i myself don't know what will be next in my story..
hahah!
Chapter 4: Friends or more?
[[Months passed and Robi, Mark and Venice grew closer]]
Venice: Heey Mark
Mark: Hey!
So how was your sem-break?
Venice: Good! But sooo boring!
Mark: True true true!
Venice:
Mark: Let�s go?
Venice: Ok
[[Goes up the stairs]]
Mark: heyy you have ym?
Venice: yeah I do its [email protected]
Mark: Oh ok thanks! Mine is [email protected]
Venice: ookie
Mark: What about you Robi?
Robi: ohhh ummm mine is [email protected]
Venice: Thanks also!
Yo, guys I gotta go girls are over there na eh �
Robi and Mark: Ohh ok sure
see ya!
Venice: Yeah Bye!
Joy: Hey Venice!
Venice: Hey
Joy: So� who are he 2 boys?
Venice: They�re my friends Mark and Robi
Joy: Oh really? Just friends?
Venice: Of course! Well�. Ummm ok I have an itsy bitsy crush on them �.
Joy: Ha! I knew it! Who and what are the percentages?
Venice: That�s a secret!
Joy: C�mon please!
Venice: Ok! Fine! I like them equally �.
Joy: Oooo
Venice: Now don�t tell anyone okkaii?
Joy: Ok!
Venice: Ok good�.
[[Bell rings]]
Mark: Hey Robi?
Robi: Yeah?
Mark: Do you like Venice? As in like like?
Robi: Kinda �. I know yo do!
Mark: I do not!
Robi: Yeah right Mark!
Mark: Ok so I do �..
Robi: Its fine dude �. Anyways crush lang yon diba?
Mark: Yeah I guess ��
-End of chapter 4-
.,Heyy guyss watch out for chapter 5! What will happen if Venice finds out Mark has a crush on her?
And how will Robi feel if he finds out Venice likes him and Mark? Happy or confused?
Find out in chapter 5!
.,
btw .... for the people who think im Venice .... im not okaii? i know she sounds like me but thats because im using the words i use everyday... Venice is the name of my soon-to-be sister (if its a girl) so that proves that i am not in love with 2 boys who go by the names of Mark and Robi.
I just wanted to be clear with everyone *henzor ahem* ohh yeah chappie 5 tom.
Chapter 5: Confused heart <3
[[After classes]]
Venice: Hey Mark!
Mark: Hey Venice
hey �.. can you add me in ym I need to tell you something�.
Venice: Ummm sure I�ll add you
Mark: Thanks!
[[Mark Martin]]
Mark: Okieee I gotta go �. Bye Venice!
Venice: Bye! Hey be online okaii?
Mark: Sure
[[Robi runs to Venice]]
Robi: Hey Venice!
Venice: Oh! Hey!
Robi: Hey add me in ym.
Venice: Suree im adding Mark too so ill add you na rin
Robi: Oh okie �. So you like Mark?
Venice: Well duh! He�s my friend like you!
Robi: I didn�t mean that like �.. I meant like like
Venice: Ohhh �. Well ummm �. Since you�re my friend I�ll tell you a secret. I have a crush on Mark �.
Robi: �.. ohhh
Venice: Hey Robs �. Are you ok?
Robi: Oh � yeah �. Im good �.
Venice: ok
[[Venice Vasquez]]
Venice: Yo! I gotta go bye
[Robi just waves silently]
[[Venice�s house]]
Venice: Home sweet home! Now let me sign in so I can add Mark and Robi.
There we go and add markmartin and [email protected] �.. and done!
[[In ym]]
[markmartin is now online]
Mark: Hey Venice
Venice: Oh hey Mark!
Mark: Heyy umm can I tell you something?
Venice: Umm okie sure.
Mark: Don�t be like mad or anything �. But ummm
Venice: Yeah?
Mark: I have a crush on you and so does Robi!
Venice: Oh �. Woah �
Mark: So umm if I ever courted you umm would you like say yes?
Venice: Uhhhh �. Wait umm isn�t this too fast?
Mark: I guess� so that�s a no right?
Venice: Well I never really answered �.
Mark: So is there a chance for a yes?
Venice: Maybe�..
Mark: Oh okie �. But im fine with any decision you make.
Venice:
[robsterz_doms is now online]
Robi: Hey Venice!
Venice: Hey
ummm do you like me? (as in as a crush)
Robi: Honestly �. Yes �..
Venice: Oh ok �. I have a crush on you too.
Robi: Really?! So ummm can I court you?
Venice: Oh shemmay �.
Robi: Why?
Venice: Nothing nothing � look I have to go now
Robi: Oh ok see you tom.
Venice: Yeah tomorrow �. Bye
Robi: Bye!
[[robsterz_doms has now signed out]]
Venice: Hey mark �. Umm I g2g ..
Mark: Oh ok �. Bye
Venice: Ok bye �..
[[Venice signs out]]
(Venice in her mind)
Ahhhh! They�re both courting me! Taaaaaeee naman to! Who will I choose?!
Omaygash! I don�t wanna hurt Robi�s or Mark�s feelings �. Ayyayaya! Maybe I should say no to both �. Maybe �. Ahhh hirapp! But anyways That�s Life!
-End of chapter 5-
Chapter 6 review: Heeeyy people chappie 6 maybe this Saturday or Friday
Who will Venice pick? How will the 2 boys feel once they find out the are both courting her?
Will Mark be mad/sad if Venice picks Robi? Or is it the other way around?
To find out watch out for chapter 6 titled �If love makes you happy, why does it hurt you?�
Last edited by velvet611 (2008-08-28 05:57:37)
Last edited by henzorvincent510 (2008-09-03 05:58:00)
wow! do you know robi domingo? while i'm reading ur story..... i'm imagining of his handsome face!!!!
wooooooh!!!!! Robiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i do know robi domingo
Well guyss here's the not really much awaited chapter 6
Chapter 6: If love makes you happy, why does it hurt you? [part 1]
[[In school]]
Mark: Hey Venice!
Venice: No no no�. [softly] Ohh�. Hey Mark!
Mark: About my question�.
Venice: Ohh right� I�ll let you know soon okay? I just have to think right now.
Mark: Oh ok�.
Venice: Yeaah well let�s go up!
Mark: Sure!
[[Robi runs with his bags]]
Robi: Guysss wait up!
Venice and Mark: Hurry up!
[[Robi catches his breath]]
Venice: Dude� Robi are you ok?
Robi: Yeaah �. Have you forgotten I have asthma!?
Venice: Oh yeaah� Sorry.
Mark: Yeah dude really sorry.
Robi: Its ok.
Venice: Hay naku guys. We�ll be late. I�m going bye!
Mark and Robi: Ok! Bye! We�ll follow na lang.
Mark: Guess what?
Robi: What?
Mark: I courted Venice yesterday!
Robi: You what!?
Mark: I courted her why?
Robi: I courted her too!
Mark: What?!?
Robi: Yeaahh I did!
Mark: That must be why she is avoiding us�.
Robi: Should we tell her we know?
Mark: hmmm� I don�t know dude �. I don�t know�.
Guysss imam make part 2 tommorow na lang too busy exam week na ksi ehh�.
Last edited by velvet611 (2008-09-06 05:19:44)
continue your part 2 ooki... anyways nice story!!!!
sunshine0918 ------ Thankiesssss.
Anyways here's chapter 6 part 2
Chapter 6: If love makes you happy, why does it hurt you? [part 2]
[[In the classroom during recess]]
Mark: Heey Robi!
Robi: Yeaah dude?
Mark: Ummm �. Do you really like Venice?
Robi: Well �. Yeahh I do but if she turns me down its ok �. I�m not crazy for her.
Mark: Ohh ok�.
Robi: Why�d you ask?
Mark: Because I think I really like her�.
Robi: Hmmm �. You know what dude?
Mark: What?
Robi: You can have her
Mark: Dude sure?
Robi: Yeaah no problem with me�
Mark: Thanks �. But she still hasn�t answered me you know�.
Robi: Dude don�t worry she likes you�.
Mark: I wish�
Venice: Hey guyss! Whats with the sad faces?
Robi and Mark: Huh?? Nothing�nothing�.
Venice: Ok�ayyryyt.
Robi: Well �bye you two!
Mark: So �. Ummmm about yesterday..
Venice: Yeahh ummm �.
Mark: Is it a yes or a no?
Venice: Well �. Mark we haven�t even finished 1st term yet and youre already courting me�.
Mark: Well we�ve known eachother for 3 years isn�t that enough?
Venice: If you put it that way �. I guess it is �.
Mark: So it�s a yes?
Venice: Woah I didn�t answer yet�
Mark: Ohhhh right �..
Venice:
Mark: �����
Venice: Sorry sorry really am sorry but I still have to think�. You understand right?
Mark: Yeaah sure �. I just feel hurt �. I thought love is suppose to be happy�.
Venice: Not all the time Mark �. Not all the time �.
-End of chapter 6-
Chapter 7 after exams
) Any Ways Nice Story Again
) Continue It Kasi Dont Be Kj
) P.s. Dont Make Me Continue My Story!!!