[quote=dess29]waw.. another new story..

dEz here..

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[quote=xxGiRL NeXT DooRxx]can call me anna ..

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hello, anna!

here`s an update.
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[color=gray][u]____________[/u][/color][color=hotpink]chapter[/color] [color=gray]one[/color].
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TRANSLATIONS:
Unni- Big sis
Pabo- idiot/stupid[/b][/align]
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And the story starts with...
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Jamie's Point of View[/b]
“[b]So, you’re not chicken!?[/b]” Unni teased me, I gave her a glare. I bit my lip and then I nodded.“[b]You should make friends with HIM or else I’ll tell Jeremiah that you’re crushing on him![/b]”
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I bit my lip even more.
What to do? [/i]
If I won't make friends with the gangster, Jeremiah would know that I like him. Aish. T_________T
I never thought I’d be put in a mess like this. HOW CAN I MAKE FRIENDS WITH THE GANGSTER?
I went to my desk and then I took out a piece of paper and wrote on it my plan A and of course, my plan B.
But now, I’ll be trying on my PLAN A.
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PLAN A.
*accidentally bump into the gangster and be so apologetic
*run into him and bow politely while saying, ‘can we be friends?’
*write him a friendly-note.[/i]
Let’s see.. the first one would be a good try, so I must try it out. I mean, it would work. Since that I am a very good actress. I went to the place where I usually see him, and waited.
I waited. Waited. waited.
Where on earth is he? What if he’s absent today, since he loved to skip classes? I still waited. I don’t want unni to tell Jeremiah that I like him.
Pabo. How am I suppose to make friends with that guy?
What kind of idea came into Unni’s mind?!
I looked around and heard footsteps. I guess… I guess it’s him!
I looked around to see if someone was looking, but there was none. I quickly ran and then—BUMP!
Uh-oh. Here it goes.
“[color=red][b]I’m so sorry—sorry—sorry—sorry, please forgive me![/b][/color]”
I bowed and then he just stared at me and then he started walking.
“[color=red][b]Yah! I’m so sorry, mister. I’m so sorry for bumping into you.[/b][/color]”
He ignored me and then he kept walking. “[color=red][b]YAH! I SAID I’M SORRY![/b][/color]”
I yelled and then he stopped walking. I felt so nervous.
I’m dead, I’m dead, I’m dead.
I covered my eyes, and then… I felt his fingers on my hands, trying to take them off.
Before he could take them off, I slowly removed them and faced him.
“[color=red][b]I’M SORRY T_______Tv[/b][/color]”
He looked at me sarcastically, and then he gave me an evil grin. “[color=blue][b]Aren’t you scared of me?[/b][/color]”
I swallowed a lump in my throat and shook my head.
“[color=blue][b]ARE YOU SURE YOU AREN’T SCARED OF ME??[/b][/color]” He repeated.
I shook my head heavily. And then he neared my face, and pushed me against the wall which caused me to lean on it. “[color=blue][b]HAVEN’T YOU HEARD THAT I CAN DO WHATEVER I WOULD WANT TO!?[/b][/color]”
I shook my head again. UNNI, what on earth. T_______T
I’m gonna be dead. WAAAA. I’m too young to die. T_________T
He held my chin and then cupped my cheeks—with a force that hurt me. “[color=blue][b]YOU SHOULD BE SCARED OF ME!!! PABO!![/b][/color]”
He hit me on the cheek, and then later on, he released me.
“[color=red][b]MISTER, I’M REALLY SORRY… please… forgive me.[/b][/color]” I almost cried, I was near to tears, and then he chuckled.
“[color=blue][b]I hate apologetic persons…[/b][/color]” He started, and then he prodded my forehead. “[color=blue][b]LIKE YOU!!!

[/b][/color]” He gave me a scary look, and then I faced my feet.
“[color=red][b]I just wanted to…[/b][/color]” My voice trailed as my eyes started to water.
“[color=blue][b]WHAT?![/b][/color]” He told me and then when he was about to aim another hit on my cheek, I stopped his hand with my fist.
“[color=red][b]I WANTED TO BE YOUR… YOUR…[/b][/color]” My voice trembled and then he looked at me. He seemed to be impressed on what I’ve done with his hand. “[color=red][b]...YOUR GIRL---I mean--FRIEND![/b][/color]” Man, I couldn't stop stammering. :-\ I'm so scared. T_______T
“[color=blue][b]PABO!

[/b][/color]” He pushed me against the wall again. And then he started walking away.
“[color=red][b]YAH!! CAN YOU BE MY FRIEND?![/b][/color]” I didn’t care if I looked desperate here. I needed to do this… for myself and for Unni too! I ran after him and then I hit him on the back. “[color=red][b]PABO! I WANT TO BE YOUR FRIEND![/b][/color]”
“[color=blue][b]NO WAY! I don’t have any friends! AND I DON’T WANT TO HAVE ANY! GET LOST!!

[/b][/color]” He coldly yelled at me and then he ran away. He’s so weird… and scary too.
[b]Seems like PLAN A didn't work out the way I expected it to.
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Last edited by missUNDERSTOOD (2008-10-19 00:47:18)