awww ate danx. i cried bya. so sweet [my name is there lge hahaha]

wow.. hehe i havent read the story i just copy them and printed it later i will read this... tnx im interest to read this.. keep posting..

wee... kahit may saket si ate, she managed to post. thank you po nakakakilig na yung mga scenes aabangan ko talaga to

@hazel013: uhmm.. 25 po yata :] @paulanicole123: aba! XD nyahaha.. kinantahan ka na rin ni tooooooot?! XD hihi @gemandi: thanks sis gemandi hihi @---mad4u---: lage oi. kontravidaa na pud ni buh. XD nyahaha piz juk @fairydelights: what do you mean po?? i'll copy all the chapters then PM it to you?? @azaliah: ohh.. you're welcome sis :] muah and thanks :] @hiRagAna_07: yer spamming. XD lol. continuation lang po to ng chapter 21.. [b]Dan's POV[/b] i was on my way papunta bahay when suddenly, six armored guys trapped me.. they wanted to get my effin my ipod, mp4, and my wallet.. i tried to defend myself pero di ko rin kaya.. kaya wala na rin akong nagawa but to give my ipod,mp4 & wallet to them.. buti di nakuha cp ko.. di pa ako nakakalayo sa bahay nila raine that's why sa kanya ako nanghingi ng tulong.. then ayun.. bigla nalang ako nagcollapse nung hinawakan ako ni raine.. nung nagising ako, nakahinga na ako sa hospital bed.. damn it! then i saw raine, nakahiga sa tabi ko.. she was sleeping that time.. when suddenly, my effin cellphone rang.. alam kong magigising si raine nun kaya i acted like i was still sleeping.. then she immediately get my phone and answered it.. i know that's ann who's calling.. kaya kunwari nagising ako.. just to distract her.. then ayun, binaba niya yung hpone right away.. " mine.. thanks " i told her.. " mine.. you'rt welcome.. ano ba kasi nangyari?? " "i tried to defend myself.. pero madami sila.. " "haaay.. thank god, yer still alive.. " "mine---.." "what??" "i love you.. " "ohhh.. i love you too.." "dont ever leave me.. nor forget about me huh.. " "i wont of course.. ano ba meron??!" "wa-wala.. uhh---.. kanina ka pa dito??" "uhh ou.. medyo--.. ako nagsugod sayo dito sa hospital.. buti gising ka na.. kasi sabi nung doctor, komplikado daw kalagayan mo.. " "ohhh ganun ba.. im sorry.." "sorry for what??" "dahil pinapa-worry kita.. " "that's ok" "thanks mine.. i love you so much.. " "same here.. stop crying.. please--.." "lapit ka nga dito.. " then may binulong ako sa kanya.. apparently, di naman niya naintindihan.. and ayoko din na marining niya yun.. na-- "what??!! di ko maintindihan.. " "uhh nevermind. i love you ulit " "ok.. errr.. bibili lang ako ng makakain.. nagugutom na ako talaga.. " "ok mine.. ill wait for you.." then ayun, lumabas siya.. and me, i checked my phone.. tinignan ko kung sino yung tumawag.. then i saw ann's number.. si ann talaga yun tumawag.. then i texted her right away, and told her not to call me again!! then biglang pumasok si raine.. "mine?" then bigla kong inalis yung phone ko.. "ano ginagawa mo? " "wa-wala.. uhh just texting.. ni-text ko lang yung pinsan ko.. i told her what happened ngayon.. yun lang po.." "ohh ok.. here!! " then inabot niya sa akin yung ice cream.. "thanks.. pero pano ko to makakain?? " "i dont know. ayaw mo ba??!" "awwwww.. what's your problem?! sayang yun.." i know she's mad "wala.. ill be back.." then bigla siyang lumabas na naman ng door.. i dont know where she's planning to go.. pero at that time, gusto ko siyang sundan.. di pa ako makatayo.. masakit pa katawan ko.. kaya wala din ako nagawa.. i know she needs me at that time.. i can effin feel it.. pero wala ako.. damn.. ang tanga tanga mo talaga dan!!!!!! you're nothing but a *************!! wala kang silbi.. shit [b]7:45 pm [/b] i was planning to call Ate Jonirose ( my cousin ) para masundo ako dito sa hospital.. i need to get home.. madami pa kaming assignments and natatakot ako na baka galit sa akin talaga si raine.. gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwd! kahit na masakit pa medyo yung ibang parts ng katawan ko.. pag-uwi namin sa bahay, tatawagan ko sana si raine sa phone nila.. pero natatakot ako.. haaaaay.. kaya ayun, nagpahinga nalang ako.. but before that, ni-text ko muna si raine.. i said na ipadala yung psp ni lui bukas.. actually, di naman talaga yun yung main reason kung bakit ko siya ti-next eh.. im hoping na magrereply siya nun.. pero she did not.. i was waiting..... waiting.... waiting.... waiting.... waiting... then all of a sudden, i fell asleep. [b]6:20 am[/b] - [u]School[/u] dad prepared my breakfast since wala siyang work ngayon.. ako naman, kain lang ng kain.. then after ko kumain ng breakfast.. naligo na ko and nagbihis.. then dumiretso na ako sa school.. then ayun, i sat on my seat.. i was wondering why lui is here na tapos si raine wala pa?? baka ano na nangyari dun.. gawdd.. nagtuturo na si sir valdez, wala pa rin si raine.. so i asked lui.. " tol, saan si raine? " " ewan ko ee. noong umalis ako ng bahay, tulog pa siya.. " " di mo ba siya kasabay?? " " no. di yata siya papasok.. and wala rin yata siyang planong pumasok.. " " huh? ok tol, thanks nalang.. " then after i asked lui, bigla nalang may kumatok sa pinto ng classroom namin, [i]"i hope its raine, i hope its raine, i hope its raine, i hope its raine.."[/i] i kept repeating those words in my mind.. then when sir valdez opened it, si raine nga!! hahahahaha.. thanks god then she gave me that scary look.. yung nakataas yung kilay.. galit nga siya.. kaya di ko na siya kinausap.. [b]8:01[/b] - [u]Com Lab[/u] ang saya ko kasi magkatabi kami ni raine sa com lab.. pero when i sat, si gillian nakita ko.. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.. iniiwasan talaga ako ni raine.. ayoko ng ganito.. .... .... .... after ng class namin.. recess na.. then bigla akong nilapitan ni ann.. "hey dan! " and i was like, "hello ann.. " then she said, "you know what's with this day??" then i was confused .. "what?" then she said, "you dont know!!? i mean.. di ba special day to sayo??" then bigla akong napaisip.. "awwwwwww.. month--monthsary namin.. " then she said.. "gawd dan!! di mo alam?! kaya nagtataka ako sa kilos nyo ni raine eh.. di mo pala alam.. ano bang klaseng bf ka.. well see yah.. must go.. bye.." tama si ann.. wala akong kwentang tao.. at wala akong kwentang bf ni raine.. ni hindi ko man lang alam na ngayon pala monthsary namin ni raine.. PANICC! PANICCC! waaaaaaaaaa.. ano na gagawin ko.. " wait ann!! help me!!!!! " " ok.. i will.. ipadala mo nalang yung gitara mo mamaya.. ako na bahala.. and magmemorize ka ng song na maganda ok!? i suggest yung always be my baby my david cook.. yun dan!! wait.. here's the lyrics.." then she handed me a paper.. "memorizin mo yan.. ako na bahala haaa? goo! " " ok ann.. thanks!! " then ayun, pinadala ko na naman yung gitara ko kay ate Jonirose.. hahaha.. di ko po siya yaya.. she's my very good cousin.. i called her and said: "[i]ate.. padala naman po ng guitar ko dun sa kwarto ko.. ill wait you sa mismong gate ng school.. please po.. kailangan lang po talaga.. thanks ate.." "wait dan.. kay kuya Ed ko nalang ipapadala yung guitar mo.. madami pa akong gagawin eh.. daming assignments.. cge.. ingat ka dyan.." "ok ok ate! thank you po.. bye.." [/i] then after waiting.. dumating na si kuya Ed and handed me my guitar.. i immediately looked for ann.. then sabi niya.. mamaya daw uwian, may gagawin kami kay raine.. what the!!? gagawing alin?? woooosh.. well anyway, wala akong nagawa kundi sundin siya.. then after class, nakita ko si raine, mag-isa.. naglalakad palabas ng school.. i still dont want to talk to her kasi natatakot ako sa kanya.. so hinila ko nalang siya.. alam kong magagalit siya sa kin.. pero para rin naman sa kanya to.. so ayun, after ko siya madala pabalik ng school, dinala ko siya kay Emman, ( classmate ) then bigla nilang tinakpan yung mata ni raine.. then dinala na nila si raine sa room.. then si ann, sabi game na daw.. then i played the guitar.. [b][u]Chapter 22[/u][/b] i played the guitar.. and i was effin singing.. then all of a sudden, nakita ko nalang si raine na umiiyak.. naiyak na rin ako when she started to cry.. [b] Raine's POV[/b] then he played the guitar, and sang.. at that time, we were both crying.. i cant help it!! damn!! then bigla siyang lumapit sa kin.. then he said: " mine, im sorry.. " then he hugged me.. and ako naman, i was acting like im not affected at all.. naiinis talaga ako sa kanya eh.. sa lahat ng ginawa niya.. he's so mean!! palagi nalang niya ako pinapaiyak.. " mine, i love you so much.. kausapin mo naman ako oh.. " he said, pero ako.. nagmamatigas pa rin.. then bigla siyang tumingin sa mata ko.. and i was like, damn it dan!! aukong tinitignan niya ako sa mata.. then all of a sudden.. we kissed.. .... .... .... wala na rin akong nagawa.. i hugged him back.. i miss him na rin kasi.. then ayun, bati na kami.. [b] 5:23pm [/b] holding hands.. tralalala.. ang sweet namin.. hikhik.. then dinala ako ni dan sa isang place.. ewan ko kung saan yun.. basta there's something that's so special daw.. then we sat.. " mine.. maghintay tayo ng falling star.. then sabay tayo magwish.. " he said.. and ako naman.. i just looked at him.. he's so gwapooooooooo! harhar then ayun, nagconcentrate kami dun daw sa falling star.. ewan ko ba dito sa lalaking to.. ang kulit.. " mine!!!! ayun!!! may falling star na.. wish ka na.. " he said.. then he closed his eyes.. i cant help not to stare at him.. he's just so perfect!! then ayun.. nagwish na ako.. " ano ni-wish mo?? " " secret!! " " ay daya mo naman eh.. " " ayy.. cge sasabihin ko na.. baka magalit na naman sa kin yung pinakamamahal kong babae eh.. " " sus!! cge na.. ano nga yun?? " " i wish na sana di na matapos tong araw na to.. sana di na tayo mag away kahit kailan.. and sana di mo ko iiwan.. coz i need you in my life.. i need you raine.. and i love you so much.. " " ohhh.. wag mo nga ako paiyakin!! kaw naman eh.. batukan kita dyan cge ka!! i love you dan.. " then sumandal ako sa shoulders niya.. then nagkwe-kwento siya.. he was telling something about a girl.. di ko marinig maxado eh.. then nagulat nalang ako ng bigla siyang sumigaw " MAHAL NA MAHAL KITA RAINEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! " " oi!! ano ka ba dan!! baliw ka talaga.. " " raine, mahal na mahal kita.. will you marry me??! " " huiiiiiiii! loka ka talaga.. ang babata pa natin oh.. wala pa nga tayong trabaho, will you marry ka pa dyang nalalaman.. " " syempre para nakakasiguro akong papakasalan mo ako pag tanda natin weeeeeh! " " syempre. " " what do you mean!? " " yess!! yun!! loko ka talaga.. nyahahaha " " yes naman pala!!! hahahaha.. di kita iiwan mine, and no one can replace you in my heart.. " then bigla nalang niya ako binuhat.. " hoy hoy!! ibaba mo nga akoo!!!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaa! " " ayaw ko nga.. kiss ko muna?? " " tseee! baba mo ko dan ano ka baaaaaaaaa! " " ayaw mo ko kiss huh.. di kita ibababa.. bleh! " " oh cge ki-kiss na po.. lapit ka.. " then i kissed him on the lips.. " i love you.. " - [i] To be Continued.. [/i] [spoiler] senxa kung ang boring ng chappie na to.. di gumagana utak ko eeh. hihi [/spoiler]

Last edited by MiNEKOARCH (2008-06-22 04:36:31)

yeah..mganda nmn yung chpter n to sweet nla un sa lst part..

wahay...super kilig! naging angel na ba talaga yun si ann? baet baet nya, tinulungan si dan for raine. ang cute naman nila sa last chap.

^ chaw tae ka next summer ko nga ipo-post eeh kasi busy ako pag school days.. yeaa know naman harhar.. labb u later ang update. wula naman kaming pasok! weeee!

Hala, hnd nmn boring ahh. lalalala... aus, may update ulite maya. salamat ke frank. @ danx - lesbi mode ulet.

[b]weeh! nyc chappieh! xP lapiit na buh ung update?? x.ited nquuh.. xD[/b]

wow naman la pa update