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Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

#1  2008-08-05 10:04:08

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Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple shirt or Skirt with green shirt? Robert: I don�t know and I don�t care! Sheesh girls are so �:disgust: Venice: So what? Huh?! Robert: Nothing. Just please hurry up! Venice: Ok fine �. [[Both go down]] Their mom: Ready? Robert & Venice: Yup!=) Mom: Ok let�s go � [[In the car]] Venice: I�m so excited for the first day of 5th grade! :D I�m finally middle school! :D Robert: So? I�m high school :P [[Venice mimicking Robert]] Mom: Here we are! Robert you cross to the other campus ok? Robert: Ok mom. Venice: What about me? I�m in Luxembourg too. Mom: Nope� The school called to say you�re in Munich again. Venice: Ohhh :cry:Well at least I know everyone already Mom=) Venice: Bye mom! Love you! Mom: Love you too :) [[Venice goes down car]] *Gulp* Venice: I wish I�m with old classmates � Student council: Welcome back!  [[Goes inside campus]] Venice: Ommaygassh! The campus changed so much! :O Venice: Ok Let�s see where does grade 5 go �. Oh I�ll ask Ms. Avic  Venice: Hi Ms. Avic! :D Ms. Avic: Hi Venice!  Go to the old M.P.H grade 5 is there  Venice: Ohh okay :D Thanks ms. Ms. Avic: Oh by the way your in 5 Righteousness  Venice: oh ok � [[Going up stairs]] Venice: There they are! There are the boys and �. Where are the girls? Boys: Hi Venice! Venice: Heeeyy Guys! :D Girls: Venice!!!! Venice: There you are!! :lol: [[Venice runs, puts her bag down and hugs her friends]] Venice: Omaayyygasshh! I missed you guys soo much! France: I know! We missed you too! :D [[Girls sit down]] Venice: So how was your vacation? France: Boring! I wish we had school sooner! Venice: I know right?! Hey where�s Bea? France: I don�t know � Venice: Bea said she would be the first since she will go very early but I even got here before her :lol: [[France and Venice laugh]] -End of chapter 1- My first story :P it stinks :D I'm not creative :( hehe but its okie :)

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#2  2008-08-05 10:13:43

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

^ i think the story is cute. . BTW, please avoid double posting. thanks.=|
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#3  2008-08-05 10:19:34

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Thanks for the comment! :D And thanks for the advice too :) Hope we can be friends :D Maree12 :)
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#4  2008-08-05 17:52:13

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

^ur double posting agen sis. . . if u 4got 2 say sumting juz edit ur last post don't post a new one if the last post was posted by u too. . . okei? :) @topic: i think it'll be a nyc story cool names. . . .
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#5  2008-08-06 07:03:40

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Okei =) Thanks :) But umm ... how do you remove the other one if I double posted?
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#6  2008-08-06 07:16:15

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

It will just be removed ok??? (sometimes) But thanks anyways!!!
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#7  2008-08-06 07:32:45

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Chapter 2: First Day ;] Venice: Who�s our adviser? France: Bea! :) Venice: What Bea?! France: Hahaha no! I meant Bea is there! Venice: Ohhhh hahahaha : )) Bea: Heeeeyyy Guys!!! :D France and Venice: Heeeyyy Bea! :) Venice: Hey! I thought you were going to be here early? Bea: Ohhhh yeah � About that � France: Oh forget about it! Anyways, how was your summer? Bea: It was ok � Boring though � France and Venice: We agree! Ms.Calansingin: Righteousness let�s go! France, Venice and Bea: Yey!!! :DMs. Calansingin is our teacher! :D [[In the classroom]] Ms. Calansingin: Good Morning grade 5! :) Righteousness: Good Morning Ms. Calansingin! :D Ms. Calansingin: You can call me Ms. Maylyn and by the way this is your co-advisor Ms. Apple Ms. Apple: Hello! :) Righteousness: Hello :) Ms.Maylyn: Ok �. I�ll leave you with Ms. Apple I�ll meet you in the afternoon Righteousness: Good bye and thank you Ms. Calansingin! :D [[Ms. Calansingin exits room]] Ms. Apple: Ok class settle down � Let�s play a game about introducing ourselves :) [[Game is played�. Bell rings]] Ms. Maylyn and Ms. Apple: Good bye grade 5 � Righteousness! :) Righteousness: Good bye and thank you! :D [[Classes end]] Venice: So fast! :lol: Bea: Yup!=) France: Hey there�s Aika, Joy, Krizia, Sofia, Rachel and Jessica! Bea: Heeyy guys! Over here! Aika: Heyy! Joy: Sup? Krizia: Ellow! Sofia: Heeyy peepz! Jessica: hihihihi!!! :lol: Rachel: Hey hey!! :D Venice: Heeeyy! :D [[Francheska Calara]] France: Woops I�m paiged! Bye guys!!! :) Girls: Bye! :D [[Aika Merino,Bea Venzuela and Sofia Insua]] Aika, Bea and Sofia: Bye bye!!! [[Jessica Kyeong]] and [[Krizia Villanueva]] Jessica: bye guys! Krizia: Yeah! Bye! :D Venice: And the there were 2 � Joy: Yup�. Oh Venice I have to go! I�m crossing to Lux :) Venice: Ohhh ok :( Joy: It�s ok! Go play with the boys! Venice: I�ll try � :( Joy: Bye! Venice: Bye! Here I go�. *Gulp* -End of chapter 2- Will Venice have the guts to make friends with the boys? Once again find out in Chapter 3 :)
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#8  2008-08-06 08:13:25

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

nice one !!!!!!!!! love it ............ :thumbsup: for me !!!!!!!!!
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#9  2008-08-08 09:10:52

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Chapter 3: Hangin� with the boys Venice: Heey Boys! :D Kyle: What do you want?! James: Yeah! What do you want?! Venice: Nothing� Boys � Kyle: What! Venice: Nothing � [[Venice walks away from boys]] Mark: Heey :) Venice: Hey :) Mark: I just wanna apologize about Kyle�s behavior � he�s not into girls like you Venice: Right�. Robi: Heey Venice right? =) Venice: Yup! Robi: Don�t mind does guys they�re just jerks � Venice: Yeah they are :( Thanks for being nice I mean I thought you were like them but boy I was wrong  Robi and Mark: Yup :D [[Venice Vasquez]] Venice: That�s me! Bye guys! :D Mark: Bye Venice! :) Robi: Bye! :D [[Venice goes running down the stairs]] Next Day �.. [[In school]] Venice: Heyy Girls :) Girls: Heeyy! Venice :) Venice: Morning Mark, morning Robi  Mark: Morning! :D Robi: Yeah good morning!  [[Venice smiles at both guys and enters the classroom]] Ms.Calansingin: Good Morning grade 5! Righteousness: Good morning Ms.Calansingin :) [[Everyone sits]] Mark: Venice! Venice! [[Softly]] Venice: Yea? Mark: Catch it! [[Mark throws a paper]] It says: Venice, I hope we can become good friends this year unlike the past few years :D Hopefully you accept our hand of friendship Sincerely, Mark and Robi :) Venice: Awwww :) Sure of course we can be friends! :D [[Mark and Robi smile]] -End of Chapter 3- Is this a start of a love triangle? But if it is who will she choose? Find out if Mark, Robi and Venice will just stay friends or more �. That�s what you will find in Chapter 4! :D Comments please :D
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#10  2008-08-08 09:54:49

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Nice STory bout LOVE.....=) anyway PLease read my Chapter 6 Thanks!:thumbsup:
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#11  2008-08-08 12:51:26

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

yar story is pretty nyc! :eh: haha. lolengzs! hehe. kip it up sis! go! turn it 2 da nxt chappie! update it! hahaha.. :wallbash: ~juliene~
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#12  2008-08-08 21:07:30

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Nice story! Good update! Check my story kk??? :D
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#13  2008-08-08 22:26:19

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Heeeyy guyz! :D Thanks for your support on my story :) Ummm Chapter 4 might be a while because I'm still thinking of the story eh.. :| Soo if you have any ideas please tell me it will be a big help! =) Thanks guyz! :D
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#14  2008-08-10 02:30:18

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

I have an Idea Chelsea!!! Oh Nevermind!!! Its not nice!!! Byebye !!!! Love your story! :D
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#15  2008-08-11 06:54:13

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

love it talago !!!! =) :thumbsup:
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#16  2008-08-15 07:38:34

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Heeeyy guys! sorry if im not updating ... busy with school eh ... ummm ideas ideas please thankies! :)
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#17  2008-08-20 04:43:54

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

kewl storii sis. do read mine too. the title is my special valentine. =3
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#18  2008-08-22 07:46:35

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

nice story chels ... :):thumbsup:
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#19  2008-08-24 01:05:13

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

nice story BTW who is Mark and who is Robi:question: please tell and i know who Venice is already :penguin:
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#20  2008-08-25 03:24:03

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Re: Chapter 1: At home �. [[Alarm clock rings]] Venice�s Mom: Venice wake up! Time for school! Venice: Ok mom! [[Venice gets up and showers. Then she decides what to wear]] Venice: Jeans and purple

Chels when did u become a great writer=D
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