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pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

xXlynethXx
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

Tae. Bt ang sama ni Kara. Tsk. Sya dpat mamatay eh! Next :D
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

haha.. natapos ko din.. gush.. walang hiyang Kara.. Mafia sia?!! gosh.. anu kaya mangyayari sa kanila ni Denver at Paige.. Sana di sila patayin o anu man ni Kara sa Pinas.. :cry:
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i love the title ...update
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[b]Chapter 36[/b] [i][u]Denver’s POV [/u][/i] “Hello Philippines!” I said to myself as I got out from the plane. “Excuse me sir.” That is just a couple of guards who approached me. “Ano po ang problema?” tanong ko, parang may palpak nanaman ata akong ginawa! “Sir patingin nga po ng I.D.” I handed them my I.D. “Sir sigurado po ba kayong ikaw ‘to?” Crap! Naka-disguise pala ako! “Opo sir! Denver Ford.” But I think they are not convinced so they took me in a little table inside the airport where everybody would see me. “Sir, I’m telling you! I’m Denver Ford! I graduated as the valedictorian in Burberry High and the captain of our soccer team and vocalist of our band broken heart strings!” I said defending myself. “Looks like you have a lot of research about Denver Ford?” :facepalm: Crap! I need a miracle. “Heyya officer!” “Ka-Kara?!” I was shocked that made fall from my chair :scared: “He is telling the truth.” Kara said and let the officer step away from the computer. “As you can see it is impossible for a person like him to know every likes and dislike of a person especially if you are pretending to be him or her.” The police nodded and asked me questions and obviously I got it all right. “Thank you officer!” Kara said as she bid good bye to the officer. “What the hell are you doing here?” I said as I held Kara’s arms. “To make your life miserable that’s all, no biggie. O and yea, Ryan this is Denver and Denver this is Ryan.” Instead of shaking each other’s hands we exchange glares then I walked away. “Denver!” That’s my cousin Nathan, extremely dangerous actor. “Nathan! Oy, pakibuhat naman ung iba kong bag.” I said while pointing my 3 other bags. “Basta nandyan pasalubong ko!” He said as he wrapped his arm around my neck. “Yea nandyan un :d” Binuhat niya na at sinimulan na namin ang napaka traffic na daan papunta sa bahay ni Tita Eloisa. “Tita sa kitchen tayong lahat.” Nakarating na kami sa bahay ni Nathan. “Ah Tita, I will be known as Tyler Santos your adopted son who studied in Canada at Tita Len’s.” They all looked at each other. “Why do you need to pretend?” Tita Eloisa asked. “I need to protect Paige, the one I will be engaging with? ‘Cause someone desperate is here for me. And also I’m disguising to prevent her from knowing that I’m his fiancé ‘cause her mother wants it to be a surprise in her 18th birthday.” Nathan acted like he didn’t care. “Did you understand what he said?” Tita Eloisa asked Nathan. “Nah, not a word. You talk fast man!” He said then laughed. “O yea, Tita una na ako may date pa ako :eh:” Loko-loko din eh! Parang pangalawang Keith buti na lang tumino si Keith :d “Basta ha! Tyler tawag mo sa akin.” Sigaw ko habang paalis na siya. “Sige! Bye Tyler! :wave:” I tsked as soon as he went out of the house. “Magpahinga ka na 8 tayo bukas sa preschool and for sure baka darating na rin si Paige :)” I smiled and looked away. “You think Ma tama ‘tong ginagawa ko?” I said emphasizing the word ‘ma’. “Ikaw! Nasa sa iyo na yan, kung sa tingin mo tama ang ginagawa mo. Since malaki ka na, alam mo na mag-distinguish ng tama sa mali.” she said as she lead me to my room. “Osha! Eton a ung kuwarto mo.” “Thanks po.” I said then rolled over the bed. Wondering how plans are going to work out. [i]Morning :D[/i] “Kuya Tyler! Breakfast!” That is Jack, 13-year-old cousin of mine, since his Mom died at his early age and his father ran away with a bitch, Tita Eloisa was the one who took care of him ever since. “Sige! Sige! Pupunta na!” I shouted as I cover my face with a pillow. “Gandang umaga!” I said as I went down stairs and of course I already took a shower. “Ang bilis mo nag-shower!” sabi ni Jack na tumatawa. “Ikaw ha! Umaga palang pinagtritripan mo na ako.” I said as I wrapped my arms in his neck :D Andami kop ala namiss for 10 years. “O tama na yang kulitana t kumain na, malalate si Kuya Tyler sa mission niya!” sabi ni Tita Eloisa habang binababa ung mga ulam sa mesa. “Kuya Denver, bakit kailangan ka naming tawagain na Tyler, eh ok naman pangalan mo ha?” That was Jack asking a a very private question which only a few should only know. “Just don’t argue with that fact! Just call me Tyler okay?” I said giving him a thumbsup. “Why doesn’t anyone trust a 13-year-old? Hello! Thirteen na kaya ako!” He said waving his hands in the air as we reach the food :drool: Bacon, hotdog, nuggets, bread, and the star of the table ‘rice’. “Ma parang andami naman?” I said as I grab my chair. “Ano ba Kuya Tyler! Kain ka na lang busy na kaming kumakain ehy ikaw tanong pa ng tanong!” Jack said while patting my back. Napatawa kaming lahat :lol3: “Oo na, sorry na po lolo.” I said and eat. “So Ma, Sabay ba tayong pupuntang preschool?” I said habang subo :chew: “Hindi, si Jack hahatid mo muna sa school tapos punta ka sa preschool.” She said while pouring juice in Jack’s glass. “How would I possibly know kung saan ang preschool niyo Ma?” She smiled. “The motorbike I’m giving you has a GPRS installed in its voice activated.” she said. And like wow, I never thought Philippines would be advance that much I thought techy stuffs are only in US :d “Cool! Tyler will drive me to school.” Jack said boo-yaing :lol3: Eat, brush, and drive ;] “Here are the keys.” Tita Eloisa said and threw the keys to me. Isa siyang cool na dalagang-matanda ;) “O Jack, wear helmet!” I said and put the helmet in Jack’s head. “Thanks Kuya, you’re the best :thumbsup:” Sabi niya at umangkas na sa likod ko. [i]Paige’s POV[/i] “Pancake!” Somebody shouted behind me. “Pancake!” I shouted back as soon as I saw Nick. Well, kinda sweet for friends pero ganyan talaga kami :) “Paige long time no see.” Joan said while hugging me. Joan was in US a few years ago and she is two years older than me though. Tapos bigla ako hinug ng very tight ni Nicholas ko :d “Pancake! I miss you very much! At lalo ka pang gumanda ngayon :wow2:” I heard somebody scoffed behind me and nearly forgot. “O yea guys! Eto ung mga friends ko sa US. Si Mike, the great drummer.” Mike stopped playing his drum stick and held out his hands. “Nice meeting you guys :D” Mike said and got back in playing his drum sticks. “And this is Rex, the awesomest organist.” Rex stopped chewing his gum and gladly smiled at them and shook their hands. “And the last but not the least.... Asan na yung loko-lokong un.” I said while searching for my last contestant. “Hey I’m Keith, the guitarist.” Tumingin kaming lahat sa likod nandoon si Keith. Instead of seeing all my friends smile, I saw Keith staring at Joan madly and Joan was looking down, what the? :doubt: “Joan? Kilala mo ba si Keith?” I said looking worried. “Ahehehe, diba I was in US a few years ago and alam mo naman ang friend mo mahilig sa mga banda.” She faked a laugh then asked us to go in the vehicle. Crap! Ano ba ang nangyayari dito? “Ilagay niyo na lang dito mga bagahe niyo.” Nick shouted as he put mine at the compartment. Tahimik si Keith while staring outside and Joan was the same thing :sigh: “Oh guys! Lunch tayo kina Tita Eloisa ha!” I said to break the silence. “Ah Paige, sorry pero hindi ako makakasama kasi may lakad kami ng parents ko.” Joan said sounding unconvincing. “Diba sinabi mo sa akin bago ako dumating na na-cancel mo lahat ng lakad mo?” I said while pouting. “Yea, Paige told us that we will hang-out with her schedule free buddies.” Keith said madly which made Joan really embarrassed. “Keith!” Keith shook his head in disbelief and looked away. “It is better if you and Nick will visit your Tita Eloisa while we take our rest, okay?” Mike suggested. “Okay but we will have lunch together at our house. I’ll just visit the preschool.” I said then dropped them at our house and Joan to theirs. It is only 9:30 in the morning. I saw Tita Eloisa reading stories to the children, as usual :) “Tita Eloisa!” I said as I climbed the stairs. All the kids went out and said hi to me and Tita Eloisa introduced me to each and every one. Minutes later a screech was heard and all of them looked including me. As he remove his helmet he looks damn Denver opposite! Hindi naman siya pangit pero opposite ng guwapo ni Denver pero guwapo, ah basta di ko ma-explain! “Ma.” aba tahimik. “Tyler, eto nga pala si Paige anak-anakan ko. Paige si Tyler adopted son ko.” He held out his hand smiling weakly and I shook it. “Tyler ikaw na bahala sa mga bata.” He just nodded and lead the children. “Tita bakit ngayon ko lang siya nakilala?” I said curiously. “He studied in Canada at your Tita Len’s and very outstanding student.” she smiled proudly and looked at Tyler while playing the harmonica. I stared at him and he has a very calm emotion it is like he has no problem at all. “Hi Tita Eloisa! Pancake!” Nick naman eh! Panira ka eh nag-oobserve ako ng guwapo :lol3: [i][u]Denver’s POV [/u][/i] I stopped playing as soon as I saw a boy put his arms around Paige. The children all looked at me. “Kuya Tyler bakit kayo tumigil?” “Ah nothing.” I said plain to the child who asked me then Tony looked at the direction I was looking at. “You are so damn jealous Kuya.” Tony said straight. “Where did you learn to speak such language?” I said raising a brow. “I watched Wanted last night.” He said then shrugged his shoulders. I smiled then shook my head softly. “So what do you want to do next?” [i][b]Sana nga hindi siya maging sagabal.[/b][/i] [spoiler]Pasensya na po at pinaghintay ko kayo ng napakatagal :cry: Ngayon ko lang po kasi nahawakan ulit ang mahiwagang laptop ko kasi kapatid ko laging naglalaro :cry: Sana may magbasa pa nito :)[/spoiler]
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

wew una aq...weeee^_^
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

maii krbal ka denver.. aii tyler pla.. ahaha..
xXlynethXx
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

Hnd sya nmukhahan ni Paige? Hnd ko msyadong gets. Haha :D
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

omg. malapit na ata 'to matapos. thank god i finally got the connection back :D saya!
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

[spoiler]thankies sa walang sawang supporta guys :love:[/spoiler] [b]SPECiAL CHAPTER[/b] [i][u]Keith’s POV[/u][/i] Noong dumating si Paige at si Nick kasama na nila si Joan. Napilit ang babae! :rolleyes: “Malas naman o..” I murmured to myself as I stood up from my seat. Joan is the girl that left me three years ago, the girl who left with no reason and the girl whom I first loved and still love and of course the reason why I play girls. If you are wondering na hindi alam nila Rex, well they never see me serious over a girl at hindi ako nagpapakilala sa kanila ng serious girl kasi delekado na kasi pareho pareho kami ng taste :retard: Buti na nga lang playboy ako kundi nainlove rin ako kay Paige :d Lumabas ako sa garden para hindi masyado masaktan at magalit. When I’m sure that I’m already far enough from the guys I took the picture in my wallet, the picture of me and Joan three years ago. Noong linabas ko sa wallet ko biglang nilipad ng hangin. Tumalikod ako para habulin ‘to but in my surprise meron na pa lang nakakuha. “Nasa wallet mo pa pala ang picture nating dalawa.” she said while looking at the picture and walking forward to me. “Nasa Pinas ka pala.” sabi ko habang tumalikod ako sa kanya. If you are wondering why I said that, well, I didn’t really know she was here. “Long Distance Relationship doesn’t work-out the last I checked it that is why-“ “You left me a letter saying that you are breaking up with me because it is not working out then when I went knocking in your door and sitting in your porch all day one of your neighbours approached me saying that you moved!” I said looking angrily at the sky. In the corner of my eyes I saw her looking down at the picture that made me looked at her seriously. “I don’t like to see you hurting when I’m leaving.” that made me grew more angrier at her and it sucks ‘cause she still had the power to hurt me. “So you prefer to hurt me when you are not around to see it.” I said in disgust. “You know it is better to always tell...” I said then smiled when I saw her crying, yea smiled, for me it is a good sign that she always felt the same way towards me. “Bakit ba lagi kang panalo ha! Kaya hindi ko sinabi sa iyo kasi baka hindi na ako umalis doon.” sabi niyang galit at aba hinampas pa ako! I smirked at her when she was done slapping my arm. “Talonan ka naman talaga eh...” I said grinning while my face in her side that is why when she was about to shout at me again and face me our faces was 1 inch away. I really planned this that is why I’m smiling like an idiot and she was in her natural reaction like she wa saying ‘you are such a bastard’ something like that. I kissed her and still I can feel the warmth in her kiss and nothing could top that- not that I kissed a thousand of girls already- when I ended the kiss I was still smiling like an idiot call me crazy, I mean I was so mad at her for three years then here I am loving to see her annoyed :lol2: I turned around planning to leave her in shock. “Hoy Keith!” I think the people inside heard it that is why all the attention is on us now. I faced her grinning. “Yes... Joan? Right?” I said insulting her. She puts her hands in her waist and grinned like mine. When we were together actually this is our thing, weird, I think? “Guys! Come out from there!” she was calling the people inside and unfortunately they obeyed her. “This is the way I’m going to tell sorry to someone in here... Probably the first one who will come jump in the water.” when she said that she removed her shoes and vest and let gravity pull her in to the pool. “SH*T” I said a loud and the next thing I know was I am swimming to get to her. I carried her to the side of the pool and tried the mouth-to-mouth. When she was conscious she laughed weakly. “I knew you would come and save me!” she said holding the back of head. “You are such a crap! Why did you do that? You almost die in there! Is this your habit? Falling in pools?” I said angrily shaking her. “Only if you are there to catch me.” she said smiling which make me like a smiling idiot again. I hugged her tight while she once again laughed weakly. “Keith?” Mike said smiling curiously. We both stood up and grinned. “Never thought that Joan would be the one Keith talked about!” Paige said crossing her arms. “Y-ea, about that... sorry I didn’t tell you guys earlier.” I said scratching my head. “Can’t believe I don’t know about this girl.” Rex said and pushed me in the pool. “What the hell did you do that for?” I said laughing. He walked forward and went at the side of the pool. “For keeping secrets.” he said laughing at my happy slash range at him I pulled him in the pool too. Then I heard Paige say to Joan. [b][i]”You are lucky, you know whom you will love forever.”[/i][/b]
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

yeah! she is soo lucky!..:D swerte!..:D
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

err kakilig naman ng update :love: i never thought you would put kissing scenes in there (walaka kasing experience :xixi: ) btw nice update you have here..
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[b]Chapter 37[/b] [i][u]Denver’s POV[/u][/i] Nakauwi na kami ni Tita- I mean ‘MA’- Eto kumakain nanaman ng lunch kung ako sana si Denver Ford edi sana alam ko ang nangyayari sa mga ugok kong barkada :sigh: “Mukhang lagging nakatingin si Paige sa iyo kanina ha!” Tita Eloisa said while drinking her glass of juice. “Tita sino ung kasama ni Paige na lalaki? Panay haplos kay Paige! Anlandi!” I said while cutting my meat. “Selos ka no?” sabi ni Jack habang tinuturo ung pisngi ko. “Bakit mo ba nasabi?” I said with this face--- :doubt: “Eh may crack na yang pinggan sa kakahiwa mo ng karne mo!” sabi ni Jack habang ngumunguya. Tinignan ko ung pinggan ko, ahehehe, may sira nga. “Palitan ko na lang Tita, I mean Ma!” I said with a fake smile. “Hayaan mo nalang...” Napakamot ako ng ulo ko kasi pinagtatawanan na ako. Haixt! Ayoko ang feeling na ganito! “Bakit ka ba nagseselos eh ikaw naman ang papakasalan ni Paige.” sabi ni Tita Eloisa habang pinapalitan ung pinggan ko. “Malay mo lang tita hindi ako siputin ni Paige dahil sa lalaki na un!” sabi habang kumukuha ng panibago kong pagkain. “Tsk! Friends lang ung mga un and kahit mahal ni Nick si Paige hindi un aamin kasi alam niya na iba ang mahal niya!” Tita said while pushing my head forward. “Kawawa nga lang si Paige...” Tita said while sitting in her chair. “Ba-bakit po siya kawawa?” I said in sudden confusion. “Kasi alam mo ba na tatlong tao ang minamahal niya? And what she doesn’t know is it just one person.” “Tita hindi niya gusto si Tyler.” I saw Tita smiled. “Let’s bet!” Tita said. “Game ba oh!” I said confidently. “I will give or do anything you like if you win and if you lose magpapakita ka kay Paige bago maiannouncce kung sino ang fiancé niya at tignan mo kung gaano niya kamahal ssi Denver Ford.” she said pretty sure of herself. I tsked and looked at my plate. “Wala matatalo ka lang tita.” I said so sure of myself. “O eh bakit natatakot kang mag-oo!” she said a bit loud habang si Jack naman sinisiko na akong mag-oo. “Mag-oo ka na lang, kukulitin ka hagang gabi niyan!” Jack said laughing. “Sige na nga! Basta I warn you Tita, mag-iisip na ako ng papagawa sa iyo!” I said devilishly :evil: [i]next day[/i] I once again rode my motor and once again drop Jack in school then to the preschool. While I was on my way I saw a girl walking to the preschool? well, she is 3 blocks away :) but still heading :d I stopped by her and she faced me and removed her cap. “Tyler!” Paige said cheerfully as she waved hi to me.” well, more like Jamie Sullivan of a Walk To Remember. “Do you want a lift?” I said offering a ride. She nod happily and got the helmet I was giving her. I started the engine and in a few minutes we reached the preschool. “Hi Tita!” she call out and hugged Tita Eloisa. “Tyler hindi ka pa pala nag-breakfast! Hindi ako nakaluto, ikaw nag-breakfast ka na ba?” she said asking Paige. Paige shook his head and looked at me! Patay! Tita is setting us up! :facepalm: “Edi mag-breakfast muna kayo!” Tita said winking at me. “Pero Ma-“ “Take the rest of the day-off! I’m sure Paige want to know you and be home at 7 exact! Not earlier ok?” I know where this is going! Judging from Paige’s sweet smile she will say yes! “But Ma, baka naman may lakad si Paige with her friends, nakakahiya naman.” “No! I actually cancelled it because I want to spend time with you!” she said smiling widely. I don’t know if I should be happy or sad or what?! And why would she want to spend time with me? “Sige na! Baka gutom na kayong dalawa!” Tita said shooing us like chickens,. tsk! We are already in the mall. I drove fast to limit my time with her, kasi mas delekado kung mas matagal kami mag-kasama. Kapal na kung kapal pero mukhang magugustuhan nanaman ako ni Paige :no2: Nasa Shakey’s kami, since I’m a gentleman :eh: It is my treat. “Family size pizza, Hawaiian and 2 large coke.” I said simply unlike before, I’m going to talk to the cashier and act cute :lol3: “Dine in sir?” “No, take out.” “Hey! Bakit take out.” I grabbed the box and faced her. “I don’t like eating in a big crowd. So if you wanna eat, follow.” she frowned and followed me. I held her hand. “I don’t like people around me to think that I’m abusing someone.” I said seriously but I know secretly she smiled. We were on my motor and I don’t have any idea where to take her. I opened the GPRS, scan, scan... “You like beaches?” I asked even though I know the answer. “Yea.” she answered shortly. “May extra shirt ka ba?” “Meron. Bakit punta tayo?” I just nod and I can see through the side mirror how excited she looks. [i]Paige’s POV[/i] We were heading to Pangasinan, long trip in a motorcycle but I think he’s adventurous. I saw him smile when I asked if we were going at least even a lil’ bit I can relate to this guy. I feel like being with.... Denver. Yea, he is the complete of Den but there is still a feeling that they are the same. It took us 3-4 hours to reach the place. “So ilang hours tayo ditto?” I asked to him ‘cause I know hindi ‘to makakatagal kasama ako. “It depends.” He said then carried the box of pizza. Nice answer dude! ‘It depends’ yea, really nice answer :mad: “Wala ka bang plano?” I said trying to catch up with him. He faced me then shook his head. “Okay ka rin no! Kung trip mo, trip mo?” He grinned. “Sumunod ka na lang kung gusto mo kumain.” he said then walked away again. May bag siya, laman? T-shirt, short, Ipod, notebook, at harmonica. Lumapag na siya sa tabing dagat at tinawag niya akong tumabi sa kanya. Kumakain lang kami habang papababa ang araw. It is nice seeing the sun change color but this is the best one yet. Ayun naligo kami kahit papano may F-U-N rin pala sa dictionary nito. “Masayahin ka rin pala.” he nod simply. Bakit kaya hindi magaling magsalita ‘to? “Nagka-GF ka na?” I’m asking questions like this to know him more. “Ano seryoso o laro?” he said jokingly. “Ung seryoso!” “Wala pa.” “Bakit naman?” I saw him looked down then back to me. “I already love somebody but I cannot show myself to her because if I do so I’ll break my promise to her parents specially her mother. I can only show myself to her after a year.” he is one dedicated guy! Normally guys will just find another girl to love but him he is willing to wait. “True love.” he smiled the looked at the stars. He pointed ‘my’ star, remember? Actually tonight it is the brightest ;] “That’s my star!” I said shocked ‘cause in all the stars in the sky why point mine? [i][b]”Pretty obvious, the twinkle in your eyes is as bright as that star.”[/b][/i]
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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

Nakakakileg tlga. OMG. Haha. Next :D
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nC update =)
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[b]Chapter 38[/b] [i][u]Denver’s POV[/u][/i] I felt awkward after saying it but she seems very happy. Denver once again talked not Tyler. I asked her to go home baka kasi may stupidity nanaman akong magawa. We were in the middle of nowhere and the rain poured! Oh great! The only thing you can see is an abandoned shed nearby. I parked my motor near the shed and shared my jacket with her. When we reached the shed I looked at her, I know are faces are inches away but still I can’t help myself but to move closer and kiss her. And yes! I kissed her and worst part is she kissed back- I wanted her to kiss back if I am Denver but she kissed back that I’m Tyler? How I wish I didn’t agree to hang-out with her!- After the kiss we were like shock then gulped at the same time. “So-Sorry” I said looking away. “Forget about it.” she said then sat in the end of the shed. As she did that, I sat too in the opposite end of the shed. I feel so dumb for doing so, and now nag-dilang anghel na si Tita. I can see her confused to whom to love. I sighed and heard a taxi stopped in front of us. Paige went in and off they go. I stood up and pulled my hair. I rode my motor a few minutes when the rain settles down a little. After an hour I arrived home and tita was waiting for me in the sala. It was 7 exact and I know she’s going to ask about the ‘hang-out’. “How do things go?” she said while smiling widely. I just simply kissed her in the cheek and walk away to the kitchen. I grab the gallon of ice cream- cookies and cream- and went up. “Going to my room tita!” I shouted when I reached my room. I sat down in my bed and started eating. I put 3 big spoons of ice cream then accidentally glanced at Tyler in the mirror. I threw my ball in the wall and I broke the mirror. I finished up the ice cream- yea, I can eat 1 gallon- I took the broom and cleaned up the broken pieces of the mirror. Then I took a quick shower then turned myself to Denver. No contacts just the old handsome teen spiky cactus. meaning back to this: [spoiler][align=center] [url=http://cosmopic.com/25v6180w400h539-draftlens2404870module1.jpg][img=400x539]http://cosmopic.com/25/6180/draftlens2404870module1.jpg[/img][/url] [/align][/spoiler] Instead of thinking I tried to clear my mind and slept... And good! I succeeded! [i][u]Paige’s POV[/u][/i] I went to preschool even though I know I’ll see ‘HIM’ again. Suprisingly noong nakarating ako sa preschool walang motor na nakapark. “Tita si Tyler po?” I asked Tita since wala pa ung mga bata. “Hindi pa nagparamdam sa akin since yesterday anak eh.” she said while shooking her head. “Tita puwede po ba siyang bisitahin?” Kasi naman baka nagkasakit na un kasi iniwan ko siya kagabi. Nadala lang sorry. “Sige ok lang anak.” She said then welcome the children. I rode a taxi since it is a kilometre away. Ayoko namang makita niya ako na pawis na pawis no! I saw Jack, wala ata silang klase kasi faculty meeting. “Jack! Si Kuya Tyler mo?” I asked as he stood in the door. “Nandoon sa kuwarto niya ate.” he said then pointed the first door upstairs. I went up and slowly open his door. The first thing I saw was the broken mirror. Tsk, what the hell did he do last night. Malinis naman kuwarto niya un lang kasi mirror. I saw him in the bed and in my shock... “De-Denver!” I screamed. He quickly rose in his bed and held my hand before I could reach the door. “Ako si Tyler! I just pretended to protect you!” he said calmly. I faced him crying. “Protect me? From who?” I said angrily. “Kara is here!” I felt so confused! I mean so what! “Why did you need to pretend?” I answered calmly. “I... can’t tell you.” he said then looked away. “But why!?” I said desperately. “It is against your mother’s will.” he said simply. WTH? “Don’t you bring my mother to this conversation!” I said then walked away. I ran downstairs and Jack saw me. “What happened?” he said but I didn’t even answer and walked away! I saw Denver looking from his window. He didn’t even manage to chase me! [i][u] Denver’s POV [/u][/i] I changed my clothes, well, my usual fashion. I went down and saw Jack glaring ate me. “What?!” I said curiously. “What the heck did you do with Ate Paige?” he said worried about her. “Just let me borrow your skateboard and I’ll fix it.” he pushed his skateboard to me and off I go. Well, I know some tricks ;] I stopped in front of Paige’s house. I entered the gate without knocking ‘cause I know they won’t let me in. I stood outside the door and started talking. “Paige, if you could hear me... I love you and I know you can feel it. Sorry for pretending... I just can’t tell you the reason... Hope you understand and don’t worry you’ll know it in the right time.” I was about to live when the guys opened the door. “Mind if we come skate with you?” they said then went to me. We are on the park now. I pulled a trick then asked a question. “So what is Paige doing?” They shrugged their shoulder. “She’s crying...” Rex said simply. “Is she hurt?” “No, just confused.” Keith said calmly. “So what do you think I should do?” They all looked at each other. “Don’t show yourself to her until her debut.” Mike said seriously. “O-ok” I said looking down. “Where is Kara anyway?” Rex asked nervously. [i][b]” Maybe watching our every move....”[/b][/i]

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Re: pssssssssssssst cake! inedit mu ba yan? parang naedit kasee eh iba yung nabasa ko sa notebook.... eniwei keep on updating hahahaha

next na =))
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Waaaaah! Kara is so annoying. Ugh. Next :D
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[b]Chapter 39[/b] [i][u]Keith’s POV[/u][/i] It’s been three months and half since the day Paige discovers Denver’s little secret. We visit him now and then but we only end up in going home ‘cause he will always be playing with the kids or doing household chores, he didn’t have to do that but that is the only thing he knew to get his mind of Paige. One time when we went to Tita Eloisa we saw him breaking bottles at the back to take out his anger. Today is his birthday and I’m guessing he don’t even remember it, and by the way he threw all his Tyler stuffs and let his brother send him his normal fashionable clothes, and sadly he threw the motorcycle also- which I wish he just gave me- And the weirdest thing that happened to him is breaking every mirror he see his reflection in (Don’t he know that breaking a mirror brings three years of badluck?) It’s sunset and still no single call or invitation from Denver, normally he would pull our hair just to treat him in one cool place... We are now in the porch of Tita Eloisa’s. We were about to knock but at our surprise, Tita Eloisa opened the door worriedly. “What’s the problem Tita?” Rex asked weirdly. “Denver is gone! He left this morning and he still ain’t coming home!” Tita said nervously. Denver don’t usually left that long. “Puwede pong pumasok?” I said while looking at Denver’s room, I know there is something wrong. Tita just nod and let me in. I entered his room, I saw the book opened in the page where he highlighted back in US. I read the book further and at my shock: [i]Seeing my reflection in a broken mirror made me realize how idiotic I was in tricking my love. She didn’t understand and I can’t tell for I hold a promise that deals with our whole future. I was walking in the middle of nowhere, alone. I heard a familiar voice whom I learned to hate, she was about to kill me but she stopped as soon as she realized that she was wrong but still I was found [b]DEAD[/b][/i] [i][u]Kara’s POV[/u][/i] I’m in the middle of nowhere getting ready to shoot Denver, yes! Gonna kill him... I saw him kicking a can, I went in front of him. “Hey Denver!” I said while pointing the gun to him. “Are you sure you’re going to kill me?” he said then put his hands in his pocket. I don’t understand! I expect him to be begging for hid life! But.. WHY!? “Shoot! Kara! This is what you want all your life, so shoot! At least I can make one person happy.” I was being teary eyed as he come forward to me. “Wha-what are you doing?” I uttered as he held my hand and direct the gun in his head. “Why won’t you shoot!” he said angrily at me. I shook my head after realizing how I kept my anger for years, I could just move-on... I carefully put the gun down but the next thing I knew was he was shot by a knife under his heart. I looked back and saw Ryan playing with his gun. “Hey Baby Girl.” he said then winked. “What the hell did you do Ryan!” I shouted at him as I remove the knife in his chest. Denver was trying to catch his breath. “So your heart learns to forgive!” he said then smirked he pointed the gun on me and .... [i][b]bang![/b][/i] I shot him in the head while he shot me in the kidney. I hurriedly carried Denver to the car and checked my wound. I opened the container in the car and contact Denver’s friends. “He-hello...” I said holding breath. “Who’s this?” “Go to the nearest hospital in the intersection to Pangasinan.” I looked at my phone, it full of blood. I dropped my phone and started the engines. I entered the hospital and quickly the nurse responded. She held my hand but I refused. “God! D*mn it nurse! Save him! Not me!” I shouted at her and she quickly picked up Denver and to the ER. I was still catching breath. The doctor asked me if I want to be treated but still I refused. I took a look inside Denver’s room and they were all panicking ‘cause he.... DIED. I cried and went inside the room. I asked the doctor not to remove the oxygen just yet. I need a miracle! I removed my cross necklace and put it in his hands. I lie down beside him... “I should be the one who is begging for life...” I trailed off. “I love you.. and I will always.” I said then hugged him tight and slowly closed my eyes. [i][u]Denver’s POV[/u][/i] I opened my eyes and turned to Kara. I know she is right here beside me. I watch her every move and attempt as soul... I slowly put her hair behind her ear and smiled. I slowly kissed her forehead. “Sorry I cannot love you the way you love me and I am very thankful of having a lover like you. Thank you for the second chance.” The doctor and nurses were like shock and murmuring to each other. I removed the oxygen and everything then slowly covered Kara but before I did that A tear from my eye fell, imagining that I been hating her for year yet I was the one who should be begging not her. [i][u]Paige’s POV[/u][/i] I haven’t seen Denver for like three months. I listened to the conversations of Rex but no Denver. I saw them in their skateboards. I planned to follow them and next thing I know was they were in front of a hospital. “What are they doing here?” I asked myself. I hid behind a car and I saw.... De-Denver. “Anong nangyari?” I asked once again to myself. Wait! Eavesdropping on the case ;] “According to the doctor you died in 8:34. Why are you still alive?” Rex said not jokingly? “Somebody died for me.” Denver said simply. “Who?” Mike asked. “We’ll never know... So I’m off got to prepare for my fiancée’s big day ;]” Shit! These hurts! It sucks! So bad! I wanna get out where I’m hiding from and just held him in my arms forever and don’t go to her stupid fiancée! [i]2months later.... Paige’s Debut...[/i] “Hey pretty girl smile! It’s your big day! Aren’t you excited that you finally gonna meet your fiancé?” My sister arrived a few weeks ago and she is in my dressing room here in our building. “I’m not sure if I still.. well, you know, love him.” I said grinning my teeth. My Sister just smiled and finished my hair. The guests are already arriving but I choose to go in the rooftop. To stop my pain... I stayed at the tip of the rooftop, crying. The words of Denver about her fiancée still plays ain my mind and it so sucks. “Maybe it is better to don’t exist since I can’t be with the person I love.” I attempt to jump in the building but instead of falling my hands are held by someone. I looked back and saw HIM!!! “Catfish ka talaga! Alam mo ba ang pinagdaanan ko para lang makaattend sa debut mo!? Malapit na akong nakulong, natamaan ng kutsilyo, malapit ng namatay at dumaan sa matinding depression dahil sa iyo!” I smiled then hugged him. He laughed and I know he can feel my tear fell from his suit. He gently pushed me away and turned his back on me. “If you still want to fall, I will always follow you so it is better if you get down there and have debut.” He said then walked away. I watched him walked away, there is no sadness or anything in his voice... he sounds happy. I followed what he said. I took a deep breath while going down in the receptions stairs. I saw a boy in a mask, violet and green in colour. I’m guessing his my fiancé :sigh: When I already reached him and he smiled and I can’t help but to smile. “I know you love your best friend but I know you will love me more.” We were gliding in the middle of the dance floor; we are the only ones in there. “What!?” I said angrily in a low voice. He stopped dancing and so do I then he move closer to me. “Let me make this more formal, I’m your fiancé...” He removed his mask and I was like :O “Sorry I didn’t tell you before because maybe your mom will haunt me.” Denver said laughing, binatukan ko nga ang pangit! Pagkatapos ng batok ayun ngumiti siya. “Crazy! I really love you Denver Ford.” I smiled then he hugged me and he guided me again on the floor. [i][u]Denver’s POV[/u][/i] I flew back in US after the announcement of our engagement. I went straight to the bridge where I made my promise to Kara. I wrote a letter for her and put it in the bottle and let it flew in the sky, here’s my letter: [quote][i]Kara, I never really thought that you, the last person I expected will save my life. I’m lucky you are my lover but sadly I can’t give it back. In the simplest promise I made, I didn’t even fulfil it. I know I was a dimwit for not realizing these things before. I’ll make this very short... Yes, Paige is my life but you were the one who gave my life... Thank you... Denver [/i][/quote] [b][i]Kara might not be the best girl in the world but she took a piece of my heart and she is the girl who will do anything to make her love ones happy.[/i][/b] [b]END OF TRACK :P[/b] [quote]Thanks po sa lahat ng sumoporta nito, kahit medyo low ang quality ng story ko :D Love na Love na Love ko kayong lahat! :love: Thanks po ulit!![/quote]

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wew...end na...huhuh
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back! i'm late it was end sad ): but still paige and denver did it!! great story i really like it!
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