nice chappie sis.. jaime is soo brave.. nxt..nxt..

[quote=eri.03]oh my gosh! im a new reader. hope u'll update very soon![/quote] thanks for reading! [quote=megumi028]nice chappie sis.. jaime is soo brave.. nxt..nxt..[/quote] thank you. here's the update: [align=center] A/N: HERE'S AN UPDATE FOR YOU ALL! I HEART YOU EVERYBODY. KEEP THE COMMENTS COMING, EHEHE. THANKS TO ALL! *HUUGS* I'LL HAVE A LITTLE MIX UP HERE, WHENEVER YOU SEE THE '[color=red][b]xxx[/b][/color]' ON TOP OF MY UPDATES, and if you see it in color RED, it's Jamie's POV. If it is in BLUE, then it is Mr. Cyborg's POV. THANK YOU![/align] [hr][align=center] [b] [color=red]xxx[/color] [/b][/align] [b] [sub][color=gray][u]____________[/u][/color][/sub][color=hotpink]chapter[/color] [color=gray]three[/color]. [/b] I held my box of Pocky sticks and then when I was about to open it, Unni grabbed it from me. “[color=red][b]Yah, unni! Don’t be like that… Aish, I’d accuse you of stealing Pocky one day! [/b][/color]” A motion curve suddenly formed on unni’s lips, and then she smiled. I always loved eating Pocky sticks, and I always thought it’s really delicious. “[color=purple][b]Omo! Listen, Jamie. [/b][/color]” She grabbed me by my shirt and pulled me closer to her and then she whispered her words in my ears. “[color=purple][b]Jeremiah was looking for you yesterday! Ooohhh, it must’ve meant something! [/b][/color]” She giggled and then she took a stick of pocky and bit it slowly. “[color=purple][b]So, how was Mr. Gangster? ^-^ [/b][/color]” My eyes widened and then I gasped, having my hands covered the opening of my mouth. I remembered we had an appointment today! “[color=red][b]Yaaaayy! Unni, I need to meet him or else I’m gonna be dead. Later! 8) [/b][/color]” I sped off to the stairs, grabbed a coat while leaving the box of Pocky behind. Aish, I should’ve brought it with me. Probably, the gangster would like it. I hurried all the way to the train station and then I rode all the way to the place where he’s told me. When I got there, I let out a panting sound because I didn’t want to be late, or else he’d cut my head off and I won’t be able to eat another Pocky stick. I was supposed to press the doorbell’s button already, but then, a guy wearing a cap and a black suit (most likely looking like a detective or a magician to me), who was leaning on the wall, suddenly called out my attention. “[i][b]You won’t success in winning a friend, instead you’ll lose one[/b][/i].” I stood frozen when I heard him mouth out these words. It felt as if he could read minds. It took me about how many seconds before having my mind formulate the right kind of answer to speak. “[color=red][b]I—I’m sorry? ??? [/b][/color]” I looked at him, and then he returned the look to me and left. I batted my eyelids to see if I was only hallucinating, but then I think I wasn’t. I moved my index finger towards the button, pushed it gently, and then… I saw the most indescribable face ever. “M[color=red][b]—ma—master— :-X [/b][/color] ” “[color=blue][b]—WHY WERE YOU LATE!? ??? I TOLD YOU TO BE ON TIME--[/b][/color]” “[color=red][b]I’m—I’m really—sorry—[/b][/color]” “[color=blue][b][b]I DON’T ACCEPT APOLOGIES! ^-^ GO HOME! > > [/b][/b][/color]” I looked down at my feet, and then I suddenly thought of all the things that I had given up just to come here and meet him. [i] I gave up the conversation with Unni, just to meet him. I gave up the Pocky sticks box, just to meet him. I gave up some weight and ran a 30-step-twirling-stair just to meet him. I GAVE UP my money just to ride the train all the way here just to meet him. I GAVE UP MY ENERGY BY RUNNING JUST TO MEET HIM!!![/i] And now… [b]HE IS ASKING ME TO LEAVE AND GO BACK HOME!?!?![/b] IS HE THIS STUPID?! > “[color=red][b]I wasn’t late, Master! There was this guy who--[/b][/color]” I reasoned out. He grabbed my shirt and pulled me close to his face and then he showed me his clenched fist. “[color=red][b]LOOK! IF YOU’RE GOING TO BEAT ME UP, FINE THEN DO IT!!! [/b][/color]” “[color=blue][b]WHAT THE HECK—[/b][/color]” I pushed him with all my strength, and luckily, I got all loosen up from his tight grip on my shirt. “[color=blue][b]WHO TOLD YOU—[/b][/color]” I stood before him, and then I pushed my finger on his chest. “[color=red][b]SHUT UP AND LISTEN!! [/b][/color]” I shouted in front of his bare face, and then his eyes widened. I decided to continue with what I was supposed to say. “[color=red][b]Did you know that I gave up my conversation with my Unni just to be here on time to meet you!? [/b][/color]” When he was about to mouth some words, I stopped him by giving out my talk-to-the-hand-sign and then I pushed him on the wall and got my other hand covered the opening of his mouth. “[color=red][b]Good, stay there for awhile and let me continue. ^-^ [/b][/color]” He looked all red, I guess he was so angry already, but I DON’T CARE. I am also angry! “[color=red][b]Second, did you know that I gave up my Pocky sticks and left it behind with Unni just to meet you here?! [/b][/color]” I let out a breath of exhaustion and continued. “[color=red][b]Third, I gave up some weight by running over a 30-steps-twirling-stair?! And to think that I’m eating to gain weight?! [/b][/color]” I gave him a furious look now, but I didn’t know if I was supposed to be mad or should I be laughing by this time already because I saw him sweating so much. “[color=red][b]I’m not yet done! FOURTH, did you know that I gave up my energy by running over the train station just to catch the train that comes here to this place?! And I always hated running! ??? [/b][/color]” And lastly, I added, and to make it a grand finale, I screamed while having my eyes all shut. “[color=red][b]AND NOW YOU’RE TELLING ME TO GO BACK HOME?! PABO!!—[/b][/color]” He grabbed my hand and then he gripped it so hard that made me scream much more. “[color=blue][b]You’ve got a big noisy mouth.[/b][/color]” I held my lips and then I looked at him, he looked at me and then he lighted a cigar. “[color=blue][b]Fine, you can stay. [/b][/color]” He wasn’t angry at all?! I mean, his tone was so… moderate. I mean, I thought he’s a gangster and he always beat up people? Why did he let himself lose this argument? “[color=blue][b]Next time… I hope, you’d be more, like a one question-one answer kind… and yeah… be quiet.[/b][/color]” And then he blew the smoke out from his mouth and added. “[color=blue][b]Or else, you die. [/b][/color]” Oh, yeah. I said so. He’s really a gangster. He lets himself lose an argument… but this is by, [i]killing his opponent with hideous, scary, and violent threats[/i]. [b]Aish, I don’t wanna be angry at him anymore.[/b]

Last edited by missUNDERSTOOD (2008-11-22 01:33:10)

[b]wee.! nice nice. update soon.[/b]

ei sis.. i'm also reading this storii at candymag.. en i really really lab it.. craving for the nxt update..

^wee. good for you sis. :]