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What Happened? Fawne thought... ... "Fawne, In Here" that was all she remembered... "Morning. Are you feeling well?" Elisa... "What happened?" "You passed out.. apparently, you didnt eat dinner" "Oh... sorry" "It's Ok. I already told the school what happened to you and they told me to tell you to feel better." Ok..? "Bout You? How `bout school?" "No class remember? Anyway, I have to go and meet up with the guys. You'll be ok right? Take care" And Elisa kissed the top of Fawne's forehead. The Olivie sisters were orphans at the age of 4 & 2 Elisa, being the eldest, took care of her Fawne with her Aunt Maureen. Aunt Maureen died when they were 15 and 13. They became more responsible and stronger ever since. ... Fawne was hungry.. She went out her room and got some cereal.. turned on the t.v. and ate... She noticed her phone on the table... she checked to see if there was something new.... 2 Missed Calls: Oliver <3 1 Voice Mail: "Hey babe.. uhh just wanted to know where you were? Are you sick? Do you want me to visit you? (background voice: babe.. stop calling her... let's g--) Uhh.. I have to go. Take care alright? Ilysm" 3 Messages: From: Adrianne Fawne, he's with... you know who again.. he's stupid.... don't fall for him anymore ahryt? From: Chris Dude, Wer u? It's kinda gloomy without you here. damn Oliver... I could just punch him! He's such a show-off! a DONKEY! anyway... feel better. � From: Mason Hey.. Are you Alright? The whole group is sad... it's different when you're not here... Oliver is being an Ass once more. im sorry... but its true. I hope you feel better. i love you.... [i know you dont. but i understand] The last message made her wince. Mason was just a best friend of hers... but Mason didnt see it that way... She sighed... Her Cereal was gone... The show was over... and she was alone... AGAIN. after cleaning up.. she turned her laptop on... signed in on Y!M. Pierre020 would like to add you in his/her Messenger List as Pierre_Razs What the hell? she thought. ... Next ... Group: Friends.... Name: Fawne.� Finish.... BUZZ! Pierre020: Hey. Fawne.�: Uh.. who're you? Pierre020: Pierre Razsworth. Fawne.�: Do i know you? Pierre020: Uhh. Nope. I dont know you too... but this guy sent me your email..... Fawne.�: WHo? Pierre020: Some Oliver dude. Fawne.�: Oh. Ok... Pierre020: So, NASL? Fawne.�: uh.. why don't you go first? Pierre020: Pierre Razsworth, 14, M, Missouri Fawne.�: Fawne Olivie, 14, F, England Pierre020: oh hehe. ahryt. nice meeting you Fawne.�: Yeah. nice meeting you too Pierre020: Why aren't you in school? Fawne.�: I'm Sick.. hehe you? Pierre020: Im Home-Schooled this year. hehe Fawne.�: Oh. cool Pierre020: Hey. I gtg. Bye. tc. TTYL. Fawne.�: Alright. Bye. Tc too. Pierre020 has signed out. Fawne found herself staring at the display photo of Pierre. She couldn't deny that another character has appeared in her already miserable life story. She sighed once more. and clicked 'Sign Out' she then turned her laptop off.. and went back to sleep.. ... "You lied to me" a female voice said.. "mmm.." "..." "I NEVER LIED TO YOU!" .. a boy's voice... who? "then what took you so long to answer?! huh?! why?" this girl was now crying..hysterically "I'm sorry..." ... Fawne awoke panting and sweating. WOAH. she thought.... she got up.. promising herself she wouldnt dream about that again.

[quote=deniz0623]Hey, I like your story!! and by the way, what's the title? keep it up!! update! update! yii jimmy. yaa, right here reading, Deniz.[/quote] WAAAA? omg omg omg omg. Uhm.. The title? Just another random story. HAHA. (: Uhm... Update? Idk when i can think of another part. Uhm.. Jimmy? HAHA -- [quote=dess29]wow. nice.. [/quote] Thanks -- [quote=---xXirukiTepe---]First comment, Nice work..... [/quote] Hehehe [: Thanks -- Nvm. here it is. HAHA Fawne slept for only 2 hours... but she felt like her dream could last only for a minute.. the female voice really sound familiar. Now Playing: Remembering Sunday (All Time Low) Calling: Elisa "Hey Lis... yea... late??.. why?.........oh.alright... see you later then" Elisa had some 'emergency' party. Sigh. Home Alone again. 6 Messages Received: From: Adrianne we'll be there by 3. ahryt? From: Chris Dude... we'll be there ok? Its no fun with out you. From: Mason Nie, cant w8 2 c u. we miss u alot. 100x. From: Oliver <3 Hey.. uh.. call me when you read this ok? I need to talk to you.. From: Oliver <3 i realllyy neeed to! From: Gingie Hey $#&%$& (bad word ) She called oliver.... .... .... .... Oliver: Hey Fawne: What? O: Uh.. i dont know how to say this F: Lemme go first O: ok? F: we're done. I dont want this anymore. O: oh.. but why? F: you feel that way too right? O: no i dont. i was supposed to ask you out! F: well too bad.. i dont want to go out with you anymore... goodbye. Fawne hanged up.... She sobbed and cried... and... she was confused... She thought she was over him.. guess not... Ok.. RELAX. breathe in... breathe out.... *DING DONG* people: HEY! Fawne: hey (: i missed you guys people: We can't stay long.. We have a project and Sir is just going to e-mail the instructions to you.. Fawne: Oh, ahryt (: Thanks.. Mason: Hey... Uh.. Fawne: Hey (: Mason: Oliver was really upset.. Fawne: I dont care. hehe. HE makes me upset all the time. Mason: Hehe... You're right Chris: MASSOOOOOOOONNN!!! Mason: G2G. hehe Bye (: Fawne: Bye.. :] She thought they would last long... She sighed.. Guess not. She turned on the laptop again.. Signed in her Y!M.... .... 24 Messages Received. ... OL!VeR is Online. BUZZ! Oh noez!

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