this is the nicest story ever!! i will just give it 4 and a half stars because not 5 stars because not fast updated.. but goodluck to your story. berry nyce!!

~whew,..ang haba.. ang ganda.. ngayon ko lang nabasa to.. chapter 1-15.. well kakakilig si raine at dan..update mo na sis

[b][u]Chapter 16 1/2[/b][/u] [i] November 23.. [/i] why was he crying?? im so worried bout him.. i dont even know the reason.. he just- just cried.. geeeeeeesh! im starting to cry na rin.. tae naman oh.. no one was talking, kaya ako nalang nagtanong sa kanya.. "da-dan, why are you crying?? "dont mind me.. im fine.. " i know that's fake. err.. "no you're not. bakit nga?? "uh--.. uhmm.. wala.. hehe.. may naalala lang ako.. " then he kissed me on the cheeks.. "aww.. ano naman naalala mo?? bakit ba di ka mag-open sa kin para alam ko rin nararamdaman mo.. di mo kasi alam na nagaalala ako sayo eh diba?? "ahaha.. ok ganito, wag ka na mag-alala sa kin.. ill be fine.. "o-ok.. "aww.. still sad?? i love you.." naiinis ako kaya inisnob ko lang siya.. "uyyy.. tampo na siya kaagad.. hahaha.. i love you so much raine.. you're my.. you're my everything.. i didnt say anything.. pero deep inside, kinikilig na ako! ahahaha.. woooooooot! ano ba nakain nun at napaka-sweet nya.. so ayun, ok na kami.. i wiped his tears.. and kissed him on the forehead.. sabay bulong "i love you too. " ahahaha.. naku, kala niya siya lang sweet.. hahaha.. he parked his car na.. lul. hihi.. tapos dumiretso na kami sa bookstore.. lahat ng tao sa paligid namin, nakatingin.. madumi ba mukha ko, madumi ba mukha nya?? what the heck is wrong? luls. hmm.. siguro kaya sila tumitingin because, were so sweet.. hahahaha.. wooooh! *kilig after ko bumili sa bookstore.. bumaba na kami sa elevator.. then we saw.. a-ann.. with her friends, nina and-.. i dont know what's the effin name nung isa niyang friend.. sama ng tingin.. errr.. "wow.." ann said.. dan just kept silent.. "musta naman kayo?? " then she laughed.. dumiretso lang kami ni dan.. kasi alam niyang ayaw ko ng away.. pero pinigilan kami ng mga kaibigan niya.. errrrr.. kala mo kung sinong magaling.. "hey.. what the heck is your effin problem?? padaain nyo kami, pwede ba.." i said.. naiinis na ako.. "mi-mine.. dont mind them.. they're just--.. "wow, mine? bakit, ayaw mo ng baby?? hahaha" ann said.. err.. "what's your problem ann??! wala kaming ginagawa sayo.. so will you please--.. "aba!! ako tinatanong mo?? ok.. ganito ha.. inagaw mo lang naman sa akin si dan.. tama ba? sana dun ka nalang tumira sa states and di na bumalik.. para di nawala sa akin si dan.. sana--.. "ann.. tumigil ka nga.. alam mong--.. "ano?? alam kong?? what!??!! diba totoo naman na--.. "hi-hindi. ann, alam mong mahal ko si raine.. kaya pwede ba.. just leave us alone.. "you're never there for me, tama ako diba?? lagi lang laman ng utak mo ay si RAINE!!! im doing everything para-.. para makalimutan mo siya.. kasi mahal na mahal kita.. dan, alam mo ba yun??!! sobrang mahal kita.. "ayokong lokohin ka.. and ayokong paasahin ka, ann.. sana maintindihan mo.. "di ko maintindihan.. at kailanman, di ko iintindihin.." then ann looked at me.. biglang lapit kay dan.. *woooooooooooppppppppsssssh!! then they kissed.. "raine, look.. babe, i love you.." "you know, you're such a b*tch. sayo na si dan.. diba yan naman gusto mo?? fine. magsama kayo.." then i ran.. umiiyak ako.. "ann!!? what the f*ck!!?! i dont love you.. dahil sayo.. sh*t!! im gonna kill you kapag may nangyari kay raine.. f*ck y*u ann.. errr.. * * * [b]dan's POV[/b] *woooooooopppppshhhh! ann kissed me. what the f*ck!!!!!!!!!?!?!?! "raine, look.. babe, i love you.." "you know, you're such a b*tch. sayo na si dan.. diba yan naman gusto mo?? fine. magsama kayo.." then she ran.. gusto ko siyang sundan pero nakahawak sa damit ko si ann.. shit "ann!!? what the f*ck!!?! i dont love you.. dahil sayo-.. sh*t!! im gonna kill you kapag may nangyari kay raine.. f*ck y*u ann.. errr.. "bu-but babe, i love you so much.. "dont call me babe. hindi na tayo ok??!! tantanan mo na ko.. hindi kita mahal.. "ok fine. magpapakamatay ako ngayon.. "ok then.. go ahead.. tumalon ka na.. i dont care.. "you really dont care huh!?!? ok.. fine.. magpapakamatay ako mamaya.." i know she wasnt serious 'bout that.. "why later when you can do it now?!?! magpakamatay ka na.. wala akong paki sayo.. lalo na ngaun na sinaktan mo si raine.. im gonna kill you.. im serious.." then i ran pababa.. susundan ko sana si raine.. pero di ko na siya makita.. sa sobrang dami ba naman ng tao dun sa mall at that time.. then dumiretso na ako sa parking lot.. i saw a note.. it sez: [quote][i]dan, dont look for me na.. im gonna be ok.. i promise. :'-) - raine[/i][/quote] aww... dont look for her daw.. what happened.. what have i done.. then sumakay na ako sa car.. i was driving very slow.. wala ako sa mood.. im so worried kay raine.. where is she.. * * * [b]Raine's POV[/b] i ran very fast.. para di ako masundan ni dan.. ang sakit.. palabas na ako ng mall nang makita ko yung same car kay dan.. so i left a note.. i said dont look for me anymore.. blah blah.. gusto ko muna mapag-isa ngayon.. kahit ngayon lang.. [i]ill be fine.. [/i]

Last edited by MiNEKOARCH (2008-06-05 07:42:07)

[align=center][b]hi siz danx!!![/b] [i]ganda story natin ngaun ah?!?[/i] [u]btw, thnx at sinali moh aqw sah story moh huh???[/u] [b]khit nah wla aqw ngwa...[/b] [b]haha...[/b] [i]jwk lng un...[/i] [u]bztah...sali moh pa rin aqw sah nxt chap huh???[/u] [b]teecee!!![/b] [u][b][i]GOD BLESS!!![/i][/b][/u] [/align]

wow. that:s so cute..

woah come on dude. XD i hate you ann next na .. T-T lapit na pasukan.. asar

hala! wala na! sinira ni ann. she's really a _____ toot_______. (you know what i mean) omg. if this was real i'm so gonna help dan and help ann by pushing her! waa.. sama ko.

Love this chapter. Nyahaha. ---- ang daming bad words. nyahaha.!

:cry:hey update na po...

buti na add na yung nakakapag spice up ng story: ang KONTRABIDA so evil. [blows raspberry]