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This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

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one word "WOW!" hahaha.i'll wait for your update sis! nice!! more! more! more!! :D :penguin::penguin::penguin::penguin::penguin::penguin:
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[quote=rheiya58]new reader! love this! parang mga pangarap ko with miggy chavez! hahaha... specialy chapters 1 and 2!:lol:[/quote] hahah.. tlga sis?? hahhaha thnx for reading pla! [quote=_berii.^ü]wew. haha! anung kanta yan ha!? =d =d update na agad sis! :D[/quote] [quote=*nicz.love]waa! nenenext!=D bitin. xD[/quote] mmya na muna sis, tnatamad pa me eh.. heheh [quote=leziiaaa01]one word "WOW!" hahaha.i'll wait for your update sis! nice!! more! more! more!! :D :penguin::penguin::penguin::penguin::penguin::penguin:[/quote] mamatz sis! mamaya pku mag.a.update.. :D
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^ update na po :D
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update na po pls...
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[quote=_berii.^ü]^ update na po[/quote] [quote=kathleen24]update na po pls...[/quote] sorry if now lang me mag.uupdate ah.. bz kxe sa skul.. :D Chapter 5 "Again, this song is dedicated to our very own LOUIE! :D" You're my piece of mind, in this crazy world You're every thing I've tried to find Your love is a pearl You're my Mona Lisa You're my rainbow skies And my only prayer is that you realize You'll always be beautiful in my eyes... The world will turn And the seasons will change And all the lessons we will learn Will be beautiful and strange We'll have our fell of tears Our share of sight My only prayer is that you realize You'll always be beautiful in my eyes... You will always be beautiful in my eyes And the passing is the show That you will always grow Ever more beautiful in my eyes And there are lines upon my face From a life time of smiles When the time comes to embrace For one long last wine We can laugh about how time really flies We won�t say goodbye �Cause true love never dies You'll always be beautiful in my eyes... You will always be beautiful in my eyes And the passing is the show That you will always grow Ever more beautiful in my eyes The passing is the show That you will always grow Ever more beautiful in my eyes... I was totally speechless while he’s singing the song. Siya lang sa lahat ng mga manliligaw ko ang nagdedicate ng alltime fave ko aside from my dad. Ano pa bang aasahan nyong magiging reaction ko? Eh di super duper uber kilig yatang heart ku. Vince nakakainlove ka! “Did you like the song Louie?” “Of..course!” then I hugged him.. di ko kasi napigilan sarili ko.. “Thank you, Vince!” “WOOOOHH!!!” parang nabuhusan ako ng tubig,, nawala kasi sa mind ko na nasa front stage pala kami.. patay ako nito! “Oopss, sorry Vince! Nacarried away lng.. sorry!” nag.V sign pa’ku! “It’s ok! No harm done. Hug mo ‘ko ulit if you want!” he grinned “KISS NA LANG!! KISS! KISS! KISS!” “You’re blushing!” puna sa’kin ni Vince.. “I’m not!” “KISS NA! KISS! KISS!” “Kiss daw oh, sabi nila! Ok lng ba?” he’s smiling.. “Why not! Do I need to—“ ****tsupp**** Di ko na natapos sasabihin ko coz he already kissed me! I feel like I was in heaven at that time.. Parang tumigil na ang ikot ng mundo.. Corny ko noh? =D Mga 2 AM na natapos ang party, nagpaalam na sila sa daddy ko. After the party, di na’ko napansin ni Vince. It hurts! Ewan ko ba bakit ako nasasaktan. Pupunta na sana ako ng room ko when Vince approached me.. “Louie, I’m sorry!” he looked sincere.. “Sorry for what? :paranoid:” “If I had kissed you kanina.” “Ok lang naman yun noh.. :D” “Meaning, di ka galit?:D” “Bakit naman ako magagalit! Kaw talaga, ang cute mo! :lol:” then I pinch his nose, feeling close talaga ako.. “Sakit nun ah! ” hinahawak.hawakan pa nya yung ilong nya.. “Tinatawag ka na ng kasama mo.” “Sige, bye nah! Till we meet again..=) You're so beautiful Louie!" then he walked through their car.. Nakasakay na siya nang may naalala ako. Takbo! :penguin: Then when one of the members saw me running, pinahinto yung sasakyan.. "VINCE!" I shout out loud..

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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

anu un!? wahhaha. may kiss tlga eh. XD next na sis! :D
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

waa! ang sweet nun song nayan! wew! kpg kinantahan ka ba nmn nean ni tapx. niahah assumin naman. =D=D next naa po!;] OT: risa! knta yun. xD:lol:
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new reader! keep it up sis.:wow::wow: nkakainlalalab si ViNCE akin na yun!d:

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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

shoshoshoshocks! nakaka..nakak relate? aii.ambisyosa ako.nakaka "INGGIT" pala XD hahaha :D ganda ng update sis! kaso bitin! neks na uli! XD
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

.wehehe ganda ng story exciting pls.update mo na new chapter i cnt w8 weh hehe :D kapal moks tong c louisse ha.? hehe
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

[quote=_berii.^ü]anu un!? wahhaha. may kiss tlga eh. XD next na sis! :D[/quote] song un sis.. :D[quote=*nicz.love]waa! ang sweet nun song nayan! wew! kpg kinantahan ka ba nmn nean ni tapx. niahah assumin naman. =D=D next naa po!;] OT: risa! knta yun. xD:lol:[/quote] :D:D..yeah sweet nga sis eh.. sana kantahan din ako ng ganyang song.. =D=D [quote=eri.03]new reader! keep it up sis.:wow::wow: nkakainlalalab si ViNCE akin na yun!d:[/quote] uie sis panu nmn si Louie kung sa'yo na si Vince?? =D [quote=leziiaaa01]shoshoshoshocks! nakaka..nakak relate? aii.ambisyosa ako.nakaka "INGGIT" pala XD hahaha :D ganda ng update sis! kaso bitin! neks na uli! XD[/quote] sinadya ko talagang ibitin yan sis.. hahah para exciting! :D [quote=edwardcullenisloove].wehehe ganda ng story exciting pls.update mo na new chapter i cnt w8 weh hehe :D kapal moks tong c louisse ha.? hehe[/quote] uu nga kapal! =D thnx sa lahat ng nagread.. =D [b]PIT SENYOR EVERYONE!!![/b] [align=center][b]CHAPTER 6[/b][/align] Nakasakay na siya nang may naalala ako. Takbo! :penguin: Then when one of the members saw me running, pinahinto yung sasakyan.. "VINCE!" I shout out loud.. Then the car stopped, bumaba si Vince and naglakad patungo sa'kin.. Medyo kinakantyawan na kmi ng mga kabanda niya pero bahala na, nasimulan na eh.. =D=D "Oh bakit?? may nakalimutan ba'ko?? Lakas ng sigaw mo ah.. Nasira eardrums ko eh.. =D" "Ows?? Talaga?? Buti nga sayo!" [i]pagalit-galit effect[/i] "Hey! Galit ka bah?? Akala ko ba okay na tayo?? Feeling close ka ata sa'kin eh.. :lol: Joke lng.. Peace!" "Oo! Galit na galit na galit na galit ako.. :disgust: " "Have I done something wrong??" "Oo! Akala ko ba hihingin mo number ko? tsaka friendster ko? tsaka Ym ko?? Bkit d mo hiningi?? Tsaka ung notebook asan na??" kakahiya talaga ako.. =D "Yun ba?? Akala ko nmn kung ano na.. :lol: Cute mo talaga Louie!" [i]He grinned..[/i] "Correction! I'm beautiful not cute.. :lol: Akin na nga cellphone mo! Wala ka yatang planong hingin number ko eh.." Then he gave me his cp.. "Oh ayan na huh, nanjan na number.. I also saved my YM id, fs and everything.. May facebook pa, multiply tsaka myspace.. :lol:" "Sigurista ka talaga.. Pwede na ba kaming umuwi senyorita medyo inaantok na'ko eh tsaka may gig pa kami bukas.. I'll text you, promise! Then I'll send lots of comments and messages in all your account tomorrow.. OK ba yun??" "Sure you can go! Bye! :D "Purket nakuha mo na gusto mo, yan lang sasabihin mo?? =D" "Eh ano sasabihin ko?? Huh?? i love you??" "I love you too sweetie.. =D=D Gotta go! **tsupp**" :o waahh another kiss?? nakaw halik un ah.. Di ko naman sinabing I love you ah bakit nag.i love u too un?? Goodness, tumaba yata heart ko.. Help! :lol: Hahai buhay, bakit ba kanina lang hiyang-hiya ako sa kanya?? Tas ngayon super kapal ko na? =D Di bale, he kissed me naman! :P [b]5th day after that night[/b] "Bessy?? Daydreaming again?? maya na yan, pause mo muna yan baka pagalitan ka ni Ms. Suico nyan. :D " "Ok! Best usap tayu after the class ah.. I have a very very very big problem. As in! :cry:" "Cge2, malapit na naman matapos eh.. Kinig muna tayo.. =D' "Uie best, ano bang problem mo?? C'mon share it!" "Ganito kasi best, di nagtext or nagparamdam mn lang sa mga accounts na binigay ko si Vince eh.. :cry:" "Best, love mo na ba talaga yun? Pinoproblema mo kasi ang di dapat problemahin eh.. :) Wait wait wait, bakit ba tilian yung grupo ng mga super kikay dun??" "Ewan.. Anong paki ko sa kanila? =|:D Best, makinig ka muna sa problem ko.. :(" "Best maya na, ok? :D Pwede? :D Baka may papable eh kaya sila nagtitilian, papalitan ko na yung guitarist ko d rin kasi nagparamdam eh.. =D" "Cge na nga.. Maya ah, makinig ka na sa problem ko.. =D" "Sure! =D" Bigla namang nagbell for out next class.. =D 'Naman oh, wrong timing.." senti ng bessy ko.. "Buti nga! ayaw kasi mkinig sa problem ko eh.. :P" "Bilis naman yata ng karma ko.. :D Pasok na tayo best..!" [u]PHYSICS CLASS[/u] "Classmates, listen! Malelate daw si Teacher Lopez ngayon, sabi nya let's answer na lang daw the exercise on our workbook!" Announced ng super plastic na president namin.. "Best, tapos ka na?? Pa-copy ah.. =D" ganito talaga kami ng besty ko.. Kung sinong mauna un kinokopyahan.. :lol::lol: Then I gave her my workbook.. "Sleep muna ko best ah.. Just wake me up when September ends.. :lol::lol:" Meaning nun pagdumating na teacher namin.. =D "Good morning Ms. De la Cruz! :D" :o is this a dream? I slapped my face, d naman ah.. =D:o '

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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

waa.first to comment! XD wat happened?! cno dumating? bat ndi na sa kanya nag paparamdam?? hahaha XD neks.neks.neks!
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o. next naa! whahah!=D=D
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Waaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!! Sooooooooooooo bitiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn!!! Wag gnun!!!!!!!! Hehehe!!! Sunod na........Dali! Hehehe!!! Wew! Prng nabaliw na ata ako sa story mo sis! Hekhek!Kya continuation agad ha?Hehe! [spoiler]My exam pa'ko....but still i'm willing to turnout my notes for this!Wahehe!!![/spoiler] =D=D=D
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

woaw ang cute nan storii ehehe..nekc na :wow:
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wee. kelan an update? :eh: atat na ko ke vince. =d =d
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^ aq din haha :lol:
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

sorry sissys if I can't update right now.. midterms kasi namin.. =| tomorrow night cguro, mag.a.update ako. :D muahh.. luv yah all.. :D
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^cge :) wait ku po :D
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CHAPTER 7 PHYSICS CLASS "Classmates, listen! Malelate daw si Teacher Lopez ngayon, sabi nya let's answer na lang daw the exercise on our workbook!" Announced ng super plastic na president namin.. "Best, tapos ka na?? Pa-copy ah.. =D" ganito talaga kami ng besty ko.. Kung sinong mauna un kinokopyahan.. :lol::lol: Then I gave her my workbook.. "Sleep muna ko best ah.. Just wake me up when September ends.. :lol::lol:" Meaning nun pagdumating na teacher namin.. =D javascript:insert_text(':D', ''); :D "Good morning Ms. De la Cruz! :D" :o is this a dream? I slapped my face, d naman ah.. =D:o "V..v..vince?? :O" "Why are you here?? I mean, how'd you know--" "Shhh.. maya ka na kaya magtanong! :D May pupuntahan pa tayo.. =D Lika na!" Then he held my hand and siya pa ung nagdala ng bag ko huh.. Some of my classmates were shocked, iba naman kinikilig.. :D "Best, ingat kayo huh.. =D" pahabol sa'min ng Katrina.. "Wait nga! San mo ba ako dadalhin?? Huh?? Feeling close ka ata sa'kin eh.. :lol:" eventhough kinikilig ako ayoko namang magpaobvious noh at least this time.. :D "Mag-a-out-of-town kami ng mga kabanda ko.. ok? I want you to go with us.. Naipagpaalam na kita sa Dad mo and sa teacher mo.. Kaya wag ka nang tanung ng tanung! :D" "How could I trust you?? Eh di nga tayo close eh.. Hello! wala pang week kaya ng tumugtug kayu samin.. Then di ka pa nagparamdam or nagtext mn lang..:angry:" "Sorry na.. I'll explain later.. Ok na?? Wag ka na ngang magalit pangit mo kasi pag nagagalit ka eh.. :lol:" I know he's just joking.. =D "Ah ganun?? Eh bakit pinuntahan mo pa ako rito?? Inlove ka sakin noh?? Alam ko na, nalove at first sight ka sakin, ryt?? =D" "Lika na nga, bilisan mo at naghihintay na sila.. :D" Layu ng byahe namin kasi Tagaytay daw destination namin.. Sabi nila maganda daw dun, di pa kasi talaga ako nakapunta dun eh.. :lol: Tulog muna ako ulit, since mukhang ilang oras pa bago kami makarating dun.. Uie tka, magkatabi pala kami ni Vince.. weeehh.. kilig talaga! :D [b]VINCE's RESTHOUSE[/b] javascript:insert_text(':D', ''); :D "Wow! Vince, ang ganda ng view ah.." "Kaya nga dinala kita dito eh.. :D Pasok muna tayo mahal kong prinsesa at ipakilala kita ng isa-isa sa bandmates ko.. :D" "Alam ko naman sinu-sino sila eh.. :D" "Maski na, tigilan mo na ngang pagpapacute mo Louie.. :lol: Joke lang.." "Paki mo! Crush kita, alam mo yun dbah?? :P" "Pasok na nga tayo.." Yun nga ipinakila nya ako sa mga kabandmates though alam nmn nyang alam ko na lahat name nila.. Avid fan kaya ako ng banda nila.. :D [spoiler][i]BAND MEMBERS: Vince (lead vocals) lahbs ko 'to =D=D Flynn (backup vocalist) gwapo din ito.. super! pero maxiado tahimik Ivan (bass) gwapo; matangkad; mabait; meju chxboi Merrick (lead guitarist) crush ng best ko: gwapo din; cool; mabait din Jan (drums) nagbibilang ng GFs; gwapo; matangkad; meju suplado pero mabait Wilson (guitars / vocals) gwapo; mabait; chixboi din =D[/i][/spoiler] "San pupunta ang mga yon?" I'm referring to his bandmates "Magpapahinga nang mga yun, magrerecharge para bukas.. :D Malamang di na magdidinner mga yun.." "Ah, ok! Ikaw?? Di ka ba inaantok? Pahinga ka na muna.. Matutulog na lang din ako dun sa room ko.. =)" "Sure ka?? Pagamit ng lap mo huh.. :D" he used my lap as his unan.. naman oh! maiinlab ako ng sobra nito.. =D "Vince?" "Uhmm?? Pwede mag-usap muna tayo? May itatanong lang ako.. =)" "Sure, ano yun?" d siya bumangon but he stared at me.. [b]"Do you like me?:)"[/b]
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