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This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

new reader po ko. ^^ danda ng story. pramis. =D teka. anu po sgot nya? keLn update? waa. hehe. w8 ko po agad. mamats. *ganda tLga pramis. kkkiLig! :D
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

nyc.. :) i like it. *basahin niyo rin sana ung story ko. ung kakaupdate q lng =)
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

[quote=tche3ze.16]new reader po ko. ^^ danda ng story. pramis. =D teka. anu po sgot nya? keLn update? waa. hehe. w8 ko po agad. mamats. *ganda tLga pramis. kkkiLig! :D[/quote] [quote=~~francie~~]nyc.. :) i like it. *basahin niyo rin sana ung story ko. ung kakaupdate q lng =)[/quote] lamatz sa inyu.. hehehe mamaya na muna ako mag.a.update.. heheheh
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

wow... new reader here.. hihihihih.. ang ganda poh ng story.. :thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup: labyah vince!! LOL
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

tma ba nmang itnong un? kkpalan ng pgmmka. =d =d next na po! :D
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

mahal kong prinsesa. shet shet. :redface: :redface: taeynaa. "do you like me?" di ku kayang sabihin yan sa boilet. XD next naa nga!;]
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

ahaha XD ngaun lang ako nakapg basa uli!! ano kea isasagot ni fafa vince?? hahaha >.< update ka na sis! :wow::wow::wow::wow:
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

hahahahahha.. here's the update :D [b]CHAPTER 8[/b] [b] "Do you like me?:)"[/b] "What??" yun na napabangon talaga sia huh.. =D "Err, what I mean is do you like May?? Or June? July?" grrr.. ano ba'to?? :D "=D Iniba mo tanong mo eh.. :D You asked me if I like you right?" "Ndi ah.. :D" "You asked me eh.. =D Wag mo na ngang ideny.. :D to answer your question, yes I like you! =) I don't know, I just like you the first time I saw you.. :lol:" "Really?? :o We don't know each other yet, how come you already like me?" "Ewan ko.. Basta gusto kita.. Kaya nga dinala kita dito para magkakilala tayo ng lubusan.. Ok? You like me, right? Wag mong ideny.. =D" "uhmmm, alam mo naman siguro sagot dyan dibah? :D Basta like mo'ko like rin kita, I love that! :wow::wow:" "But rest assured, I wont take advantage.. :)" "Ok, tulog ka na uli.. Thanks huh! Kinilig ako masyado.. =D" he used my lap again as his pillow but okay lang lahbs ko nman.. =D Di ko namalayan na naktulog na rin pala ako.. :lol: "Louie, gising na! It's dinner time.. Magbihis ka na din after nakalimutan mong magbihis ng uniform eh.. :D" "Anong oras na bah? Sorry nkaidlip ako.. =|" "No, it's ok! Magbihis ka muna.." "Vince, wala akong dalang damit.. Panu to??:cry: "Kanina bago kita pinuntahan sa school nyo, pumunta muna ako sa inyo para kunin yung mga damit mo.. :D" "Lakas mo talaga ah.. 100% sure ka talagang sasama ako ah.." "Di ka naman makakatanggi eh.. =D" "Ok! Sus, kung hindi lang kita like makakatikim ka na:D.." "Hintayin na lang kita dito.. Bilisan mo Louisse ah.. :D" "Yes sir! :D" Holding hands kami tungo sa veranda nila.. Kilig talaga ako, as in! hahahah.. Pink t-shirt lng suot ko tsaka shorts.. :D Simpleng barbecue party lang naman daw to sabi ni Vince.. barbecue party talaga huh! :lol: While we were eating our barbecues, Jan told Vince that their girlfriends were coming.. Medyo kinakabahan ako kasi baka macompare ako sa mga girlfriends nila.. Feeling ko kasi mga pretty GFs nila, di naman sa insecure ako sa beauty ko kaso lang I hate being compared lang talaga..:lol: "Good evening everyone!" bati ng mga babaeng dumating, they are 5.. Meaning ba nito partner2x sila?? Oh no please not my Vince! :cry: Ang apat sa kanila tumabi sa mga boyfriends nila and the other girl eh, tumabi ba naman kay Vince? xhheettt na malagkit! "Vince, cousin mo ba yan?" tanong ng girl na tumabi kay Vince.. kainis talaga! "Oh sorry Belle, I forgot to introduce you to Louie! :D Belle she's Louie and Louie this is Belle.." [b] "Hi! Louie, nice to meet you, I'm Belle, his girlfriend.." she even stressed the last word..[/b]
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

aihxt... anu ba naman yang si vince...?? hhhmmmppp.. ang sama naman.. :crybaby::crybaby::crybaby::crybaby: masakit kaya 'yan... :crybaby::crybaby::crybaby: go louie!! kaya mu 'yan!! =)=)
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

ngek? may gf na? =d =d next na! :D
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

CHAPTER 9 "Hi! Louie, nice to meet you, I'm Belle, his girlfriend.." she even stressed the last word.. "AH.. ah.. ok!" I gave her a fake smile.. I can't even find a word to say.. "Excuse me! Matutulog na'ko meju napagod kasi ako eh.,." I lied.. "Louie!" tawag sakin ni Vince but I continue walking towards my room, I don't want to cry in front of them.. This time they might be thinking Im such a loser and I hate that idea.. Why Vince?? How could you do this to me? Aalis na lang ako. I'll call our driver, but it would take hours for the driver to get here. Ang layo kasi sa'min nitong resthouse nina Vince.. What should I do?? My heart is really bleeding.. This is my first time to experience this kind of pain.. :cry: Instead of staying on my room, lumabas ako sa resthouse, dun ako sa backdoor dumaan para hindi ako makita nina Vince.. :( Then I reached the shore which is 100 m away from the resthouse.. "Hey, bat ka nag-iisa dito?" medyo natakot ako sa nagsalita sa likod ko.. "Wag kang lalapit! Please, wag kang lumapit!" "Chill! This is Ivan.. :D" then yun tinabihan nya ku.. "Oh hi! Sorry, I didn't recognize your voice kasi.. :)" "It' ok! Why are you here? Got a problem?" "Ikaw? Ba't andito ka? Diba dapat nandun ka sa girlfriend mo?" "Darn. Wala akong girlfriend ngayon noh, di ko yun girlfriend.." "Ah. ok!" "Ikaw ba't nandito ka? Buti pinayagan ka ni Vince ng mag-isa dito.." "Busy sia sa Belle nia eh.. Let's not talk about them., OK?" "Belle ni Vince kamu? Di nam--" "Sabing wag natin pag-usapan eh.. :angry:" "Woah. Relax! Highblood ka masyado eh.. :D" "Sorry! Ayoko lang talagang pag-usapan sila.." "Ok, di na po mauulit! :):)" Masaya naman kausap si Ivan.. Di nga namin namalayan na 2am na pala.. "Louie! I've been crazy thinking kung san ka pumunta yun pala, you're busy flirting here!" "Hey pare! Di naman tama yan.." Pumagitna si Ivan samin ni Vince "Ivan back off! baka makalimutan ko pang magkaibigan tayo.. Louie halika na! O gusto mong kaladkarin pa kita pabalik? :angry:" "Vince bitawan mo nga ako.. Ang sakit na ng kamay ko.." "At kanino ka gusto magpapahawak huh? Kay Ivan!? :angry:" "It's none of your business.. Pwede ba asikasuhin mo yung Belle mo! Kung may tampohan mn kayo wag mo ako idamay sa isyu nyo.. ok?" pataliman ng titig to.. :D "Are you jealous!? Tell me honestly, please.." "You want an answer? Yea, I'm jealous! Now that you know, did it boast your bloody ego? :cry: Masaya ka nang sinaktan mo'ko? Huh? Masaya ka nang pinaasa mo'ko? :mad:" di ko na napigilan pa ang mga luhang kanina pa nkatago.. [b] "Louie, stop crying! I will explain everything.. Please.." He hugged me when I'm trying to let go of my hand from him to wipe my tears.. [/b]

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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

wew. bilis mag'update! haha! bwisit na belle! di nman cla ee. XDDD next na po :D
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

woot..new reader.., update na sisz.^^
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

[quote=_berii.^ü]wew. bilis mag'update! haha! bwisit na belle! di nman cla ee. XDDD next na po :D[/quote] [quote=nia_pearl19]woot..new reader.., update na sisz.^^[/quote] hihih.. thnx sissys.. bukas na ulit update ku.. sleep muna me.. hihi.. gudnyt! :)
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

nakuu. na late nq. tae. ok na eh. tong belle na to. :D na-carried away ako. update! update! haha. slipwell na muna te. nyahaha. :):)
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

oops sis.. kelan update.gahhahaha excited na ko eh^^
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

hhmmmpp.. cnu ba kasi 'yang si belle..??? :mad::angry::angry: i dont lyk her... :(( aihxt,, go louie!!! hahaha... ipaglaban mu si louie, ivan!! LOL
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

:arrow: NEW READER :D Grabe kakakilig naman hehe :D:thumbsup: next na po :D :D :D:thumbsup:
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

thanks sa mga nagbasa at naghintay.. :D [b]CHAPTER 10[/b] "Louie, stop crying! I will explain everything.. Please.." He hugged me when I'm trying to let go of my hand from him to wipe my tears.. "You don't owe me an explanation Vince! Hindi naman tayo diba?" I pushed him then I started walking towards the resthouse.. Ni hindi ko xia nilingon.. I am totally hurt taz sasabihin pa nyang I'm flirting with Ivan.. Grrrr.. "Louisse, open the door! I know you're still awake.. Let's talk!" lakas ng sigaw nya din katok pa ng katok, so I opened the door. "Pwede ba Vince? Kung gusto mong mag-usap tayo, bukas na, ok? Baka makita ka pa ng Belle mo! Goodnight!" I shut the door.. Di ko namalayan na nakatulugan ko pala ang pag-iyak. Bwesit kasi! Di naman kami close pero bakit nainlove ako ng ganito?? :cry: Pagtingin ko sa salamin. Xheeett! Ang pangit ko.. Waahh, may eye bags pa'ko! Kasalanan mo talaga to Vince, ang pangit ko na.. :( Di ko yata feel na magmukmok dito kaya naligo na'ko, maybe tulog pa lahat ng mga kasama ko. Siguro magkatabi ngayon sina Vince tsaka ung Belle na yun. I need to look fresh and pretty as always.. =D PAglabas ko I saw Vince, nakatulog ng nakaupo? Anong drama to? Don't tell me, andito xia magdamag waiting for me to talk to him? Naman oh.. "Vince! Umayos ka nga.. Gising na!" kahit na galit ako sa kanya, I still love him.. "Louie? Ok na bang mag-usap tayo? Please? :(" "Vince, matulog ka kaya muna sa room mo. Mag-usap tayo pagkagising mo. Tulog ka muna dun. Ok?" "I need to explain Louie, hindi ko girlfriend si Belle! Maniwala ka.." "So you mean she lied? Ganun ba?" "Yea. Ginud time ka lang nun.Please Louie, wag ka nang magalit sa'kin! Please. Oo, nabansagan akong chixboi pero iba na ngayon. And I like you so much!" "Antok lang yan. Tulog ka na dun sa room mo! Tumayo ka na please." salamat naman at tumayo na din siya. "Louisse, she's not my girlfriend. Promise!" "Liar ka talaga.. :mad: bahala ka sa buhay mo!" bahala siya, lalabas na lang ako kesa makinig sa kanya. "Saan ka pupunta? Louie!" "Kahit saan! Wag kang sumunod ah. At magagalit ako ng bonggang-bongga!" Buti na lang di siya sumunod, hahah "Louie!" tawag sa'kin ni Belle nang nandun na'ko sa terrace. "Yes?" "Can we talk?" "Sure, anong pag-uusapan natin?" [b] "About me and Vince!" then she hugged me. ewan ko, naguguluhan talaga ako why she hugged me. [/b]
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Re: This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

hainakers. hahah! epal na belle yan.=D next naa nga! :penguin:
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