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[quote][b]Author's Note;[/b]
[spoiler]Please ignore my previous story. 
It was really, really lame. About the title, it's a song by We the Kings. I can only update this thread at least 3 times a week.[/spoiler][/quote]
[quote]I'm [b]Alanah Rodriguez[/b]. I'm 14 and I never had a boyfriend. I don't get the point of having one. I'm half-filipina and half-english. I live in Stockholm, Sweden. Marami namang pogi dito, pero ayaw ko pansinin. 10th grade ako dito, pero pag nasa Pilipinas ako, 8th grade pa ako.[/quote]
"Lanaaah!" Mom shouted from down stairs. Ang lakas ng boses nya, solid.
Nung tinignan ko ang relo ko, it was 7[b]:[/b]30am. I only have 30 minutes to prepare.
"Opo. Papaunta na ako jan." I shouted back.
Nung papunta ako, I noticed that my older brother, Raymond wasn't there. He's college na. Pero he still lives with us.
"Ma, where's Raymond?" I asked my mom. She was laughing.
"Hindi mo ba alam na he slept at Ciara's place?" WOAH[b]![/b] Ciara is Raymond's girlfriend. But Ciara's parents didn't even allow her to bring guys sa kanilang bahay.
The hell I care. Anyways, ayun, kumain ako, tas naligo. And then, perfect timing yung school bus namin. I looked at the seats. Tapos, I found one vacant seat. And it was beside Kenny Bui. Yung crush ng bayan namin. So, I sat beside him nalang. I really didn't know why siya yung crush ng bayan namin. I mean, para lang siyang ordinary Swedish guy. Basta, pogi to the highest level. So ayun, I don't wanna start a conversation. [i]Awkward silence filled the air[/i].
"Vet du s�ngen 'Check Yes Juliet' av We the Kings?" Kenny asked me.
[sup]Do you know the song "Check yes Juliet" by We the Kings?[/sup]
"Sj�lvklart, det �r min favoritl�t!" I replied.
[sup]Of course, it's my favorite song![/sup]
Ohmygosh. He just talked to me. 
Hindi ko alam na he talks to unpopular girls. 
"S�, hur m�r du?" He asked.
[sup]So, how are you?[/sup]
"I'm fine. And you?"
"Fine as well." Ohmy~ He spoke english. All I know is that nakakaintindi lang sya ng english. Hindi ko alam na he speaks it as well. We were talking till [b]Erica Cortes[/b]. She's half-spanish, half-english and one big flirt.
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It was really, really lame. About the title, it's a song by We the Kings. I can only update this thread at least 3 times a week.[/spoiler][/quote]
[quote]I'm [b]Alanah Rodriguez[/b]. I'm 14 and I never had a boyfriend. I don't get the point of having one. I'm half-filipina and half-english. I live in Stockholm, Sweden. Marami namang pogi dito, pero ayaw ko pansinin. 10th grade ako dito, pero pag nasa Pilipinas ako, 8th grade pa ako.[/quote]
"Lanaaah!" Mom shouted from down stairs. Ang lakas ng boses nya, solid.
Nung tinignan ko ang relo ko, it was 7[b]:[/b]30am. I only have 30 minutes to prepare.
"Opo. Papaunta na ako jan." I shouted back.
Nung papunta ako, I noticed that my older brother, Raymond wasn't there. He's college na. Pero he still lives with us.
"Ma, where's Raymond?" I asked my mom. She was laughing.
"Hindi mo ba alam na he slept at Ciara's place?" WOAH[b]![/b] Ciara is Raymond's girlfriend. But Ciara's parents didn't even allow her to bring guys sa kanilang bahay.
The hell I care. Anyways, ayun, kumain ako, tas naligo. And then, perfect timing yung school bus namin. I looked at the seats. Tapos, I found one vacant seat. And it was beside Kenny Bui. Yung crush ng bayan namin. So, I sat beside him nalang. I really didn't know why siya yung crush ng bayan namin. I mean, para lang siyang ordinary Swedish guy. Basta, pogi to the highest level. So ayun, I don't wanna start a conversation. [i]Awkward silence filled the air[/i].
"Vet du s�ngen 'Check Yes Juliet' av We the Kings?" Kenny asked me.
[sup]Do you know the song "Check yes Juliet" by We the Kings?[/sup]
"Sj�lvklart, det �r min favoritl�t!" I replied.
[sup]Of course, it's my favorite song![/sup]
Ohmygosh. He just talked to me. Hindi ko alam na he talks to unpopular girls.
"S�, hur m�r du?" He asked.
[sup]So, how are you?[/sup]
"I'm fine. And you?"
"Fine as well." Ohmy~ He spoke english. All I know is that nakakaintindi lang sya ng english. Hindi ko alam na he speaks it as well. We were talking till [b]Erica Cortes[/b]. She's half-spanish, half-english and one big flirt.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[b]FIRST![/b]
[s]Yeeeaaah! saving my spot.[/s]
LAME?! Heck no.
I [i]super duper uber[/i] love the intro!
(K, maybe im a lil exxagerating. LOLS'K)
And.. DAAAANG! I love that song;
Just by the title of your story, I knew [b]I have to read this![/b]
Pm me when the next chapter is out please. ;'))
Btw, mygaaash, [i]*nosebleed.[/i]
Is that swedish language? o__0
@#$%! Daaamn;
You're gooooooood.
[b]Goodluck with this story, Bridget![/b] ^^
P.S; [i]the pm, [b]don't forget[/b] ;p[/i]
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[quote=SvperGirl;#3598649;1274668484]Btw, mygaaash, *nosebleed.
Is that swedish language? o__0
@#$%! Daaamn;
You're gooooooood.[/quote]
Yeah. My cousin taught me. 
Thankyou, btw.
Thankyou, btw.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[quote=Bridget;#3598656;1274668675]Yeah. My cousin taught me.
Thankyou, btw.[/quote]
Lol, your lucky.
You had free lessons. XDDDD
Oh, you're welcome. ;
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
nice story manghud~ haha. update update update.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[quote=underscoreJI;#3598667;1274668903]nice story manghud~ haha. update update update.[/quote]
Yeah. Waaaait. Thankyou, btw kuya.
[quote=SvperGirl;#3598661;1274668736]Lol, your lucky.
You had free lessons. XDDDD
Oh, you're welcome. ;[/quote]
It wasn't free. I had to libre her McDonalds.
Thankyou, btw kuya.
[quote=SvperGirl;#3598661;1274668736]Lol, your lucky.
You had free lessons. XDDDD
Oh, you're welcome. ;[/quote]
It wasn't free. I had to libre her McDonalds.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[quote=Bridget;#3598693;1274669571]It wasn't free. I had to libre her McDonalds.[/quote]
Lol, i was just thinking about that. "free lessons? Coooool!"
But then..
do you really have to burst my bubble?
XDDDD. HAHAHA 
)
Btw, write soon..gif)
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Btw, write soon.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[quote=SvperGirl;#3598702;1274670361]Btw, write soon.[/quote]
Haha. Sure thing.
[/quote]
Haha. Sure thing.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
OMG~ Bitin. 
Will support this. :"> Next pleaseeeee. [b]:[/b])))))
Will support this. :"> Next pleaseeeee. [b]:[/b])))))
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[b]Chapter 1[/b] �
Shocks. Na-stuck-in-traffic kami. And it was 7[b]:[/b]50 na. Ang layo pa naman ng school namin. So we found out that may nabangga pala. So ayun. It was 8[b]:[/b]10 when we arrived sa school. Patay talaga ako sa teacher namin. Si Mrs. Sveinsvoll pa naman yung teacher ko. Crap.
"S�, Trygve, Vilken var den senaste raden av Shakespeare's ber�mda ber�ttelsen, 'Hamlet'?"
[sup]So, Trygve, what was the last line ofShakespeare's famous story, 'Hamlet'?[/sup]
Mrs. Sveinsvoll asked Trygve as I arrived. Trygve(pronounced as Trigveh ) is really, damn handsome. Ok. I was about to sneak into the last seat of the last row when Mrs. Sveinsvoll shouted,
"Miss Rodriguez! Varf�r �r du smyga s� d�r?"
[sup]Miss Rodriguez! Why are you sneaking up like that?[/sup]
"Jag �r ledsen, Mrs. Sveinsvoll." I replied as I looked at my shoes.
[sup]I'm sorry, Mrs. Sveinsvoll.[/sup]
"Sitta nu, Miss Rodriguez." She said with an angry voice.
[sup]Be seated, Miss Rodriguez.[/sup]
So I sat nga in the last seat, last row. I was beside Trygve. We're not close but we talk to each other. Na-shock ako when I saw the note in his seat saying,
"Jag �lskar Alanah"
[sup]I love Alanah[/sup]
Soliiid. Natouch ako. Pero still. Younger sya by one year pero we're in the same grade. But he's really really cute. I mean -- he's damn hot. And why does he like me? Me. I'm not gorgeous, I'm 5'5 and he's 5'8. It's so weird. Hindi ko maimagine na we're walking together, holding hands. Ew[b]![/b] Ang weird nun. So, anyways, I don't even like him.
When I was looking at the calendar, napansin ko malapit na birthday ko. I wanna have a party. [sup]*dream on. as if papayagan ka ng mommy mo, lanah.[/sup]
[quote][b]Trivia:[/b]
The name Trygve and the surname Sveinsvoll are from one person -- a friend of my cousin from Norway. Proof? [url=http://www.facebook.com/trygve.sveinsvoll]Click![/url] He's handsome. Check out his profile pictures.[/quote]
Sorry, the chapter was really really short. :3 I have to go off na kase e. The rest of the chapter will be posted later. :3 ♥
) is really, damn handsome. Ok. I was about to sneak into the last seat of the last row when Mrs. Sveinsvoll shouted,
"Miss Rodriguez! Varf�r �r du smyga s� d�r?"
[sup]Miss Rodriguez! Why are you sneaking up like that?[/sup]
"Jag �r ledsen, Mrs. Sveinsvoll." I replied as I looked at my shoes.
[sup]I'm sorry, Mrs. Sveinsvoll.[/sup]
"Sitta nu, Miss Rodriguez." She said with an angry voice.
[sup]Be seated, Miss Rodriguez.[/sup]
So I sat nga in the last seat, last row. I was beside Trygve. We're not close but we talk to each other. Na-shock ako when I saw the note in his seat saying,
"Jag �lskar Alanah"
[sup]I love Alanah[/sup]
Soliiid. Natouch ako. Pero still. Younger sya by one year pero we're in the same grade. But he's really really cute. I mean -- he's damn hot. And why does he like me? Me. I'm not gorgeous, I'm 5'5 and he's 5'8. It's so weird. Hindi ko maimagine na we're walking together, holding hands. Ew[b]![/b] Ang weird nun. So, anyways, I don't even like him.
When I was looking at the calendar, napansin ko malapit na birthday ko. I wanna have a party. [sup]*dream on. as if papayagan ka ng mommy mo, lanah.[/sup]
[quote][b]Trivia:[/b]
The name Trygve and the surname Sveinsvoll are from one person -- a friend of my cousin from Norway. Proof? [url=http://www.facebook.com/trygve.sveinsvoll]Click![/url] He's handsome. Check out his profile pictures.[/quote]
Sorry, the chapter was really really short. :3 I have to go off na kase e. The rest of the chapter will be posted later. :3 ♥
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Haba ng hair ni Lanah. [b]:[/b]"> Update ka ulet mamaya. Hahahaha. 
Hahahaha.
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- SvperGirl
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Arggh! Im not first! T_T
LOL; i agree, bitiiin.
Grabe, "I love Alanah"?
Hahaha, parang flames hope lang a?
Asan na si Kenny?
HAHAHA :DDDD
update please..
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Im loving your story. And i love the Title. Also the song ofcourse. Update!
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[quote=Bridget;#3598971;1274682519]K. I will update laturr. Wait. (:[/quote]
- Hayiiiii. [b]:[/b]))))) K. Will wait fer that. [b]:[/b]"> Hihi.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[b]Chapter 1.2[/b] �
Lunch. I don't know where the hell is Jenny. [b]Jenny Wathne[/b] is my best friend. She's
pretty -- much more prettier than I am. XD So yeah, I found her. Sitting with Kenny and
his friends. She's like Erica, she's one big flirt but I love her. So, yeah. I went to their
table. I sat between Jenny and Kenny. Haha! Rhymes. I know.
"Hej, Lan. Jag h�rde att Trygve gillar dig. " Kenny said in a teasing voice.
[sup]Hey, Lan. I heard that Trygve likes you.[/sup]
"K�ften din idiot!" I shouted.
[sup]Shut up you idiot![/sup]
"Jag bara fr�gar."
[sup]I was just asking.[/sup]
"Okej, bra. Han sa att han gillar mig."
[sup]Okay, fine. he said he likes me.[/sup]
Kenny's jaw dropped to the floor. Hard. He was like -- [i]WTF!?[/i] So I just ate
my food. I have this feeling that Kenny actually likes me. <-- Feeler. Anu ba yan, anung
magugustuhan nya sakin? Hindi naman ako kagandahan. Tsaka, andaming girls na
maganda sa school namin. And I'm not worth his attention. 
Okay, so aun, nag-ring
yung bell. Algebra. Sht. Kaklase ko pala si Kenny sa Algebra. CRAP.
"Kan jag g� med dig g�r till klass?" Kenny asked me.
[sup]Can I walk with you going to class?[/sup]
"Visst sak."
[sup]Sure thing.[/sup]
Pinapakilig nya talaga ako. Anu ba yan. Yeah. Algebra is one hour. And I need to sit
with him for one hour din. Haaay. Pagkatapos ng Algebra, Biology. Nothing special. After
Biology, History. Finally, last period! [b]>..<[/b] Nagplano kami na pumunta sa bahay nila
Kenny after shool e. Excited na ako.
Ayun, after History, we went to the field. Dun kami nagtipon-tipon. So, when we were
complee na, pumunta kami sa bahay ni Kenny. GRABE! Ang laki. Parang presidente sila
ng Sweden. Haha, over naman yan. Pero ang laki ng bahay nila. Pumunta kami sa
kwarto ni Kenny. His room is two times bigger than mine. 
Aun, we sat down the
floor. 
Nag truth or dare kami. Na una si Kenny.
"Sanning eller konsekvens?" I asked.
[sup]Truth or dare?[/sup]
"Sanning." He said.
[sup]Truth.[/sup]
"Okay. Who do you like?" I asked.
"I like.. [b]Alanah[/b]." Kenny said. It was so soft, it almost sounded like a whisper. I
don't know, parang I feel like jumping. Yung ganun? So, yeah. Cursh nya nga ako. And
then, her mum shouted,
"Lan, �r din mamma redan h�r!"
[sup]Lan, your mom's here already![/sup]
Crap. Ang aga naman ni Ma. Ruining the moment ba. Haay. They were about to ask
me a question. --.-- So I ran downstairs and kissed my mum. I asked her,
"Ma? Ba't ang aga mo? Anung occasion?" I asked her. She's filipina, so she could
understand me.
"Your dad arrived from US na."
"Ah. So pupunta tayo ng airport?"
"Oo."
Ohmygosh. I can't wait to see my dad. He's been there for 2years. I wish he'd give me
chocolates or something like that. Haay, so another 3-hour drive to the airport. When we arrived there, nakita namin agad si Dad.
"Daaaad~ I miss you." I shouted.
"I miss you too, darling." He said sweetly.
"Do you have something for me?" I asked.
"Yeah, sure. I'll give it to you when we arrive at home."
Dad hugged me tightly. And mum. So dad got the keys and drove. I'm so excited for his gift. (=
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Long, long update. : DD
He was like -- [i]WTF!?[/i] So I just ate
my food. I have this feeling that Kenny actually likes me. <-- Feeler. Anu ba yan, anung
magugustuhan nya sakin? Hindi naman ako kagandahan. Tsaka, andaming girls na
maganda sa school namin. And I'm not worth his attention. Okay, so aun, nag-ring
yung bell. Algebra. Sht. Kaklase ko pala si Kenny sa Algebra. CRAP.
"Kan jag g� med dig g�r till klass?" Kenny asked me.
[sup]Can I walk with you going to class?[/sup]
"Visst sak."
[sup]Sure thing.[/sup]
Pinapakilig nya talaga ako. Anu ba yan. Yeah. Algebra is one hour. And I need to sit
with him for one hour din. Haaay. Pagkatapos ng Algebra, Biology. Nothing special. After
Biology, History. Finally, last period! [b]>..<[/b] Nagplano kami na pumunta sa bahay nila
Kenny after shool e. Excited na ako.
Ayun, after History, we went to the field. Dun kami nagtipon-tipon. So, when we were
complee na, pumunta kami sa bahay ni Kenny. GRABE! Ang laki. Parang presidente sila
ng Sweden. Haha, over naman yan. Pero ang laki ng bahay nila. Pumunta kami sa
kwarto ni Kenny. His room is two times bigger than mine. Aun, we sat down the
floor. Nag truth or dare kami. Na una si Kenny.
"Sanning eller konsekvens?" I asked.
[sup]Truth or dare?[/sup]
"Sanning." He said.
[sup]Truth.[/sup]
"Okay. Who do you like?" I asked.
"I like.. [b]Alanah[/b]." Kenny said. It was so soft, it almost sounded like a whisper. I
don't know, parang I feel like jumping. Yung ganun? So, yeah. Cursh nya nga ako. And
then, her mum shouted,
"Lan, �r din mamma redan h�r!"
[sup]Lan, your mom's here already![/sup]
Crap. Ang aga naman ni Ma. Ruining the moment ba. Haay. They were about to ask
me a question. --.-- So I ran downstairs and kissed my mum. I asked her,
"Ma? Ba't ang aga mo? Anung occasion?" I asked her. She's filipina, so she could
understand me.
"Your dad arrived from US na."
"Ah. So pupunta tayo ng airport?"
"Oo."
Ohmygosh. I can't wait to see my dad. He's been there for 2years. I wish he'd give me
chocolates or something like that. Haay, so another 3-hour drive to the airport. When we arrived there, nakita namin agad si Dad.
"Daaaad~ I miss you." I shouted.
"I miss you too, darling." He said sweetly.
"Do you have something for me?" I asked.
"Yeah, sure. I'll give it to you when we arrive at home."
Dad hugged me tightly. And mum. So dad got the keys and drove. I'm so excited for his gift. (=
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Long, long update. : DD
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
woooaahh. FIRST!
grabee; Iniwan niya na lang ba si Kenny dun? (LOLXD'AAAAAAAHHHgustonikennysilanah?!)
Hahaha, anu kaya yung gift?
bongga. Update! :')
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Yeeeee. Haba ng Hair
Update this soon!
Update this soon!
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[quote=Bridget;#3598645;1274668198]About the title, it's a song by We the Kings.[/quote]
gnda ng kanta na yan
anyway nice story
update na!
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x
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Here's the update[b]:[/b]
[b]Chapter 2[/b]
Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero Daddy just came home from the US. Mom could have prepared spaghetti or something like that. Haay, eto talaga si Mama. But it's fine, really. Hindi naman ako yung bagong dating e. No offense to Daddy. So, while we were eating, I asked my Dad,
"Dad, where's your gift for me?" I asked.
"Oh yeah, I forgot."
Then he went upstairs to his and mom's room. Nung bumaba sya, may dala-dala syang box. Maliit na box. It's a ring, I just know.
"Here." He said as he grabbed the necklace na may maliit na heart sa gitna.
"Wow, Dad!" I exclaimed nung nilagay nya sa leeg ko. Hindi ko inexpect na necklace yun e. I wasn't expecting anything na ganun ka bongga. After that, he smiled as he sat down.
"You know, Lan, you're like a mannequin." He said. I think he wasn't joking kasi there was no laugh in his voice.
"Why?" I asked.
"Cause everything looks good on you." Woah, he's one big joker.
"Dad, mannequins are pretty, and sad to say, I'm not." I said. Totoo naman, hindi ako maganda. Hindi talaga. Not once in my life, I thought I was pretty.
"What?! You [i]are[/i] beautiful." He said. Kailangan pa ba i-emphasize yung are? Haays. So ayun, I kept quiet na. He seemed mad kase e. And I don't like it when he gets mad.
"Excuse me, I have homework." I said as I stood up. I don't know, I really am not in the mood to talk to them. I don't know, I feel like looking at myself in a mirror or something. It's friday, so I could sleep late. But, tomorrow is Jenny's birthday.
[i]The next day; Saturday; 7:00pm[/i]
I woke up. So ayun, I went downstairs to check if there were any food. Mom cookes pancakes. Oooh, delicious. Kumain ako. Daang! Antagal ko natapos. Mga 7[b]:[/b]10 na ako natapos. Usually, mga 2 minutes, tapos na ako. Grabe. So, after I ate, naligo kagad ako. I put on my bluegreen dress. Ang ganda nun, binili ni Kuya sa Paris when he went there. Jenny's house is just two blocks away so naglakad nalang ako. When on my way there, I checked my phone. Gosh, 7[b]:[/b]20 na pala. I had to hurry. When I arrived, nung pumasok ako, Jenny shouted,
"Lan, h�r borta!"
[sup]Lan, over here![/sup]
"Vem �r det?"
[sup]Who's there?[/sup]
"N�gra coola m�nniskor!" She shouted. She's really, really loud.
[sup]Some cool people.[/sup]
When I walked towards them, napansin ko agad si Kenny. He looked dashing. Not that I was looking for him, he just catched my attention. Music played. I don't know -- para syang prom.
"Vill du dansa med mig?" Kenny asked me.
[sup]Will you dance with me?[/sup]
"Naturligtvis, finns det inget annat jag kunde g�ra r�tt?"
[sup]Of course, there's nothing else I could do right?[/sup]
So we danced and danced till it was 10pm -- I had to go home.
"Ken, jag �r ledsen men jag m�ste g�." I told Kenny.
[sup]Ken, I'm sorry but I have to go.[/sup]
"Du vill att jag ska eskortera dig hem?"
[sup]You want me to escort you home?[/sup]
"Visst."
[sup]Sure.[/sup]
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[quote]A little hint of what will happen in the next chapter[b]:[/b]
I saw him, holding hands with Erica. And it hurt me more than anything in my life. Ang sakit. Grabe. I don't know, but what's my right to be jealous?[/quote]
But it's fine, really. Hindi naman ako yung bagong dating e. No offense to Daddy. So, while we were eating, I asked my Dad,
"Dad, where's your gift for me?" I asked.
"Oh yeah, I forgot."
Then he went upstairs to his and mom's room. Nung bumaba sya, may dala-dala syang box. Maliit na box. It's a ring, I just know.
"Here." He said as he grabbed the necklace na may maliit na heart sa gitna.
"Wow, Dad!" I exclaimed nung nilagay nya sa leeg ko. Hindi ko inexpect na necklace yun e. I wasn't expecting anything na ganun ka bongga. After that, he smiled as he sat down.
"You know, Lan, you're like a mannequin." He said. I think he wasn't joking kasi there was no laugh in his voice.
"Why?" I asked.
"Cause everything looks good on you." Woah, he's one big joker.
"Dad, mannequins are pretty, and sad to say, I'm not." I said. Totoo naman, hindi ako maganda. Hindi talaga. Not once in my life, I thought I was pretty.
"What?! You [i]are[/i] beautiful." He said. Kailangan pa ba i-emphasize yung are? Haays. So ayun, I kept quiet na. He seemed mad kase e. And I don't like it when he gets mad.
"Excuse me, I have homework." I said as I stood up. I don't know, I really am not in the mood to talk to them. I don't know, I feel like looking at myself in a mirror or something. It's friday, so I could sleep late. But, tomorrow is Jenny's birthday.
[i]The next day; Saturday; 7:00pm[/i]
I woke up. So ayun, I went downstairs to check if there were any food. Mom cookes pancakes. Oooh, delicious. Kumain ako. Daang! Antagal ko natapos. Mga 7[b]:[/b]10 na ako natapos. Usually, mga 2 minutes, tapos na ako. Grabe. So, after I ate, naligo kagad ako. I put on my bluegreen dress. Ang ganda nun, binili ni Kuya sa Paris when he went there. Jenny's house is just two blocks away so naglakad nalang ako. When on my way there, I checked my phone. Gosh, 7[b]:[/b]20 na pala. I had to hurry. When I arrived, nung pumasok ako, Jenny shouted,
"Lan, h�r borta!"
[sup]Lan, over here![/sup]
"Vem �r det?"
[sup]Who's there?[/sup]
"N�gra coola m�nniskor!" She shouted. She's really, really loud.
[sup]Some cool people.[/sup]
When I walked towards them, napansin ko agad si Kenny. He looked dashing. Not that I was looking for him, he just catched my attention. Music played. I don't know -- para syang prom.
"Vill du dansa med mig?" Kenny asked me.
[sup]Will you dance with me?[/sup]
"Naturligtvis, finns det inget annat jag kunde g�ra r�tt?"
[sup]Of course, there's nothing else I could do right?[/sup]
So we danced and danced till it was 10pm -- I had to go home.
"Ken, jag �r ledsen men jag m�ste g�." I told Kenny.
[sup]Ken, I'm sorry but I have to go.[/sup]
"Du vill att jag ska eskortera dig hem?"
[sup]You want me to escort you home?[/sup]
"Visst."
[sup]Sure.[/sup]
[hr][hr][hr]
[quote]A little hint of what will happen in the next chapter[b]:[/b]
I saw him, holding hands with Erica. And it hurt me more than anything in my life. Ang sakit. Grabe. I don't know, but what's my right to be jealous?[/quote]
Last edited by Bridget (2010-05-25 03:32:21)
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