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Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
IM NOT FIRST!! T_T
Hahaha, grabe yung dad niya, ang galing mag banat.
AWWW. that's soo sweeet, [u]they danced[/u]!!
[i]I can't help but to grinn while reading that part you know.[/i] ;')
But wait-
ANO YUN?
may kahawak si kenny sa next chapter?
[b]NOOOOOO!![/b]
Skip ako sa next chapter, Everything's going fine and smooth sa buhay ni Lanah,
then magkakaruon siya ng first heartache..
Poor Alanah..
P.S: Joke lang yung sa skip, haha. Im just nervous sa mangyayari sa next chapter.
If that kenny dares to hurt our little cute main character, [b]he's dead![/b]
UPDATE!
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Haha. Really like this story. Nung first time ko nabasa yung intro. Kala ko nasa PH sya. Nagtaka ako nagsswedish talk sila. Nasa Sweden pala ang Gaga 
Oh. Sosyal! Loka ng dad nya
Oh Kenny! NOOO!!!
They danced. Oh Wow. Update!
Oh. Sosyal! Loka ng dad nya
Oh Kenny! NOOO!!!
They danced. Oh Wow. Update!
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Wow! Hahaha. Napakabanat ni dad!
Owww. Shocks! Baka little sister lang nia yun na talagang sister, Tas, muka lang teen like that
Okay! I'll wait for the update!
Owww. Shocks! Baka little sister lang nia yun na talagang sister, Tas, muka lang teen like that
Okay! I'll wait for the update!
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Hoho. Thanks po sa mga comment nyo. [x
And of course, to the silent readers, please do comment. I don't bite nomon e. :3
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Ate Bridget.
- kelan po next update? :>
How old are you ?
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
[b]Chapter 3[/b]
Yeah, so Kenny walked me home. Pinapakilig nya talaga ako, in little ways. 
I don't know -- I think I'm inlove. 
So, let's just say I am. When I was about to open the door, Kenny said,
"Vad g�r du efter kyrkan i morgon?"
[sup]What are you doing after church tomorrow?[/sup]
"Ingenting. Varf�r?"
[sup]Nothing. Why?[/sup]
"Vill du g� p� en date?"
[sup]Would you like to go on a date?[/sup]
"Visst."
[sup]Sure.[/sup]
Ohmygosh! Did he just ask me out? Like, ask me out? 
Ang haba ng hair mo, Alanah. HAHA[b]![/b] Kapalan na 'to, baby. XDD I don't know. Parang, he's trying to make me fall for him. 
But still. I know that he likes me, and I like him too.
[i]Next day, Sunday, After church, 10:00am[/i]
Kenny then approached me. We go to the same church kase e. He held out his hand, as if expecting me to hold it. So, I held his hand. I don't know why pero I kept on smiling like an idiot.
"Are you okay?" He asked in that sweet way of his.
"I'm fine."
"You don't look so fine." He said in a concerned voice.
"I said I'm fine, and when I say it, I mean it."
Then he shut up. Finally. So, we arrived sa amusement park. Daang! I always love amusement parks. Mom usually brings Kuya and I to amusement parks when I was about 7 years old. And oh, how I miss those times.
"What do you wanna ride first?" He asked.
"I don't know, Ferris wheel maybe?" I said.
After that, he bought tickets. Daang, he's rich so kaya nyang i-rent out 'tong amusement park. Pero I don't want to be much abusive. Ayun, sumakay na kami. Wala pa masyadong tao e. I think they're still in church. In the middle of the ride, Kenny asked me,
"Alanah. Kan du vara �rlig med mig?"
[sup]Alanah. Can you be honest with me?[/sup]
"Sj�lvklart. Jag �r alltid."
[sup]Ofcourse. I always am.[/sup]
"Gillar du Trygve?"
[sup]Do you like Trygve?[/sup]
I gave him a WTF-are-you-saying-look. I said,
"Nej."
[sup]No.[/sup]
He gave out a sigh of relief. I knew he was gonna do that -- he's so predictable. Always predictable. After the ride, he asked me if I was hungry. I said yes, and I was. I was really hungry. So we went to Burger King. It was about three blocks away so I got the chance to ask him if he likes erica. Like what I did a while ago, he gave me a WTF-are-you-saying-look.
"Har du ens lyssnar p� mig n�r vi lekte sanning eller konsekvens?"
[sup]Did you even listen to me when we were playing truth or dare?[/sup]
"I was. Fine. I'm sorry."
So, ayun. I stayed quiet nalang. Nung nasa BK na kami, I just ordered a cheeseburger and coke. He did as well. Hindi kami nagtalk. As in. Awkward silence. [x Pero it's fine. It's fine at all.
"I wanna go home." I said as we finished eating.
"Ok. Do you want me to walk you home? It's 5 blocks away."
"Sure."
During the walk home, I was really quiet. Quiet quiet quiet. 
I was waiting for him to start up a convo. Hard-to-get ba? HAHAHA. x] Ano ba yaaan. Kenny, can't you start a freaking convo? 
Finally, nung we arrived sa bahay, I walked away.
"Lan?" He said.
"Oh." I looked back.
"Take care ok?"
"You too."
I walked into the house. With a straight face. I walked right into my room. Without even saying a simple 'hi' to my Kuya. Haays. ||= Hindi ko na alam kung anong gagawin ko. Haays. So I went to sleep instead.
[i]Monday; 7:20am[/i]
I woke up early, 10minutes earlier. Anywaays. I ran downstairs. Ate. Took a bath -- the usual routine. [b]><[/b] I hurried to the bus stop. I waited for 5 minutes. Finally. Ayun, I sat beside Jenny. I didn't see Kenny anywhere. I don't know. Maybe he just walked his way to school. He lives 3 blocks away from school, y'know. And magkapit-bahay sila ni Erica. 
Erica Cortes. That big flirt I was talking about.
When we arrived at school, Trygve approached me and gave me chocolates. Valentines ba? Ohgoshh. Idk. I thought he vaporized from earth na kase e. Eviiil.
"Jag hoppas ni gillar det." Trygve said.
[sup]I hope you like it.[/sup]
"Tack, f�rresten."
[sup]Thank you, by the way.[/sup]
When I was about to walk away, I saw him, holding hands with Erica. And it hurt me more than anything in my life. Ang sakit. Grabe. I don't know, but what's my right to be jealous? Hindi naman kami mag-on e. And that was my first heartbreak. I turned back.
"M�r du bra?" Trygve asked.
[sup]Are you alright?[/sup]
I shook my head. He walked closer to me and hugged me tightly. I cried on his shoulder. He combed my hair with his fingers. This is what I like about him -- he's so sensitive. :3
"Jag �r ledsen. Jag vet bara inte vad jag ska g�ra."
[sup]I'm sorry. I just don't know what to do.[/sup]
"Det �r bra. Gr�ta s� l�nge du vill."
[sup]It's fine. cry as long as you want.[/sup]
A few minutes after, the bell rang. Since we were in the same class, he walked with me nalang. Then, he wiped my tears with his handkerchief. He's so sweet. <33
[hr][hr][hr]
[quote]A little hint[b]:[/b]
"I'm sorry, I really am. I didn't mean to--"
"Nothing to be sorry about." I cut him off.[/quote]
[hr][hr][hr]
Ate Yshie[b]:[/b] 12 po. 
I don't know -- I think I'm inlove. So, let's just say I am. When I was about to open the door, Kenny said,
"Vad g�r du efter kyrkan i morgon?"
[sup]What are you doing after church tomorrow?[/sup]
"Ingenting. Varf�r?"
[sup]Nothing. Why?[/sup]
"Vill du g� p� en date?"
[sup]Would you like to go on a date?[/sup]
"Visst."
[sup]Sure.[/sup]
Ohmygosh! Did he just ask me out? Like, ask me out? Ang haba ng hair mo, Alanah. HAHA[b]![/b] Kapalan na 'to, baby. XDD I don't know. Parang, he's trying to make me fall for him. But still. I know that he likes me, and I like him too.
[i]Next day, Sunday, After church, 10:00am[/i]
Kenny then approached me. We go to the same church kase e. He held out his hand, as if expecting me to hold it. So, I held his hand. I don't know why pero I kept on smiling like an idiot.
"Are you okay?" He asked in that sweet way of his.
"I'm fine."
"You don't look so fine." He said in a concerned voice.
"I said I'm fine, and when I say it, I mean it."
Then he shut up. Finally. So, we arrived sa amusement park. Daang! I always love amusement parks. Mom usually brings Kuya and I to amusement parks when I was about 7 years old. And oh, how I miss those times.
"What do you wanna ride first?" He asked.
"I don't know, Ferris wheel maybe?" I said.
After that, he bought tickets. Daang, he's rich so kaya nyang i-rent out 'tong amusement park. Pero I don't want to be much abusive. Ayun, sumakay na kami. Wala pa masyadong tao e. I think they're still in church. In the middle of the ride, Kenny asked me,
"Alanah. Kan du vara �rlig med mig?"
[sup]Alanah. Can you be honest with me?[/sup]
"Sj�lvklart. Jag �r alltid."
[sup]Ofcourse. I always am.[/sup]
"Gillar du Trygve?"
[sup]Do you like Trygve?[/sup]
I gave him a WTF-are-you-saying-look. I said,
"Nej."
[sup]No.[/sup]
He gave out a sigh of relief. I knew he was gonna do that -- he's so predictable. Always predictable. After the ride, he asked me if I was hungry. I said yes, and I was. I was really hungry. So we went to Burger King. It was about three blocks away so I got the chance to ask him if he likes erica. Like what I did a while ago, he gave me a WTF-are-you-saying-look.
"Har du ens lyssnar p� mig n�r vi lekte sanning eller konsekvens?"
[sup]Did you even listen to me when we were playing truth or dare?[/sup]
"I was. Fine. I'm sorry."
So, ayun. I stayed quiet nalang. Nung nasa BK na kami, I just ordered a cheeseburger and coke. He did as well. Hindi kami nagtalk. As in. Awkward silence. [x Pero it's fine. It's fine at all.
"I wanna go home." I said as we finished eating.
"Ok. Do you want me to walk you home? It's 5 blocks away."
"Sure."
During the walk home, I was really quiet. Quiet quiet quiet. I was waiting for him to start up a convo. Hard-to-get ba? HAHAHA. x] Ano ba yaaan. Kenny, can't you start a freaking convo? Finally, nung we arrived sa bahay, I walked away.
"Lan?" He said.
"Oh." I looked back.
"Take care ok?"
"You too."
I walked into the house. With a straight face. I walked right into my room. Without even saying a simple 'hi' to my Kuya. Haays. ||= Hindi ko na alam kung anong gagawin ko. Haays. So I went to sleep instead.
[i]Monday; 7:20am[/i]
I woke up early, 10minutes earlier. Anywaays. I ran downstairs. Ate. Took a bath -- the usual routine. [b]><[/b] I hurried to the bus stop. I waited for 5 minutes. Finally. Ayun, I sat beside Jenny. I didn't see Kenny anywhere. I don't know. Maybe he just walked his way to school. He lives 3 blocks away from school, y'know. And magkapit-bahay sila ni Erica. Erica Cortes. That big flirt I was talking about.
When we arrived at school, Trygve approached me and gave me chocolates. Valentines ba? Ohgoshh. Idk. I thought he vaporized from earth na kase e. Eviiil.
"Jag hoppas ni gillar det." Trygve said.
[sup]I hope you like it.[/sup]
"Tack, f�rresten."
[sup]Thank you, by the way.[/sup]
When I was about to walk away, I saw him, holding hands with Erica. And it hurt me more than anything in my life. Ang sakit. Grabe. I don't know, but what's my right to be jealous? Hindi naman kami mag-on e. And that was my first heartbreak. I turned back.
"M�r du bra?" Trygve asked.
[sup]Are you alright?[/sup]
I shook my head. He walked closer to me and hugged me tightly. I cried on his shoulder. He combed my hair with his fingers. This is what I like about him -- he's so sensitive. :3
"Jag �r ledsen. Jag vet bara inte vad jag ska g�ra."
[sup]I'm sorry. I just don't know what to do.[/sup]
"Det �r bra. Gr�ta s� l�nge du vill."
[sup]It's fine. cry as long as you want.[/sup]
A few minutes after, the bell rang. Since we were in the same class, he walked with me nalang. Then, he wiped my tears with his handkerchief. He's so sweet. <33
[hr][hr][hr]
[quote]A little hint[b]:[/b]
"I'm sorry, I really am. I didn't mean to--"
"Nothing to be sorry about." I cut him off.[/quote]
[hr][hr][hr]
Ate Yshie[b]:[/b] 12 po.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
FIRST!!
[s]saving my spot. brb reading.[/s]
1st part:
ohemgeeeee...
They went on a date!!
wow, sosyal, kaya palang irent ni kennyrogers yung buong place..
YAMANN!
2nd part:
ohemgeeeee...
Sabi ko na nga ba!! masasaktan si Lanah! T___T
buti na lang nanjan si Trygve.. (tama ba spelling? *nosebleed)
Ang sweet naman ni " "; Buti na lang talaga nanjan siya..
AWWWW, ambait niyaaa.
Damn that effin' kennyrogers!
ayoko na sayo! Lipat na ko kay trygve!
Magsama kayo ng flirt na yun! Pakelam ko sa buhay niyo. :ppppp
P.S: more Lanah-Trygve moments sa next chapter pleeeasee?
HAHAHA, kinikilig tuloy ako sa ginawa ni Trygve! <33
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Ate Jhes[b]:[/b] Opcors. You will know what will happen kina Lanah at Trygve sa next chapter.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Oh Sige. Second Commentor. Haha. Well, Walang hiya yang si Kenny! Patayin ko yan eeh!
Trygve. Your so sweet, i wish your mine.
Update nah Bata. Jukk. Update.
Trygve. Your so sweet, i wish your mine.
Update nah Bata. Jukk. Update.
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Aila[b]:[/b] Para mas ma-inlab ka, gusto mo pagpost ak ng pictures? HAHA[b]![/b]
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
^Why not????? Dapat may Banner kana! Since tong story mo. Benta na! 
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Official Banner
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
OMGGGGG~ I missed a lot of chapters. Lmao. Can Trygve be just mine? HAHAHAHA. Update ulet?
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
SHET. Yan si Alanah. Shes not pretty in that pic. Wafu pala ni Trygve.
Basta. Update araso??
Basta. Update araso??
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Arasoo~ It's mahaba kasi.
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[b]Chapter 4[/b]
After school, I directly went home. I ran upstairs. I think Kuya saw me crying kase I heard loud footsteps after me. My Kuya is damn heavy y'know, but it suits his height naman. :3 So, anyways. I cried on my bed. I cried so hard.
"Alanah! Are you okay?" Kuya asked.
"I'm fine. Just go away, I'm not in the mood to talk."
"Tell me anything. Maybe I can help you know."
So I narrated to him the whole story. He can speak Filipino as well. I told him to speak Filipino cause I don't want anyone to understand kasi wala si Ma, nasa mall. Nag-grocery ata.
"E gaga ka pala. Bakit naman sa lahat ng lalaki sa mundo, yung Kenny na yon ang pinili mo? Ang swerte nya, na-inlove ka sa kanya, 'tas gaganyanin ka lang? P*t@! Gusto mo bugbugin ko yan?"
"Kuya, wag na. Kaya ko to. I can do this alone. Kahit walang tutulong sakin, kaya ko."
He gave me the best smile that he had. My kuya's so cute when he does that. :3 Awww. Nagmana talaga sya kay Dad. LOL.
"Kuya, diba may pasok kayo ngayon?"
"Wala."
"Ohh."
Ayun, he wiped my tears in a sweet manner. You know, kung hindi ko lang sya kuya, I would have a crush on him. Leche flan. [[x He grabbed something out of his pocket. To my surprise, ang hinahawakan nya Chupa Chups, Cola flavor. My favorite.
"Gusto mo?"
"Sure. Alam mo naman na fave ko 'yan diba?" I said.
He opened the Chupa Chups for me, how sweet. Even though it took him about 3 minutes just to open it, I still thought it was sweet.
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[b]Chapter 4 : Kenny's POV[/b]
[i]Sunday, After their date, 6:00pm[/i]
Haays. I just couldn't stop thinking about her. I was never inlove. Never in my life. And I didn't even know that there are girls out there who like me. And a while ago, when I was with Alanah, I never felt any happier in my life. Every morning, when I wake up, I wish that she's the first thing that I see in the morning. She's my happiness. I fell like, when I'm with her, I'm complete. On my way home, Erica was sitting on their front porch. She shouted hi, and I replied with a wave. Erica's really beautiful, but I like Alanah more. She ran to my direction. I was trying to avoid her. But I couldn't, really.
"Hej, vill du g� ut med mig?" She asked me.
[sup]Hey, do you wanna go out with me?[/sup]
I stayed quiet. Really quiet. I don't want to break anyone's heart, but I don't wanna dump such a beautiful bish like her. So I stayed quiet.
"Jag tar det som ett ja d�." She said. I stayed quiet. I don't wanna talk to her. Seriously.
[sup]I'll take that as a yes, then.[/sup]
"Se dig M�ndag." She said as I went in our house.
[sup]See you Monday.[/sup]
I thought about it, what will Alanah say if she sees us together? She's gonna dislike me for it. Worse, I think she's gonna hate me. She's gonna go out with Trygve instead. And I don't want that to happen. Instead, I want her to go out with me. I want to be the one that holds her in my arms, the one who kisses her, and the one who hears her when she says 'I love you.' But I guess that'd be impossible now, now that I know that she's gonna hate me. And I can't take it when I'm gonna see Trygve kissing my love, my first love.
[i]Monday, 6:30am[/i]
Woah, I woke up extra early. The usual routine, take a bath, change then eat. Since I was really early, I decided to go with Erica. I mean, she [i]is[/i] my girlfriend. I [url=http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs495.snc3/27055_1384579815181_1252570919_2272658_4865946_n.jpg]kissed[/url] her hello. Since our house is 3 blocks away, she held my hand. :3 I don't know. I kinda liked it and hated it the same time.
Few minutes later, the school bus arrived. I knew she was there. I just knew. Trygve then approached her, gave her chocolates. I wish I did that. Kenny Bui, you idiot! Fvck. Why did you choose Erica over Alanah?! She looked at us, then the next thing I knew, she was crying. She was crying on Trygve's shoulders. Then I let go of Erica's hand. I was about to run but the bell rang. So, that's it.. I didn't have the chance to protect her. To say sorry.
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[b]Chapter 4 : Alanah's POV[/b]
[i]Tuesday, 7:00am[/i]
Ok, what's up? I woke up extra early. Don't tell me I have to walk all the way to school. When I woke up, the same routine -- eat. take a bath. Good thing Daddy was up so he drove me to school. When I went there, I saw the couple, Erica and Kenny. Kenny then approached me.
"I'm sorry, I really am. I didn't mean to--"
"Nothing to be sorry about." I cut him off.
"B-b-but, why did you cry yesterday?"
"Forget it. Just pretend it never happened."
Minutes later, Trygve arrived and punched Kenny in the face.
"Hey! Trygve, sluta." I shouted as I grabbed his shoulder.
[sup]Hey! Trygve, stop it.[/sup]
As I said, he stopped. He's obedient, he's sweet, he's handsome -- my dream guy.
"Du bor b�ttre borta fr�n MIN Alanah." He said as he pointed Kenny.
[sup]You better stay away from MY Alanah.[/sup]
Did he just say MY!?! So I guess that makes us official. Hahaha. In your face, fvcking Kenny Rogers! I have a boyfriend. qq: After staring at him for seconds, Trygve then hugged me tightly.
"�r du okej, Hon?" He said sweetly.
[sup]Are you alright, Hon?[/sup]
"Ja, jag �r okej, Hon." I replied.
[sup]Yeah, I'm fine, Hon.[/sup]
You know, kung hindi ko lang sya kuya, I would have a crush on him. Leche flan. [[x He grabbed something out of his pocket. To my surprise, ang hinahawakan nya Chupa Chups, Cola flavor. My favorite.
"Gusto mo?"
"Sure. Alam mo naman na fave ko 'yan diba?" I said.
He opened the Chupa Chups for me, how sweet. Even though it took him about 3 minutes just to open it, I still thought it was sweet.
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[b]Chapter 4 : Kenny's POV[/b]
[i]Sunday, After their date, 6:00pm[/i]
Haays. I just couldn't stop thinking about her. I was never inlove. Never in my life. And I didn't even know that there are girls out there who like me. And a while ago, when I was with Alanah, I never felt any happier in my life. Every morning, when I wake up, I wish that she's the first thing that I see in the morning. She's my happiness. I fell like, when I'm with her, I'm complete. On my way home, Erica was sitting on their front porch. She shouted hi, and I replied with a wave. Erica's really beautiful, but I like Alanah more. She ran to my direction. I was trying to avoid her. But I couldn't, really.
"Hej, vill du g� ut med mig?" She asked me.
[sup]Hey, do you wanna go out with me?[/sup]
I stayed quiet. Really quiet. I don't want to break anyone's heart, but I don't wanna dump such a beautiful bish like her. So I stayed quiet.
"Jag tar det som ett ja d�." She said. I stayed quiet. I don't wanna talk to her. Seriously.
[sup]I'll take that as a yes, then.[/sup]
"Se dig M�ndag." She said as I went in our house.
[sup]See you Monday.[/sup]
I thought about it, what will Alanah say if she sees us together? She's gonna dislike me for it. Worse, I think she's gonna hate me. She's gonna go out with Trygve instead. And I don't want that to happen. Instead, I want her to go out with me. I want to be the one that holds her in my arms, the one who kisses her, and the one who hears her when she says 'I love you.' But I guess that'd be impossible now, now that I know that she's gonna hate me. And I can't take it when I'm gonna see Trygve kissing my love, my first love.
[i]Monday, 6:30am[/i]
Woah, I woke up extra early. The usual routine, take a bath, change then eat. Since I was really early, I decided to go with Erica. I mean, she [i]is[/i] my girlfriend. I [url=http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs495.snc3/27055_1384579815181_1252570919_2272658_4865946_n.jpg]kissed[/url] her hello. Since our house is 3 blocks away, she held my hand. :3 I don't know. I kinda liked it and hated it the same time.
Few minutes later, the school bus arrived. I knew she was there. I just knew. Trygve then approached her, gave her chocolates. I wish I did that. Kenny Bui, you idiot! Fvck. Why did you choose Erica over Alanah?! She looked at us, then the next thing I knew, she was crying. She was crying on Trygve's shoulders. Then I let go of Erica's hand. I was about to run but the bell rang. So, that's it.. I didn't have the chance to protect her. To say sorry.
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[b]Chapter 4 : Alanah's POV[/b]
[i]Tuesday, 7:00am[/i]
Ok, what's up? I woke up extra early. Don't tell me I have to walk all the way to school. When I woke up, the same routine -- eat. take a bath. Good thing Daddy was up so he drove me to school. When I went there, I saw the couple, Erica and Kenny. Kenny then approached me.
"I'm sorry, I really am. I didn't mean to--"
"Nothing to be sorry about." I cut him off.
"B-b-but, why did you cry yesterday?"
"Forget it. Just pretend it never happened."
Minutes later, Trygve arrived and punched Kenny in the face.
"Hey! Trygve, sluta." I shouted as I grabbed his shoulder.
[sup]Hey! Trygve, stop it.[/sup]
As I said, he stopped. He's obedient, he's sweet, he's handsome -- my dream guy.
"Du bor b�ttre borta fr�n MIN Alanah." He said as he pointed Kenny.
[sup]You better stay away from MY Alanah.[/sup]
Did he just say MY!?! So I guess that makes us official. Hahaha. In your face, fvcking Kenny Rogers! I have a boyfriend. qq: After staring at him for seconds, Trygve then hugged me tightly.
"�r du okej, Hon?" He said sweetly.
[sup]Are you alright, Hon?[/sup]
"Ja, jag �r okej, Hon." I replied.
[sup]Yeah, I'm fine, Hon.[/sup]
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
grabe na man yan...hindi man lang nanligaw...hehehe...pero okay lang...hehe
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- cutest08
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
HON? Fvck Trygve. LOLLLL.
Fvvccckk Kenny! I want to kill you. I prefer you kissing me like that than her
Anyway. Update.,
Fvvccckk Kenny! I want to kill you. I prefer you kissing me like that than her
Anyway. Update.,
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- imyours_24
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Aww! Binasa q na ung Chapter 3 nito ee. Chapter 4 agad! Nice.
Badtrip kasi ee. Brownout 
@ Bridget : Waa. Ate daw, Ee parehas lang tayong 12
About the story:
Yesssh. Loloveeet! 'HON' ha!?
Chesssyyy! Update.Update.Update! 
-- I love this story much! :>
@ Bridget : Waa. Ate daw, Ee parehas lang tayong 12
About the story:
Yesssh. Loloveeet! 'HON' ha!?
Chesssyyy! Update.Update.Update!
-- I love this story much! :>
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Re: Thankyou po. Update ko po ito mamaya. [x [hr][hr] Here's the update[b]:[/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] Nung nasa bahay na kami, we had dinner. There was nothing special -- not that I expect it to be, pero D
Do ppl in Sweden kisses each other in the lips just as a greeting? Like what Kenny did? :@ Haha. That was fast?! XD
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