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[align=center][i]Goodbye[/i], Mr. Cyborg. story line by: [b]missUNDERSTOOD[/b] started: [b]October 18, 2008[/b] ended: ------------------------ [b]author's note:[/b] I am a new author here in Literature. And I`ve also posted this fic in CandyMag`s forum, Teentalk. I go by the username, thecagedDOLL there. and please don't redistribute this without asking permission from me. [i]this story is based on my imagination. [/i] check this page from time to time. i will be having a pm list so please, when you drop off a comment, kindly include in it that you would want to be placed in the PM list. Thank you! --- [img]http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk200/geeisthename/GMC.jpg[/img] *[b]gahd, I had lots of sweats making this one. please don't grab without asking permission. thanks. [/b] --- are you interested in making a poster for this fic? PM me for more details. [b]The PM LIST (unlimited).[/b] ----[b] [b]The WAITING LIST[/b] ---- [b]The Chapters[/b] [b] [color=gray][u]____________[/u][/color][color=hotpink]prol[/color][color=gray]ogue[/color]. [/b] [b] And the story starts.[/b] Of course, [b]I'm not a CYBORG[/b], I mean the literal one. I talk, I speak, I laugh, but I don't cry. [u]and I don't love.[/u] I never fell in love, I never liked anyone, I'm always living the daily routine of life. I'm tough, I'm evil, I'm cold, I'm a gangster, I smoke, I drink. I make fun of kids, I always get into fights, [b]I have no friends at all.[/b] I am not scared of anything. But they are scared all of me. My life had been [b]cursed[/b] when I was a kid. I remembered it [i]was said that I would never experience love and what the hell it is.[/i] But I don't care, since I have [b]CYBORG emotions[/b] and... [i]I am not interested in love[/i]. Maybe... maybe because I don't have the ability to love, since it is the only emotion that has [b]been removed from me.[/b] --- [/align]

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wooh.. i thnk ths is gonna turn out gud.. chap 1 na sis.. :) gudluck na rn :D
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^ hey there! what`s your name sis? thanks for reading! yeah, i do hope so. :) Imma post the first update later. :)
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^ wow ate, it's good to see you here in ftalk. I'm chaw from candymag. :lol: this story is already finished, right? Anyway, I love the image. :O I'll support this. Weehee. :penguin:
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[quote=xxBUBBLiExx]^ wow ate, it's good to see you here in ftalk. I'm chaw from candymag. :lol: this story is already finished, right? Anyway, I love the image. :O I'll support this. Weehee. :penguin:[/quote] Nope, nope. this story`s ongoing in TT. :) Thanks for dropping by a comment here. I`ll hit back a comment in your story in TT some time. :) Thanks for reading!
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waw.. another new story.. :D dEz here.. :D
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can call me anna .. :D
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[quote=dess29]waw.. another new story.. :D dEz here.. :D[/quote] thank you! :) [quote=xxGiRL NeXT DooRxx]can call me anna .. :D[/quote] hello, anna! :) here`s an update. [align=center] [color=red] [b]xxx[/b][/color][/align] [b] [color=gray][u]____________[/u][/color][color=hotpink]chapter[/color] [color=gray]one[/color]. [/b][align=center][b] TRANSLATIONS: Unni- Big sis Pabo- idiot/stupid[/b][/align] [b] And the story starts with... [/b] [b] Jamie's Point of View[/b] �[b]So, you�re not chicken!?[/b]� Unni teased me, I gave her a glare. I bit my lip and then I nodded.�[b]You should make friends with HIM or else I�ll tell Jeremiah that you�re crushing on him![/b]� [i] I bit my lip even more. What to do? [/i] If I won't make friends with the gangster, Jeremiah would know that I like him. Aish. T_________T I never thought I�d be put in a mess like this. HOW CAN I MAKE FRIENDS WITH THE GANGSTER? I went to my desk and then I took out a piece of paper and wrote on it my plan A and of course, my plan B. But now, I�ll be trying on my PLAN A. [i] PLAN A. *accidentally bump into the gangster and be so apologetic *run into him and bow politely while saying, �can we be friends?� *write him a friendly-note.[/i] Let�s see.. the first one would be a good try, so I must try it out. I mean, it would work. Since that I am a very good actress. I went to the place where I usually see him, and waited. I waited. Waited. waited. Where on earth is he? What if he�s absent today, since he loved to skip classes? I still waited. I don�t want unni to tell Jeremiah that I like him. Pabo. How am I suppose to make friends with that guy? What kind of idea came into Unni�s mind?! I looked around and heard footsteps. I guess� I guess it�s him! I looked around to see if someone was looking, but there was none. I quickly ran and then�BUMP! Uh-oh. Here it goes. �[color=red][b]I�m so sorry�sorry�sorry�sorry, please forgive me![/b][/color]� I bowed and then he just stared at me and then he started walking. �[color=red][b]Yah! I�m so sorry, mister. I�m so sorry for bumping into you.[/b][/color]� He ignored me and then he kept walking. �[color=red][b]YAH! I SAID I�M SORRY![/b][/color]� I yelled and then he stopped walking. I felt so nervous. I�m dead, I�m dead, I�m dead. I covered my eyes, and then� I felt his fingers on my hands, trying to take them off. Before he could take them off, I slowly removed them and faced him. �[color=red][b]I�M SORRY T_______Tv[/b][/color]� He looked at me sarcastically, and then he gave me an evil grin. �[color=blue][b]Aren�t you scared of me?[/b][/color]� I swallowed a lump in my throat and shook my head. �[color=blue][b]ARE YOU SURE YOU AREN�T SCARED OF ME??[/b][/color]� He repeated. I shook my head heavily. And then he neared my face, and pushed me against the wall which caused me to lean on it. �[color=blue][b]HAVEN�T YOU HEARD THAT I CAN DO WHATEVER I WOULD WANT TO!?[/b][/color]� I shook my head again. UNNI, what on earth. T_______T I�m gonna be dead. WAAAA. I�m too young to die. T_________T He held my chin and then cupped my cheeks�with a force that hurt me. �[color=blue][b]YOU SHOULD BE SCARED OF ME!!! PABO!![/b][/color]� He hit me on the cheek, and then later on, he released me. �[color=red][b]MISTER, I�M REALLY SORRY� please� forgive me.[/b][/color]� I almost cried, I was near to tears, and then he chuckled. �[color=blue][b]I hate apologetic persons�[/b][/color]� He started, and then he prodded my forehead. �[color=blue][b]LIKE YOU!!! :mad: [/b][/color]� He gave me a scary look, and then I faced my feet. �[color=red][b]I just wanted to�[/b][/color]� My voice trailed as my eyes started to water. �[color=blue][b]WHAT?![/b][/color]� He told me and then when he was about to aim another hit on my cheek, I stopped his hand with my fist. �[color=red][b]I WANTED TO BE YOUR� YOUR�[/b][/color]� My voice trembled and then he looked at me. He seemed to be impressed on what I�ve done with his hand. �[color=red][b]...YOUR GIRL---I mean--FRIEND![/b][/color]� Man, I couldn't stop stammering. :-\ I'm so scared. T_______T �[color=blue][b]PABO! :mad: [/b][/color]� He pushed me against the wall again. And then he started walking away. �[color=red][b]YAH!! CAN YOU BE MY FRIEND?![/b][/color]� I didn�t care if I looked desperate here. I needed to do this� for myself and for Unni too! I ran after him and then I hit him on the back. �[color=red][b]PABO! I WANT TO BE YOUR FRIEND![/b][/color]� �[color=blue][b]NO WAY! I don�t have any friends! AND I DON�T WANT TO HAVE ANY! GET LOST!! :mad: [/b][/color]� He coldly yelled at me and then he ran away. He�s so weird� and scary too. [b]Seems like PLAN A didn't work out the way I expected it to. [/b]

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Re: [align=center][i]Goodbye[/i], Mr. Cyborg. story line by: [b]missUNDERSTOOD[/b] started: [b]October 18, 2008[/b] ended: ------------------------ [b]author's note:[/b] I am a new author here in

Woa, interesting story. :)
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[quote=15anna93]Woa, interesting story. :)[/quote] thank you for reading. :)
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waaaa. XDD next next! :penguin:
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Re: [align=center][i]Goodbye[/i], Mr. Cyborg. story line by: [b]missUNDERSTOOD[/b] started: [b]October 18, 2008[/b] ended: ------------------------ [b]author's note:[/b] I am a new author here in

nice story sis. ;) please update it asap. :D
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Re: [align=center][i]Goodbye[/i], Mr. Cyborg. story line by: [b]missUNDERSTOOD[/b] started: [b]October 18, 2008[/b] ended: ------------------------ [b]author's note:[/b] I am a new author here in

[quote=_berii.^�]nice story sis. ;) please update it asap. :D[/quote] thanks after more replies sis. ;) [quote=xxBUBBLiExx]waaaa. XDD next next! :penguin:[/quote] hehe. thanks sis.
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Re: [align=center][i]Goodbye[/i], Mr. Cyborg. story line by: [b]missUNDERSTOOD[/b] started: [b]October 18, 2008[/b] ended: ------------------------ [b]author's note:[/b] I am a new author here in

Next next!! :penguin:
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wee.. next na.. ilabet..
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wow. nc huh? next :D
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[hr][hr] [color=red][b] [align=center]xxx[/align][/b][/color] [b] [sub][color=gray][u]____________[/u][/color][/sub][color=hotpink]chapter[/color] [color=gray]two[/color]. [/b] [b]Translations: [/b] [b]Aigoo[/b]- 'expression' just like when you say, OMO in Korean, it would mean OhMygod. Aigoo could either mean, 'Sigh' or 'Unbelievable'. [align=center] [b]MEET THE [color=royalblue]C Y B O R G.[/color][/b][i] "[color=blue][b]I said I am not a cyborg, I only have cyborg emotions, pabo! >:( [/b][/color]" [/i][/align] [i]I held the tip of the cigarette and then blew out the smoke as it formed a letter-O-shape in the air.[/i] I don�t really know why I need to live my life here on earth. I mean, I don�t see any meaning in it. My life�s a routine, I always get what I want, smoke �til I�m satisfied, and drink �til I drop. People at my High School fear me. That�s because I am a one heck of a gangster. I would kill for a cigar. That�s how addicted I am to nicotine. I went out from the comfort room and went to my classroom, and as usual, I�m late for the nth time. The teacher doesn�t mind, because I know he wouldn�t care less. I mean, no one sees the gangster as a human, no one knows the gangster, no one likes the gangster�although I heard that I have a number of fans club in this School, but�all of them are scared of me. I sat at the very back portion of the room, on my usual seat, at the very dim corner glued against the wall. That�s where my exit is located. I play PSP there, without the teacher noticing. Normal high school students would actually bring notebooks and books, pens and school stuffs with them as they step in here, but I�m just different. Maybe because I am not normal, but never call me abnormal�my sister once quoted that I am �very� special. But then she�s dead and gone and it doesn�t matter a bit to me. I lighted up another cigar, and then held it with my two fingers and secretly smoked again. I looked over my side, and I saw this� [b]kid staring at me. [/b] �[color=red][b]You�re not supposed to smoke in here, mister[/b][/color].� She sounded so na�ve. I chuckled and then I quickly threw the cigar out to the window. �[color=red][b]Aigoo.[/b][/color]� She muttered, and then started to write something on a piece of paper, after she�s done, she handed it to me. �[color=red][b]Take this, please.[/b][/color]� She flashed me a smile. I never liked to see people smiling at me, it gives me goose bumps. I gave her a look, and then when the paper was already with me, I looked at her and decided to tear the paper in front of her�but she immediately pleaded like a child would. �[color=red][b]Please, don�t! Please. Read it�[/b][/color]� Her voice started trailing off, I shook my head, crumpled the paper and got it inside my pocket. What�s up with this kid? ??? >:( She had been talking to me since yesterday. >:( :-\ I mean, she�s not scared of me like others who would shriek at the sight of me. I don�t get why she really wanted me to be her friend. ??? I looked at her from head to toe, and then I pulled her out from the room. �[color=red][b]I can�t skip classes for the day, pabo! :o [/b][/color]� She complained, so I held her tighter. I liked making girls cry. >:D �[color=red][b]Yah! Please loosen your grip, it�s hurting me![/b][/color]� She said weakly and looked at her hand and then I just realized that I started to loosen my grip. �[color=blue][b]Are you sure you�re not scared of me? >:( ??? ::) [/b][/color]� I asked her for the last time. Then, I took a pocket-knife from my pouch and then I aimed it at her. She started shaking when she saw the knife pointed directly at her. I pushed her against the wall, and then she closed her eyes. �[color=blue][b]ARE YOU SURE YOU�RE NOT SCARED?! >:( ??? [/b][/color]� I made my voice louder this time, I just wanted to scare her off so she won�t bother me anymore. She�s really irritating! >:( She shook her head hesitantly and then she squirmed. �[color=red][b]I�am�NOT�scared�of�YOU!!! :-\ [/b][/color]� She yelled in front of my face, and that caused me to take three steps backward. I chuckled sarcastically and then I returned the knife to its place. [b]I guess she�d make a good sidekick, eh? You think? 8) [/b] �[color=blue][b]Alright, alright.[/b][/color]� I dusted my palm as I rubbed it against the other. �[color=blue]So, what do you want? ??? [/color]� I asked her and sat down on the ground as I had my back leaned against the wall. She sat beside me and then followed the same position that I had. Tss, what a copy-cat. >:( �[color=red][b]I just wanted to be your friend.[/b][/color]� She said, and again, having those innocent eyes with her. I shook my head and then I faced her. �[color=blue][b]I don�t need a friend� :P [/b][/color]� I told her and then she seemed disappointed. �[color=blue][b]But because you had the courage to skip classes and not to be scared of me� ::) [/b][/color]� I looked at me feet, and continued. �[color=blue][b]You could be my side kick. :P [/b][/color]� �[color=red][b]SIDE KICK, EH!? :o [/b][/color]� Her eyes widened and her voice became louder that I had to hit her on the arm to make her calm down. �[color=red][b]But, why side kick?! Can�t we be just friends?![/b][/color]� She looked so insistent, so I had to grab her hair and push her head against the wall�and yeah, I did. ^-^ �[color=blue][b]Listen. Very. Well. To. My. Commandments. ^-^ :P [/b][/color]� I started in a soft whisper while having my eyes stuck on her and without losing the essence of a stern look. �[color=blue][b]Number 1, you NEED to follow whatever I say, without any complaints, and without disobeying me. ^-^ [/b][/color]� I continued. "[color=red][b]Ehh--[/b][/color] :-X " �[color=blue][b]Number 2, you are NOT allowed to call me by name. You should address to me names like, Master, Boss, but never call me by name. Since we are NOT friends in the first place. :P [/b][/color]� "[color=red][b]But I don't even know your name-- :-X [/b][/color]" I took a breath and added. �[color=blue][b]And lastly, I�d only be your friend� if you�d turn me upside down� :-\ and if you could turn me upside down� you�ll finally be FREE.[/b][/color]� She gave me a look and let out a sigh of relief. �[color=red][b]Wait, what does that supposed to mean?[/b][/color]� �[color=blue][b]You don�t need to know for now. But yeah, starting from this day, remember that you are not free. I'll already take hold of your schedules, of your plans, and the like. You should follow my orders, and you should NOT tell anybody about this�or else I�ll kill you. ^-^ [/b][/color]� She swallowed a lump in her throat and then nodded. �[color=red][b]ARASSO! :) ::) [/b][/color]� She saluted me, and then she bowed. �[color=red][b]Master, my name�s Jamie, or you could call me�[/b][/color]� �[color=blue][b]I don�t care. :P [/b][/color]� I told her and started to leave out of that corner. I stopped when I sensed that she was following me. �[color=blue][b]DO YOU WANT TO DIE?! >:( [/b][/color]� Her eyes widened, her body froze. �[color=red][b]N�No. :-X [/b][/color]� �[color=blue][b]Then stop following me because you're irritating me! >:( [/b][/color]� My cellphone rang, and then I answered it. �[b]So, you got the next target already?[/b]� �[color=blue][b]Yes. I already got her. :-X :-\ [/b][/color]� �[b]Keep an eye on her, and never let her get away.[/b]� �[color=blue][b]Yes, sir. I�m on it. :-\ [/b][/color]� �[b]Remember� if you let her get away, you�d be dead meat[/b].� And then I hung up. It was a call from the person... [b]who cursed me--the one who removed love and tears from my being.[/b]

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waaaaa .... nxt chapter please sis ?!?!?!?! im so addicted ... its so nice .. can you make chapter 3 and 4 please ....
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Re: [align=center][i]Goodbye[/i], Mr. Cyborg. story line by: [b]missUNDERSTOOD[/b] started: [b]October 18, 2008[/b] ended: ------------------------ [b]author's note:[/b] I am a new author here in

I love this story!! Next next!! :penguin::penguin:
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Re: [align=center][i]Goodbye[/i], Mr. Cyborg. story line by: [b]missUNDERSTOOD[/b] started: [b]October 18, 2008[/b] ended: ------------------------ [b]author's note:[/b] I am a new author here in

Hi sis!! hehe.. You're also here...LOL! It's still me.. Like my username in ttalk..
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