways melancholy in me you used to mend you simply remain in my fantasy i wished someday to be reality"[/i] i wrote this poem for one of the special guys to me, it's actually for the girl he likes. unfortunately, it was not for me :cry: do you think i should regret writing it? [b]btw, all of the lines have 10 syllables[/b] =)

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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

^ Aw, That Was A Nice Poem Kambal.
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

it's a good poem,but sad,coz he likes another gurrrll..
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

james- thankyou kambal, :) phia- yea, i really felt bad about it.. :( but i thought writing it was for his happiness...
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

^ I Think I Know That Guy Kambal. =D
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

kambal, you don't know that guy.. =D wahaha!
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

nice poem miss paulinexz. =) i like the 2 last lines. hehe! keep it up girl! :thumbsup:
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

[quote=alphatama]nice poem miss paulinexz. =) i like the 2 last lines. hehe! keep it up girl! :thumbsup:[/quote] thankyou thankyou! im glad you liked it :D
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

keep on making poems ms. paulinexz. hehe! its my 5th time to read this poem. :lol: wii. i'll wait for your other poems. =)
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

[quote]and every time i try to take a chance i freeze, and avoid a sudden deceit[/quote] i've experienced this kind of situation before.. :crybaby: Good poem~~ :crybaby:
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

[quote=DeverKerbill][quote]and every time i try to take a chance i freeze, and avoid a sudden deceit[/quote] i've experienced this kind of situation before.. :crybaby: Good poem~~ :crybaby:[/quote] thankyou! i guess it's because we don't want to be [u]rejected[/u] :(

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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

don't regret that you wrote it. it's what you feel. i think it's good that you wrote it actually coz i think writing is an outlet of one's feelings and that is exactly what you did. it's ok girl :D
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

[quote=eclipse_twins]don't regret that you wrote it. it's what you feel. i think it's good that you wrote it actually coz i think writing is an outlet of one's feelings and that is exactly what you did. it's ok girl :D[/quote] thankyou for comforting me guys :D
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

What a beautiful poem... It make me feel amazing.. A sad poem.. But don't regret it.. there is another person in this word!! keep smile and fight!! =):thumbsup:=):thumbsup:
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

^thankyou sherina!! :) i really appreciate ur comments. haha :D
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

that's a nice poem..thanks for sharing..
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

thankyou! ^
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

[color=blue] nice poem! really, woooo i fell they same! so sad yrt so nice [/color]
shealla(:
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

.aaw :( how sad.. i love the poem.
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Re: [i] "i stopped and looked back thinking how you do the things that no one can ever make me pause my heart from beating fastly for you. making me dream for a girl so dainty i never missed a day withou

@culit- yea.. good thing i have written a poem to release sad emotions.. @shealla-thankyou sis! :)
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