Re: hi everyone, this is my very first time writing a story.. criticisms, suggestions, comments are highly appreciated! im hoping you'll enjoy reading my story! [align=center][u][b]someday you'll be mine

Hi! My name is Rachel M. Chak I'd like to be your friend! Anyways Good job! I love your story you have a great story anyways pls check mine: http://theftalk.com/t38614-%26%239829%3BTogether-Forever%21%21%21%26%239829%3B-%5BCurrently-Chapter-17%5D-Super-exciting%21%21%21%21.html Well good luck!